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高中组写作试题

希望之星写作培训材料

一．考试题型范围

议论文在规定时间内完成不少于150字的shortessay，要求内容贴切、结构合理、逻辑严谨、表达准确、语句流畅。

二．应试技巧

∙审题。

审题是做到切题的第一步。

所谓审题就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想、主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。

∙进行构思，列出简单的提纲，打造文章之骨架：

审好题、立好意后，就要写提纲，打造文章的骨架。

文章布局要做好几件事：

安排好层次段落，铺设好过渡，处理好开头和结尾。

∙扩展成文：

根据字数多少扩展成篇。

扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。

展开的方式包括：

顺序法、举例法、比较法、对比法、说明法、因果法、推导法、归纳法和下定义等。

可以根据需要任选一种或几种方式。

在这一步骤中还需注意三方面问题：

∙确保提纲中段落结构的思路与各段主题句的一致性。

只有这样，才能保证所写段落不偏题、不跑题。

∙要综合考虑各个段落的内容安排，避免段落内容的交叉。

∙用好连接词，注意段落间、句子间的连贯性。

要做到所写文章层次分明，思路清晰，文字连贯，就需要在句与句之间、段与段之间架起一座座桥梁，而连接词起的正是桥梁作用。

在扩展的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考：

1.在整篇文章中，避免只是用一两个句式或重复用同一词语。

英语中存在着极为丰富的同义词，准确地使用同义词可以给读者清新的感觉。

同时要灵活运用各种句式，如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等，从而增加文章的可读性。

2.使用不同长度的句子。

如果一个意思用一句话写不清楚的话，通过分句和合句或用两句、三句来表达，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

3.改变句子的开头方式，不要总是以主、谓、宾、状的次序。

可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。

4.学会使用过渡词。

递进furthermore，moreover，besides，inaddition，then，etc；转折however，but，nevertheless，afterwards，etc；总结finally，atlast，inbrief，toconclude，etc；强调really，indeed，certainly，surely，abovea11，etc；对比inthesameway，justas，ontheotherhand，etc。

5.确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。

使用人称时人物不能张冠李戴或指代不明。

时态要量保持一致。

☆检查修改：

要检查复核，不要写完了事。

要留时间通读全文，修改可能出现的错误。

检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅。

检验的标准主要是句子是否通畅，该用连词的地方用了没有，所用的连词是否合适，是否有语法错误，主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯，是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误等，还有就是注意卷面整洁。

