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冲刺作文
图表、图片分析型
图表作文的命题形式是根据图片或者图表,要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图表中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。
然后进行分析和评论,并得出合乎逻辑的结论。
图表作文是一种信息的转换。
也就是说,写图表作文时,首先要以题目中的要求为指导,审慎读图,准确把握图表传达的信息,将其扩展成文。
图表作文往往是以说明为主,图表中的数据是为了说明某个问题而提供的,只要问题能阐释清楚,就不必面面俱到地把所有数据都在文章中引用出来。
考生要切忌毫无目的地引用图表中的数据。
引用数据过多的同学往往得分很低。
二、图表作文的段落设计
1.开头段—--说明该图表反映的概况,选择能充分说明主题的典型数据进行概述;
2.中间段—--对数据进行仔细地分析比较,归纳出增减速率,找出产生变化的原因;
3.结尾段—--写出看完图表后的想法或评论,得出自己的结论。
Structure
Fromthegraph(table,chart),wecanclearlyseetheincrease(decrease)of_______.Itaddedupto(decreased)___________in19____,whileitincreased(decreased,were,was)to_____in19____.Therefore,itcanbepredicatedthat________is(are)tobeontherise(onthedecrease)inthefuture.
Therearechiefly_______reasonsfortheincrease(decline).Inthefirstplace,owingto______,_______haverealizedtheimportanceof_______.Secondly,withthedevelopmentof(withthegrowthof,withtheincreaseof,withtheimprovementof),________haveadoptedmoreactiveandeffectivemethods.
Inspiteofwhat’smentionedabove,therearesomeproblems.Thegraphindicatesthat_______was(were)fluctuated(波动).Hence,thesituationisstillseriousandhowtoimprove________isstillachallengingtask.
图表作文模板
①Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthegraph/table/chart,
greatchangedhavetakenplacein_________①图表显示的情况
Or:
Asisshowninthetable/figure,.
②The__________have/hasskyrocketed/jumpedfrom_____to_____.②描述变化
③Whenitcomestothereasonsforthechanges,differentpeoplegivedifferentexplanations.HereIshalljustgiveafew.③概述原因
④Tobeginwith,.④原因之一
⑤What’smore,.⑤原因之二
⑥Lastbutnotleast,.⑥原因之三
⑦Whileitisdesirablethat___________,therearestillsomeproblemsanddifficultiesfor__________⑦话题转移
⑧Firstly,__________⑧要点一
⑨Inaddition,__________⑨要点二
⑩Inaword,__________⑩总结
ChangesinPeopleDiet
Outline:
statethechangesinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears
givepossiblereasonsforthechanges
drawyourownconclusion
Fromthegraph,wecanclearlyseethatgreatchangeshavebeentakingplaceinpeople’sdietovertheperiodfrom1992to1996.Theconsumptionofgrainisdecreasingyearbyyear,whilethatofsomehighenergyfood,suchasmilkandmeat,isincreasingsteadily.
Therearetwomajorreasons.Inthefirstplace,withtheimprovementinthelivingstandard,peoplecanaffordtobuymuchmoreexpensivefoodwithbetternutrition.Secondly,peoplenowpaymoreattentiontothequalityofit,becausetheyknowitisofgreatbenefittotheirhealthtodietinascientificway.Therefore,theytrytheirbesttoimprovethestructureoftheirfood.
Fromtheabove,wecanseethatpeople’slivinglevelhasbeenrisingmarkedlyinthepastfiveyears.Anditcanbeconcludedthattherewillbeamoreprosperousfuturewaitingforus.
图表分析型
(1)Asisshowninthebarchartabove,wecanseethatcollegestudentsarenowspendingmuchmoretimeonthecomputer,fromonehourtofourhoursperweekfrom1990to1995.
(2)Itisself-evidentthatitsharplyincreasestotwentyhoursintheyearof2000.(3)Andstill,thetimethatcollegestudentsspendinusingcomputersisontherise.
(4)Threepossiblereasonscontributetothisphenomenon.(4)Onereasonisthatmostcollegestudentsnowcanaffordapersonalcomputerduetothesharpdeclineinitsprice.(5)Anotherreasonisthattheyfindthecomputerawonderfulthingtohavefunwith.Forinstance,theycanchatthroughQQorplayinggamesonline.(6)What’smore,fromInternet,theycanlearnthingsmuchmorequicklythansimplyfromreadingbookssothattheycansecureagoodjobinthefuture.(7)Alltheseleadtomuchmoretimespentinusingcomputers.
(8)However,inmyopinion,therearesomecomplaintsfrombothteachersandstudents.(9)Foronething,studentscomplainaboutthelessavailabilityofcomputersandslowspeedofthenetwork.(10)Foranother,someteachersworrythatthemuchmoretimespentplayingcomputergamesorsurfingonlinewillleadstudentstoignoretheirstudiesandevendocheatinginsteadofdoingresearchbytheirown.(11)Tosumup,inspiteofproblemsconcerningtheuseofcomputer,computerisstillofmoremeritsthandefects.
ProductionofRadiosandTVSetsinFactoryA
根据左图,写一篇120字的短文。
ProductionofRadiosandTVSetsinFactoryA
Accordingtothegraph,duringtheperiodfrom1980to1989,therewasgradualdeclineintheproductionofradiosinFactoryA.Itfellfrom1,600setspermonthin1980to1,000,setspermonthin1989.Thus,therewasatotalfallof600setspermonthlyoutputduringthetenyears.
