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新东方六级作文专项辅导

写作常见错误分析

一、语法错误

（一）句子结构错误

1．主从句叠置

1）Therearemoreandmorestudentsliketousethecomputer.

2）Therearestillmanyproblemsshouldbenotedandresolved.

2．简单句叠置

Ilikechattingonlineverymuch,Igotothenetbaralmosteveryweekend.

3．从句叠置

Asisknowntoallthatcomputersplayanimportantroleinmanyfieldsofourlife.

4．句子成分缺失

Ifworkhard,wewillsurelybesuccessful.

5．语序错误

1）Whycollegestudentsspendmoreandmoretimeonthecomputer?

2）Ioftenwonderwherehavetheygottheirmoney.

（二）动词错误

1．时态错误

ManypeoplethoughtthattheInternetwillbemoreusefulinthefuture.

2．语态错误

1）Ihaveexcitedseveraldaysatthenewsthatyouwillcomehere.

2）Mostofthestudentssatisfywiththeserviceinthedininghall.

3．单复数错误

1）Wisemanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforthem.

2）Someoneareafraidthatcomputermaycontrolmeninthefuture.

4．非谓语动词错误

1）Letmetorepresenteveryonetosay“hello”toyou.

2）Doexerciseinthemorningisgoodforone’shealth.

3）Havingstudiedinourschoolfor3years,thecanteenservicehaschangedalot.

（三）代词错误

1）Wecanusecomputersindoingeverythingyoulike.

2）Acollegestudentshouldbeabletodotheirwashingontheirown.

（四）冠词错误

1）Horseisanusefulanimal.

2）TheexamwillbeheldintheDecember,2004.

（五）词性错误

1）Iwishyoucanconsidermysuggests.

2）Ifapersonwantstosuccess,hemustlearntoenduresufferingsandsetbacks.

二、用词错误

1）Studentsmustknowhowtoapplyacomputer.

2）PeoplecantouchmanynewthingsontheInternet.

3）Thepurposeofthisletteristoreactsomeopinionsontheserviceinthedininghall.

三、表达习惯错误

1）Whygeneratedsolargeachange?

2）Now6000yuancanbuyaP4computer.

3）Aroomoftenlives6-8students.

4）Ithinkthisgreatchangehasthreereasons.

5）Thepricesofthefoodaretooexpensive.

6）Thereasonforthisisbecausesomepeoplewanttoearnplentyofmoneywithoutworkinghard.

四、标点符号及大小写错误

1）However,everycoinhastwosides,Ithinkthesurroundingsinourcanteenarethebestamongalluniversities.

2）Themanwasracingdownthestreet.Becausehewaslatefortheclass.

3）AtlastIwanttoletyouknow,Iloveouruniversityverymuch.

4）Myfavoritesportsareswimming、jogging、mountaineeringandplayingtabletennis.

5）ThebestEnglishfilminmyeyesis《ForrestGump》.

三、六级写作题型分类

（一）对立观点型

MyViewonOpportunity

Thereisnoconsensusofopinioninsocietyaboutopportunities.Therearesomewhothinkthatopportunitiescomeonlyrarely,andonlytoluckypeople.Othersarguethatopportunitiescometoeveryonefromtimetotime.

Personally,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Itseemstomethatvariouskindsofopportunitiesareallaroundusallthetime.Thesecretistorecognizeopportunitiesandtograspthemintime,becausetheywillnotcometoyouoftheirownaccord.Forexample,myclassmatesoncerefusedtoenteranationalchemistrycompetition,becausetheythoughtthattheyhadnochanceofwinning.ButItookthisopportunity,andbypreparingwellImanagedtowinthefirstprize.

Nowmymottois:

Watchoutforopportunities,andatalltimesprepareyourselftotakeadvantageofthem.

（二）解决问题型

HowtoSolvetheProblemofHeavyTraffic

Nowadays,China’scitiesaregettingincreasinglycrowded.Therapidincreaseinpopulationisbeingmadeworsebythesteadyinfluxofpeoplefromtheruralareasseekingemployment.Asaresult,heavytrafficisabigheadache,withalltheroadspackedwithcars,bicyclesandpedestrians.

Inmyopinion,therearetwowaystosolvetheproblem.Oneistobuildmoreandwiderroadstomakethepublichighwayslesscrowdedandspeeduptheflowoftraffic.Theotheristoexpandthenumberofpublicbusroutes,sothatmorepeoplecanbetransportedandfewerpeoplewillhavetotravelbycarorbicycle.

However,eachofthesesolutionsbringsproblemswithit.Theformermayoccupytoomuchlandthatcouldbeusedforfarmsorhouses;thelattermaycauseinconvenienceforlongperiodsinbuslines.Ithinkthebestanswertotheproblemofheavytrafficisacombinationofthetwo:

buildmoreroadsinplaceswherelandislessuseful,andatthesametimeincreasethenumberofpublicbusroutes.

（三）谚语警句型

HasteMakesWaste欲速则不达

Afamoussayinggoes“Hastemakeswaste”,whichmeansthatoneshoulddoeverythingstepbystep.Evensimpleoperationscaneasilybespoiledifwerushtocompletethem,neglectingimportantstagesintheprocess.Oneshouldmakefullpreparationsbeforebeginninganytask.

