届高三高三一模写作优质范文汇编与分析.docx

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届高三高三一模写作优质范文汇编与分析

2014-2015学年高三英语一模汇编----写作

One【宝山】

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

目前，在网上购物的人越来越多，有人说在网上购物比在实体店购物优势多，有人说还是在实体店购物好。

请写一篇文章阐明你的观点。

你的文章必须包括：

●简要介绍两种购物方式的不同之处

●你喜欢那种购物方式？

为什么？

参考：

Shoppingonlinevs.shoppinginphysicalstores

Asscientifictechnologiesdevelopedfasterandfaster,ourcommonliveshavechangedmoreandmore,oneofwhichisourshoppingway.

Wehavebeenshoppinginphysicalstores,whereasalesmanmayintroducemanyproductstoyouandgiveyousomeadviceaboutwhichoneisthebestchoice,andyoucantrythoseclothesorshoesinperson,evenchangeanotheroneifyoufinditnotsuitabletoyourself.

However,anewshoppingmethodsprangup---shoppingonline.ThereappearquantitiesofvariousstoresontheInternet.Youjustneedtoclickyourmouse,andthenyoucanseedifferentkindsofcommoditiesinthem,withcolorfulpicturesanddetaileddescriptions.Ifyouarenotclearaboutsomething,youcanaskthecustomerservicestaffforhelp,whousuallyverykindandgladtoansweryouranyquestion.Moreover,youcancomparethesamekindofproductsindifferentstoresatthesametime,whichisabletosaveyourtimeandavoidembarrassment.

Buteverycoinhastwosides.Shoppingonlineisnotexceptional,sotherearesomedisadvantages.First,youcanneverbesurewhethertheproductisexactlywhatyouseeinthepictureorreadinthedescriptions.Whatyoureceivemaybemuchdifferentfromwhatisinyourmind,forinstance,strangecolor,wrongsizeorbadquality.Secondly,theproductsmaybelostintheexpressdelivery.

Frommyperspective,Iprefershoppingonline,becauseIamtoobusytohavetimegoshoppinginphysicalstoresandgoodsonlineareusuallycheaper.ButIalwayschoosetheshopswhichhavegoodreputation.

【答案解析】文中包含题干的两个问题即可。

【教学建议】教授学生按照题干要求列出提纲，然后再写。

P.F.Productions后期制

Two【崇明】

II.GuidedWriting

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

下学期，你们学校将引进一名新的外教，学习针对需要引进什么样的外教，以及如何利用好外教资源向在校师生广泛征求意见。

请你以学生李敏的名义，给负责该项目的黄老师写一封电子邮件，提出你的建议，并陈述理由。

邮件须包含以下内容：

Ø你对引进什么样外教的建议及理由；

Ø你对如何利用好外教资源的建议及理由。

参考范文（四川北-邓珍华）

DearMr.Huang,

I’mastudentofseniorthreeandmynameisLiMin.Knowingthatyouaretakingchargeoftherecruitofaforeignteacherforourschool,I’mnowwritingtoyoutostatesomeofmyopinionsaboutthismatter.

Withregardtothequalitiesoftheforeignteacher,therearetwoaspectsthatweshouldplacegreatimportanceon.Firstofall,beinghumorousandimaginativearenecessaryfortheteacher,whichenabletheclasstobeenjoyableandlively.Foranother,tomaintaintheefficiencyofteachingandlearning,theforeigner’sabilitytospeakChineseisimportant,sinceitiscertainthatsometimesstudentscannotexpressthemselvesinEnglish.

Soastomakefulluseoftheforeignteacherresources,avarietyofoutdooractivities,suchasEnglishEveningandEnglishCorner,canbeheldbytheforeignlanguageteacher,whichprovidesthestudentswithmoreopportunitiestocommunicatewiththeteacherandtoimprovetheiroralEnglish.

Iwillbedelightedifyoucantakemyadviceintoaccount.Thankyou.

SincerelyYours,

LiMin

Three【奉贤】

Direction:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120---150words.Thecompositionmustbebasedontheinformationgivenbelow.

请简要描述下面图片的内容，并谈谈你的看法。

（参考词汇：

雾霾haze,雾霾天气hazeweather）

参考（虹足王灵灵）：

Asisshowninthepicture,aman,coughingheavily,shouted”IalmostchoketodeathandIamnotcapableofbearingthehazyweatheranymore.”Undoubtedly,airpollutionisbecomingincreasinglysevere,whichhasarousedwidepublicconcern.Infact,variousmeasureshavebeentakentopreventthesituationworsening.However,whateffortscanweeachmake?

StudentasIam,IwilldowhatIcan.Firstly,insteadofbeingdriventoschoolasusual,Iwillrideabikeortakeabus.Vehicleexhaustisknowntobeoneofthemainfactorscontributingtothehaze.Secondly,plasticbagsusedfrequentlywilldisappearinmydailylife.Duetotheirdifficultyindegrading,manyindividualshavenoalternativebuttoburnthem.Thesmokereleasedalsogivesrisetothehaze.Thirdly,Iwillcommunicatetheharmofairpollutiontootherstothebestofmyability.Asasayinggoes,greatthingsmaybedonebymasseffort.

Inaword,itistheresponsibilityofeveryonetoprotecttheenvironmentwherewelive.

