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2020-2021学年广东省六校高三上学期第二次联考

47.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，续写短文的次数应为150左右。

Myschoolhadatraditionduringtheninth-gradegraduation:

abeautifulgoldandgreenjacket（theschoolcolors）,wasawardedtothestudentwhohadmaintainedthehighestgradesfornineyears.

IhadbeenastraightAstudentsincethefirstgradeandhadlookedforwardverymuchtoowningthatjacket.Myfatherwasafarmlaborerwhocouldn’tearnenoughmoneytofeedfivechildren,soIwasgiventomygrandparentstoraise.Therewouldneverbeaschoolsportsjacketforusbecausewecouldn’taffordit.Thisscholarshipjacketwasmyonlychance.

OnedayinMay,Ihappenedtooverhearintheoffice.Mr.Schmidt,myhistoryteacher,andMr.Boone,mymathteacherarguingaboutme.“Irefusetodoit！

Idon’tcarewhoherfatheris;hergradescan’tmatchMartha’satall.Iwon’tlieorfalsify（伪造）records.”saidMr.Schmidtangrily.

ButMr.Boone’svoicesoundedcalm.“Joann’sfatherisnotonlyontheBoard（董事会）,heownstheonlystoreintown:

wecouldsayitwasaclosetieand…”

Thepoundinginmyearsdrownedouttherestofthewords,onlyawordhereandtherefilteredthrough.“…MarthaisMexican…resign…won’tdoit…”

TothisdayIdon’trememberhowImadeitthroughtherestoftheafternoon.Thatnight,IcriedintomypillowsoGrandmotherwouldn’thearme.

Thenextdaywhentheprincipalcalledmeintohisoffice.“Martha,”hesaid,“There’sbeenachangeinpolicythisyearregardingthescholarshipjacket.ThisyeartheBoardhasdecidedtochargefifteendollars,whichstillwon’tcoverthecompletecostofthejacket.Soifyouareunabletopaythemoneyforthejacket,itwillbegiventothenextoneinline.”

StandingwithallthedignityIcouldfind,Isaid,I’llspeaktomygrandfatheraboutit,sir,andletyouknowtomorrow.”Thatday,Icriedsadlyonthewalkhome.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthebeanfield.

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Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.

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BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthebeanfield.Hisbackbentintoanarchandhisfacewasdrownedinsweats.Icalledhim,inachokedvoice.Sensingsomethingwrong,heaskedmewhathappenedwithgreatconcern.Imurmuredtheprincipal’swords,afterwhichGrandpafellsilent,eyesroundingindisbelief.Asurgeofregretgnawingatmyheart,Ireallyhatedtoseemygray-hairedGrandpa’sdisappointment.Timetickingby,heheavedalongsigh,“Mychild,anawardboughtcan’tbecalledanaward.”Inoddedunderstandingly.ButwhoknewhowreluctantandbitterIwas?

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Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.IknewImightnevergetthatjacketwhichrepresentedmyyearsofhardworkandexpectation.However,Itriedtofightbackthetears,withmyheadstillliftedwithdignity.“Mygrandpa…won’tpaythedollars.HesaidifIhadtopayforit,thenitwouldn’tbeascholarshipjacket.”Therewasadeafeningsilence.Theprincipallookedatme,bitinghislip,asifthinking.Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,hedecidedthathewouldmakeanexceptionforme.Icouldhardlybelieveit.Lookingintohiseyes,whichbrimmedwithsmiles,Istoodupandbowedlowtohim.OnlyatthatmomentdidIbelievethatMr.Schmidtandmygrandpawereright:

nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorbought.

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BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthebeanfield.Sensingsomethingwrong,heaskedmewhathappenedwithgreatconcern.Imurmuredtheprincipal’swords,asurgeofregretgnawingatmyheart.Ireallyhatedtoseemygray-hairedGrandpa’sdisappointment.Grandpa’seyesroundedindisbelief.Timetickingby,heheavedalongsigh,“Mychild,anawardboughtcan’tbecalledanaward.”Inoddedunderstandingly.ButwhoknewhowreluctantandbitterIwas?

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Idraggedintotheprincipal’sofficethenextday,sadanddisappointed.Myheadstillliftedwithdignity,Itriedtofightbackthetears,stammering,“Icannot…affordthejacket,sir.”Staringintomyeyes,theprincipalsuddenlygrinned,“Ihavegoodnewsforyou.”Ilookedathiminconfusion.“Theboarddecidedthatanawardcannotbeboughtjustforthesakeofwinners’dignity.”Hiseyesbrimmedwithsmiles.IpinchedmyhandonlytofindIwasnotdreaming.OnlyatthatmomentdidIbelievethatMr.Schmidtandmygrandpawereright:

nevercanawardsbefalsifiedorbought.

