新东方六级作文专项辅导.docx

1、新东方六级作文专项辅导写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1 主从句叠置1) There are more and more students like to use the computer.2) There are still many problems should be noted and resolved.2 简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3 从句叠置As is known to all that computers play an impor

2、tant role in many fields of our life.4 句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.5 语序错误1) Why college students spend more and more time on the computer?2) I often wonder where have they got their money.（二）动词错误1时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2语态错误1

3、) I have excited several days at the news that you will come here.2) Most of the students satisfy with the service in the dining hall.3单复数错误1) Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Someone are afraid that computer may control men in the future. 4非谓语动词错误1) Let me to represent every

4、one to say “hello” to you.2) Do exercise in the morning is good for ones health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代词错误1) We can use computers in doing everything you like.2) A college student should be able to do their washing on their own.（四）冠词错误1

5、) Horse is an useful animal.2) The exam will be held in the December, 2004. （五）词性错误1) I wish you can consider my suggests.2) If a person wants to success, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1) Students must know how to apply a computer. 2) People can touch many new things on the I

6、nternet. 3) The purpose of this letter is to react some opinions on the service in the dining hall.三、表达习惯错误1) Why generated so large a change? 2) Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer. 3) A room often lives 6-8 students. 4) I think this great change has three reasons.5) The prices of the food are too

7、expensive.6) The reason for this is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、标点符号及大小写错误1) However, every coin has two sides, I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street. Because he was late for the c

8、lass.3) At last I want to let you know, I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes isForrest Gump.三、六级写作题型分类（一）对立观点型My View on OpportunityThere is no consensus of opinion in society about oppo

9、rtunities. There are some who think that opportunities come only rarely, and only to lucky people. Others argue that opportunities come to everyone from time to time.Personally, I agree with the latter opinion. It seems to me that various kinds of opportunities are all around us all the time. The se

10、cret is to recognize opportunities and to grasp them in time, because they will not come to you of their own accord. For example, my classmates once refused to enter a national chemistry competition, because they thought that they had no chance of winning. But I took this opportunity, and by prepari

11、ng well I managed to win the first prize. Now my motto is: Watch out for opportunities, and at all times prepare yourself to take advantage of them.（二）解决问题型How to Solve the Problem of Heavy TrafficNowadays, Chinas cities are getting increasingly crowded. The rapid increase in population is being mad

12、e worse by the steady influx of people from the rural areas seeking employment. As a result, heavy traffic is a big headache, with all the roads packed with cars, bicycles and pedestrians. In my opinion, there are two ways to solve the problem. One is to build more and wider roads to make the public

13、 highways less crowded and speed up the flow of traffic. The other is to expand the number of public bus routes, so that more people can be transported and fewer people will have to travel by car or bicycle. However, each of these solutions brings problems with it. The former may occupy too much lan

14、d that could be used for farms or houses; the latter may cause inconvenience for long periods in bus lines. I think the best answer to the problem of heavy traffic is a combination of the two: build more roads in places where land is less useful, and at the same time increase the number of public bu

15、s routes. （三）谚语警句型Haste Makes Waste欲速则不达A famous saying goes “Haste makes waste”, which means that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can easily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process. One should make full preparations before beg

16、inning any task.Taking a look around, we can find examples too numerous to list. The best illustration might be English study. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not learn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of

17、 grammar, we will never succeed in writing good compositions. (或Here I can think of no better illustration of the proverb than the experience of my own. At the age of 11 or 12, I began to learn to ride. Eager to ride as well as others, I started by sitting on the saddle at the very beginning. Predic

18、tably, I often fell from over the bike. Lots of time had been wasted before I realized that I should do it step by step. I tried to slide by standing on one pedal. Then I began to ride the bike from under the cross bar. Finally, I succeeded. )In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we wa

19、nt to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day.（四）图表图画型Health Gains in Developing Countries It can be seen

20、 from the chart that there have been dramatic changes in life expectancy and infant mortality in developing countries in the past decades. As the chart shows, peoples life expectancy soared from 40 years old to 60 years old from 1960 to 1990. Meanwhile, infant mortality declined from 200 to 150 deat

21、hs per thousand births. The change in the chart may be attributed to a number of factors, but the following are the most critical ones. First, developing countries economy has been developing at a considerably high speed in the past decades. Therefore, people have more extra money to improve their h

22、ealth. Secondly, the advances in medical sciences and boom of medical industry provide citizens with more opportunities to cure their diseases. Last but not least, people have attached greater importance to their quality of life, thus they have spent more money and time to build up their bodies. In

23、a word, this chart is a perfect indicator of developing nations fast expanding economy and peoples rising standard of life. Although a series of problems have arisen in the process, it is reasonable for us to believe that they can be solved in the near future with effective measures taken by both th

24、e government and the public.（五）应用写作型A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on CampusJanuary 12th, 2002Dear Mr. President,I am a sophomore from Department 3 and I am writing to you about the food and service in the canteen on campus.To be frank, I am rather disappointed at the

25、 food quality, price and service in the canteen. Firstly, the dishes are scarcely well cooked and most of them taste the same. Secondly, most of the dishes there are priced so high that some students cannot even afford them. Thirdly, the service in the canteen is far from satisfying and the inside o

26、f the canteen always seem untidy.To solve the problem, I suggest that another canteen be built and a mechanism of competition be introduced between the old and the new. Besides, both the canteens should be subject to the students supervision.Dining is an everyday issue for students. It may affect th

27、eir academic performance. Therefore, I sincerely hope this letter can draw your attention to the matter and I hope the problems mentioned above can be solved as soon as possible. Best regards.Yours sincerelyLi Ming（六）其他范文How to Succeed in a Job Interview?It is undeniable that an interview plays a cr

28、itical role in job-hunting. Through the interview, an employer can meet their future employees in person and know them more thoroughly. Sometimes the written form of examination cannot reveal candidates real talents or problems. Besides, it is also beneficial for candidates to take an interview. The

29、y will have a chance to make their employers understand them better. A number of factors contribute to the success in a job interview. Personally, I think job-hunters should pay attention to the following points. First, they should be well prepared professionally. That means they should be ready to

30、answer all the important questions concerning their future job. Secondly, they should express themselves confidently and honestly. Last but not least, they should pay enough attention to their appearances, that is, they should be properly dressed. As far as I am concerned, I will get academically re

31、ady first, and then be relaxed to answer all the questions. I will also dress up and behave properly. I do believe that so long as I make good preparations, I will perform well in the interview.七、句型写作练习（一）并列句1) It was a cold snowy day and he had no money left for food. 2) Hurry up or youll be late.

32、3) It rained heavily last night but I went to the show anyway. 4) I enjoy classical music, so does she.5) He must be ill, for he is absent today. 6) Some people waste food while others havent enough.7) She is fat whereas her husband is thin. 8) She cannot read, neither can she write.（二）复合句11) It is quite obvious that they need more help in English.2) It is good news that she is still alive.3) It doesnt seem likely that she will come here.4) What the chi