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冲刺作文

图表、图片分析型

图表作文的命题形式是根据图片或者图表，要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图表中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。

然后进行分析和评论，并得出合乎逻辑的结论。

图表作文是一种信息的转换。

也就是说，写图表作文时，首先要以题目中的要求为指导，审慎读图，准确把握图表传达的信息，将其扩展成文。

图表作文往往是以说明为主，图表中的数据是为了说明某个问题而提供的，只要问题能阐释清楚，就不必面面俱到地把所有数据都在文章中引用出来。

考生要切忌毫无目的地引用图表中的数据。

引用数据过多的同学往往得分很低。

二、图表作文的段落设计

1.开头段—--说明该图表反映的概况，选择能充分说明主题的典型数据进行概述；

2.中间段—--对数据进行仔细地分析比较，归纳出增减速率，找出产生变化的原因；

3.结尾段—--写出看完图表后的想法或评论，得出自己的结论。

Structure

Fromthegraph（table,chart）,wecanclearlyseetheincrease（decrease）of_______.Itaddedupto（decreased）___________in19____,whileitincreased（decreased,were,was）to_____in19____.Therefore,itcanbepredicatedthat________is（are）tobeontherise（onthedecrease）inthefuture.

Therearechiefly_______reasonsfortheincrease（decline）.Inthefirstplace,owingto______,_______haverealizedtheimportanceof_______.Secondly,withthedevelopmentof（withthegrowthof,withtheincreaseof,withtheimprovementof）,________haveadoptedmoreactiveandeffectivemethods.

Inspiteofwhat’smentionedabove,therearesomeproblems.Thegraphindicatesthat_______was（were）fluctuated（波动）.Hence,thesituationisstillseriousandhowtoimprove________isstillachallengingtask.

图表作文模板

①Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthegraph/table/chart,

greatchangedhavetakenplacein_________①图表显示的情况

Or:

Asisshowninthetable/figure,.

②The__________have/hasskyrocketed/jumpedfrom_____to_____.②描述变化

③Whenitcomestothereasonsforthechanges,differentpeoplegivedifferentexplanations.HereIshalljustgiveafew.③概述原因

④Tobeginwith,.④原因之一

⑤What’smore,.⑤原因之二

⑥Lastbutnotleast,.⑥原因之三

⑦Whileitisdesirablethat___________,therearestillsomeproblemsanddifficultiesfor__________⑦话题转移

⑧Firstly,__________⑧要点一

⑨Inaddition,__________⑨要点二

⑩Inaword,__________⑩总结

ChangesinPeopleDiet

Outline:

statethechangesinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears

givepossiblereasonsforthechanges

drawyourownconclusion

Fromthegraph,wecanclearlyseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakingplaceinpeople’sdietovertheperiodfrom1992to1996.Theconsumptionofgrainisdecreasingyearbyyear,whilethatofsomehighenergyfood,suchasmilkandmeat,isincreasingsteadily.

Therearetwomajorreasons.Inthefirstplace,withtheimprovementinthelivingstandard,peoplecanaffordtobuymuchmoreexpensivefoodwithbetternutrition.Secondly,peoplenowpaymoreattentiontothequalityofit,becausetheyknowitisofgreatbenefittotheirhealthtodietinascientificway.Therefore,theytrytheirbesttoimprovethestructureoftheirfood.

Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeople’slivinglevelhasbeenrisingmarkedlyinthepastfiveyears.Anditcanbeconcludedthattherewillbeamoreprosperousfuturewaitingforus.

图表分析型

（1）Asisshowninthebarchartabove,wecanseethatcollegestudentsarenowspendingmuchmoretimeonthecomputer,fromonehourtofourhoursperweekfrom1990to1995.

（2）Itisself-evidentthatitsharplyincreasestotwentyhoursintheyearof2000.（3）Andstill,thetimethatcollegestudentsspendinusingcomputersisontherise.

（4）Threepossiblereasonscontributetothisphenomenon.（4）Onereasonisthatmostcollegestudentsnowcanaffordapersonalcomputerduetothesharpdeclineinitsprice.（5）Anotherreasonisthattheyfindthecomputerawonderfulthingtohavefunwith.Forinstance,theycanchatthroughQQorplayinggamesonline.（6）What’smore,fromInternet,theycanlearnthingsmuchmorequicklythansimplyfromreadingbookssothattheycansecureagoodjobinthefuture.（7）Alltheseleadtomuchmoretimespentinusingcomputers.

（8）However,inmyopinion,therearesomecomplaintsfrombothteachersandstudents.（9）Foronething,studentscomplainaboutthelessavailabilityofcomputersandslowspeedofthenetwork.（10）Foranother,someteachersworrythatthemuchmoretimespentplayingcomputergamesorsurfingonlinewillleadstudentstoignoretheirstudiesandevendocheatinginsteadofdoingresearchbytheirown.（11）Tosumup,inspiteofproblemsconcerningtheuseofcomputer,computerisstillofmoremeritsthandefects.

ProductionofRadiosandTVSetsinFactoryA

根据左图，写一篇120字的短文。

ProductionofRadiosandTVSetsinFactoryA

Accordingtothegraph,duringtheperiodfrom1980to1989,therewasgradualdeclineintheproductionofradiosinFactoryA.Itfellfrom1,600setspermonthin1980to1,000,setspermonthin1989.Thus,therewasatotalfallof600setspermonthlyoutputduringthetenyears.