【解析】

【分析】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者所在学校在九年级的毕业典礼上有一个传统：

一件漂亮的金绿色夹克（学校的颜色）被授予九年来一直保持最高成绩的学生。

作者从一年级起就一直是个优等生，非常期待能拥有那件夹克。

况且按照作者的家庭条件是买不起的。

作者无意中听到数学老师和历史老师的关于是否把夹克奖励给父亲是校董事会的乔安，作者很失望，第二天校长说今年关于奖励金夹克的政策有了变化。

今年董事会决定收取15美元的费用，作者决定回去与祖父商量一下。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“到家时，我的眼睛又红又肿。

我在豆田里找到了爷爷”可知，第一段可简单地描写爷爷，作者将事情告诉了爷爷，爷爷对作者说买来的奖不能称为奖品以及作者的心情。

②由第二段首句内容“第二天，作者走进校长办公室，心里既难过又失望”可知，第二段可描写作者将爷爷的话转述给了校长，校长沉思了一会，对作者说要为作者破例一次。

作者在那时才相信Schmidt先生和爷爷是对的:

奖励永远不能伪造或购买。

2.续写线索：

与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话——作者的感受——来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话——校长决定为作者破例一次——作者的感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

与爷爷的对话以及爷爷所说的话：

ask/murmur/hate/round/becalled/nod

来到校长办公室以及作者转述爷爷的话：

represent/paythedollars/

校长决定为作者破例一次:

lookedatme/bitehislip/decide/makeanexception/believe

情绪类

失望：

reluctant/bitter/red/swollen

作者的感悟：

right/accurate/correct

【点睛】[高分句型1]Sensingsomethingwrong,heaskedmewhathappenedwithgreatconcern.（现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]Lookingintohiseyes,whichbrimmedwithsmiles,Istoodupandbowedlowtohim（由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

山东师范大学附属中学2021届高三第一次模拟考试

81.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

“Now,parentsandstudentsseparateintotwogroups.Youwillbereunitedattheendofthecampustour.”

Groupsofincomingfreshmenhappilylefttheirparentsuponhearingthisannouncement.Iwaslessthanthrilledaboutstartingcollege,letaloneleavingmymother'ssidetotourthecampuswithotherfreshmen；Ifeltalittleanxious.

Wefollowedtheseniortourguide.TheotherfreshmenchattedandmadecasualintroductionsasIdraggedbehind.HowcouldIhavebelievedIwasreadyforthis？

Afterall,ithadonlybeenafewmonthssinceIleftthehospital.Iwasfeelingbetterforthefirsttimeinyears.Butcollege...？

Mythinkingwasinterruptedbyasweetfemalevoice,"Hi,I'mJennifer.""I'mLauren,"Ireplied."Wheredoyouprefertolive？

Athomeoroncampus？

"shesmiled."I'mnotsure,"Isaid."Youshouldliveoncampus！

Itwillbealotoffun！

"shesaid.BeforeIcouldreply,thetourguideannounceditwastimetocreateourschedulesandselectthecourseswewantedtotake.

WecrowdedintotheStudentActivityCenter.Threeseniorshandedoutthickcoursebulletins（课程公告）andformsthatneededtobefilledout.Allaroundme,thesoundsofturningpapersandwritingsoundedlikethosegivenbyanalarmclock.OthersseemedtobemovingthroughtheprocessquicklybutIhadn'tevenopenedmycoursecatalog（目录）.

"Focus,"Itoldmyself."Justreadthroughthecatalogandfindthecoursesyoulikeandaschedulethatworks."PsychologyAorB,Geology101,English,History,sections1,2,3...Thelistwentonandon.

Ipanickedandalmoststartedtocry.HowwasIsupposedtoknowhowtocompleteit？

Iwasjustrelearninghowtoliveintherealworld,andtheywantedmetomakeaschedule.HowIwishedsomeonecouldhelpme.

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Soon,otherfreshmenwerehandingintheirforms.

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Then,Ifeltawarmhandonmyshoulder.

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Soon,otherfreshmenwerehandingintheirforms.Manyofthemrushedouttomeettheirparents.Icouldn’tbreatheandwasfeelinganxious.Myheadwaspounding.Momentslater,Iwascrying.Andseveralstudentsstartedtostareatme.Oneoftheseniorsinchargewalkedovertomytable.“What’sthematter?

”sheaskedimpatiently.“I...Ican’tdothis!

”Isaid.