英语六级写作讲义保你六级作文得高分Word格式.docx

1、有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注: 白卷, 作文与题目毫不相关, 或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想,则给0分。5. 字数不足应酌情扣分累计字数140-149130-139120-129110-119100-10990-9980-8979扣 分12345679 1. 如题目中给出主题句, 起始句, 结束句, 均不得计入所写字数 2. 规定内容未写全者，按比例扣分。写作原则1 多用长句，少用短句，适当加入几句结构较复杂

2、的句子。2 写好第一句话。这样容易给阅卷者留下一个好印象，最好能用上一个复句，里面要用上2-3个难的单词或词组。3 结构要清晰。我建议使用四段式，第一段综述，第二、三段分述，第四段做总结，二、三段是重点。4 多用连接性的词组或单词。如first, second, moreover, for one thing.for another, on the one hand.on the other hand等等。可以把它们置于段首或文中比较显著的位置，这样会使文章更具条理性。5 注意结尾的时候要点题，把自己的观点明确说出来。6 文章不要写得太长，这样容易引起阅卷者的反感。7 词汇的使用上请多用六级词

3、汇，以区别于四级。8 如有可能，适当加上一两句名言或是谚语，以显示你见识的广博。第二部分 模仿和语言包装模仿和学用漂亮和地道的英语表达法或句型并不是可耻的事。地道的英语不应是你用学过的词汇和语法规则按某个意思苦苦思索造出来的，地道的英语应是你把英美人对这个意思的习惯说法用到你自己的文章上来的。该讲义收集了论说文常用的一些句型，与六级考试的一些文章结构模式；希望同学们能以此为依据，Practice makes perfect，达到熟能生巧的境界，从而在六级考试作文部分获得理想的分数！记忆重要可替代词汇创造写作中的闪光点人：individuals, characters, folks代替（peop

4、le ,persons）积极的/好的：positive, favorable, rosy（美好的），promising （有希望的），perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good消极的/有害的：have adverse （influences/impacts） on sth./sb，dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse（有害的）代替bad 如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive代替 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves

5、 in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of许多：（an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a

6、multitude of/ a host of/a number of ,many,if not most）代替many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,代替most. 一些：a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some人们认为：harbor the idea that, take the attitude that / it is generally/wide

7、ly believed/held/agreed/ acknowledged that替think引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention/publicity to the issue of sth.带来利益/好处：reap huge fruits, Its fruitful/productive/rewarding that 代替get much benefit顾客：shopper, client, consumer, purchaser, 代替customer吸引：sth appeals to sb, sth exert

8、s a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in随着。的发展/提高：Coincident with the advancement/acceleration of 非常地道的词汇，表达“与一致”的意思，替换 With 发展：Advancement 替换 development 进入/走进：Pour into （ flood into / swarm into ）替换 enter into表明：be indicative of ,be suggesteive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,f

9、ear导致：give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.不赞同：frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth几乎不可能：next to/virtually impossible,代替nearly impossible重要：significant. It is of great significance for.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to the fact/danger适应新的形势/变化：

10、adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society获得成功：achieve/accomplish success提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions作出努力：endeavor to/make

11、 tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do（with work/study）影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of ones life剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/rig

12、ht/opportunity取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way采取措施：take effective steps/measures to控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage

13、解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon对很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into/ be well acquainted with把某因素考虑进去：take sth. Into account（consideration）, give much thought to品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth培养对的信心：develop/foster

14、 ones interest/confidence in经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience表现出自信心等：project ones confidence/feeling/image生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice追求学习/职业：pursue ones academic interest/professional career学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill被看作学

15、习的榜样：be held up as a good example交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge发挥/起到重要作用：play an （important/active/great） role/part逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/o

16、bjective克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom发表看法：voice/express ones opinion持相反/合理的观点：ta

17、ke the opposite/fresh view揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of求得帮助：enlist ones support/help缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf （between city and country）把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to对重要：be indispensable/important/vital to施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on重视：assign/attach much importanc

18、e/significance to强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate ones attention/efforts/thoughts upon提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information有可能：there is （little/much） p

19、ossibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that展开竞争：compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of开展运动：conduct （carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage） a （vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising） campaign （for/against）对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me带来无穷的幸福/满

20、足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career大不（没什么）两样：make much（little/no） difference真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is 改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice进行调查/执

21、行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment辞去工作/学习：leave/quit ones job/work/school参加考试/竞赛等：enter （for） the examination/contest, race参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape ones thinking/attitude进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/t

22、he work force/professionals实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve ones dream（hops/wish/desire）减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership提高技术/能力：sharpen （increase/improve/enhance/boost） ones

23、 skill/ability加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden ones interest/outlook, expand（broaden/enlarge） ones mental horizons有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better under

24、standing of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of有助于解决问题：go a long way to（towards） solving the problem迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机会/技术：make （full/better） use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, t

25、ap/harness technology potential/skills/talent把知识/经验运用到：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience to practice/daily life/good use取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in充分发挥潜力/能力：develop ones ability/potential to the full, give full play to ones ability充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion fo

26、r作文高分法宝：五星级万能句型引出现象的句型1. The problem of being honest has caused wide public concern over the recent years. 近些年，诚实的问题引起了关注。There is a general debate on the campus/in society today over the phenomenon of waste on campus. 对于校园浪费这一现象，校园/社会上进行着广泛的争论。There is no denying the fact that /setting off firecrac

27、kers has been a hotly debated topic in China. Peoples opinions differ sharply on this issue. Some hold the positive view. They say that it is an ancient Chinese custom which should be preserved. They also claim that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for

28、 both adults and children. Without firecrackers, festivals would become dull and cheerless. There has been much controversy over setting off firecrackers setting off firecrackers in the past years, with each party owning convincing evidences. Those who are in favor of setting firecrackers claim that

29、 it is an ancient Chinese custom that should be preserved. They also argue that firecrackers make festivals and holiday occasions more colorful and entertaining for both adults and children. Without firecrackers, festivals would become cold and cheerless. 2. Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that sth （wasting/dishonesty） has been a grave problem with