    Ontheotherhand,therewasamarkedincreaseintheproductkmofTVsets,Thefactoryproducedonly200setsin1980,buttheoutputroseto1,200setspermonthin1989.Thus.therewasatotalincreaseof1,000setspermonthduringthetenyearsperiod.Thepresentoutputappearsstableat1,200setspermonth.

TravelingAbroad

补充：

1.Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram…

2.Thechart/graph/table/diagramshowsthat…

Asisshownin…;Accordingto…;Ascanbeseenin…

3.Thischart/graph/table/diagramshowsagreat/sharp/sudden/slow/rapid….increase/drop...

4.Tomakeageneralization;onthewhole;ingeneral/generallyspeaking

5.表示增长、上升的词汇

increase,rise,climb,goup,soar,skyrocket，副词：

sharply,remarkably,obviously,significantly,gradually,slowly

6.表示下降、减少的词汇decrease,drop,fall,godown,decline

7.表示持续不变的词汇leveloff;remainsteady/unchanged

8.表示倍数的词汇

double;triplethenumberof/thepercentageof;four/fivetimes

9.表示多少的词汇

alittle/much/alotmore/lessthan…,over…

图表作文框架:

第一段只写三句

第一句：

Asisshowninthegraphabove,wecanseeclearlythatgreatchangeshavetakenplacein…from…to…

第二句：

Thefirst…yearssaw…

第三句：

Thelast…yearswitnessed…

第二段只写四句

第一句：

Whathascausedthisproblem?

Itseemstomethatthereare…reasons.

第二句：

Firstly,…/第三句：

Secondly,…/第四句：

Finally,…

第三段只写四句

第一句：

Howtosolvetheproblemhasbecomeahotissueamongmanypeople.

第二句：

Foronething,…//第三句：

Foranother,…

第四句：

Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullysolvetheproblem.

不同观点作文

第一段一般只写三句

第一句：

Itiswidelybelievedthatbymanypeopleforsometimethat...

第二句：

Onereasontheythinkisthat...

第三句：

Theotherreasontheyholdisthat...

第二段一般只写三句

第一句：

Whileothersarguethat...

第二句：

Theymaintainthat...

第三句：

Theyalsoclaimthat...

第三段写四句

第一句：

Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthat...

第二句：

Ontheonehand,...

第三句：

Ontheotherhand,...

第四句：

Onlyinthiswaycanwe...

　　TheHarmfulnessofSmoking

1. Showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthecartoon;

2. Givereasonswhysmokingisharmful;and

3. Howwecansolvetheproblem.

　ModelComposition

　　Asisshowninthecartoon,whenthemanisenjoyingthecigarette,thesmokebecomesamonster（怪物）whichwilldevourhim.Thispicturetellsusvividlythatsmokingisharmfultopeople.

　　Theharmfulnessofsmokingcanbeillustratedinthreeaspects.Firstofall,smokingdoesharmtopeople’shealth.Itiscommonknowledgethatmanydeadlydiseasesderivefromsmoking.Thebestexampleislungcancer.Inaddition,smokingcostsalotofmoney.Itisestimatedthattensofbillionsofyuanisspentoncigaretteseveryyearinourcountry,whichisahugewaste.Lastbutnottheleastimportant,smokingmaycausefire.DoyoustillrememberthebigfireinNortheasternChinawhichcausedseriousdamagestopeople’slivesandproperties?

　　Sincesmokingdoessomanyharms,everyoneofusshouldtrytodosomethingtoputanendtotheproblem.Thegovernmentshouldmakestricterrulestoprohibitsmokinginpublicplacesandthesmokersshouldgiveupsmoking.

　　TheTearsofABird

 1·Describethecartoonanddeducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepicture;

2·Statetheharmfuleffectsofthephenomenon;

3·Givesuggestionsastohowtosolvetheproblem.

Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthecartoon,abirdissittingonthetopofahugeax,withtearsstreamingfromitseyes.Becauseallthetreesarecutdown,thebirdwillhavenohabitat.Thecartoonconveysthemeaningthatitisurgenttopreservethewoodsforthebirdsandprotecttheenvironmentforhumanbeings.

Thecuttingoftrees,aswellasthedestructionofourenvironment,mayleadtoseveralharmsasfollows.Inthefirstplace,thetreesprovideuswithmanyvitalthingswehumansneed,suchasoxygen,food,shelterandsoon.Theanimals,suchasthebirdinthepicture,alsoneedthetrees.Inthesecondplace,iftreesarecutdown,thentherewillbenothingtoretaintherainwater,thusfloodswillhappenmoreofteninthefuture.Lastbutnotleast,thereisonlyoneearth.Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,thenwewillhavenoplacetolivein.

Sincethisphenomenoncausessomanyharmfuleffects,wehavetocomeupwithsomemeasurestodealwithit.Firstofall,theauthoritiesshouldadoptthepolicyof“sustainabledevelopment”,justasourgovernmenthasbeendoing.What’smore,everycitizenshouldrealizetheseriousnessoftheproblemandmakeconcertedeffortstoprotectourenvironment.

Love

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herunderstandingofit.

Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto

1·showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,

2·giveaspecificexample,and

3·giveyoursuggestionastothe

bestwaytoshowlove.

Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Loveisoftheutmostimportancetothehumanbeings. Asisdescribedinthepicture,“loveisalampwhichisbrighterin