中考书面表达精析及范例.docx

1、中考书面表达精析及范例模块36中考书面表达解析与精选 真题解析真题1（2008北京）根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩（Lin Hao）救了两名同学，然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。请你就林浩同学的事迹，以“Learn from the Hero”为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你要向他学习什么。提示词语：a student, nine years old, happen, save, walk,

2、to safety, be deeply moved, brave, give upLearn from the Hero_写作要点：（1）讲述林浩的事迹；（2）谈自己的感想；（3）向他学习什么。【参考范文】Learn from the HeroLin Hao is a student. He is only nine years old. After Wenchuan Earthquake happened, he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hours to safety.I was deeply moved

3、by his story. I think he is a brave boy. He did his best when he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of others first and help them as much as possible. I will never give up when I face any difficulties.解析：文章简洁明了，层次分明。第一段中讲述事迹，第二段谈感受。所给提示词运用准确、恰当。同时，自己也加了很多地道的英语表达方法，如do ones bes

4、t, learn from, as much as possible等等。可见学生对所学知识运用自如，提升了文章的档次。 真题2（2007北京，五）你校美籍学生Tom和Mary刚来到北京。他们在校园网坛上各发了一个帖子。Tom想了解北京的基本情况；Mary感到很孤独。假如你是李华，看到他们的帖子，请写一个回帖。首先做自我介绍，然后提出建议，并说一说你将如何帮助他或她。注意事项：请从下面表格的A、B两个题目中任选一个；短文必须包括表格中三个方面的内容；表格中的词汇供选用，文中不得出现网络专用语（如：不能用字母u代替单词you等）；词数不少于60；文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。 AB To Tom

5、To Mary About yourself Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, be born in Beijing, know（well）Li Hua, Class 2, Grade 3, like meeting people, friendly Suggestionsbuy a map, on the Internet, watch TV, visitmake friends, talk with your classmates, read books, listen to How to help him/her Hi , _ _ Li Hua 写作要点：（1）李华的自

6、我介绍；（2）提建议；（3）帮助的具体方法。【参考范文】AHi Tom,Im Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. I was born in Beijing. I know Beijing very well. So I think I can give you some good suggestions. Why not buy a map of Beijing or a guide book? Or try to find the information on the Internet. Also, you can watch TV programs and rea

7、d China Daily. Would you like to go around Beijing with me on weekends? Im glad to be your tour guide. Come to my class if you need my help.Li HuaBHi Mary，Im Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. Everyone says I am kind and friendly. I like meeting people and have many friends. Id like to give you some sugg

8、estions. Try to talk with your classmates as much as possible. Soon, you will feel better. When you are alone, youd better do some reading or listen to music. Would you like to go to book stores with me? We can find some interesting books and CDs. Also, we can go to parks or concerts on weekends. Le

9、t me know if you need my help.Li Hua 真题3 （2006北京）根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信（信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内）。假如你叫李玲，是英国中学生露西的好友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。 Dear Li Ling, These days Tom Cruise, the film star, always comes into my mind. I think of him day and n

10、ight. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films again and again. Ive written hundreds of letters to him and sent E-mails to his fan club, but all I get back are only photos with his names on them. I dream that some day Ill meet him and that hell feel the same way about me. I dont want to l

11、earn my lessons any more, and Ill have final exams next month. Im thinking of running away to Hollywood（好莱坞）to meet him. Can you help me with the problem? Yours, LucyHi Lucy,Nice to hear from you._ _ Yours,Li Ling写作要点：（1）认真读来信；（2）根据信的内容提建议，如：看一些有趣的书 ,做一些运动,告诉父母（3）注意用should, may。【参考范文】Hi Lucy,Nice to

12、 hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and theres nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I dont think what you do is right since you are a student. Youd better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may als

13、o tell your problem to your parents and teachers. Im sure theyll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands.Yours,Li Ling 真题4 （2008安徽）一个美国中学生代表团将到你校交流学习，并与你校学生座谈。请根据表格中的内容写一个发言稿，介绍你校学生开展小组合作学习和自主学习的情况。 小组合作

14、学习自主学习 互相帮助 学会倾听 与他人合作 发表个人见解 制订学习计划 合理安排时间 独立思考 做学习的主人 注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可适当发挥，加入自己的观点；（3）发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：study is groups, work together, make good use of timeDear friends,Welcome to our school._ &nbs, p; _ Thanks for listening!【参考范文】Dear friends,Welcome to our school. I would like to ta

15、lk about two ways of study in our school. The first way is to study in groups. When we study in groups, we can help each other. We can learn to listen to others and how to work together. Also, everyone can have chances to express his own ideas. The other way we like is to study by ourselves. We can