Four【虹口区】

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你班将召开一次主题班会，探讨高中生在成长过程中遇到的烦恼。

请根据自己实际生活中遇到的学习、交友、代沟、同龄人攀比等现象进行思考，写一篇发言稿。

文章需包括：

1.你在实际生活中遇到的至少两种烦恼及其简要介绍；

2.你应对这些烦恼所采取的举措和建议。

参考（虹足袁春燕）：

Recently,withthephenomenonofchasingcelebritiesbecomingmoreandmorecommoninourclass,wefeltitanecessitytoholdaclassmeetingtotalkaboutthis.Yesterdaywehadone.Everybodywasinvolvedinthediscussionanditreachedaheatedpoint.Let’stakeagoodlookathowstudents’sopinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.

Somestudentsarecrazyaboutcelebritiesforthefollowingreasons.Tobeginwith,theygainquitealotoffunlisteningtomusicorwatchingmovie.Theyregarditasawaytorelaxfromaheavystudyburdenonthem.Musicormoviesfromcelebritiescanbringthemextraordinaryhappiness.What’smore,someworksofcelebritiesareeducational.Theyreallyenjoythemagreatdeal.Inaddition,theyareinclinedtobeauties,afterall,theyareadolescentswhoarefondofwhateverorwhoeverlooksnice.Nevertheless,othersarguethatit’sbadforthegeneraldevelopmentofthestudentswhoareinadolescence.AsfarasI’mconcerned,I’mforthelatterone.Adolescenceisatimeforthemtobuildtheircharacter,fallintothegoodhabitandpreparefortheirfuture.Theyshouldspendtoomuchtimenotchasingorimitatingothers,butlearningknowledgesothattheycanhaveabrightfuture.Besides,somecelebritiesaren’twhattheyappeartobe,whichinsomeway,mayleadfansofcelebritiestothewrongdirectionoflife.

Takingtheaboveintoconsideration,Idobelievewe’dbetteroffchasingcelebrities.

Five【黄浦区】

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

你叫Jenny，你的网友Peter（高一学生）即将面临期末考试，近日，他就是否要请家教来帮他复习迎考发邮件像你求教。

请给Peter回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容：

1.结合你自身的学习经历就是否要请家教表达你的观点及理由；

2.就复习迎考给出2条主要建议。

参考（虹足曹小月）：

Hearingthatyou'rewonderingwhetheryoushouldinviteatutortohelpyouprepareforthecomingfinalexamination,I'mshockedandI'llgiveyouanexact'No'.

Atutorcostshigh,usually150yuanormoreperhour,whichyoumaynotbeabletoafford.Besides,havingstudiedthatdetailedinformationoftutorclassesfrommyclassmates,Ifindthatmostoftheinformationissimilartothatofschool's,whichisevenwithlittleornoextendedmaterials,soit'sabsolutelynouseifyoulistentotheteacherswithfullattentionintheschoolandreviewwhatisonyournotebookcarefullyafterclass.What'smore,atutormaymakeyoudependfullyonhimandloseyourself-motivationonstudy,whichisexactlythetruthofstudy.Withoutit,youmayneverlearnbetter.Andthat'swhyIsaythere'snoneedforyouinvitingahometutor.

Whenitcomestopreparingfortheexam,I'dliketogiveyoutwosuggestions.First,reviewthepointswhichyou'repoorat.Youwillachievetwicetheresultwithhalftheeffortifreviewingthenotesaccompaniedwithseveralparticularexercises.Second,checkallthenotesandmakesurethatyou'vecapturedallthedetails.

TryhardandIbelieveyoucanachieveagoodscoreintheexam.

Six【嘉定】

Directions:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．

上周三下午你们班有五位同学不请假离校去看一位明星的演唱会，回来后还向同学炫耀。

昨天，你们班围绕“追星族“现象进行了一次讨论，同学们就“追星”的现象、原因等展开了讨论。

请就此用英文写一篇短文。

短文必须包括：

1、讨论会情况的描述。

2、你对“追星族”现象的看法。

参考词汇：

追星chasecelebrities

追星族fansofcelebrities

参考范文（四川北-张鸿燕）

Lastweekourclasshadadiscussionaroundthephenomenonthatanincreasingnumberoffanscrazilychasetheiridols.Wemadeitourtopicthatwhythesepeople,especiallyyoungstudentschasethesecelebrities.

　　Whenitcomestothesymptomsofworshippingastar,themainfactorI’dliketomentionisimitation.Withablindlovefortheiridols,teenagersfirmlybelievethattheirchoicesarethebestthingsinlife.Asaresult,thestars’clothes,hairstylesandhobbiesarecloselyobservedorfollowed,aswellastheirbehaviorsinpublic,though,tosomeextent,improperorevenridiculoussometimes.

　　However,asisuniversallyknowntousall,idolscanbefoundeverywherebutthereistheonlyego-self.Whileyou’reimitatingtobesomeoneelse,whereareyouinthisworld?

Noonecantaketheplaceofyouunlessyougiveitupyourself.Additionally,imitationmeansmorethanabandoningyourowngoals.Sinceyou’rewanderingalongyourliferoadaimlessly,it’ssopredictableafailurethatyoucanneitherenjoyyouridol’srisetofame,norgainfromyourmessyschoolwork.Eventually,youhavetobitethebulletyourself.

　　AsfarasI’mconcerned,ourfutureshouldbemoredependentonknowledgeratherthanstar-worshipping.Scientistsaretheoneswhohelppushforwardthecourseofhistory.It’srequiredforustoconcentrateonstudyandcontributeasmuchaswecantosociety.

Tosumup,Iholdtheviewthatweshouldputmoreattentiontoourownliferatherthanchasingbehindothers.Trytomakethebestofyourlife.

Seven【金山】

Directions:

 WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

高考改革后的首次上海春考，允许应届生参加，这是对多元录取方式的一次新探索。

作为一名高三应届生，你如何看待此次春考？

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1.简述你对此次春考的