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关于家庭的雅思作文及解析
关于家庭的雅思作文及解析
雅思大作文家庭生活类话题范文--家庭和外界对孩子造成的影响
Task:
Afamilyhasagreatinfluenceonchildren'sdevelopment,buttheoutsideofhomeplaysabiggerpartinchildren'slife.Doyouagreeordisagree?
思路解析:
1.首先,家庭造成的影响不可小觑。
毕竟父母是孩子生命当中的第一个老师,每天陪伴孩子们最长时间。
举例,他们直接教会孩子们基本的生存技能,如语言,做饭,收拾屋子,卫生习惯,以及基本的学术能力,如数学计算,阅读,思考和判断。
2.然而,其他因素同样有影响力。
举例,在孩子们的学术教育上,学校的老师影响是第一位的。
他们是学生教育的领路人,教会他们各个学科的基础知识,学习方式,以及培养他们对于某些学科的热爱。
3.媒体同样对孩子们的影响很大。
举例,电视和电影镜头中的暴力内容会扭曲孩子们的价值观,让他们变得富有侵略性,产生对于暴力的崇拜,并且错误地认为采用暴力手段解决问题是合适的。
参考范文:
Thedevelopmentofchildrendependsonmanyfactors,includingparents,schooleducation,media,peersandsoforth.personally,Iagreethatthefamilyislessinfluentialthanotheraspectsworkingtogether,andmyreasonswouldbeexploredasbelow.
Admittedly,theinfluenceoffamilyonchildrenisverydeep,becauseparents,primaryteachersinthelifeofchildren,setthefirstrolemodelsforthemtolearnandimitate,andwhichwouldbeloggedintotheimpressionablechildhoodmindanddeterminebasicbehaviorsandthinkingofthem.Forexample,byobservingandlearningthedailyactivitiesofparents,likespeaking,cookingandhousecleaning,washinghandsbeforeeating,achildcanmasterthelanguage,self-careabilityandhygienichabits.Besides,parentsalsoplayakeyroleindevelopingtheintelligenceofchildren.Forinstance,withday-to-dayteaching,communicationandstorytelling,aparentcanhelpachildtoimprovecognitiveskillslikebasicmathematiccalculation,memorizing,reading,andthinkingandjudginginaproperway.
However,Istronglybelieveoutside-of-homeelementsmakegreatercontributionstotheoverallgrowthofchildren.Firstly,intermsofacademiceducation,teachersinschoolhavepriorityoverparents.Forexample,comparedwithsomeparentwhohavelow-levelorevennoeducation,teachersareprofessionallyeducatedandtrainedinformaluniversity,andwell-experiencedinteaching.Thatistosay,schoolteachersaremoreadvantageousandinfluential,intermsofcomprehensivelyandaccuratelyinstructing,explaininganddemonstratingcommonknowledgeaboutlawsofnatureanduniverse,theoriesandformulasofmathandphysics,andeventsandpeopleinhistory.Whatismore,formingsocialskillsalsoreliesonaschoolenvironmentwherechildrenhaveopportunitiestocommunicate,playandarguewithotherpeers.Thisstronginterpersonalinteractioncanmakechildrenproficientinreal-worldsocialization.
Besides,massmediaisanotherexternalfactoraffectingchildren’sdevelopment.Forexample,violentvideoontheInternet,TVprogramsandcomputergamesareverylikelytotwistsocialvaluesoftheyoungaudience,becausechildren,unlikeadults,arelackofabilitiestodistinguishrightfromwrong.Therefore,withlong-termexposuretoillinformation,childrenwouldberude,aggressiveandselfeccentric.Asaresult,they,moreoftenthannot,considerviolenceasthemainorevenonlywaytosolveproblems,therebyleadingtoschoolbullying.
Inconclusion,whenitcomestotheimportanceininfluencingchildren,otheraspectsliketeachersinschoolandmediaoverridetheparents,forthereasonsthattheformershaveincomparableeffectsontheeducation,socialskillsandpersonalitiesofchildren.
