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1:
是否长短句交叉;
2、是否会使用插入语;
3、用词是否多样,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
1.适当用被动替换主动,这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说:
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的替换太宽泛的。
(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如,applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
Eg:
ComputerandI
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型,表达“与…一致”的意思,替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterinto
Current(currently)替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型,说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
Ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides
Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处,首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型,还有however作为插入语,functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging替换appearing(fading替换disappearing)
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay,do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象,merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)
Facet替换aspect
以下是30个最经典的替换词
1.individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)
2:
positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising
(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语,可以有belessimpressive替换
Eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many,ifnotmost)替换many.
注:
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,
holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,
itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think
(因为是书面语,所以要加that)
7:
affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits)
10:
formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11:
Increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词,副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
18.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
23.desire替换want.
24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27.interaction替换communication
28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
四六级作文开头句型介绍:
1-1对立法:
先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1].Whenaskedabout.....,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.......ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.
[2].Whenitcomesto....,somepeoplebielivethat.......Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguements/statements,but(Itendtotheprofer/latter...)
[3].Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhether.....
1-2现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题,然后评论.
e.g
[1].Recentlytheriseinproblemof/(phenomenonof)...hascause/arousedpublic/popular/wide/worldwideconcern.
[2].Recentlytheissueoftheproblemof/thephenomenonof...
hasbeenbroughtintofocus.(hasbeenbrouthtopublicattention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Socialinequality...isyetanotherofthenewandbittertruthwehavetolearntofacenow/constantly.
1-3观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
e.g:
[1].Neverhistoryhasthechangeof..beenasevidentas...
Nowhereintheworld/Chinahastheissue/ideaof..bennmorevisible/popularthan...
[2].Nowpeopleingrowing/significantnumbersarebeginnig/comingtorealize/accept/(beaware)that...
[3].Nowthereisagrowingawareness/recognationotthenecessityto......
Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof......
[4].Perhapsitistimetohaveafreshlookattheattitude/ideathat.......
1-4引用法-----先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法,来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
e.g:
[1]."Knowledgeispower."suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.
"Educationisnotcompletewithgradulation."SuchistheopnionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopnion.
[2]."........."Howoftenwehearsuchstatements/wordslikethoses/this.
Inourowndaysweareusedtohearingsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis"......".
1-5比较法------通过对过去,现在两种不同的倾向,观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点.
e.g:
[1].Foryears,...hadbeenviewedas...Butpeoplearetakingafreshlooknow.Withthegrowing...,people........
[2].Peopleusedtothinkthat...(Inthepast,....)Butpeoplenowsharethisnew.
1-6故事法----先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣,引出文章的主题.
e.g:
[1].Oncein(anewspaper),Ireadof/learnt....Thephenemenonof...hasarousedpublicconcern.
[2].Ihaveafriendwho...Shouldhe....?
Suchadilemmaweareoftenconfrontwithinourdailylife.
[3].Onceuponatime,therelivedamanwho...Thisstorymaybe(unbelievable),butitstillhasarealisticsignificancenow.
1-8问题法-----先用讨论或解答的设问,引出自己观点,适用于有争议性的话题.
e.g:
Should/What......?
Optionsof...varygreatly,some...,others...Butinmyopinion,.......
一the+est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)
例句:
HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、Nothingis+erthanto+V
Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+V
例句:
Nothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.
(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。
)
例句:
Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...(不可否认的...)
例句:
Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句:
Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~(毫无疑问的...)
例句:
Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、Anadvantage