可归纳为：

中心突出，主题明确；层次清楚，条理清晰；表达力强，传情达意；语句通顺，句型多变；过渡自然，衔接紧凑；标点正确，大小无误；字迹清楚，卷面整洁。

三．考试要点记忆

1.必备连词

●因果

1.as

2.since

3.dueto

4.owingto

5.hence

6.thus

7.therefore

8.asaconsequence

9.asaresult

10.consequently

11.thereby

●举例

1.take…forexample

2.forinstance

3.suchas

4.Thispointisbestillustratedwiththeexampleof…

5.Thispointcanbeconfirmedbytheexampleof…

6.consider…forexample

7.…isacaseinpoint

●对比

1.while

2.whilst

3.whereas

4.by/incontrast

●让步

1.despite

2.inspiteof

3.notwithstanding

4.nonetheless

5.eventhough

6.evenif

7.albeit

●假设

1.providedthat

2.if

●修饰

定语从句：

that,who,which,why

2.套用句型

优点

1.offerasenseofjobsatisfactionandsecurity

2.layasolidfoundationfor

3.reducedownexpenditure

4.increasejobneeds

5.meetpersonalizedneeds

6.promotetalentintroductionandexchange

7.keepskillfreshandup-to-date

8.pavethewayforfuturedevelopment

9.fosterasenseofcompetitionandcooperation

10.promotehumanresourcedevelopment

11.cultivatethespiritofteamworking

12.masterinterpersonalskill

13.widenone’sknowledge

14.enrichone’ssocialandlifeexperience

15.enlargeone’sview

16.realizethevalueoflife

17.masterdifficulties

18.graspgoodcommunicationskill

19.removemisunderstandinganddiscrimination

20.raisethestandardofliving

21.keepbalancebetweenworkandfamily

22.improveculturalintegrationandglobalization

23.enrichpeople’sspirituallife

24.promotesocialskillandcompetence

25.cultivateastrongsenseofresponsibilities

26.bringjoyandcomfortto

27.relievethepressureof

28.maintainthecommunitystability

29.makefulluseof

30.satisfypeople’sneed

31.promotethedevelopmentofrelativeindustries

32.stimulatedomesticneeds

33.impeleconomicdevelopment

34.enhancemutualunderstanding

35.boostlocaldevelopment

36.promotecultureexchangeandcooperation

37.enrichone’sexperienceoflife

38.strengthenthetieswithoutsideworld

39.fosteraclimateofpeaceandprosperity

40.stimulateourfeelingsoftogetherness/teamworking

缺点

1.putsb/sthatrisk/indanger

2.beaserioussetbackforthecareerdevelopment

3.belackofasenseofjobsecurity

4.distractsbfromdoing

5.impose/putaheavystrainon

6.beexaggeratedandcheating

7.betheinvasionofprivacy

8.violaterightsoffreespeech

9.endangersocialstabilityandsafety

10.restrainsbfromdoingsth

11.arouseresistanceinpublic

12.beveryorthodoxinone’sbehavior

13.belackofasenseofjobsecurity

14.goastray

15.underminelocalculture

16.jeopardizethesafetyandstabilityofsociety

17.set/presentabadexampleto

18.leadtotheextinctionofsomespecies

19.resultinshortageofenergyandnaturalresources

20.beirreversibledamage

21.fataldiseases

22.bringdisgraceonsb

23.sufferheavylosses

24.easilycausestress-relatedillness

25.lackinfrastructures

26.breaktheecologicalbalance

27.leadtotheextravagantwasteofpublicfunds

28.makesthindisorders/ingreatchaos

29.bedetachedfrom

30.beharmfultoyourphysicalandmentalhealth

31.leadtothedegradationofsocialatmosphere

32.further/widenthegapbetweentherichandthepoor

33.bethedryingupofourlimitednaturalresourcesanddeteriorationoftheenvironment

34.contaminateenvironment

35.generateelectromagneticradiation

36.bearootofallevil

37.beeasilytakeninby

38.aggravatethetrafficjamsandworsenthecrowdedness

39.willpayahighpriceforthisnegativedevelopmentof

40.bringabouttheriskssuchascomputervirus,nuclearleakage,biologicalweapons,globalwarning,exhaustionofnaturalresourcesandextinctionofmanyplantandanimalspecies

SAMPLES

●ShouldOldPeopleLivingwithTheirchildren?

Oneofthetopicsinourdailylifeiswhetherornottheolderpeopleshouldlivewiththeiradultchildren.Myanswertothequestionisthatitisbetterforthemnotto.

Tobeginwith,adultchildren,liketheirparents,loveindependenceandfreedom,buttheirparentsmaystilltakethemaschildren.Thesituationwillbeworsewhentheadultchildrenaremarried.Iftherelationshipbetweenthechildrenandfileparentsisnotharmonious,thesonsordaughtersoftheparentswillbeinadifficultposition.Secondly,peopleofdifferentageshavedifferentwaysoflife.Iftheylivetogether,theoldmayfeelthattheyarealwaysdisturbedandtheyoungmayfeelthattheyareoftenrestricted.

 Inshort,iftheparentsandtheiradultchildrendonotlivetogether,boththeoldandtheyoungcanenjoycompleteindependenceandfreedom.Livingseparatelydoesnotmeanseparationofrelations.Theparentsandtheirchildrencanstilloftenvisitandhelpeachotheriftheystayinthesameneighborhood.

