浙江高考英语复习专题十六 读后续写文档格式.docx

1、体裁故事类记叙文话题和爸爸去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事和父母一块去旅游的故事朋友一起骑车游玩,野外遇到狼的故事小两口野外游玩不幸走散,女主人迷路,在野外独自度过夜晚标示词名词（词组）768动词（词组）23形容词、副词1其他考查内容1.考查考生对故事类文章的理解以及根据原文的内容创作逻辑合理、语义通顺的结尾的能力;2.考查续写内容的丰富性以及和原文的相符性;3.考查对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;4.考查续写的文章中应用的语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。考查方式提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写（150词左右）,将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔

2、接、情节和结构完整的短文分析解读读后续写是浙江省高考英语科特有的题目,综合了阅读理解和写作。该题不仅考查考生的语言表述能力,还考查考生对文章的理解能力、对文章结构的把握能力和对情节发展的判断构思能力。考生只有在对原文准确深刻理解的基础上,对情节的发展做出判断,运用合适的构思能力,才能做出优秀的续写。因此,读后续写具有较大的难度。【真题典例】阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me

3、 on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to kno

4、w his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said. After breakfast, I went to help A

5、unt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I w

6、asnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and

7、 his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中

8、标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.原文延续了浙江省读后续写的特点,是一篇故事性很强的记叙文。文字简单,内容贴近日常生活。文章第一段交代故事的背景。介绍了度假的原因和地点。第二段简单地介绍了旅途。第三段是对在农场的日常活动的简单介绍。第四段和续写故事的展开有很大的关

9、系。这一段讲到了如何发生了我和爸爸去骑马的故事。而续写的内容就是在此基础上展开。写作指导根据续写第一段所给的段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.可知,本段应该主要描写突然出现一只兔子之后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受惊。故本段描写马受惊后发生的事比较自然。从第二段的段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.可以看出作者和父亲迷路了。那么本段的故事主要根据迷路之后的情况展开,应该是从迷路到回家的故事。写作时一定要注意以下两点:第一,从本故事的发展

10、来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事,而第二段是迷路之后的故事,因此要注意人物心理和情感的描写。第二,注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段段首句和原文的逻辑顺畅,以及第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句的逻辑合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计。参考范文Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in v

11、ain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent me from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost.We had no ide

12、a where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Un

13、cle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!范文鉴赏1.范文和原文的逻辑关系紧密,故事紧紧贴近原文的故事发展。2.续写使用了不少高级的句子结构,如:Frightened as I was.尽管我很害怕to prevent me from falling off 防止我掉下去.the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I

14、.马在一条小河前停了下来,气喘吁吁,我也如此。What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. 我们能做的就是沿着之前的痕迹慢慢走回去。3.文章用娴熟的笔法使用了很多精美词汇,如:previous adj. 之前的in vain 白费力气at the point of desperation 将要绝望之际a faint voice 微弱的声音过专题【五年高考】Writing 1（2017浙江11月）A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It

15、 was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks drivi

16、ng to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, bo

17、oks, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while

18、Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout（放哨）while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stra

19、nge city, but we werent about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and

20、I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections（反对）. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.The n

21、ext day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.答案【写作提示】原文是一篇有关家庭旅游生活的故事。文章内容贴近生活,中学生容易发挥想象去续写。续写的内容应该还是按照家庭旅游的主线来进行,当然,涉及“妈妈健忘,但是很善良”的特点也是续写的关注点。【参考范文】The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brou

22、ght with us. We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the h

23、otel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the

24、modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot

25、to express her love to us.Writing 2（2017浙江6月）On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with hi

26、m soon. As Mac pedaled（骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it was

27、nt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his s

28、ide again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb

29、 before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.

30、 A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;The car abruptly stopped in front of him.A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.【写作提示】文章题材和野外生活相关,故事具有冒险性。原文是主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和Becky驱车走近。这样,精彩