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1、【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My name is，Im glad to，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的个人情况，接下来介绍我们的校园，老师和同学，最后对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。此处go by, come to an end,

2、tell sb about sth, all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业

3、多，没时间。（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。4. 至少80词。Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. _Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,Its my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise

4、. Ill tell it to you. I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I dont do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good

5、 for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am busy，because I have，Doing exerci

6、se can help，So I advise you to等句式的应用。开头表示很高兴收到Billy的来信，接下来介绍我平时的锻炼情况，最后指出锻炼给我带来的好处以及我建议Billy要多锻炼。此处be busy doing sth, prepare for, do well in, be good for, advise sb to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3 假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。To: lihua china. comFrom: bill006

7、 america. comSubject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why

8、or why not? What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. _【答案】例文Thank you for

9、 your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the schools environment appeals to me and staying with students

10、helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。首先回答职业是教师。然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知

11、识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。4临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大

12、方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠Your suggestions（根据实际情况提点建议）1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy i

13、s a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on childrens grow

14、th. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the e

15、xam comes. And he doesnt have enough sleep. I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. Its better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要

16、注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes rea

17、ding detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。5书面表达初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演. 请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。（1）What was the event?（2）How did you make i

18、t?（3）Whats your feeling?（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。Believe Myself, and I Will WinHello, everyone!_Thank you for your listening.【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulti

19、es in our life and we have to face them.When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldnt understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My Englis

20、h teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didnt seem that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too. To be c

21、onfident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I wont be afraid of the difficulties in my life and Im sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿

22、。题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列

23、句或复合句。为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grad

24、e, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didnt seem that difficult、In the future, I won等等。6书面表达难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettab

25、le Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺;3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.【答案】How time flies!In the past, I learnt a lot of kno

26、wledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didnt do well in Maths because I gave up easil