Takingalookaround,wecanfindexamplestoonumeroustolist.ThebestillustrationmightbeEnglishstudy.Withoutagoodcommandofpronunciation,wecanneverhopetospeakinanunderstandableway.Similarly,ifwedonotlearntospellproperlyandtoacquireabasicgraspofgrammar,wewillneversucceedinwritinggoodcompositions.

（或HereIcanthinkofnobetterillustrationoftheproverbthantheexperienceofmyown.Attheageof11or12,Ibegantolearntoride.Eagertorideaswellasothers,Istartedbysittingonthesaddleattheverybeginning.Predictably,Ioftenfellfromoverthebike.LotsoftimehadbeenwastedbeforeIrealizedthatIshoulddoitstepbystep.Itriedtoslidebystandingononepedal.ThenIbegantoridethebikefromunderthecrossbar.Finally,Isucceeded.）

Inshort,layingasolidfoundationisessentialifwewanttomakeachievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.Ateverystep,reviewwhathasbeenachievedandassesstheproblemsaheadbeforemovingtothenextstep.Andremember,Romewasnotbuiltinaday.

（四）图表图画型

HealthGainsinDevelopingCountries

Itcanbeseenfromthechartthattherehavebeendramaticchangesinlifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityindevelopingcountriesinthepastdecades.Asthechartshows,people’slifeexpectancysoaredfrom40yearsoldto60yearsoldfrom1960to1990.Meanwhile,infantmortalitydeclinedfrom200to150deathsperthousandbirths.

Thechangeinthechartmaybeattributedtoanumberoffactors,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.First,developingcountries’economyhasbeendevelopingataconsiderablyhighspeedinthepastdecades.Therefore,peoplehavemoreextramoneytoimprovetheirhealth.Secondly,theadvancesinmedicalsciencesandboomofmedicalindustryprovidecitizenswithmoreopportunitiestocuretheirdiseases.Lastbutnotleast,peoplehaveattachedgreaterimportancetotheirqualityoflife,thustheyhavespentmoremoneyandtimetobuilduptheirbodies.

Inaword,thischartisaperfectindicatorofdevelopingnations’fastexpandingeconomyandpeople’srisingstandardoflife.Althoughaseriesofproblemshavearisenintheprocess,itisreasonableforustobelievethattheycanbesolvedinthenearfuturewitheffectivemeasurestakenbyboththegovernmentandthepublic.

（五）应用写作型

ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCampus

January12th,2002

DearMr.President,

IamasophomorefromDepartment3andIamwritingtoyouaboutthefoodandserviceinthecanteenoncampus.

Tobefrank,Iamratherdisappointedatthefoodquality,priceandserviceinthecanteen.Firstly,thedishesarescarcelywellcookedandmostofthemtastethesame.Secondly,mostofthedishestherearepricedsohighthatsomestudentscannotevenaffordthem.Thirdly,theserviceinthecanteenisfarfromsatisfyingandtheinsideofthecanteenalwaysseemuntidy.

Tosolvetheproblem,Isuggestthatanothercanteenbebuiltandamechanismofcompetitionbeintroducedbetweentheoldandthenew.Besides,boththecanteensshouldbesubjecttothestudents'supervision.

Diningisaneverydayissueforstudents.Itmayaffecttheiracademicperformance.Therefore,IsincerelyhopethislettercandrawyourattentiontothematterandIhopetheproblemsmentionedabovecanbesolvedassoonaspossible.

Bestregards.

Yourssincerely

LiMing

（六）其他范文

HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?

Itisundeniablethataninterviewplaysacriticalroleinjob-hunting.Throughtheinterview,anemployercanmeettheirfutureemployeesinpersonandknowthemmorethoroughly.Sometimesthewrittenformofexaminationcannotrevealcandidates'realtalentsorproblems.Besides,itisalsobeneficialforcandidatestotakeaninterview.Theywillhaveachancetomaketheiremployersunderstandthembetter.

Anumberoffactorscontributetothesuccessinajobinterview.Personally,Ithinkjob-huntersshouldpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.First,theyshouldbewellpreparedprofessionally.Thatmeanstheyshouldbereadytoansweralltheimportantquestionsconcerningtheirfuturejob.Secondly,theyshouldexpressthemselvesconfidentlyandhonestly.Lastbutnotleast,theyshouldpayenoughattentiontotheirappearances,thatis,theyshouldbeproperlydressed.

AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillgetacademicallyreadyfirst,andthenberelaxedtoanswerallthequestions.Iwillalsodressupandbehaveproperly.IdobelievethatsolongasImakegoodpreparations,Iwillperformwellintheinterview.

七、句型写作练习

（一）并列句

1）Itwasacoldsnowydayandhehadnomoneyleftforfood.

2）Hurryuporyou’llbelate.

3）ItrainedheavilylastnightbutIwenttotheshowanyway.

4）Ienjoyclassicalmusic,sodoesshe.

5）Hemustbeill,forheisabsenttoday.

6）Somepeoplewastefoodwhileothershaven’tenough.

7）Sheisfatwhereasherhusbandisthin.

8）Shecannotread,neithercanshewrite.

（二）复合句

1．

1）ItisquiteobviousthattheyneedmorehelpinEnglish.

2）Itisgoodnewsthatsheisstillalive.

3）Itdoesn’tseemlikelythatshewillcomehere.

4）Whatthechi