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thoughtsgivenbysherlockholmesandthedukesson.
writteninthefirstchapterofthebookprideandprejudiceisanextraordinarysentenceofwhichevenapersonwhohashadonlyabrieflookuponthebookwillnotfailtoreceiveadeepimpression-itisatruthuniversallyacknowledgedthatasinglemaninpossessionofagoodfortunemustbeinwantofawife.intermsofsherlockholmes,wedbetteralterthesentenceinto“itisafactuniversallyacceptedbyreadersthroughouttheworldthatanexcellentbookinpossessionofourfamousdetectivesherlockholmesisundoubtedlyamasterpieceofalltimes.”perhapsthisisoneofthemostobviousexplanationsfortheunrivaledpopularityof“holmesseries”inthefieldofdetectivestories.overwhelmedbytherecommendationsprovidedbymyfriends,idecidedtotakealookonthissherlockholmesandthedukessonoriginallypublishedbyoxforduniversitypress.
asawhole,thisbookisaboutacaseconcerningthedukesmissingson.arthur,thedukesson,wasfoundoutinacertainmorningtohavedisappeared,accompaniedwithwhichwasalsothedisappearanceofthegermanteacher.theschoolmasterdr.huxtablethenturnedtothefamousdetectiveofthetimesherlockholmesforhelp.realizinghowtoughandimportantthecaseis,holmesimmediatelymadeuphismindtoacceptthecaseandfolloweddr.huxtablebacktomackletonbytrain.havingformedaroughideaaboutthewholematter,holmesprobedintothecaseimmediatelyandhadacarefulinvestigationoftheentireareashortlyafterthearrival,duringtheprocessofwhichhediscoveredthebodyofthegermanteacherheidegger.finally,primarilyduetohisprominentabilityasadetective,hemanagedtounravelthemysteryandobtainedthetwelvethousandpoundspromisedbytheduke.
havingoncestartedreadingthisfiction,iwascompletelyimmersedinthemysteriousstorypresentedbythebook.asthesayinggoes,“wellbegun,halfdone”.atthebeginningofthestory,justlikemanyotherdetectivestories,theauthorgivesusabriefdescriptionoftheconditionbythewordsofaclient.however,unlikeotherones,thisstoryfirstdelineatestheclientsstrangebehavioratlengthtoindicatetheseverityoftheincidentinordertoattractthereaderstocontinuereadingit.asisknowntoall,vividdepictionisessentialtodetectivestoriessinceitcanhelpthereadersunderstandeachfigurescharacteristicsandvisualizethescenes,thusmakingthestorymoreauthenticandattractive.therefore,tryingtopresenta“realworld”tohisreadership,sirarthurconandoyle,authoroftheoriginal“holmesseries”,hasskillfullyarrangedtheplotsofthewholestoryfromtheperspectiveofdr.watson,acharacternotsospecializedindiscoveringthetruthhiddenbehindtheenigmatichappeningsasholmesbutsoloyaltosherlockhomesasafriendthathealwaysaccompaniesholmeswhereverhegoes.inthisway,heelaboratelydepictedeverysceneandcharacterinthebook,apartfromthespecialstart,theendingofthewholestory,beingdramaticbutreasonable,iscertainlyanoutstandingone.afterall,excepttheauthorhimself,whoknowsthatthedukesseeminglyordinarysecretaryisinfactthedukesbastard?
inaddition,whoknowsthatthedukeactuallyhasalreadybeenacquaintedwiththewholethingbeforeholmessolvesthiscomplicatedproblem?
yet,surprisingasitis,thisendingseemssonaturalthatitfitsalltheplotsofthestoryperfectlywell.whileenjoyingthiswonderfulstory,icoulddonothingbutadmirethewonderfuldesignofthismasterpieceaswellastheauthorsgorgeouswritingskill.closingmyeyes,icaneven“see”thestoryhappeningjustlikewatchingafilm.notuntilthendidiunderstandwhythejapanesecartoonfilmdetectiveconanusedthis“conan”asthenameofitshero.
asfarasiamconcerned,nothingismoreadmirableandsurprisingintheherosherlockhomesthanhisprofoundknowledgewhichhascertainlyassistedhimalotwhenhewasstudyingthecase.takethebicycletyresforinstance,holmesactuallyiscapableofrecognizing42differentvarietiesofbicycletyres.whatsmore,accordingtohisotherstories,holmeshasstudieddifferentkindsofnewspapers,cigarettes,peoplesfootprintsandotherspecialthingsaswell.therefore,heseemstohavethemasteryofanythingrelevanttothecaseshedealswith.exceptforhisillimitableknowledge,holmesalsospecializesinarrangingthefactsinorderandthenfindingthefactleadinghimtoagreatdiscoveryoreventhetruthitself.fromhisspeaking“everymysteryhasananswer”,wecanreadilyshapetheimpressionofamanwithgreatintelligenceandinflexiblewill.inthiscase,aftergettingridofunrelatedfacts,sherlockhomeseventuallygraspedtheclueanddiscoveredtheamazingfact.
