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作文范文之强调实践重要性的大学英文作文
强调实践重要性的大学英文作文
【篇一:
大学英语作文thedifferencesbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy】
thedifferencesbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy
wheni’mahighschoolstudent,i’mlongingforthecollegelifeverymuch.frommypointofview,thecollegestudyisfreeandeasy.nowihavebeenstayingintheuniversityforoneandahalfyearwhichshowsthatmypreviousthoughtisn’ttrue.itisverydifferentbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy.
athighschool,thestudents’subjectsaresame.butatcollege,thestudentscanhavesubjectstheylike.inhighschool,yourteacheroftenspenttimegoingovertheassignedreadingandtheassignedproblemsinclassorgoingoverimportantpointsagainandagain.incollege,learningdoesnottakeplaceprimarilyintheclassroom,andyou,notyourprofessors,areresponsibleforwhatyoulearn.inhighschool,theteacherplannedmostofthistimeforyou.incollegeitisyouwhomustberesponsibleforthistime.managingthisshiftinresponsibilityisoneofthemostimportantthingsyoucandotoincreaseyourlikelihoodofsuccess.
knowingthedifferencesinthewaylearningisstructuredatcollegecanhelpyoubesuccessful.thekeyistounderstandhowimportantyourtimeisandtouseitwell.herearesometipsforusingyourlearningtimeeffectively:
planabalancedscheduleofactivitiesincludingschool,work,sleepandfun.
takegoodclassnotesandstudyyournotesassoonafterclassaspossible.ifthisisnotpossiblereservesometimethedaysofyourclassestoreviewthematerial.rememberacademicsareyourprimaryresponsibility.
collegeisdifferentthanhighschool,butyoucanbesuccessfulandstillhavefun.getyourselfagoodplanner,doyourscheduling,andhaveagreatyear!
whenimahighschoolstudent,imlongingforthecollegelifeverymuch.
[推荐词汇]very在写作中使用的太多,可考虑换为extremely,exceedingly,remarkably,intensely。
improperlyimplemented,dialscanbeextremelydifficulttomanipulate.
如果设计不当,刻度盘将会非常难于操作。
between1890and1930thewomansuffragemovementbecameexceedinglymilitant.一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。
thesurfaceofmarsisremarkablydiverse.
火星的表面参差不齐。
hewassoinformedandintenselyforceful.
他是那么见多识广,极了不起。
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[语法检查]ahigh(wrongarticle)[学习提示]易混词汇:
college,university,institute,school,academy均含有“学院,大学
”之意。
frommypointofview,thecollegestudyisfreeandeasy.
nowihavebeenstayingintheuniversityforoneandahalfyearwhichshowsthatmypreviousthoughtisnttrue.
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[点评]建议将oneandahalfyear改为oneandahalfyears,这是习惯用法。
[语法检查]ahalf(wrongarticle)[学习提示]易混词汇:
previous,foregoing,preceding,prior,former均可表示“在前的”之意。
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[错误搭配]halfyear冠词缺失,建议改为halfayear
itisverydifferentbetweencollegestudyandhighschoolstudy.
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
different,various,diverse均含“不同的”之意。
athighschool,thestudentssubjectsaresame.
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[推荐词汇]same在写作中使用的太泛,可考虑换为identical?
等。
[学习提示]易混词汇:
issue,subject,theme,topic均有“主题,话题”之意。
butatcollege,thestudentscanhavesubjectstheylike.
inhighschool,yourteacheroftenspenttimegoingovertheassignedreadingandtheassignedproblemsinclassorgoingoverimportantpointsagainandagain.
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[高分词汇]important可以考虑替换为高分词汇crucial或essential
crucial:
extremelyimportant/critical:
itiscrucialthatthereportshouldbeontime
essential:
(something)veryimportant/indispensable:
itisessentialthatyoushouldtakeoutaproperinsurance.
itisessentialfortheapplicanttowearadarksuit.?
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[中式英语]assigned...problem在英语本族语中很少使用,建议检查[搭配统计]
动名搭配spend...time在教材中出现过次?
