《BEC中级写作评分标准》.docx

1、BEC中级写作评分标准BEC中级写作评分标准:（语言、语法、组织和文体）第一部分第二部分分数 分数全部完成答题要求所有内容点都已包括在内并在答题要求允许的情况下加以发挥语言规范、自然；错误最少，均18 或 20属小错。 9或10分分多样化的语言结构和丰富的词汇H。组织效果好，注意前后呼应。语域和格式完全适当。给读者的印象极佳。较好的完成答题要求所有内容点都处理得不错。 14或167或8分大体准确；运用复杂语言时有错 分误。结构合理，用词准确。大体上组织较好，注意逻辑关系。语域和格式总体来说适当。给读者的印象良好。3 尚能达到答题要求所有的主要内容点已包括进去，遗漏了 一些次要的内容。出现一些错

2、误，但不妨碍交流。10 或 12结构和词汇掌握范围适度。 5或6分分组织和安排总的来说令人满意。语域和格式尚可，虽然并不完全成功。给读者的印象较好。2 不能完全达到答题要求遗漏了一些主要的内容点或者处理得不充分，可能有些不切题。3或4分 6或8分有时错误影响清楚交流，错误较多，使读者感到迷惑。结构、词汇掌握范围有限。内容条理不清、不连贯， 造成理解困难。语域和格式不适当。给读者的印象不佳。1未能达到答题要求显著的内容遗漏/或大虽内容不 相关，可能由于对题目要求的误 解。严重不规范，经常出现基本错1或2分 2或4分误。题目要求的结构和词汇几乎没有提到。缺乏组织，造成交流失败。几乎没有使用适当的语

3、域和格式。给读者的印象极差。0 什么要求也没达到。字数少于所需 字数的25% ,或是完全不能辨认或 是完全不切题。评分五个方面：1 content2language3structure & vocabulary4organisation展开论述上面的5个方面1内容的完整性2语言6C原则1 .准确(correctness)包括四层意义，即阅读人能理解、接受的英语水平；使 用精确措词，传达准确信息；正确地使用语法和标点符号； 拼写正确。(1)恰当的语言风格请比较下面两组例词:FormalInformalapproximatelyAboutinquireAskascertainfind outobt

4、ainreceiveassisthelpparticipateshareconstructbuildpurchasebuycontributegivesufficientenoughdifficulthardutilizeuse(2)准确的措词和信息下面列出的是一系列极易混淆的单词及词组，请注意区分：a lot / allotall right / alrightcannot / can notdifferent from / different than.due to / because ofeffect / affectfewer / lesslie / layprincipal / pr

5、inciplethat /whichtheir / them / they rewait for / wait onwho / whom(3 )正确的语法和标点符号(4)正确的拼写2 .清楚(Clarity)(1)逻辑布局 (Logical Organization)常用的逻辑布局方法包括：1因果关系(Cause & Effect)2时间顺序(Chronological Development)3序列顺序(Sequential Development)4比较(Comparison)5一般到特殊(From General to Specific)6特殊到一般(From Specific to G

6、eneral)(2)合理构架句群与段落 (Well-Written Sentences & Paragraphs)例句：修改前：Marshall Corporation was founded forty years ago, and it now has branch offices in four states, and it employs nearly 400 individuals.修改后:Marshall Corporation was founded fortyyears ago. With branch offices in four states, it now employ

7、s nearly 400 individuals.(3)统一性与一致性(Unity and Coherence)强调(Emphasis)1位置2重复3数虽4技巧(5)将句中关系紧密的词尽虽靠近。比较下面三对句子：A.They bought a bicycle in Beijing in a small shop which costs $ 25.00.They bought a bicycle for $25.00 in a small shop in Beijing.B.He was warned not to drink water even in a restaurant which h

8、ad not been boiled.He was warned not to drink water which had not been boiled.C.Those who work rapidly get ill in theseconditions.Those who work in these conditions rapidly get ill.(6)避免在同一个句子中使用意义不同的同一个字。We shall take a firm line with the firm .We shall take a strong line with the film .3.简洁(Concis

9、eness)A.We have begun to export our machine to countries abroad.We have begun to export our machines.B.In the event that you speak to Mr. Wood in regard to production, ask him to give consideration tothe delivery schedule.If you speak to Mr. Wood about production, ask him to consider the delivery sc

10、hedule.C .We require furniture which is of the new type.We require new-type furniture.使用简洁的语言(Use simple language)避免使用尽H使用please will you be good enough toprefer express a preference forbecause for the reason that(2)少用陈词滥调(Omit trite expressions)as the case may beit has come to my attentionat an ear

11、ly ageavail yourself of this opportunityprevious tocrack of dawnpursuant to your requesttake the liberty todue to the fact thatthanking you in advanceenclosed hereinthis is to inform youunder separate coverwith kindest regardsI wish to state避免冗长的表达方式和不必要的重复(avoid wordyexpressions & unnecessary repet

12、ition) 。Wordy1.We would like to2.For the month of AugustAugust3.Pursuant to the end of this week4.A long period of time5.At this time6.Is at this time7.The weight was higher than weight was greater than8.I expected it to be9.During the year of 199510.For the development of developing11.In the city o

