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1、专题05 读后续写解析版2020届高三山东名校好题速递分项汇编（1）之读后续写读后续写【2020届山东省淄博市高三下学期一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their house. So they went shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to maintai

2、n their level of standard so they didnt mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at their home. The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasnt even able to mee

3、t his daily needs.They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter and finally settled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one times meal so

4、he needed anything he could earn.The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their home and one hour passed, and two hours passed, but the porter still didnt deli

5、ver their stuff.The wife started to get angry at her husband, “I always tell you not to trust such person, but you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to the

6、 police station to file the complaint against him.”They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter. They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief?

7、This is our goods and he was supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to sell them.”Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking._Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, _【答案】Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry

8、wife asking, he turned back. The porter replied, “Madam, please calm down. Im not a thief. That poor old man was sick since last month. He couldnt earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Therefore, he fell down and handed me $15, saying, I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you

9、deliver the goods to the couples home. Madam, he was poor and hungry, but he was an honest man. I was just on the way to completing the old mans last delivery to your home.”Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look

10、her husband in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed to the market. Half an hour later, the wife came back with some food in her hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldnt suspect them, and took them as thieves. At last, the porter took the goods to th

11、eir house, and the rich couple changed their attitude to the man like the porter.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物品，然后雇佣了一个搬运工把这些物品运回家。搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人，他要价$20低于市场价，而富人夫妇讨价还价后只给$15。富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物品送来，却迟迟不见老人的身影。妻子认为上了老人的当，一定老人把他们的物品卖掉了。回去找老人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当搬运

12、工听到生气的妻子问题时，所以应该写他讲述的实情，老人病了又吃不上饭，这次摔倒了，他把$15给了这个搬运工，请求他把物品送到富人家。第二段开头是：丈夫听了，眼里含着泪水，。下文应该写富人夫妇被老人感动，行动和态度都发生了改变。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。按要求完成写作任务。本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：calm down, taken an advance, Upon hearing, felt ashamed, changed their attitude等高级词汇；Therefore, he fell down and handed me $15, sayi

13、ng, I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver the goods to the couples home.和She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldnt suspect them, and took them as thieves.运用了非谓语动词；the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look her husb

14、and in the eyes.运用了sothat句型。等高级句式。读后续写【2020届山东省济南市山东师范大学附属中学高三3月份在线检测】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。The most delicious memories seem to happen during the holidays. And like a squirrel preparing for winter, I put them away to enjoy slowly during the long winter months. Sometimes,

15、I enjoy them for years.Among them are sweetest recollections: my little girls at the church play and the moment they got their first angel wings; a pink dolly stroller(手推车) wheeled into the bedroom with a tiny voice declaring, Look what Santa Claus brought me! ; or New Years snowmen wearing bright s

16、carves borrowed from a grandmas fragrant drawer.But there is one memory that is a little bittersweet - sort of like 80% dark chocolate, but still good for you.This story brings to mind a colorful candy dish and a very little boy. The occasion was somewhere between Christmas and New Years when a few

17、candies in a dish remained behind, a bright spot in dull winter gray.Wrapped in Decembers chill, my then 3-year old grandson, Justin, and I had dashed from the warmth of my parked car into the building where I planned to take care of a few work-related tasks.A smiling secretary greeted us as we brus

18、hed the snowflakes and rubbed our hands to chase the cold. Then with my grandchild close to my side, I busied myself, finishing the items of business that had brought us there. But while his hand remained in mine, his eyes fell on the candy dish sitting nearby.As we turned to leave, the thoughtful a

19、nd very observant woman behind the desk asked the question all children wait to hear.Honey, the kindly woman said, peering over her glasses at Justin. Would you like a candy bar? she asked, her hand pushing the dish close for an easier reach.The boy looked up questioningly, his eyes meeting mine, pe

20、rmission hanging in the air. A slight nod from me and then a hurried beeline to the candy dish followed. One candy bar was already in his hand.Para 1: Justin! I said from the doorway._Para 2: In the humor of the moment, I felt something hard to swallow._【答案】Justin! I said from the doorway. By this t

21、ime his pudgy hands had grabbed one - and only one - and he made his way back to me. My voice was somewhat serious as I realized manners had been forgotten. What do you say? Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel, promptly returning to the candy dish. Get Grandma one, too! I laughed. The se

22、cretary laughed. And even little Justin innocently giggled at the fun we were having.In the humor of the moment, I felt something hard to swallow. There was a truth that lingered long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared. What example had I set for this little one while often in my care?

23、 Was he learning more about getting and less about gratitude - that heartfelt thank you? In the years since, Ive always loved to remember that moment. But one gift I hope we all leave with our children is the importance of a grateful heart. Really, what could be sweeter?【解析】这是一篇读后续写。文章主要讲述了作者和孙子的一次经

24、历带给她苦中带乐的回忆。续写分为两段。第一段的开头是：“Justin！”我在走廊上说。这时他的手上抓着一颗糖，然后朝我走过来。我的声音有点严肃，我意识到自己当时失态了。“你说什么？”。听到这话，小男孩转过身去，立刻跑到糖果盘那里。“给奶奶也拿一颗。”我笑了。秘书也笑了。小Justin也咯咯的笑了。第二段的开头是：在这个幽默时刻，我觉得有些东西难以下咽。在草莓味糖果的味道消失之后，有一个想法始种萦绕在我心头。我给小家伙树立了什么榜样？他学到了更多关于得到，更少关于感激的东西吗（那种发自内心的感激）？从那以后，我一直记得那一刻。我总是希望让孩子学会真正的感恩。没有什么比这更好了。续写时应注意故事情

25、节要符合逻辑，基础时态为一般过去时。范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些高级表达，例如：Hearing this, the little boy turned on his heel, promptly returning to the candy dish.中使用了现在分词作状语；There was a truth that lingered long after the strawberry candy taste had disappeared.中that引导同位语从句；What example had I set f

26、or this little one while often in my care?中what引导主语从句。这些表达的使用不仅给文章增色添彩，也展示了作者扎实的语言功底。读后续写【2020届山东省日照市高三校际联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 续写的词数应为150左右。As a sixth grader, I began noticing how other kids were separating into groups. I wasnt sure where I belonged. I found it hard to fit in.Our

27、teacher had assigned secret friends” for the coming week. She wrote each kids name on a piece of paper and threw them into a glass; then we each closed our eyes and drew the name of a classmate who we were to secretly befriend and support over the next five school days. By the middle of the week, ev

28、eryone, including me, had turned this assignment into a contest to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift. We left cards, pens and even money. It seemed that everyone was getting cool presents from their friend except me.On the last morning of our assignment, I walked into my classroom and noticed there was a package. I opened the wrapping paper and inside was a box of powder(