1、二.论证驳斥部分First of all, the argument is based on a false analogy. / The arguer simply assumes thatbut he does not provide any evidence thatis indeed comparable. / As we knowdiffer conspicuously. / It is true that bothbut even here exist fundamental differences/ Therefore, even thoughproved effective i
2、n doingthere is no guarantee that it will work just as well for/ As a result, A and B do not establish a warranted analogy, so we cannot safely assume that (两者无法比) The author unfairly assumes that A bears some relations to B. / However, the author provides no evidence to support that this is the cas
3、e, nor does the author establish a causal relationship between A and B. / It is highly possible that other factors might contribute to the B/change/progress. / For exampleit is also likely B just resulted from/ Lacking evidence that links A to B, it is presumptuous to suggest that A was responsible
4、for B. (无法建立必然的因果关系) The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. / One example is rarely sufficient to establish a general conclusion. / Based on a specific example of, it is logically unsounded to make suggestion for all/ In fact, in face of such limite
5、d evidence, it is fallacious to draw any conclusion at all. / Unless it can be shown thatis representative of all, the conclusion thatis completely unwarranted. (单个事例不能说明整体问题) By concluding that sb must do A or must do B, the author commits a fallacy of“false dilemma”. / The author assumes that A an
6、d B are the only available solutions to the problem. / However, it is possible that other factors might also contribute to the problem. For example/ If so, just doing A and B would not solve the problem. (还有其他原因) In addition, the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. / Even if, which is,
7、 of course, an unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that/ It is highly possible that other factors may have contributed to B/ For instance,/ Besides, the arguer does not provide any solid information concerning/ Unless, which is unknown from this argument, there is no guarantee that/ Without r
8、uling out these and other possible factors that give rise to B, the author cannot confidently conclude that (结论得出过早,考虑不周到) The arguer assumes that just because one event follows another, the second event has been caused by the first. / However, no evidence is provided to support that this is the cas
9、e. / The mere fact that A occurs before B does not necessarily establish a causal relationship between A and B. / It is highly possible that other factors might also bring about these same results. / For instance,in addition,/ Without ruling out these and other possible factors that give rise to B,
10、the author cannot confidently conclude that(无因果关系)The recommendation depends on the assumption that no alternative means of doing sth are available. / However, the arguer fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. It is highly possible that means other than this would bette
11、r solve the problem. / Without considering and ruling out these and other alternative means of doing sth, the author cannot confidently conclude thatThe arguer assumes the characteristics of asgroupsapply to every member of that group. / The conclusion thatis based on the assumption that/ However, t
12、here is no guarantee that this is the case, nor does the author provide any evidence to substantiate this assumption. It is very likely that/ Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion. (整体规律不一定适用于个人) It is assumed without justification that background conditions have remained
13、the same at different times / conditions. / The arguer unfairly infers fromin the past that/ However, he/she fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this inference. It is very likely thator that/ Any of these scenarios, if true, would serve to undermine the claim that (从过去不能推知现在和将来) Finally, the
14、 arguer provides no assurance that the survey on which the argument depends is statistically reliable. / Lacking information about the number ofsurveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to assess the validity of the results. /For example, ifwere surveyed but onlyresponded, the conclus
15、ion thatwould be highly suspected. / Another problem is the representativeness of the respondents. Were they representative of all the? Werechosen for the survey chosen randomly or did they volunteer for the survey? / Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion based on the stud
16、y. 三.结尾部分In summary, this argument is not persuasive as it stands. To make it more convincing, the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning/ provide evidence to rule out other possible causes ofTo better evaluate the argument, we would need more information regardingIssue模版第一段Determinin
17、g whether something should or should not be done could be weighed in many aspects. Different people have different answers due to their respective points of view. On balance, my view is that the final judgment should depend on a case-by-case analysis of the two situations. / In my point of view, I a
18、gree with the speaker on the grounds that/ At the first glance, this opinion seems to be somewhat appealing, but further reflection tells me that I cannot agree with it for the following reasons. 第二段*同意The first and foremost reason why I support / agree with above statement is thatthere is also a fu
19、rther more subtle point to consider. *反对Although at first glance these arguments sound reasonable and appealing, they are not born out by a careful consideration. The undeniable deficiency in above arguments is that they are negligent of the bare fact that. 第三段In conclusion, it must be explained tha
20、t these three reasons sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole, thus becoming more persuasive than anyone of them. So, any thinking person must believe that6 Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any societys past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand
21、on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served. 过去和现在之建筑物With the developments of human society, the controversy rose
22、from the gap between the old building and the new one has attracted more and more attentions. Some persons argue that the land that has been taken for the historic building should be better used for modern purpose. While others insist that the old buildings have great meanings to human race and shou
23、ld also play a certain role in the progress of modern society. One of the best ways to solve this controversy is to construct a balance between the preservation of historic building and the development of modern world.Compared with the realistic use in the past, the historic architectures have been
24、playing two important roles in the modern society. One is the research objects for the historians in order to reconstruct the scene of the past and find the truth about the old events. Some of the buildings in the past have played a crucial role in the events that may have profound effects on the ev
25、olution of human society. The other is the vivid historic text books that may help people, especially the descendents, to remind the lessons and experience that the ancestors have ever had. As the witness of the historic events, the old buildings have been viewed as the recorders of human history an
26、d can help human beings to maintain their civilization in the long run.The reasons above do not prevent the old building from losing its significant status in todays technological advanced society. With the advent of computer and other advanced technology, human beings have become more and more conc
27、erned about the efficiency, productivity and some other things pertaining to the practical interest. In order to earn as much money as possible, many gigantic buildings have been introduced in the great city and also more people prefer to enjoy the convenience of the urbanism, and in the end, induce
28、 more and more people moving into the cities. When most of the area has been dominated by various monstrous edifices, people begin to focus their attentions on the land which has been taken by the old buildings. Under this circumstance, the conflict between the old building and new one has been rais
29、ed.In todays era of high efficiency and high productivity, which lead to increasing the living pace, the historic building also has its advantages. Some old architecture enable common persons to recall the tragic accidents easily, these buildings can help warn modern human beings to absorb the ances
30、tors lessons. Still some old buildings can help people to recognize the thriving world, which has come from the hard efforts of our forefathers and will eventually make the adolescents know the precious time they have possessed.Striking the balance between the preservation of old buildings and the d
31、evelopment of our modern world is the primary problem that people should first to solve. On the one hand, fulfilling the improvements of the modern society does not mean it has been given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings, for the old buildings present the human history and we can not develop the world at the cost of losing the history. On the other hand, preserving all the historical architectures may also too wasteful. So just preserving some important buildings is one of the most provident ways to solving the contro
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