oo浙江高考英语读后续写考前总复习.docx

1、oo浙江高考英语读后续写考前总复习6.1高考英语复习任务: 续写范文赏析:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation. Embarrassed, Jenny didnt say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walkers voice. “Why is Lees watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody abo

2、ut the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. 70 wordsAt that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jennys speech fi

3、rst. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? Weve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of a

4、pplause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But its just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. 80 words好句式学习：1.Embarrassed, Jenny didnt say anything.形容词作状语，精简高级。后文还有：Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth.2.Dead silence

5、 suddenly fell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。形容词dead修饰微妙，恰到好处。包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语：Words began to flood out of her.Whispers went around the classroom, and even.Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.3.Then came Miss Walkers voice.完全倒装，高级句式。类似的还有：Then 的完全倒装：The chairman came t

6、hen=Then came the chairman.Computer was used in teaching then =Then computer was used in teaching.4.衔接词however的使用，让上下文语义衔接自然。5.复合形容词well-prepared的使用。6.分词作状语的使用：However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind.7.高级词汇和语块的使用：made a request in a tone of begging

7、，made her way to，with every confidence，nodded with approval，erupted等。8.Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.9.读后续写细节描写到位，几种“说”的表达各不相同。关于读后续写，除了灵活使用各种高级句式，还要注意语言组织的简练。另外，细节描写的积累也很重要。场景描写句子的使用,如鼓掌。下面介绍几种鼓掌的精彩句子：1.A thunderous applaus

8、e burst out.2.People broke into a storm of applause.3.Mr. Smith made a main speech and received nearly 30 rounds of warm applause.4. The announcement of the election won a burst of long and warm applause.5. They are winning waves of applause.6.Cheers and applause took over the whole room7.The expert

9、s really deserve a big round of applause for their efforts to constantly make progress in the AI field.8.Everyone started to clapped their hands. Suzy Khan gave them a shy smile and the applause was deafening.9.A polite ripple of applause accompanied the chairwoman as she approached the stage.读后续写细节

10、描写素材积累一：身体动作描写手的动词：Stunned, I stood up and gave her an awkward hug / hugged her in an awkward way.Speechless, she smiled radiantly and gathered her son into her arms.The nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow blouse wildly .The man took the sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four coins

11、in Reubens hand.Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.He parkeddown the street from Bobbys house, and rushed tohis front door, tremblingwith excitement.The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and placed the parcel in Reubens hands.Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning to blur her

12、 vision.Seeingno other people noticeus, I placedthe Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.She didnt say a word, but smiled a watery smile and held my hand tightly.As we shook hands with the new owners, I told them how fortunate they were.He patted my head, and inquired: “Is there anything

13、particular you want?”He was squeezing my wrist so hard that it ached.She stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of course there is a Santa Clause.”She handed the napkin to me, and three $20 bills fell onto my desk when I opened it.Stevie looked at me, and then at his mother, then pulled out

14、 one of the napkins.“Im Nancy Drew,” she said, holding out her hand.The classclappedwarmly as Mr. Lee presented me with the reward.He reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.Calmly he picked up the brush and started aga

15、in to whitewash.脚的动词：Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（动作） t

16、he factory.Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, moti

17、onless.Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.The elderly ma

18、n fled away with great panic.The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.眼的动词：We all gather in front of the television, praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face.Seeingno other people noticeus, I placedthe Christmas present down and pounded his doorbell.He

19、r eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birthday party.Singing happily, she gazed at her surroundings with large, innocent eyes.The woman was staring eagerly at the girl, trying to make a conversation.I watched helplessly, as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.Then I c

20、rept downstairs and examined the tags attached to each of the packages.When he finished he raised/liftedhis eyes and looked out the window.She hadspotteda man pacing down the hall.When the students stepped off the bus, Jamess eyes widened in surprise.We recognized the famous comedian on his arrival.

21、Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with held-back tears.Swallowing hard, I stared into Meghans eyes for a long moment, wondering how I could cope with it.Then he jumped up, eyes twinkling as he ran to fetch some of his prized Matchbox cars.I was taking my time, strolling in the park and lookin

22、g in shop windows.口的动作：Reuben murmured a thank you and ran home all the way.“Here, Mum! Here!”Reuben exclaimed as he ran to her side.A young man came to the police station, surrounded by a group of journalists, declaring that he had spotted the murderer.I was getting ready to blow out all the candle

23、s and shes getting ready to help me in case I ran out of air.“Time to go.” I whispered to the girl, wishing she could follow me right away.My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line.I picked up the ball one last time and grumbled, “Please just come to get the damn ball.”Frann

24、ie quickly told Belle Ringer and the other two drivers about Stevies surgery, and then sighed.The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice.“How can I let you throw away the thing that means the most to you?” I pleaded with him.They let out as

25、urprisinglyloud voice.The smilefrozeon his face; his mouth fell wide open.He interrupted the silence with an announcement: “The deadline to enter for the Competition is tomorrow.”“I havent finished; I need more time,” he begged. “Thats what Michelangelo said.” Mr. Edgarjoked.She greeted James and in

26、quired. “Are you ready for our field trip?” James didnt respond.“What do you think matters for a bird?” Mrs. Damon questioned.身的动作：She felt asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.Suddenly a tall figure dressed in a dark cloak appeared before him.Death spoke with a threatening voice, and disappeared.Dr. Ur

27、ssenbeck suddenly found himself in a large room where thousands of candles were burning.The little girl slowly pushes herself on the swing.They are sitting outside in the cool night on a wooden porch, talking quietly.One of them approached and asked politely if I would throw the ball back to him.Wan

28、ting to appear agreeable, I bent down, picked up the ball and, eyes half-shut, threw it back as hard as I could.Once I was on the bus, I crouched in a seat and shut my eyes.In a flash my friend was in the car and gone, disappearing in a cloud of dust.For a moment I just stood there, paralyzed(呆若木鸡).

29、心理动词：These events constantly remind me of my fathers absence.I immediately picture/imagine him walking through the door, wearing a shining smile.Most days I hope that maybe he will turn up at my doorstep one day.At that very moment, he wondered whether he would be sentenced to death for killing peop

30、le.He was determined to tell people the truth, but no one could hear his voice.So the young man realized the police had arrested the wrong person, and he took the great courage to expose the real criminal.I focused my thoughts on every part of myself.We nodded our heads in agreement, understanding e

31、ach other.Somehow I got the idea it would be fun to waken my father by firing it.I was wondering where he was. I had a new joke to tell him.I was afraid to go to sleep, for fear that I would wake up the way I had been before.Then I tried to figure out what I should do. Follow my friend to the hospit

32、al?There was nothing I could accomplish there, I convinced myself.All I could do at the hospital, I decided, was to get in the way.As I started my car, I realized that my friend had left his truck and keys at the courts.From that one experience I learned that the most important thing in life isnt the money you make.I will cherish the fond memories for the rest of my life.