13、f Dallas12.Concisepleasefornowa long time now istheexpectedduring 1995forin DallasThe problem was that the car would not the car would not startstart13.Square in shape14.squareyouin accordance with your requestrequested15.Sign on the front of this form this form16.signwhiledo,(4)删改无关紧要的成份 (Remove un

14、needed facts)A. It should be noted that this is the best we canB. For your information we enclose a catalogue.C. Please be advised that we have received yourinvoice.by July 10as you indicatedalwaysDuring the time that17.now5.continue to utilize the old form untilstart using the new form on Februarys

15、uch time as the new form is available6.despite the fact that despite7.for the month of April forApril8.for obvious reason that because9.I would ask that you please10.in conjunction with with11.in the mere recent pastrecently12.in the unlikely event that if13.in the unlikely event that I am unable to

16、 if I am late, please delay the meetingbe on time, please delay the meeting14.in view of the fact thatbecause15.it will be greatly appreciated if you please16.our production of the new product willproduction will begin on July 1commence on July 117.please be advised that we expect you to please revi

17、ew the contractreview the enclosed contract(5)多使用主动语态的句子结构以明确表达意思。Payment of their accounts will be made by Johnsons next weekJohnsons will pay their accounts next week4.具体(Concreteness)尽可能地提供明确、具体的信息。A.These brakes can stop a car within a short distance.These Goodson power brakes can stop a 2-ton c

18、ar within 24 feet.B.We hope the equipment will be delivered to our company as soon as possible.Please deliver the equipment to our companybefore next Friday.C.She is a fast typist.She types at the fast rate of 85 words per minute.(2)使用具体词汇A.We have no hesitation in advising you We advise yo u B.The

19、preparation of new price scale is in hand.New price scales are being prepared this week.C.Due to the unusual nature of the request,As the request is unusual, a great deal of time, bad, large, good, small, around, old, convenient, young, little, majority, minority, most, less5.完整(Completeness)自查：谁(Wh

20、o)? 什么(What)? 什么时候(When)? 在哪 里(Where)? 为什么(Why)? 怎么样(How)?6.礼貌(Courtesy)例如：Dear Mrs. Walters,Because you delayed so long in your response, Model GSF is off stock. If you are interested, we have some similar models on handYours truly, 修改：Dear Mrs. WaltersIf I had known your needs before May 20, I cou

21、ld have shipped Model GSP immediately. However, the spring sale drained our stock.The Model GSK, a similar instrument, is in stock, and you could have it at the same price as the GSF. It normally sells for $10,000 more. we will ship it as soon as you give us the word.Yours sincerely(1)使用礼貌友好的词汇A.说 “

22、 Thank you, 例如：Thank you for your letter of yesterday.Thank you for your prompt reply.Thank you for helping us in this respect.Thank you for your information.(2)体谅对方的写作态度(You-Attitude)Writer emphasis: Weare shipping your order onFriday.Reader emphasis: Youwill receive your order byMonday, October 10

23、.Writer emphasis: Toreduce our costs, we arechanging the billing system.Reader emphasis: To provide you with clear records, we are changing our billing system.Writer emphasis: I was pleased to hear that theproject was completed.Reader emphasis: Congratulations on successfullycompleting the projectWr

24、iter emphasis: We regret that you closed youraccount with us a week ago. We believe that people may come back to our bank again sooner or later since we have a good credit among our customers.Reader emphasis: A week ago you closed your account with us. Whatever thereason, we are pleased to have play

25、ed some small part in yourprogram. You are cordially invitedto use our other services asoccasion may require.(3)措辞得体(Appropriate Wording) a.避免采用消极性的词汇或句式 Negative Wording: The office is closed after fourOclock, Positive Wording: The office is open until fourOclock.Negative Wording: When I received y

26、our complaint,I checked our records.Positive Wording: When I received your letter, I checked our records.Negative Wording: Because you failed to connectthe cable, the picture was blurred.Positive Wording: The picture was blurredbecause the V-2 cable was not connected to the terminal.Negative Wording

27、: You did not read my recentletter.Positive Wording: Please refer to my June 10thletter.Negative Wording: receive notification.Positive Wording:Negative Wording:Positive Wording:The Executive Board did notSeveral members of the Executive Board inquired about the time of our December meeting. Will yo

28、u please send them a follow-up?Your letter was not clear.I would appreciate an outline ofour marketing differences that you mentioned in your October14th letter.b.有失礼貌的言词We deny your claimWe do not believeWe are not sureWe find it difficult to understandcontrivanceWe expectWe insistWe are forcedWe t

29、ake issueYou forgotYou neglectedYou failed toYou misunderstoodYou mustYou should knowYou do not haveYou are delinquentYou insist thatcomplaintconfusioncontrarydelinquentdenydisagreeableexasperatefailureignoranceimpatienceincompetentincredibleinexcusableinferenceinsincereinsinuateinsultingYou did not

30、 sayYour credit refusalirresponsibleYour recent complaintirritatedYour failure tolackYour misunderstandingneglectYour neglectful attitudeobjectionYour disregard forobnoxiousYour insinuationoffensiveYour lack of communicationunbelievableintolerableYour ignoringYour delinquent accountuncooperative(4)避免使用有性别歧视之嫌的词语A.用“ person ”代替第三人称单数例如：Instead of： Please share thisreport with yoursupervisor. He will find it interesting.Say: Please share t