[《中国学生写英语论文的常见错误总结》读书笔记]英语读书笔记
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标题:
themostcommonhabitsfrommorethan200englishpaperswrittenbygraduatechineseengineeringstudents
原文链接如下:
(不能保证是原始出处)
时间:
xx以后
阅读时间:
xx.9.27
摘要:
*提出了几种最常见的中式英语习惯它们是从超过两百份中国学生写的英文论文中观察得来的。
文中解释了这些习惯并且在大部分情况下给出了从实际论文中出现的例子以及正确的用法。
我们试图去解释如何去改正和避免这些错误。
一些情况下我们还解释了为什么这些习惯会出现。
*可以成为一个单独的科技论文编写指南尤其是当很难寻找一个母语为英语的编辑时。
大意
section1
aanthe
冠词后面将跟随一个名词并且任何冠词与名词之间的修饰词都用来修饰这个名词(abigbluebicycle/thefirstaward)。
a和an是不定冠词the是定冠词。
单数形式的不可数名词以及指代一个可数事务的普通名词它们每次都需要一些限定词(determiner)。
它们的使用方法如下图所示:
incorrectfigure2showsthedistributionofrelativevelocityonsurfaceofmain
andsplitterblades.15
correctfigure2showsthedistributionofrelativevelocityonthesurfaceofthe
mainandsplitterblades.15
分析上面的例子surface是一个单数、可数、没有限定词的特定的单词因此要用the修饰。
而blades是一个复数、可数、没有特殊限定词、并且特定的单词因此也要用the修饰。
verylongsentence
太长的句子不利于读者理解应该尽量分为多个句子。
对于一些参数的陈列尽量使用列表或者整齐的子句。
prefacingthemainideaofasentencebystatingthepurpose
locationorreasonfirst
在句子的前面陈述目的、位置、原因等而不是陈述句子的主要含义。
这样减弱了句子的主旨混淆了读者的理解。
incorrectfortheapplicationinautomobileinteriorsthispaperstudiesthenesting
optimizationprobleminleathermanufacturing.5
correctthispaperstudiesthenestingoptimizationprobleminleathermanufacturing
forapplicationinautomobileinteriors.
tendencyofplacingphraseswhichindicatetimeatthebeginningof
asentence
倾向于把表示时间的短语放在句首。
这样是不自然的。
incorrectwhenuistakenasthecontrolparameterthebdsforδ=0.00.0010.005
areshowninfig.8.
correctfigure8showsthebdsforδ=0.00.001and0.005whenuistakenasthe
controlparameter.
placethemostimportantsubjectatthebeginningofthesentencefor
emphasis
将最重要的主题放在句首以示重视。
这样的理解是错误的。
incorrectbasedonthetriangulationstructurebuiltfromunorganizedpointsoracad
modeltheextendedstlformatisdescribedinthissection.4
correcttheextendedstlformatisdescribedinthissectionbasedonthetriangulation
structurebuiltfromunorganizedpointsoracadmodel.
“which/that”
‘respectively’and‘respective’
1.respectivelyismisplacedinthesentence;itisputbeforethenounstowhichitrefers.
incorrectequations2~6canberespectivelylinearizedas:
……(equationsgiven)…13
correctequations2~6canbelinearizedas:
……(equationsgiven)…respectively.
incorrecttheweightsofthetwoexpertsarerespectively0.600and0.400.19
correcttheweightsofthetwoexpertsare0.600and0.400respectively.
2.respectivelyisinsertedtoexpressthatthereisacertainorderinwhichsomethingwas
done.howevertheorderisalreadyimpliedelsewhereinthesentenceordoesnotneed
tobeexpressedbecauseitdoesnotaddvaluetomeaningofthesentence.
incorrectifboththecoretechnologyscoreandcorequalityscoreofabottleneckprocess
arerespectivelybelowcertainscoresthenwerefertostrategy1otherwiseif
eitherisrespectivelyaboveacertainscorethenwerefertostrategy2.
similarlyifthecoretechnologyandcorequalityarerespectivelyabovea
certainscorethenwerefertostrategy3otherwiseifeitherisrespectively
belowacertainscorethenwerefertostrategy4.19
correctifboththecoretechnologyscoreandcorequalityscoreofabottleneckprocess
arebelowcertainscoresthenwerefertostrategy1otherwiseifeitheris
aboveacertainscorethenwerefertostrategy2.similarlyifthecore
technologyandcorequalityareaboveacertainscorethenwerefertostrategy[page]
3otherwiseifeitherisbelowacertainscorethenwerefertostrategy4.
respectively通常出现在句子的结尾当两个或者更多的人或事被按照一定的顺序提起或者指定时使用respectively。
它包含了一种顺序这种顺序可以是在前面提到的也可以是被读者领会到的。
例子:
forexample:
bobbynicoleanddarenworeredgreenandbluecoatsrespectively.
list1list2
bobbyworearedcoat.
nicoleworeagreencoat.
darenworeabluecoat.
‘inthispaper’‘inthisstudy’
study指作者做出的工作;paper指作者表达工作的论文。
不可混淆。
这两个短语最好只用在两个地方:
1.介绍或者总结全文时;
2.在文中当指出了其他作者的一些没有完成的工作之后使用这两个短语来描述自己的工作。
numbersandequations
阿拉伯数不应该出现在句子的开头而应该使用英文单词。
incorrect12parameterswereselectedfortheexperiment.
correcttwelveparameterswereselectedfortheexperiment.
阿拉伯数被滥用它们应该在给出技术指标时使用而不用来表示普遍的信息。
不要在句子中使用符号或者表达式而应该以语言描述。
(一般的论文要求所有的表达式都单独写出来并使用特定的格式)
incorrectifthepowerbatterysocsocloandthedrivingtorquebelongstothe
middleload…
correctifthepowerbatterysocisgreaterthansocloandthedrivingtorque
belongstothemiddleload…
format
paragraphs
分段的错误有两个:
第一种是换行但是没有缩进所以让读者不知道这是否是新的一段。
第二种是一段的最前面是一个单行的句子这个句子和这一段同时都缩进了。
(这句话的理解不太清晰我怀疑我理解错了。
原文是:
thesecond
erroroccurswhenaparagraphisprecededbyasinglesentenceonasingleline.the
singlelineisindentedalongwiththesucceedingparagraphasinexample#.this
commonlyoccursinchinesetextsbu