oo浙江高考英语读后续写考前总复习.docx

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oo浙江高考英语读后续写考前总复习

6.1高考英语复习任务:

续写范文

赏析:

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.“WhyisLee’swatchonyourwrist?

”Jennyhesitatedforawhileanddecidedtotelleverybodyaboutthetruth.However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.“ButMissWalker,couldIgivethespeechfirstandthenexplain?

”Shemadearequestinatoneofbegging.[70words]

Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennymadeherwaytotheplatformwitheveryconfidence.Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.“Howcouldshemakeit?

We’veneverseenJennygivesoterrificaspeech.”Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth,andespeciallythemagicofthewatch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithnomagic”,Leeannounced.[80words]

好句式学习：

1.Embarrassed,Jennydidn’tsayanything.形容词作状语，精简高级。

后文还有：

Relieved,Jennytoldeveryonethetruth.

2.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.无灵主语，有灵谓语动词，高级。

形容词dead修饰微妙，恰到好处。

包括后文多次运用到抽象名词作主语：

Wordsbegantofloodoutofher.

Whisperswentaroundtheclassroom,andeven...

ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.

3.ThencameMissWalker’svoice.完全倒装，高级句式。

类似的还有：

Then的完全倒装：

Thechairmancamethen=>Thencamethechairman.

Computerwasusedinteachingthen=>Thencomputerwasusedinteaching.

4.衔接词however的使用，让上下文语义衔接自然。

5.复合形容词well-prepared的使用。

6.分词作状语的使用：

However,thinkingofthewell-preparedspeech,themagicofthewatch,shechangedhermind.

7.高级词汇和语块的使用：

madearequestinatoneofbegging，madeherwayto，witheveryconfidence，noddedwithapproval，erupted等。

8.Immediately引导的时间状语从句的使用。

ImmediatelyJennyfinishedherspeech,astormofapplauseeruptedfromtheclass.

9.读后续写细节描写到位，几种“说”的表达各不相同。

关于读后续写，除了灵活使用各种高级句式，还要注意语言组织的简练。

另外，细节描写的积累也很重要。

场景描写句子的使用,如鼓掌。

下面介绍几种鼓掌的精彩句子：

1.Athunderousapplauseburstout.

2.Peoplebrokeintoastormofapplause.

3.Mr.Smithmadeamainspeechandreceivednearly30roundsofwarmapplause.

4.Theannouncementoftheelectionwonaburstoflongandwarmapplause.

5.Theyarewinningwavesofapplause.

6.Cheersandapplausetookoverthewholeroom

7.TheexpertsreallydeserveabigroundofapplausefortheireffortstoconstantlymakeprogressintheAIfield.

8.Everyonestartedtoclappedtheirhands.SuzyKhangavethemashysmileandtheapplausewasdeafening.

9.Apoliterippleofapplauseaccompaniedthechairwomanassheapproachedthestage.

读后续写细节描写素材积累一：

身体动作描写

手的动词：

Stunned,Istoodupandgaveheranawkwardhug/huggedherinanawkwardway.

Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms. 

Theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblousewildly.

Themantookthesacks,reachedintohispocketandplacedfourcoinsinReuben'shand.

Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop. 

Heparked downthestreetfromBobby’shouse,andrushedto hisfrontdoor,trembling withexcitement.

ThemangentlywrappedthegiftinbrownpaperandplacedtheparcelinReuben'shands.

Doraliftedthelid,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision. 

Seeing nootherpeoplenotice us,Iplaced theChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.

Shedidn’tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandtightly.

Asweshookhandswiththenewowners,Itoldthemhowfortunatetheywere.

Hepattedmyhead,andinquired:

“Isthereanythingparticularyouwant?

”

Hewassqueezingmywristsohardthatitached.

Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhair,andsaid:

“OfcoursethereisaSantaClause.”

Shehandedthenapkintome,andthree$20billsfellontomydeskwhenIopenedit.

Stevielookedatme,andthenathismother,thenpulledoutoneofthenapkins.

“I'mNancyDrew,”shesaid,holdingoutherhand. 

Theclass clapped warmlyasMr.Leepresentedmewiththereward.

Hereachedintohispocketandwithdrewanote.

Mrs.DamonpointedtothequotationfromAlbertEinsteinhangingonthewall.

Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash.

脚的动词：

ThenLisastoodupandmadeherwaythroughthecrowdtowardme.

Lisaplantedherfeetfirmlyinfrontofme.

Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedpatiently.

Reubenran/rusheddownWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.

TheshadowswerelengtheningwhenReubenarrivedat（动作）thefactory.

Then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop. 

Racinghome,Reubenburstthroughthefrontdoor.

Disappointedandfrustrated,thepoormanmadehiswaybacktohisfamily.

Suddenly,thewomanstoodupandenteredthehouseintears.

Andyet,theyalljuststoodtherestaringatme,motionless.

BelleRingernoddedthoughtfully,andFranniehurriedofftowaitontherestofhertables.

Iledthemtowardalargecornerbooth.Icouldfeeltherestofthestafffollowingbehindaswemarchedthroughthediningroom.

Idraggedmyselfthroughdailychores,feelingexhausted.

