作文范文之写渡句描写换景的作文.docx

1、作文范文之写渡句描写换景的作文写渡句描写换景的作文【篇一：作文中常用的过渡句】 作文中常用的过渡句 作文中常用句型和过渡词 句子及段落的连贯性要求恰当地使用关联词，也叫过渡词。段落是否连贯主要取决于文章内容是否符合逻辑，但是段落缺乏连贯性并不仅仅是逻辑顺序问题，过度词语也起着十分重要的作用。试比较： (1)nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)parents complain that their childrens behavior is often ueasonable. (3)chil

2、dren complain that their parents are too old-fashioned. (4)when a child has a problem, he will not tell his parents. (5)he will go to his friends instead. (1)nowadays there is a lack of understanding between parent and child. (2)parents often complain about their childrens “ueasonable” behavior, whi

3、le children usually think their parents are too “old-fashioned”. (3)then when a child has a problem, he usually goes to his intimate friends for sympathy and advice, leaving his parents totally in the dark. 比较： 1. 增加过渡词while，一方面强化了两代人之间互不理解的对立关系，另有一方面将（2）句和（3）句浓缩成一个句子，避免了雷同句式罗列造成的平庸感。由 then引出结尾句，增强连

4、贯性。 2. 句（3）分词短语leaving?充当表示结果的状语，将初稿中的句（4）和（5）合并为一个句子，增加了句式变化。to leave?in the dark意思是“使?蒙在鼓里”是一个习语。作文中如能出现一两个习语，不仅能使文章有闪光的语言点，而且显得文章地道。 3. 初稿中complain 后的that从句改成complain about，使得语言更简练。 熟练掌握一些过渡词： 1. 表示叙述顺序：first,?second,?,/firstly,?secondly,?lastly,?/ to begin with,?, next?,finally?/ 2. 补充，递进：beside

5、s,/ moreover/ furthermore/in addition/ what is more/most important of all/last but not least/worse still/to make matter worse 例：the house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/whats more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location. 3. 结果，原因： since / because /for

6、/due to/ owing to/ so/ therefore/ consequently/ thus/ as a result/ as a consequence/ for this reason/ thanks to/ with the help of 4. 对照，对比，转折，让步：even though/ in spite of that/ however/ but/ regardless of ?/ as opposed to this?/ nevertheless/ while/ on the contrary/ on the one hand?on the other hand

7、it is hard work; i enjoy it though.contrary to what i had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun. 5. 举例：for instance/ for example/ take?for example/ such as/ like/ namely/ that is to say 6. 总结：in a word/ in short/ in brief/ in conclusion/ to sum up/ generally speaking/ briefly/ 熟练掌握一些句式：

8、1. 原因：(1)there are three reasons for this. (2) the reasons for this are as follows. (3)the reasons for this are obvious.(4) we have good reasons to believe that? 2. 优点：(1) it has the following advantages. (2) it benefits us quite a lot.(3)it is beneficial to us. (4) it does us a lot of good. 例：books

9、 are like friends. they can help us know the world better?.therefore, reading extensively is of great benefit to us. 3. 缺点：(1)it has more disadvantages than advantages. (2)it does us much harm. (3)it is harmful to us. 例：however, everything has two sides. television can also be harmful to us?. obviou

10、sly television has both advantages and disadvantages living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages 4. 表示重要，必要，困难，方便，可能：(1)its important (necessary, difficult, convenient, possible) for sb to do sth. (2) it plays an important r

11、ole in our life. (3) we think it necessary to ? 例：computers are now being used everywhere?we have good reasons to say that computers are playing an increasing important role in our life. 5. 表示措施：(1)we should take some effective measures.(2) we should try our best to overcome the difficulities.(3)we

12、should solve the problem that we are faced with. 6. 事实，现状：(1) we cant ignore the fact that? (2)no one can deny the fact that? (3)this is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 7. 结论：(1)in short, it can be said that? (2)it may be brifely summed up as follows. (3) from what has been mentione

