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凑字的范文

如果分论点只能想起2个，想不起第三个分论点时，可以有两种方法：

1.主体段落用对比（contrast）可以使段落长一些，有可能4段就凑够400字。

2.第四段主体段落使用驳斥（rebutting）反方观点的技巧，可以凑够5段。

看以下几篇范文，总结一下：

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AsamajorofEnglishlanguageandliterature,youmayhavedevelopedsomeinterestinliterature,suchasreadingmovies.Atthesametime,movies,whicharebasedonliteraryworks,arealsoverypopularamongstudents.Supposeyoucanchoosetoreadthenovelorwatchthemovieaboutastoryyouhaveneverheardof,whichonedoyouprefer.Writeanarticleofabout400wordstoexplainyourreasons.Youshouldsupplyatitleforyourarticle.

ReadingaNovelorWatchingaMovie

Readingnovelsusedtobeamajorentertainmentforpeopleinthe19thcenturyandbefore.Butsincetheinventionoffilmsattheendofthe19thcentury,peoplehavegraduallyabandonedthenovelsformoviestoenjoynewstories.Nowadaysnovelreadersareonthedecline.However,ifIweretomakeachoicebetweenreadinganovelandwatchingamovieforastoryIhaveneverheardof,Iwouldstillprefertheformer.

主体段落写作技巧：

对比（contrast）

看Movie的弊端与读novel优势的对比

ThefirstreasontoaccountformypreferenceofthenovelisthatIcangettherealstory.Asweknow,amovieusuallylastsforabouttwohours,andinordertofinishthestoryinsuchatimelimit,thedirectorhastoadaptit,tellingonlytheimportantpartandleavingoutmuchthathethinksastrivial.Sowhatyouwatchinamovieisinfactapartialstory.Butifyoureadanovel,youcangeteverywords,andthiscanpromiseamorecompleteunderstandingofthestory.Besides,amovieisthedirector’sversionofthestory,becausethedirectorwillcolorthestorywithhisownunderstanding,andsometimes,theremaybeevenadaptationordistortion.InmyEnglishliteratureclass,weusedtocomparethemovieofAPassagetoIndiawiththenovel,andfoundasmanyastwenty-sixchanges;someofthemarecleardistortionsbythedirector.

ThesecondreasonisthatIcangetmoreenjoymentfromreadinganovel.Whenwatchingamovie,thestorycomesintheformofrealpicturesandsounds.Althoughitisconcrete,itisfixedandallowsnomoreinterpretation.Butwhenreadinganovel,whatIgetislanguage,whichIcaneasilyturnintovariedmentalimages,andthusappreciateittoahigherdegree.Forexample,whenthestorydescribesabeautifulscene,Icandrawitinmymindbymanydifferentways,andeachmentalpicturecangivemeadifferentenjoyment.Butinmovies,thereisonlyoneversion,sothepleasureisdefinitelydecreased.

Anotherequallyessentialreasonisthatreadingnovelscanhelpmewithmylanguagestudy.Althoughwatchingmoviescanimprovemylisteningability,readingnovelscanprovidemewithmorecomprehensivelanguagetraining.Forexample,Icanlearnmorenewwords,andnewsentencepatterns.Icanlearnnewwaystotryinmywriting.Besides,readingnovelstakesmuchmoretimethanwatchingamovie,andeveiftheinformationinputisthesame,alongerprocesscandefinitelyhelpmemore.

Tosummarize,IpreferreadinganoveltowatchingamoviebecauseIcangetamorerealstory,moreenjoyment,andmorelanguagepractice.ThesebenefitscanbeveryimportantforusEnglishmajors.Isuggestteachersmakingabetterbooklistforstudentsinthefuture,tocultivateinthemgoodreadinghabitssothattheycangetmorefromtheirfour-yearstayoncampus.（501words）

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NowInternethasalmostbecomethesymbolofinformationage.Somethinkthatitisverygreatinventionbecausebyit,theycandomanythingsthatwereimpossiblebefore.ButsomeviewInternetwithmuchdisapprovalbecauseitdistractspeople’sattentionratherthanhelppeopledothingsbetter.WhatisyouropinionabouttheinfluenceofInternetonthemodernsociety?

Writeanessayofabout400wordsonthefollowingtopic:

InternetandtheModernSociety

RecentlytheinfluenceofInternethasattractedmuchpublicattention.Peopleworryaboutthetimewastedonit,thedamagecausedbyvirusspreadonit,andmostofall,someviolentcrimescommittedduetotheviolentgamesplayedonit.Alltheseconcernsmaybereasonable.Butifwetakeabroaderperspective,wemayfindthatInternethashadmanypositiveimpactsonthemodernsociety.

主体段落写作技巧：

对比（contrast）

Internet出现之前与出现之后的对比

Firstofall,Internethasmadetheaccesstoinformationmoreconvenient.Inthepast,peoplecouldgetinformationtheywantedthroughonlylimitedchannels,suchasnewspaper,radio,andtelevision.Thismeansthatonlyacertainamountofpeoplecouldgettheinformationatacertaintimeandinacertainplace.ButnowwiththehelpofInternet,peoplecangetinformationnomatterwhentheywant.Asaresearcherhaspointedout,informationexplosionmeansthatpeopleliveintheoceanofinformation,andInternethasbeenessentialtomakethattrue.