Ontheotherhand,therewasamarkedincreaseintheproductkmofTVsets,Thefactoryproducedonly200setsin1980,buttheoutputroseto1,200setspermonthin1989.Thus.therewasatotalincreaseof1,000setspermonthduringthetenyearsperiod.Thepresentoutputappearsstableat1,200setspermonth.
TravelingAbroad
补充:
1.Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram…
2.Thechart/graph/table/diagramshowsthat…
Asisshownin…;Accordingto…;Ascanbeseenin…
3.Thischart/graph/table/diagramshowsagreat/sharp/sudden/slow/rapid….increase/drop...
4.Tomakeageneralization;onthewhole;ingeneral/generallyspeaking
5.表示增长、上升的词汇
increase,rise,climb,goup,soar,skyrocket,副词:
sharply,remarkably,obviously,significantly,gradually,slowly
6.表示下降、减少的词汇decrease,drop,fall,godown,decline
7.表示持续不变的词汇leveloff;remainsteady/unchanged
8.表示倍数的词汇
double;triplethenumberof/thepercentageof;four/fivetimes
9.表示多少的词汇
alittle/much/alotmore/lessthan…,over…
图表作文框架:
第一段只写三句
第一句:
Asisshowninthegraphabove,wecanseeclearlythatgreatchangeshavetakenplacein…from…to…
第二句:
Thefirst…yearssaw…
第三句:
Thelast…yearswitnessed…
第二段只写四句
第一句:
Whathascausedthisproblem?
Itseemstomethatthereare…reasons.
第二句:
Firstly,…/第三句:
Secondly,…/第四句:
Finally,…
第三段只写四句
第一句:
Howtosolvetheproblemhasbecomeahotissueamongmanypeople.
第二句:
Foronething,…//第三句:
Foranother,…
第四句:
Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullysolvetheproblem.
不同观点作文
第一段一般只写三句
第一句:
Itiswidelybelievedthatbymanypeopleforsometimethat...
第二句:
Onereasontheythinkisthat...
第三句:
Theotherreasontheyholdisthat...
第二段一般只写三句
第一句:
Whileothersarguethat...
第二句:
Theymaintainthat...
第三句:
Theyalsoclaimthat...
第三段写四句
第一句:
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaycometotheconclusionthat...
第二句:
Ontheonehand,...
第三句:
Ontheotherhand,...
第四句:
Onlyinthiswaycanwe...
TheHarmfulnessofSmoking
1. Showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthecartoon;
2. Givereasonswhysmokingisharmful;and
3. Howwecansolvetheproblem.
ModelComposition
Asisshowninthecartoon,whenthemanisenjoyingthecigarette,thesmokebecomesamonster(怪物)whichwilldevourhim.Thispicturetellsusvividlythatsmokingisharmfultopeople.
Theharmfulnessofsmokingcanbeillustratedinthreeaspects.Firstofall,smokingdoesharmtopeople’shealth.Itiscommonknowledgethatmanydeadlydiseasesderivefromsmoking.Thebestexampleislungcancer.Inaddition,smokingcostsalotofmoney.Itisestimatedthattensofbillionsofyuanisspentoncigaretteseveryyearinourcountry,whichisahugewaste.Lastbutnottheleastimportant,smokingmaycausefire.DoyoustillrememberthebigfireinNortheasternChinawhichcausedseriousdamagestopeople’slivesandproperties?
Sincesmokingdoessomanyharms,everyoneofusshouldtrytodosomethingtoputanendtotheproblem.Thegovernmentshouldmakestricterrulestoprohibitsmokinginpublicplacesandthesmokersshouldgiveupsmoking.
TheTearsofABird
1·Describethecartoonanddeducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepicture;
2·Statetheharmfuleffectsofthephenomenon;
3·Givesuggestionsastohowtosolvetheproblem.
Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthecartoon,abirdissittingonthetopofahugeax,withtearsstreamingfromitseyes.Becauseallthetreesarecutdown,thebirdwillhavenohabitat.Thecartoonconveysthemeaningthatitisurgenttopreservethewoodsforthebirdsandprotecttheenvironmentforhumanbeings.
Thecuttingoftrees,aswellasthedestructionofourenvironment,mayleadtoseveralharmsasfollows.Inthefirstplace,thetreesprovideuswithmanyvitalthingswehumansneed,suchasoxygen,food,shelterandsoon.Theanimals,suchasthebirdinthepicture,alsoneedthetrees.Inthesecondplace,iftreesarecutdown,thentherewillbenothingtoretaintherainwater,thusfloodswillhappenmoreofteninthefuture.Lastbutnotleast,thereisonlyoneearth.Iftheenvironmentisdestroyed,thenwewillhavenoplacetolivein.
Sincethisphenomenoncausessomanyharmfuleffects,wehavetocomeupwithsomemeasurestodealwithit.Firstofall,theauthoritiesshouldadoptthepolicyof“sustainabledevelopment”,justasourgovernmenthasbeendoing.What’smore,everycitizenshouldrealizetheseriousnessoftheproblemandmakeconcertedeffortstoprotectourenvironment.
Love
Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herunderstandingofit.
Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothenewspaperto
1·showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,
2·giveaspecificexample,and
3·giveyoursuggestionastothe
bestwaytoshowlove.
Itisgenerallybelievedthatloveisahottopicwhichismosttalkedabout.ThisistruenotonlyinChinabutalsoinothercountries.Loveisoftheutmostimportancetothehumanbeings. Asisdescribedinthepicture,“loveisalampwhichisbrighterin