13、d above, we can come to the conclusion that? 8. 表达观点：(1) as far as i am concerned/as for me (2) in my point of view, i like/prefer a much more than b. (3) different people have different attitudes towards?, some believe that?others, however, argue that?still others maintain that? 常用句型 （一）段首句 1. 关于?人

14、们有不同的观点。一些人认为? there are different opinions among people as to?some people suggest that ? 2. 俗话说（常言道）?，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 there is an old saying?its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，?，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，?；其次，?。更为糟糕的是?。 today, ? whi

15、ch have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. first, ? second,?what makes things worse is that?. 4. 现在，?很普遍，许多人喜欢?，因为?，另外（而且）?。 nowadays，it is common to ?. many people like ? because ? besides，? 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，?也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 everything has two sides and ? is not an exception，it has both

16、advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于?人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为 （说）?，在他们看来，? peoples opinions about ? vary from person to person. some people say that ?to them,? 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题?，这个问题变得越来越严重。 man is now facing a big problem ? which is becoming more and more serious. 8. ?已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ?has be

17、come a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ?在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 ?has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as

18、well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出?。很显然?，但是为什么呢？ according to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that?while. obviously，?but why? （二）中间段落句 1. 相反，有一些人赞成?，他们相信?，而且，他们认为?。 on the contrary，there are some people in favor of?t the same time

19、，they say? 2. 但是，我认为这不是解决?的好方法，比如?。最糟糕的是?。 but i dont think it is a very good way to solve ?.for example，?worst of all，?. 3. ?对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，?。而且?，最重要的是? ?is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. first，?whats more, ?most important of all,? 4. 有几个可供我们采纳

20、的方法。首先，我们可以?。 there are several measures for us to adopt. first, we can? 5. 面临?，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来?。一方面?，另一方面， confronted with?we should take a series of effective measures to?. for one thing，for another， 6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说?，另外?。所有这些方法肯定会?。 it is high time that something was done about it. for example.

21、 ?in addition.?all these measures will certainly?. 7. 为什么?？第一个原因是?；第二个原因是?；第三个原因是?。总的来说，?的主要原因是由于? why? the first reason is that ?the second reason is ?the third is?.for all this, the main cause of ?use to ?. 8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，?也有它的不利的一面，象?。 however, just like everything has both its good and b

22、ad sides, ?also has its own disadvantages, such as ? 9. 尽管如此，我相信?更有利。 nonetheless, i believe that ?is more advantageous. 10. 完全同意?这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： i fully agree with the statement that ?because?. （三）结尾句 1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为?as far as i am concerned, i agree with the latter opinion to some exten

23、t. i think that ? 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注?这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来?。 in a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ?only in this way can ?in the future. 3. 但是，?和?都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，?，而?。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢）? but ?and?have heir own advantages. for example, ? while? comparing this with t

24、hat, however, i prefer to? 4. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为?更合理。只有这样，我们才能? for my part, i think it reasonable to? only in this way can you? 5. 对我来说，我认为有必要?。原因如下：第一，?； 第二，?；最后?但同样重要的是? in my opinion, i think it necessary to?the reasons are as follows. first ?second ? last but not least,? 6. 在总体上很难说?是好还是坏，因为它在很大

25、程度上取决于?的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现?。 it is difficult to say whether ?is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of?.however, from a personal point of view find? 7. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论? from what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that? 8. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能

26、控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是? if we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is? 让写作增色的好句子 1. time flies.时光易逝。 3. when an opportunity is neglected, it never comes back to you.机不可失，时不再来。 4. strike whil

27、e the iron is hot. 趁热打铁。 5. wisdom is more to be envied than riches.知识可羡，胜于财富。 6. it is good to learn at another mans cost.前车可鉴。 7. seeing is believing.百闻不如一见。 8. practice makes perfect. 9. god helps those who help themselves. 10. easier said than done. 11. where there is a will, there is a way.【篇二：

