1、文贵在变,学会用不同的形式开始句子,注意句子的长短结合。5. 作文字数是否达到要求(作文的最佳要求是四级150左右,六级180左右)6. 卷面是否整洁,书写是否漂亮写作终究是一项主观性测试,是靠阅卷老师而不是由机器来判分的。虽然作文评分有具体的标准,但教师的主观性因素仍然起着不可忽视的作用。因此,考生在写作的时候一定要牢记自己的阅卷对象。文章要获得高分,就必须得到阅卷老师的认可,给阅卷老师留下一个好的印象十分重要。通常以下几个方面会左右阅卷老师的给分,它们既是阅卷老师在评卷时特别关注的地方,也是考生在写作中应加以注意的地方。1 内容是否紧扣主题,涵盖提示要点写作的第一步就是审准题目,考生只要扣
2、紧题目来写,就不会出现大的问题。能抓住题目的精髓是最理想的,但是如果没有理解题目的核心,只按照确定下来的主题,根据提纲来写也未必失分。另外,在考试中,虽然完全跑题的现象非常少,但是漏“点”的情况却很多,这里说的“点”就是提纲中列出的两点或三点内容。我们应注意,审题既包括看英文的题目,还包括看指示语和中文提纲等。2作文结构层次是否清晰作文一定要分段来写,这是体现文章结构的关键。它既是英语文章结构形式的基本体现,也可以使评卷老师觉得你的作文结构完整、合理,符合写作要求。作文要有引言段、扩展段和结尾段。在引言段中要包含中心句;扩展段的每一段均应有主题句;结尾段应该是一个自然收尾的段落。另外,每段开头
3、都应空出相同的字符数空格。文章的题目已经给出,不必重抄,段与段之间也不必空行。3语言表达是否流畅。有无重大语病,有无逻辑错误一般说来,评卷老师阅卷的速度越快,对语言关注的程度就越高。内容和语言是统一的,语言方面的错误势必会影响内容的表达,造成理解障碍。4. 检查我们必须明确:考试作文的润色和修改只需要达到三个目的即可:1. 拼写正确、标点符号正确;2. 搭配正确;3. 语法正确,特别是人称、时态、和单复数的三一致。因为受考试时间和条件等诸多因素的限制,不要做大的结构或内容上的修改。语言方面:1. 尽量使用词组或短语。如果某个词有同义的词组的话,最好使用词组,一方面可以给文章增加亮点,另一方面,
4、也可以增加字数。2. 长短句多结合。不可全用简单句,也不要全用长句。3. 注重连接词。在文章中,句子之间,段落之间以及引起和结束文章的时候要会使用连接词。如:firstly, secondly, thirdly等,或者to start with, then, next, finally, furthermore, in addition, besides, last but not the least, moreover, most important of all等某人持某种观点,不仅可以用think,还可以用hold the view that, argue that, maintain
5、the point of view that, takefor granted等论证观点时可以分为两点或者三点,不要用first, second, third。如果是两点,可以用on the one hand, on the other hand或者for one thing, for another.如果是三点,可以用to begin with, moreover, finally或者in the first place, in the second place, last but not the least等等4. 句式避免单一化。尽量多使用不同的句式。并列句:not onlybut al
6、so; notbut转折句:yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite that因果句:therefore, consequently, so that, as a result, accordingly插入语:that is to say, so to speak +同位语一些丰富的用词和灵活的句式1 一些高级词汇的使用:平时在学习中多积累。用approaches 代替ways; 用implement代替carry out; 用facilitate代替make it easier;用soar代替increase;用proficiency代
7、替ability;用tremendous/enormous/gigantic代替big/large/huge2. 善于利用相应的副词形式:It is widely acknowledged that./ generally speaking/ additionally替换in addition3. 适当使用短语,短语中也尽量涉及到高级词汇,如:用harbor the idea that/ take the attitude that/ hold the view that/ it is widely shared that/ it is universally acknowledged tha
8、t 来代替think用for my part/ from my own perspective/ as far as I am concerned替换简单的in my opinion用bearin the mind代替remember 等等。4 善于利用更加符合英语习惯的句式如用sth appeals to sb./sth exert a tremendous fasicnation on sb.代替sb takes interest in/ sb be interested in (doing sth) 前面的句型更符合英语中以“物”做主语的习惯。四六级作文经典总汇Chapter One 文
9、章开头句型1-1 对立法 : 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.例如(e.g)1. When asked about., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that . But I think/view a bit differently.2. When it comes to . , some people bielive that . Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably som
10、e truth in both arguements/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter .)3. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that . They claim/ believe/argue that . But I wonder/doubt whether.1-2 现象法 引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论 .e.g1. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) . has cau
11、se/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern.2. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of .has been brought into focus. ( has been brouth to public attention)3.Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality . is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantl
12、y.- To be continued !1-3 观点法 -开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.e.g:1. Never history has the change of . been as evident as . Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of . benn more visible/popular than.2. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginnig/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that.3.
13、 Now there is a growing awareness/recognation ot the necessity to.Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of .4. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.1-4 引用法 - 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!1. Knowledge is power. such is the remark made by Baco
14、n.This remark has been shared by more and more people .Education is not complete with gradulation. Such is the opnion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opnion.2. How often we hear such statements/words like thoses /this .In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this .1-5 比较法 - 通过对过去,现在 两种不同的倾向,观点的比较 , 引出文章要讨论的观点.1. For years, .had been viewed as . But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing . , people . .2. People used to think that . (In the past, .) But people now share this
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