Theelderlymanfledawaywithgreatpanic.

Themansteppedback/steppedontotheplatformtotakeagoodlookatthepaintings. 

眼的动词：

Weallgatherinfrontofthetelevision,prayingtocatchaglance/glimpseofhisface.

Seeing nootherpeoplenotice us,Iplaced theChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.

Hereyesfellonthephotosofherandmeatmyfourthbirthdayparty.

Singinghappily,shegazedathersurroundingswithlarge,innocenteyes.

Thewomanwasstaringeagerlyatthegirl,tryingtomakeaconversation.

Iwatchedhelplessly,asthewomanfeltmoreandmorefrustratedandhopeless.

ThenIcreptdownstairsandexaminedthetagsattachedtoeachofthepackages.

Whenhefinishedheraised/lifted hiseyesandlookedoutthewindow. 

Shehad spotted amanpacingdownthehall. 

Whenthestudentssteppedoffthebus,James’seyeswidenedinsurprise.

Werecognizedthefamouscomedianonhisarrival.

Meghannoddedseriously,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears.

Swallowinghard,IstaredintoMeghan’seyesforalongmoment,wonderinghowIcouldcopewithit.

Thenhejumpedup,eyestwinklingasherantofetchsomeofhisprizedMatchboxcars.

Iwastakingmytime,strollingintheparkandlookinginshopwindows.

口的动作：

Reubenmurmuredathankyouandranhomealltheway.

“Here,Mum!

Here!

”Reubenexclaimedasherantoherside.

Ayoungmancametothepolicestation,surroundedbyagroupofjournalists,declaringthathehadspottedthemurderer.

Iwasgettingreadytoblowoutallthecandlesandshe’sgettingreadytohelpmeincaseIranoutofair.

“Timetogo.”Iwhisperedtothegirl,wishingshecouldfollowmerightaway.

MyteammateswereallscreamingasIdashedtowardthefinishline.

 Ipickeduptheballonelasttimeandgrumbled,“Pleasejustcometogetthedamnball.”

FranniequicklytoldBelleRingerandtheothertwodriversaboutStevie'ssurgery,andthensighed.

Thehousegotreallynoisyatthattime,witheverybodyholleringandshoutingatthetopofhisvoice.

“HowcanIletyouthrowawaythethingthatmeansthemosttoyou?

”Ipleadedwithhim.

Theyletouta surprisingly loudvoice.

Thesmile froze onhisface;hismouthfellwideopen.

Heinterruptedthesilencewithanannouncement:

“ThedeadlinetoenterfortheCompetitionistomorrow.”

“Ihaven’tfinished;Ineedmoretime,”hebegged.“That’swhatMichelangelosaid.”Mr.Edgarjoked.

ShegreetedJamesandinquired.“Areyoureadyforourfieldtrip?

”Jamesdidn’trespond.

“Whatdoyouthinkmattersforabird?

”Mrs.Damonquestioned.

身的动作：

ShefeltasleepanddreamedofseeingTom.

Suddenlyatallfiguredressedinadarkcloakappearedbeforehim.

Deathspokewithathreateningvoice,anddisappeared.

Dr.Urssenbecksuddenlyfoundhimselfinalargeroomwherethousandsofcandleswereburning.

Thelittlegirlslowlypushesherselfontheswing.

Theyaresittingoutsideinthecoolnightonawoodenporch,talkingquietly.

OneofthemapproachedandaskedpolitelyifIwouldthrowtheballbacktohim.

Wantingtoappearagreeable,Ibentdown,pickeduptheballand,eyeshalf-shut,threwitbackashardasIcould.

OnceIwasonthebus,Icrouchedinaseatandshutmyeyes.

Inaflashmyfriendwasinthecarandgone,disappearinginacloudofdust.

ForamomentIjuststoodthere,paralyzed（呆若木鸡）.

心理动词：

Theseeventsconstantlyremindmeofmyfather’sabsence.

Iimmediatelypicture/imaginehimwalkingthroughthedoor,wearingashiningsmile.

MostdaysIhopethatmaybehewillturnupatmydoorsteponeday.

Atthatverymoment,hewonderedwhetherhewouldbesentencedtodeathforkillingpeople.

Hewasdeterminedtotellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.

Sotheyoungmanrealizedthepolicehadarrestedthewrongperson,andhetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.

Ifocusedmythoughtsoneverypartofmyself.

Wenoddedourheadsinagreement,understandingeachother.

SomehowIgottheideaitwouldbefuntowakenmyfatherbyfiringit.

Iwaswonderingwherehewas.Ihadanewjoketotellhim.

Iwasafraidtogotosleep,forfearthatIwouldwakeupthewayIhadbeenbefore.

ThenItriedtofigureoutwhatIshoulddo.Followmyfriendtothehospital?

TherewasnothingIcouldaccomplishthere,Iconvincedmyself.

AllIcoulddoatthehospital,Idecided,wastogetintheway.

AsIstartedmycar,Irealizedthatmyfriendhadlefthistruckandkeysatthecourts.

FromthatoneexperienceIlearnedthatthemostimportantthinginlifeisn’tthemoneyyoumake.

Iwillcherishthefondmemoriesfortherestofmylife.