高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练docWord格式.docx

1、realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。去掉of72解析：句法错误。由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。had改为have73解析：行文逻辑错误。not only.but also.“不仅而且”，连接并列成分。and改为but74解析：被动语态的结构为“be及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。took改为taken75解析：句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。become改为became76解析：picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中

2、”。in后加this/the77解析：things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。they改为that/which78解析：形容词修饰名词kinds。difference改为different79解析：the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。latest“最近的，最新的”。late改为latest80解析：句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。your改为myPassage 2（2016全国卷）My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close

3、 to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using fo

4、r cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live.Though not very big， the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal tim

5、es.Some people even to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time.Instead，he hopes that business will grow .【语篇解读】本文主要讲述了作者的叔叔经营

6、餐馆的成功之道。close to后接宾语从句。I live缺少地点状语，故用where引导宾语从句。thatwherethough与but不能用在同一个句子中。去掉but文章通篇用一般现在时，故将had改为have。hadhave主语是the key，与表语构成同位关系，并非对主语的描述，故用名词。honesthonestyfresh vegetables和high quality oil是并列关系，不是选择关系，故将or改为and。orandfresh vegetables and high quality oil与use是被动关系，故用被动语态。be used for被用于。usingus

7、eddream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，是固定搭配。dreams后加ofin a short period of time“在短时间内”，是固定短语。short前面的the改为a由“My uncle is the owner of a restaurant.”可知，餐馆是“我”叔叔的，故将our改为his。ourhisgrow在此是实义动词并非连系动词，故用副词修饰。steadysteadilyPassage 3全国卷）（导学号 58210083）The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for m

8、e.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However, my parents didnt seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I coul

9、d be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.The teenage from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and years

10、 in my life.At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by .However，my parents didnt seem to think .They always me what to do and how to do it.At one time，I even felt my parents couldnt understand me so I hoped I could be from them.I showed them I was independent by strange clothes

11、.Now I am leaving home college.At last，I will be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.【语篇解读】本文中作者回忆了他的青少年时代。13至19岁那几年，year当然要用复数形式。yearyearsand前用了最高级best，此处也应用最高级。比较级worse应改为最高级worst。worseworstat first“起初”。去掉first前面的the此处谈论的都是“我”的事情。yourselfmyselfthink so“这样认为，

12、认为如此”。suchso由前句的didnt和后句的felt可判断用一般过去时。telltoldbe free from“摆脱”。freelyfreeby doing sth.“通过做某事”。wearwearingleave.for.“离开某地到另外一个地方”。college前面的to改为for最终，我还是要一个人，但我仍然想在我需要帮助的任何时候有父母可以求助。need前加I模拟演练Passage 1肇庆高三模拟）（导学号 58210044）A few months after returning the US from Germany，I took a college course in t

13、he French.Since I have learned to speak German good in Germany，I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language.In the first class，the teacher asked me to do a pronunciation exercise，in which he would say a word or two in French，and each student would do his best to copy.When

14、 he got me，he kept having me said more words，but I finally asked him why.“I find it great funs.Its the first time Ive heard the American speak French with a German accent.” he explained.A few months after returning the US from Germany，I took a college course in French.Since I learned to speak German

15、 in Germany，I thought that it might be to begin studying another language.In the first class，the teacher asked to do a pronunciation exercise，in which he would say a word or two in French，and each student would do his best to copy.When he got me，he kept having me more words， I finally asked him why.

16、“I find it great .Itve heard American speak French with a German accent.” he explained.【语篇解读】本文中作者回忆了他有趣的法语课。1解析：考查短语。return to sp.“回到某地”，所以这里需在return后加to。return后加to2解析：考查介词。in French“用法语”，为固定搭配，所以这里需去掉冠词the。the去掉3解析：考查过去完成时。这里需用过去完成时，表示我在德国时德语已经学的很好，所以这里需将have改为had。havehad4解析：考查副词。修饰动词speak，这里需用副词w

17、ell。goodwell5解析：考查现在分词。形容词的-ing形式修饰物，-ed形式修饰人。这里表示的是物，所以需用现在分词。interestedinteresting6解析：考查宾语。根据语境可知是老师告诉我们，所以这里需将me改为us。meus7解析：考查动词。have sb.do sth.“让某人做某事”，所以这里需将said改为say。saidsay8解析：考查连词。前句是：他让我说更多的话，后句是：我最终问他，两句之间是并列关系，所以这里需用连词and。butand9解析：考查形容词。find it后需加形容词作宾补，所以这里需将funs改为fun。funsfun10解析：考查冠词。

18、这里指的是一个美国人，所以需用冠词an，表示泛指。thean濮阳高三一模）When I first started working in the High Mobility Pool，the biggest challenge I take up was working complete in German.However，thanks for the training and daily activities，Ive already had no difficulty.Right now，for my current project，I constantly need to travel t

19、o a company，that is located in Germany，to attend meetings.I can see that this effort have brought good results to my work.There has been almost a year since I started working in the High Mobility Pool.Now，Im still exciting about the new experiences my next projects will bring from.I will value the o

20、pportunities meet more people from different country and cultures.When I first started working in the High Mobility Pool，the biggest challenge I up was working in German.However，thanks the training and daily activities，Ive already had no difficulty.Right now，for my current project，I constantly need

21、to travel to a company， is located in Germany，to attend meetings.I can see that this effort brought good results to my work. has been almost a year since I started working in the High Mobility Pool.Now，Im still about the new experiences my next projects will bring I will value the opportunities meet

22、 more people from different and cultures.【语篇解读】本文讲述了作者首次在the High Mobility Pool工作所遇到的最大挑战语言障碍。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把take改为took。taketook副词修饰动词。故把complete改为completely。completecompletely多亏了训练和日常活动。thanks to“幸亏，多亏”，故把for改为to。forto此处a company是先行词，后面是非限制性定语从句，故把that改为which。thatwhich此处this effort是句子主语，单数第三人称形式，故

23、把have改为has。havehas固定句式：Itis/has been一段时间since.“自从多长时间了”。故把There改为It。ThereIt固定词组：be excited about“对感到兴奋”。故把exciting改为excited。excitingexcited此处bring是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语，故去掉from。去掉from此处是动词不定式作后置定语，故在meet前加to。meet前加to根据前面的different可知后面的名词用复数形式，故把country改为countries。country改为countries衡水中学高三模拟）（导学号 58210084）My p

24、arents decided try a new Western restaurant last weekend，so I went with them.The evening started well and the menu looks good.I had soup with my starter but the waiter didnt bring a spoon so it was getting a bit cold after I could eat it.Then，for our main course，I had a piece of beef.Besides，I could

25、nt cut the beef because of my knife wasnt very good.For my dessert I had a apple pie but I didnt have a fork or a spoon so I ate them with my fingers! What a terribly experience!My parents decided try a new Western restaurant last weekend，so I went with them.The evening started well and the menu good.I had soup my starter but the waiter didnt bring a spoon so it was getting a bit cold I could eat it.Then，for main course，