作文 对比选择型作文Word格式.docx

1、Introducing the topic 引出话题Stating the pros and cons 分析利弊Drawing a conclusion: my opinion/attitude/总结观点：摆明我的立场Introducing an idea引出（反面）论点Contradicting the idea and raise my own idea反驳并表明反对的理由，提出自己的观点Supporting my idea and making a conclusion 总结：从正面论述自己的观点Stating the pros and cons of sth. 分析利弊Drawing

2、a conclusion总结：论述自己的观点。Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test （CET）.（引出观点段）In response to the change, many argue/hold that it is necessary and beneficial, but others put forward a totally different argument

3、. 对于这个变化，许多人认为这是必要的而且有益的，但是有人则对此提出完全相反的观点。Those people who hold the first opinion/make the former choice/have the first preference believe spoken English should be given as much weight as written English, for the purpose of learning English is to be able to read, write, listen and speak in English.

4、In addition, they maintain/point out that college students, who have learnt English for so many years, are good at English reading and writing but extremely lacking in English speaking. By including spoken English as an optional component of the CET, they may put more energy and time into practicing

5、 their oral English, leading to improvement in their oral English. However, others think differently/do not agree this/have different choices/preferences. there are also people who maintain that good reading and writing skills would be enough for the average English learners. College students are al

6、ready under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Also, some students may take the shortcut and only practice the questions according to the fixed format of the test, which will not actually improve their spoken English.Weighing up these tw

7、o arguments/choices/preferences, I prefer/am inclined to/would rather choose the former one. For one thing, as college English learners we should and are able to fully develop ourselves in all aspects of English. For another/Furthermore/Moreover/Whats more, the change in CET implies that the society

8、 needs people with comprehensive English language skills, so we should be aware of the change and make adjustment to it. Just like the famous saying: No one can stand still. If you are not moving ahead, you are falling behind. From now on, I should get ready for that change and set a goal for it. On

9、ly by practicing will my oral English be improved!范文：A test of spoken English will be included as an optional （component of the College English Test （CET）. Some people contend that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been told many times that a Chines

10、e student who has been learning English for years cannot communicate with a native English speaker. Sometimes even those top students who excel at grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely when speaking. A test of spoken English will bring the importan

11、ce of speaking English to the awareness of the college students, and thus help them with their communicating skills.On the other hand, there are also people who maintain that good reading and writing skills would be enough for the average English learners. College students are already under consider

12、able pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Also, some students may take the shortcut and only practice the questions according to the fixed format of the test, which will not actually improve their spoken English.I believe that a test of spoken English

13、will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak fluent English is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall make all efforts to practice my spoken English in the

14、 rest years in college.问题反馈：1 审题不清：1） CET 大学英语考试不是CEE 大学入学考试，也不是大学里的英语课考试。2） Spoken English test will be included as an optional component. 可选择的，非强制的2 表达问题：1）表达不够简练。2）论述没有说服力。1） 用语简练，直击要害！2） 深入思考，关注当前热点，关注生活，勤于思考，善于思考。3） 不要构思汉语，直接用英语表达思维。要不然很容易写出chinglish。3 语言错误太多！影响分数档！1） 句子片段Because .Therefore, 附属

15、连词不能单独使用，要依附于主句之上。2） 单词错误，重复出现。 leval/grammer/ 3）用语不规范。 以我之见：In my opinion,To/ In my mind,As far as I am concerned, 就我而言，As far as I can see, 据我看来There are few students can speak English.There are a lot of people have different opinions. 4）语体不当。书面语；口头语 I want to say this Thats all.4结构问题：1）一段论要摒弃！2）务必按照写作提纲写作！（顺序）5 书写问题1）字体过于潦草！2）段首缩进对比选择型作文写作常用句型1. 如何引出话题？1） When it comes to the topic, there is no complete agreement among people.2） When asked the topic, different people will give different answers/ offer different views/make different choices/have di