●WhatIsYourOpiniononChildren’sPocketMoney?

Nowadays,itisacommonplacethatchildrenownstartleamountofpocketmoney.Thesenewmoneybagsneverearnedonedollarbuthadgloriousconsumptivepointofview.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshoulddecreasetheirpocketmoney.Thereasonscanbelistedasfollowing.

First,moneyproducesnegativeeffectonchildren.AsIcansee,therearefewchildrencouldmakeacorrectdecisiononpurchasing,especiallyasthesumofthemoneyisaffluent.Theyalwaysuseitinsomeharmfulways,suchastryingtodrinkandsmoke.Itisdangerbothontheirphysicalandmentalaspects.

Second,parentsshouldchangetheirwaytoexpresstheirlove.InChina,givingalittlemoneytochildrenisatraditionalwaytoshowtheloveoftheadult.Withtheincreasingamountofmoneythathasbeengiven,somechildrenbecomeamoneybagduringonenight.Inthisreason,changingthewaytoexpressourfeelingisnecessary.Weshouldreducechildren’smoneyaswellasthebadinfluencefrommoney.

Atlastbutnotleast,schoolsandoursocietywouldofferthekidsanopportunitytoearnmoneybytheirlabor.Theproverbgoes:

nopaynogain.Thejuniormoneybagscannotimagethedifficultiestoearnmoneyiftheynevertry.

Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecometotheconclusionthatwecannotignorethegraduallyincreasingpocketmoneyofchildren,becausemoneywouldbring perniciousimplicationonchildren.

●ComputersAreGoodorNot?

Withthedevelopmentofcomputer-technology,computersarebecomingmoreandmorepopularwithpeopleallovertheworld.Thefrequencyofusingcomputerhasrisenyearbyyear.Theadvantagestakenoverbycomputerscanbeseeneverywhere.

Duetothecomprehensiveapplicationsofthecomputer,ithasbeengraduallytakingplaceofhumanbeingsinsomeareas,suchaspeoplecanusecomputerstocompose,topurchasegoods,andtoholdmeetings.What'smore,computercangreatlyenhancepeople'sworkingefficiency.

However,everythinghasitstwoaspects.Computeralsohassomedisadvantages.Takesomeexamples.Sincecomputergamesnowhavebeenmoreprevalentamongstudents,theyalmostspendmorethan6hoursforentertainmentoncomputer,andnotstudyanymore.Next,manypeoplenowliketocommunicatewiththeirfriendsonline,andtheymeetlessfrequentthaneverbefore.Asaresult,thelackofthelanguagespeakingleadstotheirexpressionbarriers.

Inshort,weshouldmakethebestuseofitsgoodaspecttogetfurthermoreimprovement.

●DoYouAgreetoBuildALargeFactoryNearYourNeighborhood?

Therecentannouncementthatacompanywishestobuildalargefactorynearourcommunityarousesdifferentreactionsfromtheresidents.

Buildingsuchafactorywillbringsomebenefitstothecommunity.Themostobviousadvantagewillbetheincreaseinjobs.Anequallywelcomebenefitwillbethemoneythatthosenewemployeeswillspendforgoodsandservicesinourshopsandstores.Further,theproductsthecompanymanufactureswillimproveourlives.

However,therearesomedisadvantagesinsittingthefactoryhere.Duringitsconstructiontherewillbealotofnoiseandinconveniencetonearbyresidents.Thenewplantwillproducewasteproductsandpolluteswhichmayharmtheenvironmentandthreatenourhealth.

Afterweighingtheadvantagesanddisadvantages,Isupportthedecisiontosetupthefactoryhere.Ibelieveifwerealizethedisadvantagesbeforetheconstructionbegins,wecantakeactiontominimizethem.

●HowtoKeepHealth?

Healthisfarmoreimportantthanwealthandwisdom.Goodhealthenablesustoenjoyourlifeand