高考英语书面表达常见错误分析Word文档格式.docx

1、在阅卷中发现，有相当一部分考生的作文卷面不清，书写潦草，影响信息的传递。评分原则中有一条表明：若书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。7.语言平乏，词汇档次欠高不少考生大脑记忆库词汇量储存不够，难以灵活运用语言，导致语言平乏，同一种表达重复较多。8.文章缺乏连贯性有些考生在词汇的运用和内容的表达上都基本达到要求，但由于句与句，段与段之间没有添加恰当的连接成分，使句子之间和段落之间缺乏必要的过渡和衔接，影响了表达的效果。8.死背范文部分考生死背范文，表达不灵活。例如，有些考生不管所给首句，文不对题地顾自另起一句：“Im writing to tell you about the discu

2、ssion we recently had about whether”1. 句子缺谓语1） The building like a match box.2） He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。 A worker of the farm lead us to the field. All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.3.时态错误 When he came back, h

3、e found that his wife has gone to bed. What are you doing this time yesterday?4.词性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.5.介词误用 In my surprise, he has got the first prize. He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.3） Dont read under the sun.6.冠词误用 We electe

4、d Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five. Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion. The history is actually a very interesting subject.7.名词的数混淆 It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing. There is always traffic jam.8.动词用法错误 Where are you come from? When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was th

5、ere waiting for me. He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.4） The accident was happened in 1999.9.习惯用法错误 The actor in this movie is very beautiful. I and My parents were working in the fields at that time. The reason is because he does not know what to do next.10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清误：It hit

6、 the old man down but the driver, a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the cars number. Its AC864. The old man couldnt move , I decided to help him.正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didnt

7、stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the cars number. Its AC864. Noticing the old man couldnt move, I decided to help him.11.画蛇添足 、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）修改前：A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting.修改后：A famo

8、us sportsman was giving an interesting speech.修改前: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is caused by buses and cars. Whats more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition,

9、sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot.修改后: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now and then. Whats more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirti

10、er. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is becoming more and more serious. As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on . As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful mus

11、ic played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性、可读性。 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle wa

12、s a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. Yesterday, a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk. Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn

13、t stop and hit the old man. The driver didnt stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman. Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didnt stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and t

14、he driver was a woman.总的来说扣分原因在：1.与内容无关。2.句子构架搭不起来，意思出不来。He went family.3.行文不连贯。人称使用前后矛盾，词频度过高，不会用连接词语等。4.缺少谓语动词。He very happy very much.5.拼写错误，行文潦草，无法看清、看懂。6.语言不得体：不看对象，不看场景，用语不当。7.标点混乱；人称代词及时态、语态乱用。8.内容要点不全，缺项，整体结构不完整。9.文段多于或少于规定的字数。10.格式不规范，如书信体中漏缺开首词和结尾语等。得分条件1.行文连贯流畅人称、时间、地点、情节交待有层次。2.恰当使用连接词语。

15、and/or/but/so/not onlybut also/however/besides/otherwise/ like/in the same way/unless/in case/as long as/on one hand, on the other hand等词或短语。3.语句简明扼要，无或少词语重复。4.行文整洁，字体规范，会增加好印象。5.尽量写出与题目有关的词语。二、写作文四步Step1：确定文体常用文体有记叙文、说明文，还有应用文如书信等。近几年的高考书面表达多以应用文为主，提供的形式多以图画、提纲、表格出现，书写的格式大都是书信、 通知。所以，考生还应该掌握信的称呼、开头

16、、正文、结尾、签名等方面，另外，口头通知和书面通知的不同要清楚。总之，考生应根据写作提示分析材料，确定文 体，闯过第一关。Step2：确定时态和人称要根据选好的文体和写作内容确定时态。一般来说，记人叙事多用一般过去时；发布通知多用一般将来时和祈使句式；发表议论大多用带有情态动词的一般现在时； 人物介绍、现状说明常用一般现在时和现在完成时。定准时态后接下来一定要知道各时态的构成及用法要点，但要记住，写作时时态并不惟一，要依据表达内容而选 定。Step3：确定所需主要词汇和所用表达结构在以上“两确定”的基础上，应该根据文章体裁和内容逐个地确定写作要点。对于图画和图表可在草稿纸上用中文列出。理清要点

17、，然后选词造句，对列出的要点逐一翻译。这时要注意力求语言准确得当。平时写作要多进行发散思维，如是用very sorry还是terribly sorry；是surprised还是aston-ished。同时考生应学会尽可能使用较高级的语法结构和词汇，如非谓语动词、复合句等。最大限度地完美文章。Step4：整理成篇 行文连贯接下来要根据内容分清文章的层次，确定详略，将写好的单句要重新排列组合起来，使之前后连贯成一篇完整的文章。同时选用恰当的关联词使文章过渡自然，行文流畅。另外，根据内容编排，该分段时要分段，使表达清楚，一目了然。行云流水，整齐划一，闯过写作第四关。三、英文作文必背之35个句型1th

18、e + est +名词+ （that） +主词+ have +ever + seen （known/heard/had/read, etc）the most +形容词+名词+ （that） +主词+ have +ever + seen （known/heard/had/read, etc）Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。2Nothing is + er

19、 than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + VNothing is more important than to receive education.没有比接受教育更重要的事。3 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.（再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。）We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。4There is no denying that + S + V .（不

20、可否认的.）There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。5It is universally acknowledged that +句子 （全世界都知道.）It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.6There is no doubt that +句子 （毫无疑问的.）There is no doubt that our educational sy

21、stem leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。7An advantage of is that +句子（.的优点是.）An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create （produce） any pollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。8The reason why +句子 is that +句子（.的原因是.）The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide uswi

22、th fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。9So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子（如此.以致于.）So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。10Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V （虽然.）Rich as our country is, the qualities o

23、f our living are by no means satisfactory.by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不11The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S + V, the + more+ Adj + S + V（愈.愈.）The harder you work, the more progress you make.The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。12By +Vin

24、g, can （借着.，.能够.）By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。13 enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （.使.能够.）Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。14On no account can we+ V （我们绝对不能.）On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。15It is time + S +过去

25、式（该是.的时候了）It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。16Those who （.的人.）Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。17There is no one but （没有人不.）There is no one but longs to go to college.没有人不渴望上大学。18be + fo

26、rced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不.）Since the examination is around the corner, I amcompelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。19It is conceivable that +句子（可想而知的）It is obvious that +句子（明显的）It is apparent that +句子（显然的）It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想

27、而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。20That is the reason why （那就是.的原因）Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I dont like it.夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。21For the past+时间，S +现在完成式.（过去.年来，.一直.）For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。22Since + S +过去式，S +现在完成式。Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他一直很用功。 23It pays to + V （.是值得的。It pays to help others.帮助别人是值得的。24be based on （以.为基础）The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。25Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）We should sp