读后续写和概要写作讲义 近几年浙江高考续写和概要真题.docx

1、读后续写和概要写作讲义 近几年浙江高考续写和概要真题近几年浙江高考真题卷别长度体裁 主题类型2019. 6369议论文父母如何恰当表扬孩子。概要2018. 11358说明文在申请大学前，最好亲自提前了解大学相关信息。概要2018. 6320记叙文爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。续写2017. 11338记叙文和父母一块去旅游的故事。续写2017. 6344记叙文和朋友一起骑车游玩，野外遇狼的故事。续写2016. 10332记叙文小两口野外露营，因小事发生争执，女主人独自走进森林迷路，在野外独自度夜的故事。续写考试说明样卷364记叙文Arthur在帮助一个年轻人时听到有人抢劫了银行，于是A

2、rthur怀疑这个年轻人就是抢劫银行的嫌疑犯。续写考试说明样卷398议论文在历史发展过程中，人们对于灰尘的看法在不断地发生变化。概要读后续写划线关键词语卷别名词(词组)动词(词组)介词(词组)形容词2018. 67212017. 11732017. 6732016. 10622考试说明样卷91三、命题揭秘读后续写要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势，进行充满个性色彩的设计，并用英语进行续写表达。所提供短文词数在350左右，划线词语涉及到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等，其中，以名词(词组)为主，在续写中至少要使用5个关键词

3、语，需要注意：在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性；多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进行内容创造；2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分体现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。概要写作要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要，写出文章的中心大意。所提供短文词数在35

4、0左右；所选材料体裁没有限制，以议论文、说明文为主。1.简洁性：即用尽量少的语言对较长原文的简洁重述；2.自主性：即用自己的话语进行概写，避免对原文进行抄袭照搬；3.理解性：即表现作者对原文本的精准理解。需要注意的是，考生不能对原文进行解释和评论，也不能掺杂任何个人想法，或做出任何评判，因此不能出现“I believe”, “I think”等字句；4.忠实性：即概写内容和中心思想必须忠于原文主旨，不可偏离主题、肆意篡改；5.连贯性：概要写作并非简单罗列要点，各个要点之间要有恰当衔接，使概要衔接紧密、脉络清晰。写出的概要读起来要完整连贯、独立成篇。四、真题练析题目类型：读后续写阅读下面短文，根

5、据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 (2018年6月浙江卷)It was summer, and mydadwanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul, my dads fri

6、end, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of thefarm houselistening to the frogs and water rolling down therivernearby. Very early in the

7、 morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tinafeedthe chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take thesheepout to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked real

8、ly cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont belatefor s

9、upper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to thetrackso that you dontget lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out ofsight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a mag

10、ic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse._Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we wer

11、e and it got dark._One possible version: (来源：五年高考三年模拟)Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent

12、myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before ariver, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that wegot lost.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it got dark.We didnt know wher

13、e thefarm housewas. What we could do was to go back along the previoustrackslowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must beUncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Fin

14、ally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!(2017年11月浙江卷)A vacation with my mother I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, and yetabsent-mindedandforgetful. One strange familytripwe took when I was elev

15、en tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good

16、-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,campingequipment, and atentinto the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and

17、travelers checksMomhad forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving whileDadslept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my min

18、d: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we hadtroublefinding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mo

19、m suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections (反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps

20、, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as asniceas she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought w

21、ith us._Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way._One possible version: (来源：五年高考三年模拟)Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.We decided to camp along the river. The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm

22、 sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, whenDadwas about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue ourcamping.Paragraph 2:We drove through several

23、 states and saw lots of great sights along the way.Every time we got to a new place,Momwould cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing s

24、cenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was!Absent-mindedandforgetfulas she was, she never forgot to express her love to us. (2017年6月浙江卷)On a bright, warm July afternoon,MacHollan, a primary schoo

25、l teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with hisfriends. One of his friends had stopped to make abicyclerepair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Macpedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters athome. He hoped

26、 to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but awolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heartjumped. He found out his can of hear spr

27、ay. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second t

28、ime, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶). Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passingcarsbut was careful not to show down. He saw a steep uphillclimbbefore him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment,Pauland Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, to