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雅思大作文范文:
家庭关系不紧密
社会类:
Itisgenerallyacceptedthatfamiliesarenotascloseastheyusedtobe.Givesomereasonswhythischangehashappenedandsuggesthowfamiliescouldbebroughtclosertogether.Includeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourexperience.家庭关系不紧密的原因和解决策略?
相关提问:
Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?
Televisionhasdestroyedcommunicationamongfriendsand例如子女不回家看望父母family.Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.是否认为电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流?
老师思路拓展:
家庭关系不紧密的原因:
1.生活节奏快,竞争激励,工作学习压力大没有时间和家人分享和交流。
2.空间的隔离导致家庭关系的疏远,职场人士不断出差,年轻学子海外求学。
3.家庭观念的淡化导致家庭关系的疏远:
很多人不重视家庭,例如子女不回去看父母,年轻人轻易离婚,子女不赡养老人等。
家庭关系不紧密的解决:
1.劳逸结合。
2.个人重视家庭生活,积极增强家庭纽带。
3.组织一些集体的家庭活动,例如交庭聚餐和家庭旅行;
老师原创语料库:
1.closefamilyrelationship=goodfamilyrelationship=intimatefamilyrelationshipn良好的家庭关系
2.thedecompositionoffamilybondsn家庭纽带的分解
3.thedistance/alienationoffamilyrelationshipn家庭关系的疏远
4.Alienationamongfamilymembersisthusinevitable.家庭成员关系疏远不可避免
5.fiercecompetitionandheavyworkpressuren激烈的竞争和繁重的工作压力
6.Modernpeoplearetoooccupiedtosparetimeforthefamily人们过于忙碌,无暇顾及家庭。
7.changeinpublic’snotionaboutthefamilyn人们家庭观念的改变(需要细节例证展开)
8.Manynewlymarriedyoungpersoncarelessabouttheendofmarriage,manychildrenspendlessandlesstimeinaccompanyingtheirparents很多年轻人不关注婚姻的稳定,很多子女不关心父母。
9.establishareasonablebalancebetweenworkscheduleandthefamilyv维持家庭和事业的平衡
10.strengthenthefamilytiev加强家庭联系
11.Toestablishareasonablebalancebetweenworkscheduleandthefamilylife在工作和家庭生活之间建立理性的平衡
12.familyreunionn家庭团聚
13.createharmoniousfamilyatmosphereandshowrespectfortheold营造和谐家庭氛围以及尊敬老人。
14.familytripandfamilymealn家庭旅行和家庭聚餐
15.Aclosefamilyrelationshipcansurelybekeptaslongaswerealizethesignificantroleitplaysinourlivesandattachgreatimportancetoit.只要认识到家庭关系的重要作用并且重视家庭,我们就可以保持亲密的家庭关系。
雅思大作文范文解析-家庭是否对孩子的发展影响最大
题目
Somepeoplethinkthatfamilyisthemostpowerfulinfluenceonchild'sdevelopment.Otherpeople,however,believethatotherinfluences(suchastelevision,friendsandmusicetc.)influencemore.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.
题型:
双边讨论
翻译:
有些人认为家庭对孩子的发展影响最大。
然而,其他人认为其他影响(如电视,朋友和音乐等)影响更大。
讨论这两种观点并提出你的意见。
写作结构
开头段:
背景介绍+观点讨论
主体段1:
(家庭因素对孩子发展影响大)理由+论证
主体段2:
(其他非家庭因素对孩子发展影响最大)理由+论证
结尾段:
重申自己观点+提出理由
范文解析
开头段
交代背景“在关于儿童教育和发展的主题上,有人认为家庭扮演着最重要的角色,而其他人则认为其他因素,如电视,音乐和朋友,对孩子的发展更有影响力”,表示“对两种观点进行分析和解释”。
背景句:
Thetopicconcerningchildren’seducationanddevelopmenthasprovokedaheateddebateoverwhatfactorinfluencesachild’sgrowthmost.Somepeopleassertthatfamilyplaysthemostsignificantrole,whileothersdeemotherfactors,suchasTV,musicandfriends,moreinfluentialinachild’sdevelopment.
观点讨论:
Inthisessay,bothopinionswillbediscussedandsowillmypersonalview.
