作文范文之强调实践重要性的大学英文作文.docx

1、作文范文之强调实践重要性的大学英文作文强调实践重要性的大学英文作文【篇一：大学英语作文the differences between college study and high school study】 the differences between college study and high school study when i m a high school student, im longing for the college life very much. from my point of view, the college study is free and easy . n

2、ow i have been staying in the university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isnt true. it is very different between college study and high school study . at high school, the students subjects are same. but at college, the students can have subjects they like. in high school

3、, your teacher often spent time going over the assigned reading and the assigned problems in class or going over important points again and again. in college, learning does not take place primarily in the classroom, and you, not your professors, are responsible for what you learn. in high school, th

4、e teacher planned most of this time for you. in college it is you who must be responsible for this time. managing this shift in responsibility is one of the most important things you can do to increase your likelihood of success. knowing the differences in the way learning is structured at college c

5、an help you be successful. the key is to understand how important your time is and to use it well. here are some tips for using your learning time effectively: plan a balanced schedule of activities including school, work, sleep and fun. take good class notes and study your notes as soon after class

6、 as possible. if this is not possible reserve some time the days of your classes to review the material. remember academics are your primary responsibility. college is different than high school, but you can be successful and still have fun. get yourself a good planner, do your scheduling, and have

7、a great year! when i m a high school student, im longing for the college life very much. 推荐词汇 very在写作中使用的太多，可考虑换为extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。improperly implemented, dials can be extremely difficult to manipulate. 如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。 between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement

8、 became exceedingly militant. 一八九年到一九三年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。 the surface of mars is remarkably diverse. 火星的表面参差不齐。 he was so informed and intensely forceful. 他是那么见多识广，极了不起。 ? ? 语法检查 a high (wrong article) 学习提示 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。 from my point of view, the

9、 college study is free and easy . now i have been staying in the university for one and a half year which shows that my previous thought isnt true. ? ? ? 点评 建议将one and a half year改为one and a half years,这是习惯用法。 语法检查 a half (wrong article) 学习提示 易混词汇: previous, foregoing, preceding, prior, former 均可表示“

10、在前的”之意。 ? 错误搭配 half year冠词缺失，建议改为half a year it is very different between college study and high school study . ? 学习提示 易混词汇: different, various, diverse 均含“不同的”之意。 at high school, the students subjects are same.? ? 推荐词汇 same 在写作中使用的太泛，可考虑换为identical ?等。 学习提示 易混词汇: issue, subject, theme, topic 均有“主题，

11、话题”之意。 but at college, the students can have subjects they like.in high school, your teacher often spent time going over the assigned reading and the assigned problems in class or going over important points again and again. ? 高分词汇 important可以考虑替换为 高分词汇 crucial 或 essential crucial: extremely importa

12、nt/critical: it is crucial that the report should be on time essential: (something) very important/indispensable: it is essential that you should take out a proper insurance. it is essential for the applicant to wear a dark suit. ? ? 中式英语 assigned.problem 在英语本族语中很少使用，建议检查 搭配统计动名搭配 spend.time 在教材中出现过

13、 次 ? ? 语法检查 请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确 学习提示 易混词汇: problem, question, issue, matter 均含“问题”之意。in college, learning does not take place primarily in the classroom, and you, not your professors, are responsible for what you learn. ? 学习提示 易混词汇: know, learn, comprehend, understand 都含“懂，知道，明了”之意。 in high school, the

14、 teacher planned most of this time for you.? 语法检查 请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确 in college it is you who must be responsible for this time. managing this shift in responsibility is one of the most important things you can do to increase your likelihood of success. ? ? ? 高分词汇 increase在做“增加”讲时，是普通词汇，建议替换soar 点评 表达

15、不规范，建议将things改为thing。 搭配统计 动名搭配 manage.shift 在教材中出现过 次 ? 学习提示 易混词汇: control, direct, govern, manage, rule, supervise, administer 均有“管理，支配”之意。 knowing the differences in the way learning is structured at college can help you be successful. ? 推荐词汇 successful在做“胜利的，成功的”讲时，是普通词汇，建议替换为triumphant they tri

16、ed to stir the peoples of the world into triumphant action. 他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。 they tried to stir the peoples of the world into triumphant action. 他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。 they tried to stir the peoples of the world into triumphant action. 他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。? 学习提示 易混词汇: difference, distinction, discrepancy, dis

17、crimination 都有“差别，区别”之意。the key is to understand how important your time is and to use it well. ? 学习提示 易混词汇: know, learn, comprehend, understand 都含“懂，知道，明了”之意。here are some tips for using your learning time effectively: plan a balanced schedule of activities including school, work,sleep and fun. ? 学

18、习提示 易混词汇: contain, include, embrace, involve, comprehend, hold, comprise 均含有“包括，包含”之意。take good class notes and study your notes as soon after class as possible. ? 推荐词汇 good在写作中使用的太泛，可考虑换为positive/rosy/promising或pleasurable等。 every time you press a key, you hear a faint but positive sound. 每次你按下键盘，你