28、片段作文之景物描写】 片段作文之景物描写 【题型示例】 日月星晨是天空的自然现象。它们五光十色，千变万化，我们要学会捕捉典型景象。像画家画速写那样，抓住不同时间，不同季节，不同地域的典型天象进行观察和描写。请你采用捕捉典型的方法，写一段150字的关于云彩的文字，要求采用比喻的修辞手法。（10分） 答案示例： 我忽然发现一道蓝光，像探照灯射出来的光柱一样，从天边射向天空。这时，我才注意到瓦蓝瓦蓝的天空上，有许多形状不一的云朵。啊，这朵像巍峨的大山；那朵像密集的树林；挨着树林的那朵像威风凛凛的“老虎”；天边的那朵像温顺可爱的“小花猫”真是形态万千。一会儿，云朵汇集成一大团，像一只正要下海的“大海龟

29、”。“大海龟”前面的云像汹涌澎湃的海水。“大海龟”的前脚刚伸进海水里，后脚还留在海滩上，短短的尾巴微微向上翘。我越看越出神，可是，不久，“大海龟”不见了，它融进了汹涌澎湃的“海水”里? 解析： 重点抓住云彩千姿百态、变化万千的特点，进行具体细微的描绘，先写云彩的形态，后写云彩的变化，把晚霞描绘得栩栩如生。 【解题攻略】 一什么是景物描写？ 所谓景物描写，就是指对自然景物的描写（也包括社会环境）。景物描写有比较广泛的内容，它一般包括大地山川、城乡村镇、路桥建筑、日月星辰、风雷云霞、露雪雾霜、花草树木、春夏秋冬?以及这些景物的交错组合就构成了景物描写的对象。 诗人用美妙鲜明的形象与摄人心魄的韵味描

30、摹意象，抒发情感，感动读者；画家以鲜活灵动的画面与扣人心弦的诗意再现景物，展现魅力，感化观众；作家因绘声绘色的情状与逼真传神的语言渲染气氛，刻画神韵，感染读者?这些艺术家笔下的“意象”“画面”“情状、气氛”简而言之，就是“景物”。 景物描写在我们在作文中占据极其重要的地位，因此，我们在写作训练中必须认真对待。 二景物描写方法 写景的文章是指以描写有代表性的自然现象、自然环境等为主的文章。写景离不开描写，描写是写好景物的最关键的、最主要的手段，现在我们就“描写”谈谈景物描写的技法。 描写景物，首先要注意观察。只有深入细致地进行观察，才能把握景物的特点。将景物描绘得生动形象，是作者用一双慧眼细致观

31、察的结果。当然这只是第一步，这也只是感性认识。最主要的还是要想办法把观察到的“物”采用什么办法“拍摄”下来，这样我们就必须借助“描写”这一技法。 描写作为一种表达方式，就是指用形象的语言对人物、事件、环境的形态、特征、状貌、情态作具体的描摹与刻画，使读者对描写对象获得真切、具体的感受和印象。描写抓住事物的形状、神态、声音、色彩、气味、质地等进行摹写、描绘，使“其面目精神跃然纸上，勃勃欲生”，使读者如闻其声，如睹其物，如临其境。 1、白描：精练质朴、单纯明快 白描本是绘画之一法，它全部用线条勾勒，不假色彩，单纯明快，用在文学作品之上，成为描写的一种手法，它是指用经济的笔墨，精练质朴的文字对事物进行描写，寥寥几笔就勾勒出事物的本质特征。鲁迅把这种方法归纳为：“有真意，去粉饰，少做作，勿卖弄。”(作文秘诀)它不加修饰形容，不加铺张扬厉，虽着墨不多，却能穷形而尽相。许多名家大师，都把白描当作常用的方法。 白描重在写意传神，很少用比喻。白描手法的关键在于逼真地刻划事物的本来面貌，抓住描写对象的特征，同时要求语言准确、简洁、不能写得过繁过细。这就要求作者具有深厚的生活积累和敏锐的洞察力，同时具备简练、质朴的语言准确描摹事物的能力。 例文1 下面请看鲁迅故乡中的第一段文字： 时间既然是深冬；渐近故乡时，天气又阴晦了，冷风吹进船舱中，呜呜的响。从篷隙里向