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[语法检查]请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确[学习提示]易混词汇:
problem,question,issue,matter均含“问题”
之意。
incollege,learningdoesnottakeplaceprimarilyintheclassroom,andyou,notyourprofessors,areresponsibleforwhatyoulearn.
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
know,learn,comprehend,understand都含“懂,知道,明了”之意。
inhighschool,theteacherplannedmostofthistimeforyou.
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[语法检查]请根据上下文确认本句时态是否正确
incollegeitisyouwhomustberesponsibleforthistime.
managingthisshiftinresponsibilityisoneofthemostimportantthingsyoucandotoincreaseyourlikelihoodofsuccess.?
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[高分词汇]increase在做“增加”讲时,是普通词汇,建议替换soar[点评]表达不规范,建议将things改为thing
。
[搭配统计]动名搭配manage...shift在教材中出现过次
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
control,direct,govern,manage,rule,supervise,administer均有“管理,支配”之意。
knowingthedifferencesinthewaylearningisstructuredatcollegecanhelpyoubesuccessful.
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[推荐词汇]successful在做“胜利的,成功的”讲时,是普通词汇,建议替换为triumphant
theytriedtostirthepeoplesoftheworldintotriumphantaction.他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。
theytriedtostirthepeoplesoftheworldintotriumphantaction.他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。
theytriedtostirthe
peoplesoftheworldintotriumphantaction.
他们试图激励人民大众的无限热情。
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
difference,distinction,discrepancy,discrimination都有“差别,区别”之意。
thekeyistounderstandhowimportantyourtimeisandtouseitwell.
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
know,learn,comprehend,understand都含“懂,知道,明了”
之意。
herearesometipsforusingyourlearningtimeeffectively:
planabalancedscheduleofactivitiesincludingschool,work,
sleepandfun.
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[学习提示]易混词汇:
contain,include,embrace,involve,comprehend,hold,comprise均含有“包括,包含”之意。
takegoodclassnotesandstudyyournotesassoonafterclassaspossible.
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[推荐词汇]good在写作中使用的太泛,可考虑换为positive/rosy/promising或pleasurable等。
everytimeyoupressakey,youhearafaintbutpositivesound.
每次你按下键盘,你都可以听到微弱,但是正面的声音。
hewasrosyanddecidedlywellfed.
【篇二:
2013-2012年大学英语四级写作答案】
2013年12月大学英语四级写作
【作文
(一)】
theimpactoftheinternetonthewaypeoplecommunicate
internetdoesexertsuchaprofoundeffectonourlifethatitrevolutionizesthewayofpeople’slivingandthinking.asissubtlyrevealedintheportrayal,thereareparentssittinginthefrontofcomputer,whoarechattingwiththeirchildontheinternet.whatameaningfulpicture!
互联网也产生了深刻影响我们的生活,它变革了人们的生活方式和思维方式。
正如在描绘中所揭示的那样,有父母坐在前面上网的人和他们的孩子聊天。
一幅有意义的画!
frommyperspective,theelectroniccontactcannotreplacefacetofacecommunicationowingtothefollowingfactors.tobeginwith,over-relianceonelectroniccontactwilldamagetheinterpersonalrelationship,forthecoldmachineneverreplacesawarm-heartedgreetingfacetoface.forexample,theagedparentswouldliketheironlysonwhoworksfarawayhometocomebackhomemoreoftenratherthantotalkwithhimontheinternetoccasionally.what’smore,facetofacecommunicationispreferablebecauseitisbeneficialtobuildaharmonioussociety,foritattachesmoreimportanceonhumanaffectionandfeelingsinsteadofconvenienceandspeed.从我的角度看,由于以下因素的影响,电子接触不能代替面对面的交流。
首先,过度依赖于电子接触会损害人际关系的研究的关系,为冰冷的机器无法代替一个热心的面对面问候。
例如,年迈的父母会喜欢他们离家出走的独生子回家,而不是和他在网上偶尔地聊天。
更重要的是,面对面交流是可取的,因为它有利于构建一个和谐社会,因为它更重视人类的感情和感觉,而不是方便和速度。
hence,itisnecessaryforustouseinternetinareasonableway.afterall,internetisinventedtoconnectyouandme,andtobringconveniencestoourliferatherthansetabarriertokeeppeoplebeyondreach.ifwewanttokeepourinterpersonalrelationshipmoreeffectively,weshouldspendmoretimewiththemfacetofaceinreallife.onlyinthiswaycanwenotonlymakefulluseofthecommunicationtoolonthenetbutalsomakeourrelationshiptighter.