Besides,Internethasalsomadecommunicationmoreconvenient.Sociologistsagreethatcommunicationisvitaltomaintainharmonioushumanrelation,butthecommunicationwasratherinconvenientinthepastdespitethecontinuousimprovementoftechnology.Lettershavebeensoslowastobenicknamed“snailmail”;telegraphandtelephonemaybequicker,buttheyhavebeenverycostly.ButnowmanynewcommunicationtoolsdevelopedonthebasisoftheInternet,suchase-mail,msnandQQ,havemadetalkingtoapersonextremelyquick,convenient,andvirtuallyfreeofcharge.Thiswillundoubtedlyimprovethehumanrelationinthemodernworld.

Themostimportantimpact,however,isthatInternethasmadesocialinteractionmoreconvenient.BeforetheInternetera,varioussocialinstituteshadonlylimitedoptionstochoosefromiftheywantedtoreachthepublic,andnaturallytheresultwasusuallyunsatisfactory.ButnowintheInternetera,alltheseinstitutescansetuptheirownwebsites,whichcannotonlyprovidethepublicwithinformationbutalsocollectreactionfromthepublic.Forexample,thegovernmentcancollectpeople’sopinionaboutacertainprojectthroughtheInternet,producerscanpromoteproductsthroughInternet,anduniversitiescanclarifyadmissionpoliciesthroughInternet.TheresultisthatInternetcanhelptobringaboutamoreopen,fairandinteractivesociety.

Insummary,moreconvenientsocialinteraction,personalcommunicationandaccesstoinformationarethethreemajorchangestheInternethasmadeinthemodernsociety.AlthoughtheredoexistsomeproblemswiththeInternet,thesepositiveinfluencescertainlyaremoreimportant.Whatweshoulddoistofindmeasurestosolvetheproblemsratherthanjusttalkaboutthem.Justastheproverbgoes,weshouldnotstopeatingforfeatofbeingchoked.（457words）

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Moreandmorestudentsarerentingflatstoliveawayfromcampus,andsomeofthemarestudentlovers.Somestudentsthinkthisisunacceptable,butothersfinditattractive.Whatisyouropiniononstudentloverslivingtogether?

Writeanarticleofabout400wordstoexpressyouropinion.Youshouldsupplyatitleforyourarticle.

OnStudentLovers’LivingTogether

Accordingtoofficialstatistics,thenumberofcollegestudentloverslivingtogetheroffcampusinBeijinghasincreasedbyfourtimesbetween1997and2001.ThisisundeniablytrueofmanyotherplacesinChina.Althoughmanystudentsdonotstronglyobjecttoit,Idonotthinkitisadvisableforcollegestudentloverstolivetogetherawayfromcampus.

主体段落每段都有驳斥，如果难，可以先不看。

Someloverssaythatlivingtogethercanhelpthemstudybetter,foritcanhelpthemgetridoftheinterferenceofotherstudents.Thisisactuallynottrue.Whenlivingawayfromcampus,theloverswillalwaysthinkofeachotherratherthantheteachers’assignment,andotherunavoidablefamilychoressuchaslookingandwashingwillalsotakemuchtimeawaythatmighthavebeenspentonstudy.Besides,manycoursesnowrequiregroupworkorcooperation.Iftheystayawayfromotherclassmates,howcantheystudythesecourseswell?

Someloverssaythatlivingtogethercanrelievetheirlonelinessandpressure,butisnotreallythebestchoice.Ononehand,therealreasonfortheirlonelinessisthattheyarenotfocusingtheirmindonstudy.Study,themostimportanttaskforuniversitystudents,canprovetobefascinatingifyoureallyfocusonit.Ontheotherhand,eveniftheirlonelinessisreal,therearemanybetterwaystodealwithyit.Forinstance,theycanfindfriendstotakepartinsportsorotherentertainingactivities.Bystayingawayfromotherclassmates,livingtogethercanbesourceofratherthansolutiontoloneliness.

Otherloversarguethattheymeantogetmarriedaftergraduation,andthisexperiencecanhelpthemtesteachothertoseeiftheyaresuitableformarriedlife.Butthismentalitydoesnotholdwater.Thetwoloversmayreallyloveeachother,butlivingtogethercanactuallyspoilagoodrelationship,becauseitentersintoweaknessratherthanstrength,doubtratherthanconviction.Afollow-upstudyshowsthatfewcoupleslivingtogetherreallyendinmarriage.

Tosummarize,thosestudentloverscannotfindenoughreasonstojustifytheirchoice.Whattheycanofferallrepresentself-deceptionormisconception.Althoughuniversitiesarenotallowedtoforbidstudentstoliveoffcampus,theycanstillfindmoreeffectivewaystoconvincethislostgroupofthedisadvantages,andimproveteachingandafter-classactivitiestoattractthembacktocampus.（401words）

9.

   ShouldUniversitiesChargeHighTuitionFees?

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Asachildfromanaveragefarmer’sfamily,IstillrememberwhatamixedfeelingIhadatthemomentofreceivingmyadmissiontouniversity.Iwasecstaticaboutbeingacceptedbymyidealuniversityafter12year’shardwork,butsoonmyheartsankwhenIsawtherequiredt