主体段1
(家庭因素对孩子发展影响大)父母通常会与子女建立并保持亲密关系,直接创造环境来培养孩子的个性和习惯。
经济状况,教育和专业背景对孩子的发展也有影响。
主题句:
Peoplewhothinkthatfamilyisthemostinfluentialfactorinachild’supbringingmayagreethatparentsusuallyestablishandmaintainanintimaterelationshipwiththeirchildren,directlycreatingtheenvironmenttonurtureachild’spersonalityandhabits.
平行列举:
Eloquentandsociableparentstendtopassontheirenergyandcheerfulnesstotheiroffspring,whileparentswithseveredrinkingproblemsmightbringupchildrenwithalcoholismandaggressiveness.Besides,itiswidelyperceivedthatparents’financialcondition,educationalandprofessionalbackgrounds,andevensocialconnectionwillinvariablybenefitorlimitachild’schoicesanddecisionsonhiseducation,occupation,personalpreferencesandsocialactivities.
主体段2
(其他非家庭因素对孩子发展影响最大)然而,有些人认为其他非家庭和外部因素,如媒体,爱好和友谊,对孩子的发展产生了更大的影响。
主题句:
However,somepeoplebelievethatothernon-familyandexternalfactors,suchasmedia,hobbies,andfriendshipexertastrongerimpactonachild’sdevelopment.
平行列举:
Thosefactorsfunctioninawaythatisnotreplaceablebyfamilyeducation.MediasuchastheInternetandTVprovideaccesstoahugeamountofinformationandknowledgewhicharenotalwaysavailablefromschoolworkorbedtimestories.Andthoseinformationenableschildrentohaveabetterunderstandingoftheworldandthemselves.Friendsandpeers,ontheotherhand,arethetrustedconfidantsforachildtosharehisorherfeelings,opinionsandvalueswhicharenotalwaysunderstoodorappreciatedbyfamilymembers.
结尾段
重申自己观点+提出理由:
在我个人看来,家庭在孩子的整个一生中都拥有更持久和更深刻的力量。
Inmypersonalopinion,familywieldsamoreenduringandprofoundpowerinachild’sentirelifetime.Asdiscussedpreviously,notonlyparents’professional,educationalandsocialbackgroundsbutalsotheirattitudetowardssocietyandvisionoflifewouldalwayscontributetoachild’sperspectiveandaction.Parentswithwell-paidandsociallyrecognizedjobsmayfinditeasiertoprovidefinancialassistance,intellectualguidanceandsocialconnectionfortheirchildrentoobtainbettereducationandabrightercareerprospect.Whenachildcomesacrosstroubles,familyisalwaysthefirstoptiontoturntosinceitoffersunconditionalmentalandmaterialsupport.
重点表达
playthemostsignificantrole发挥最重要的作用
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itiswidelyperceivedthat人们普遍认为
finditeasiertodo...发现做什么很容易
雅思7+大作文范文:
社会家庭类话题
例题:
Today,morefathersstayathomeandtakecareoftheirchildrenwhilemothersgoouttowork.Whatarethereasons?
Doyouthinkitisapositiveornegativetrend?
范文
Inrecentdecades,therehasbeengenderconvergenceintermsoffatherstakingoncaregivingandmotherstakingonbreadwinning.Thereasonsareabitmorecomplexandmainlyassociatedwithashiftingenderrolesandillness.
Firstly,equalrightsmovementscanaccountforthischange,andalsohavespokenforwomentogainqualificationsandpursueacareer.Aswomenarebecomingmoreandmoreimportantineveryway,theyareambitiousforsuccessandsocialrecognitionasmuchasmales,thentryingtosplithomeandworktasksmoreevenly.Whenthefatherswhoweretraditionallyexpectedtobesolebreadwinnerseethechange,theyarethenstartingtoconvincethemselvestoacceptit,whichbecomesakindofself-reinforcing.Besides,illnessmayalsoleadtothetrend.Commonly,stay-at-homefatherstendtobeolderthantheircounterparts,withthemajorityofthembeing35orevenolder.Thatis,havingtakenontheroleoffinancialsupportformanyyears,t