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1、 【版本四】 分析解决问题法.10 【版本五】 意义阐释.11 【版本六】 举例论证.17 【版本七】 建议评论.19第三段写法.20【附录】 图例.24第一段写法：第一句 评价图画1. 消极类图画This is a pathetic and heart-rending scene! 这是一个令人触目惊心的可悲的景象！2. 中性类图画The intended meaning of the compelling photo above is far-reaching and affords much food for thought !上面这幅引人注目的图画所反映的现象是深远且耐人寻味的！3.

2、讽刺类图画The extraordinary picture being rich with irony expressesdrawersfeelingsbymetaphor, which mirrors a kind of people/phenomenon/thing.这幅充满了讽刺意味的特别的图画借物寓事，反映了当今的一类人/一种现象/一类事。第二句 描述图画【版本一】常规描述四要素引出句.非谓语动词.提示语翻译.句尾套话1. 引出句1） Thesatiricalsketchgraphicallyportraysasceneinwhichthere is/are .这幅具有讽刺性的图画生

3、动地描述了一个场景：.2） One cannot help but be moved by the scene as illustrated in the caricature, where there is/are .人们不禁为漫画中说描述的场景所动容：3） This cartoon humorously presents a scene of a critical moment, in which there is/are .这幅漫画幽默地展示了一个场景的关键瞬间：4） As the exaggerative and enlightening drawing vividly describ

4、es, there is/are .正如这幅夸张且具有启发性的图画所生动地描述：2. 非谓语动词There is/are + 主体 + 非谓语动词（次要动作），非谓语动词（主要动作）. There is a hen holding a piece of paper in her hand, selling eggs.There is a oil lamp smilingathisfacefullbloom （笑颜在脸上绽放）, burning himself to lit up the world. There is an American girl smilingbloom, wearing

5、 the traditional Chinese costume. There is a flower thriving in the greenhouse, exposed into the storm and fading.There is a young boy just ending a race, beginning the next.There is an aged man shrinking（缩成） into himself, being kicked around by his sons daughters.There is a young man sitting in a b

6、arbershop and looking at the photo of Beck ham, spending 300 Yuan on the hair style of his idol. There is a nervous soccer forward standing by the penalty spot and facing up with a goalkeeper, imagining his opponent as an immense obstacle and considering the chances of shooting in are rather slim. T

7、here are two persons both having just one leg, supporting each other with their powerful hands and running forwards rapidly.There are many people sitting within narrow spaces, working or playing on computers to communicate with each other via the Internet.There is a hot pot containing various cultur

8、al symbols, standing for the cultural integration.There are two tourists enjoying a landscape of lakes and mountains（湖光山色）, littering up in the scenic region.There is a person having seen the drink spills out, falling into despair and sighing “All screwed up”, while the other person hurrying to lift

9、 up the bottle, smiling as he feels so lucky still to have something left in the bottle.There are many students graduating from college, confronted with a variety of choices after graduation.There is a young spice mother holding his daughter by the hand, supported by her grown kid 30 years later.The

10、re are a group of juveniles sitting around the dinner table, playing thier cellphones respectively without saying a word with each other.There is a father sitting in front of a television and smoking before his son, not caring about his kid at all.3. 提示语翻译The caption under/beside this cartoon/drawin

11、g/cartoon/sketch/caricature indicates/demonstrates: “.”言传不如身教 Example is better than precept.相携 Accompanying旅游之“余” The remains of the journey文化火锅，既美味又营养 The cultural hot pot, delicious and nutritious网络的远与近 The near and far among the Internet. 你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北 With one leg of yours and one leg of

12、mine, we jointly brave our way forward here a nd there!养老足球赛 A football match of taking care of their aged father终点就是起点 The finishing point is the starting point as well.温室里的花朵禁不起风雨 The flower inside the greenhouse cannot stand the wind and rain爱心是一盏灯 Our love is like a lamp; the darker the place, t

13、he brighter the light. 4. 句尾套话（十一罗汉）1） Given its profound social implication, the thought-provoking phenomenon is well worth our endeavor to explore. 2） Simple as the image seems to be, the intended/ implied meaning goes far deeper. 3） Odd and funny as it appears to be, such happenings/ cases are so

14、 pervasive/ widespread that we cannot afford to ignore/ disregard them. 4） Odd and funny as the above image seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially. 5） Simply designed as the pictures are/the picture is, the symbolic meaning that they convey are

15、/is rather deep and profound.6） The primary purpose of this picture lies in the criticism of the moral degradation. 7） The drawers intention seems to be highly self-evident and the meaning causes us to be in deep meditation.8） After careful thinking, it seems that what is conveyed in the drawing is

16、quite realistic and most meaningful.9） Casting a closer look and reflection upon this picture provides us with a better sense of its deep implications. 10） There is no doubt that this cartoons symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.11） By carefully examining this picture

17、, we find a deeper social message is transmitted to us. 【版本二】寓意描述1. 描述图画长版：As is vividly depicted in the picture which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts, there be 句型.短版：A first glance at this cartoon informs us that there be 句型. 如何描述图画？（1）There be句型法There i

18、s/are + 主语 in the cartoon/picture/drawing, which/who symbolizes/refers to/stands for + 主题词， 同位语 + 非谓语 + 定语从句.（2）完全倒装句In the middle of the cartoon/picture/drawing stands + 主语，which/who symbolizes/refers to/stands for+ 主题词， 同位语 + 非谓语 + 定语从句.主语主题词 + 动词1 + 动词2.同位语 非谓语动词作后置定语 定语从句例子：1） mobile phoneThere

19、are a group of friends, boys or girls, in the cartoon, who symbolize the juveniles, the ones always having a dinner party while each one of them is checking messages in their mobile phones without saying a word to one another, leaving the dishes untouched, which is in describing the common phenomeno

20、n that this is a gathering in the era of mobile phone.2） Support our parentsThere are two persons, a young spice woman and a cute Loli, in the cartoon, who symbolize parents and their kids, the former ones dedicating their whole life to the latter ones with the wishing of making their next generatio

21、n have a better future and a happy life, which is in informing the truth to be self-evident, that supporting the aged is the responsibility of the sons and daughters of the Chinese people, which we cannot shirk. 3） The choice after graduating There are a crowd of people in the cartoon, which symboli

22、ze college graduates, the generation after the 1990 owning dreams, passions, and ambitions, who is confronted with various choices at the crossroads,namely, hunting for jobs, pursuing further study, going abroad, starting a business and so forth.4） Negative attitudes and positive onesThere are two d

23、ifferent kinds of people that show a sharp contrast with each other in the cartoon, who symbolize optimistic persons and pessimistic ones, the former ones always keeping positive attitudes to try to find the way to solve the problem when they are faced with difficulties, while the latter ones usuall

24、y falling into despair, who will stop trying and give up remedying.5） the culture hot potIn the middle of the cartoon stands a hot pot, which symbolizes culture, the one containing many Chinese cultural symbols, namely, Beijing operas, Daoism, some foreign cultural symbols, and so forth, which is in

25、 describing the common phenomenon that Chinese culture is becoming increasingly integrated into the world.6） Internet There is an enormous net, which symbolizes the internet, an important and fashionable tool to communicate with each other and understand more about the world, which separates people

26、who communicate with one another on net instead of face to face.7） Youth DevelopmentThere is a fading flower exposed to the wind and storm, which symbolizes the younger generation, a generation spoiled and over-protected by their parents, who cannot overcome frustration and afford the suffering.万能描述图画法： What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is that recent few years has witn