16、make our own plans for study and learn to make good use of time. We can also learn to think by ourselves. And the most important thing is that we can be the master of our own study.Thanks for listening!解析：此文简洁明了，结构紧凑，文章使用了一些高级词组和句子：would like to，The first way is to，each other, express his own ideas,

17、 make good use of等，使文章增色很多，提升了文章的档次。 真题5 （2008黄冈）背景设定：为了保护环境，节约能源，中国政府出台了一条禁令：从2008年6月1日起，禁止在超市和商店中使用超薄塑料袋。针对这条禁令，某学校组织了一次讨论会，请同学们畅所欲言，发表自己的看法。下面是汪进峰同学的发言内容： 姓名发言中心内容 Wang Jinfeng1.禁令内容：禁止使用超薄塑料袋；阻止超市、商店向顾客提供免费塑料袋；如果提供，需要付费。 2个人认识：对我们有益；能帮助保护环境。原因：a.引起白色污染；b.污染土壤和水；c.生产塑料袋浪费能源。目的：贯彻执行该禁令，改善环境。 3.今后做

18、法：鼓励家人和朋友购物时自带布袋、竹篮；不乱丢垃圾，对塑料瓶、易拉罐进行回收请你根据Wang Jinfeng同学的发言内容，以他的名义写一篇书面发言材料。要求：（1）围绕汪峰的观点和意愿进行表达，所表达的内容可以适当拓展；（2）所表达的内容必须包含上表中的3个要点；（3）词数80左右，开始语已给出（不讲入总词数）。提示词汇：ban（禁令），provide, free（免费）, protect, cause, pollute, soil（土壤）, energy, carry out, improve, recycle, soft drink can（易拉罐）Hello, everyone！Chi

19、na has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1, 2008._ Thats all for my speech. Thanks for listening!写作要点：（1）禁令内容：禁止使用超薄塑料袋；阻止超市、商店向顾客提供免费塑料袋；如果提供，需要付费。（2）个人认识：对我们有益；能帮助保护环境。原理：a.引起白色污染；b.污染土壤和水；c.生产塑料袋浪费能源。（3）今后做法：鼓励家人和朋友购物时自带布袋、竹篮；【参考范文】Hello, everyone!China has put a

20、ban on the use of much thinner plastic bags starting on June 1, 2008. The ban can stop the supermarkets and shops from providing free plastic bags. People should pay for every plastic bag if they need it.I think this ban is very helpful to us. It helps to protect our environment. In my opinion, plas

21、tic bags can cause “white” pollution and they can also pollute the soil and water. They are harmful to our health. Whats more, producing plastic bags can waste a lot of energy, too. So we should carry out this ban in order to improve our environment.What should we do? I think we should encourage our

22、 family members to carry cloth bags or baskets when they go shopping. In the school, we mustt throw the rubbish everywhere. We should reduce the waste, reuse, some bags and recycle plastic bottles, soft drink cans, waste paper and so on. If every one of us does like this, our environment will be bet

23、ter and better.Thats all for my speech. Thanks for listening!解析：此文主题具有时代气息，关注社会热点，要点详尽，写作要求较高，丰富的内容加上灵活多变的语言表达，如：表现观点时的句式就有I think， In my opinion以及stop from等，使文章既厚实又不呆板。同时还激发了学生保护环境的意识。 真题6 （2006吉林）请根据下表内容提示，以“The way to keep healthy”为题，用英文写一篇短文。 三要五不要 多吃水果和蔬菜不要吃含脂肪太多的食品 晚上睡眠不少于8小时不要喝太多的咖啡 多活动不要工作太劳

24、累 不吸烟 不要吃太多的糖注意：短文必须包括表格内所有信息，可以适当发挥。写作要点：（1）仔细审题，“The way to keep healthy”，将“三要”“五不要”重新分类为属于健康饮食方面的和良好习惯方面的；（2）确定要点：健康饮食良好习惯【参考范文】The Way to Keep HealthyIts very important for us to keep healthy in our daily life. But how? Here is some advice for you to follow.You should have a healthy diet. It s n

25、ecessary to eat enough fresh fruit and vegetables, because our bodies need all kinds of vitamins every day. But don t eat too much fat, such as cheese, butter or anything too fatty. Too much sweet can be bad for your teeth. So youd better not eat chocolate and drink as much coffee as possible.Good h

26、abits can help you keep healthy. Doing exercise is certainly a good way to make you healthy. After a days work, you need to have an eight-hour sleep. And youd better not work or study too late. Remember that smoking is not good for your health, so never smoke. 真题7（2008天津）假如你叫李华，5月11日母亲节那天，你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情。请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记。 上午你用零花钱给母亲买了