因此,我们有必要以合理的方式使用互联网。
毕竟,互联网是发明来连接你和我,并为我们的生活带来方便,而不是设置一个障碍让人们遥不可及。
如果我们想让我们的人际关系更有效,我们就应该在现实生活中花更多的时间去面对现实生活中的人际关系。
只有这样,我们才能充分利用网络上的交流工具,也使我们的关系更紧密。
【作文
(二)】
peoplearecrossingthestreetlookingattheircellphonesandusingsticksinordertosee.人们正穿过马路,看着他们的手机,用棍棒看路。
theimpactofthemobilephoneinpeople’slife
thethought-provokingdrawingmirrorsacommonphenomenonincontemporarysocietythatthereisthenegativeinfluenceofmobilephone.asissubtlyshowninthepicture,somanypeoplearetoomuchaddictedtocellphonesthattheyusewalkingstickstoseetheroad.whatameaningfulcartoon!
引人深思的绘画反映了当今社会普遍存在的现象,即手机的负面影响。
正如图中所示的那样,这么多的人太沉溺于手机,以至于他们用手杖去看路。
多么有意义的卡通!
itistomethatindulginginmobilephonesproducesnativeinfluencesonbodyandmind.firstandforemost,overusingmobilephonesisdetrimentaltophysicalhealthforwatchingmobilesforalongstretchdefinitelyimpairsone’seyesight.supposethatamanisaddictedincellphonesin
whateversituation,itwillbeverydisadvantageousforhimtoconcentrateonhiswork,learning,ordailylifeandisverylikelytohurthim.furthermore,overusingcellphonesadverselyaffectsstateofmind.anaddictmaystayinsidehisbubbleinsteadofpursuingotherendeavors,whicheventuallypreventsthegrowthofthinkskills.
这是对我来说,沉迷于手机产生对身体和思想的原生影响。
首先,过度使用手机是有害于身体健康的,长时间的看手机一定会损害你的视力。
假定一个人在任何情况下都会沉迷于手机,对他来说,把精力集中在工作上、学习上、日常生活中是很不利的,很可能会伤害他。
此外,过度使用手机影响精神状态。
一个吸毒者可能留在他的泡沫里,而不是追求其他的努力,从而最终阻碍了思维技能的增长。
itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestocurbthistrend.icherishabeliefthatcellphonesthemselvesaregoodorbadandwecanbenefitalotfromitaslongaswetakeagoodcontroloverthem.
该是我们采取有效措施来遏制这一趋势的时候了。
我坚信手机本身的好或坏,我们可以从我们只要好好控制受益很多我对他们。
【作文(三)】
漫画对白:
onceilearnhowtousegoogle,isntthatalltheeducationireallyneed?
一旦我学会如何使用谷歌,是不是所有的教育我真的需要?
theimpactoftheinternetonlearning
asisvividlyshownabove,ateacherandapupilstandinfrontofablackboard,talkingabouttherelationofinternetandeducation.thepupil,holdingasmart-phoneinhishand,questionswhetherheneedsanyothereducationornot,withthemasteryofgoogle.
如上图所示,老师和学生站在黑板前面,谈论网络与教育的关系。
那学生手上拿着一个智能手机,他是否需要其他教育的问题,随着谷歌的掌握。
whiletheinternethasgreatlyimpactedhowtolearn,educationdoesn’tsimplymeanslearningtoacquireinformationbecauseofthefollowingtwofactors.ononehand,educationisveryinclusive,soleaningtoobtainmessageisusuallyapartofit.ifweoveremphas