19、都可以听到微弱，但是正面的声音。 he was rosy and decidedly well fed.【篇二：2013-2012年大学英语四级写作答案】 2013年12月大学英语四级写作 【作文(一)】 the impact of the internet on the way people communicate internet does exert such a profound effect on our life that it revolutionizes the way of peoples living and thinking. as is subtly revealed

20、in the portrayal，there are parents sitting in the front of computer，who are chatting with their child on the internet. what a meaningful picture! 互联网也产生了深刻影响我们的生活，它变革了人们的生活方式和思维方式。正如在描绘中所揭示的那样，有父母坐在前面上网的人和他们的孩子聊天。一幅有意义的画！ from my perspective, the electronic contact cannot replace face to face commun

21、ication owing to the following factors. to begin with, over-reliance on electronic contact will damage the interpersonal relationship, for the cold machine never replaces a warm-hearted greeting face to face. for example, the aged parents would like their only son who works far away home to come bac

22、k home more often rather than to talk with him on the internet occasionally. whats more, face to face communication is preferable because it is beneficial to build a harmonious society, for it attaches more importance on human affection and feelings instead of convenience and speed. 从我的角度看，由于以下因素的影响

23、，电子接触不能代替面对面的交流。首先，过度依赖于电子接触会损害人际关系的研究的关系，为冰冷的机器无法代替一个热心的面对面问候。例如，年迈的父母会喜欢他们离家出走的独生子回家，而不是和他在网上偶尔地聊天。更重要的是，面对面交流是可取的，因为它有利于构建一个和谐社会，因为它更重视人类的感情和感觉，而不是方便和速度。 hence, it is necessary for us to use internet in a reasonable way. after all, internet is invented to connect you and me, and to bring convenie

24、nces to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach. if we want to keep our interpersonal relationship more effectively, we should spend more time with them face to face in real life. only in this way can we not only make full use of the communication tool on the net but also make

25、 our relationship tighter. 因此，我们有必要以合理的方式使用互联网。毕竟，互联网是发明来连接你和我，并为我们的生活带来方便，而不是设置一个障碍让人们遥不可及。如果我们想让我们的人际关系更有效，我们就应该在现实生活中花更多的时间去面对现实生活中的人际关系。只有这样，我们才能充分利用网络上的交流工具，也使我们的关系更紧密。 【作文(二)】 people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using sticks in order to see. 人们正穿过马路，看着他们的手机，用棍棒看路。 t

26、he impact of the mobile phone in peoples life the thought-provoking drawing mirrors a common phenomenon in contemporary society that there is the negative influence of mobile phone. as is subtly shown in the picture，so many people are too much addicted to cell phones that they use walking sticks to

27、see the road. what a meaningful cartoon! 引人深思的绘画反映了当今社会普遍存在的现象，即手机的负面影响。正如图中所示的那样，这么多的人太沉溺于手机，以至于他们用手杖去看路。多么有意义的卡通！ it is to me that indulging in mobile phones produces native influences on body and mind. first and foremost, overusing mobile phones is detrimental to physical health for watching mobi

28、les for a long stretch definitely impairs ones eyesight. suppose that a man is addicted in cell phones inwhatever situation, it will be very disadvantageous for him to concentrate on his work, learning, or daily life and is very likely to hurt him. furthermore, overusing cell phones adversely affect

29、s state of mind. an addict may stay inside his bubble instead of pursuing other endeavors, which eventually prevents the growth of think skills. 这是对我来说，沉迷于手机产生对身体和思想的原生影响。首先，过度使用手机是有害于身体健康的，长时间的看手机一定会损害你的视力。假定一个人在任何情况下都会沉迷于手机，对他来说，把精力集中在工作上、学习上、日常生活中是很不利的，很可能会伤害他。此外，过度使用手机影响精神状态。一个吸毒者可能留在他的泡沫里，而不是追求

30、其他的努力，从而最终阻碍了思维技能的增长。 it is high time that we took effective measures to curb this trend. i cherish a belief that cell phones themselves are good or bad and we can benefit a lot from it as long as we take a good control over them. 该是我们采取有效措施来遏制这一趋势的时候了。我坚信手机本身的好或坏，我们可以从我们只要好好控制受益很多我对他们。 【作文(三)】 漫画对白

31、：once i learn how to use google, isnt that all the education i really need? 一旦我学会如何使用谷歌，是不是所有的教育我真的需要？ the impact of the internet on learning as is vividly shown above, a teacher and a pupil stand in front of a blackboard, talking about the relation of internet and education. the pupil, holding a sm

32、art-phone in his hand, questions whether he needs any other education or not, with the mastery of google. 如上图所示，老师和学生站在黑板前面，谈论网络与教育的关系。那学生手上拿着一个智能手机，他是否需要其他教育的问题，随着谷歌的掌握。 while the internet has greatly impacted how to learn, education doesnt simply means learning to acquire information because of the following two factors. on one hand, education is very inclusive, so leaning to obtain message is usually a part of it. if we overemphas