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10个加分造句绝招
10个加分造句绝招
造句的秘密
"The photo of Xiaoli's was she gave to me, what's more, I like it very much, so it is mine now."
这句话出了什么问题？
修改一：
The photo of Xiaoli was given to me by herself, so it's mine now.What's more, I like it very much.
修改二：
The photo of Xiaoli was given to me by herself. What's more, I do like it very much, so I will keep it.
好句子两大注意事项：
（1）语法
（2）逻辑
十大加分造句绝招
01
物称主语（宾语做主语）
人称主语：
I love English.
物称主语：
English is loved by me.（被动语态）
被动语态是低级的、简单粗暴的物称主语技巧，有没有更好的选择呢？
问题：
造一个句子，满足以下三点要求：
1、表达“我爱英语”的意思；
2、用English做主语；
3、不用被动语态；
答案：
English attracts/ fascinates/ interests me a lot.（换谓语动词）
问题：
什么叫物称主语？
答：
避免用I \ we做主语!
体现客观性。
在情景作文中常用的句子：
A heated discussion was held...
02
非谓语动词；
问题：
神马时候想到用非谓语动词？
答：
一个句子中用到多个动词时，要用非谓语动词！
关于非谓语动词的三个秘密：
1
当汉语中用“动词+的”修饰名词时，英语中用定语从句或非谓语动词；（非谓做定语）
2
一个人做两件事，用“分词短语”；两个人分别做两件事，用“独立主格结构”；（非谓做状语）
3
主动用ing，被动用ed，要做去做用to do。
【例1】非谓语动词|做定语|修饰名词
1.一个骑自行车的人 a man （riding a bike）
2.一本打开的书 an unfolded book
3.一个拿着一本书的老人 an old man （taking a book）
4.一个用笔记本电脑的花姑娘 a young lady （using a laptop）
【例2】分词做状语
这棵树正在朝着太阳生长，它非常的勇敢和乐观。
Growing toward the sun, the tree is brave and optimistic.
他是做这件事的合适人选。
He is the proper person to do the job.
他哭着走了进来。
Crying, he walked in.
他被打得鼻青脸肿的走了进来。
Beaten, he walked in.
他走了进来，被打得鼻青脸肿。
He walked in, beaten.
【例3】独立主格结构
地震发生的时候，老<。
）#）））≦哭了。
The earthquake happening, Oldfish cried.
Tom被打惨了，老<。
）#）））≦哭了。
Tom beaten badly, Oldfish cried.
【思考】下面这句话对吗？
Walking in the street, a brick fell on his head. （X）
答：
这句话是错误的，犯了“悬垂分词”的错误！
Tip:
独立主格结构=“分词短语”+ 独立的逻辑主语；
练练手
【练习1】太阳当空照，花儿对我笑，我背上书包上学校。
（独立主格结构、分词做状语）
The sun shining in the sky, the flowers smiling to me, I, carrying my bag, go to school.
【练习2】看完这个句子，我们再看另外一个句子。
答案1：
Finishing this sentence, let's take a look at another one.（分词做状语）
答案2：
This sentence finished, let's take a look at another one.（物称主语、独立主格结构）
【练习３】第一个句子够牛逼了，第二个句子就更好了。
The first sentence being good enough, the second one is even better.（独立主格结构）
【练习4】学完这个方法之后，同学们造的句子会非常高级,得高分很容易。
（独立主格、分词做定语）
（The method mastered）, the sentences （made by the students） would be splendid and a high grade would be easily acquired.
Tip1:
事实上,非谓语从句可以替换所有的“从句”：
用从句：
The man （who is driving a car is my uncle） .
用非谓：
The man driving a car is my uncle.
用从句：
When he heard the news, he cried.
用非谓：
Hearing the news, he cried.·
或：
The news coming, tears filled his eyes.【物称主语】
【思考】简单句、复合句、非谓语动词三者有神马关系？
Tip2:
用非谓语动词来“造词”：
“动宾构词法”
Climb a mountain=
I love mountain-climbing.（事）
I am a mountain-climber.（人）
I am a mountain-climbing fan.
（ 形容词 ）
Drive a car--------------
Car-driving
Car-driver
Car-driving rules
【思考】圆规怎么说？
？
？
A tool which can be used to draw a circle.（Ｘ）
Draw a circle
Circle-drawing
Circle-drawer
a circle-drawing tool
【拓展练习】利用《新概念英语（第二册）》学习非谓语动词
请自己把下面的5组中文句子翻译成英文，并跟下面的“原句”和“升级”对比，先自己翻译，不要看答案。
拓展题
1、中文：
一青年男子与一青年女子坐在我的身后，
大声地说着话。
原文：
Ayoungmanandayoungwomanweresittingbehindme.
Theyweretalkingloudly.
升级：
Ayoungmanandayoungwomanweresittingbehindme,talkingloudly.
2、中文：
我回过头去怒视着那一男一女，
他们却毫不理会。
原文：
Iturnedround.Ilookedatthemanandthewomanangrily.
Theydidnotpayanyattention.
升级：
Iturnedround，lookingatthemanandthewomanangrily,whodidnotpayanyattention.
3、中文：
我读了几行，
但一个字也不懂。
原文：
Ireadafewlines,
butIdidnotunderstandaword.
升级：
（用并列句）
Ireadafewlineswithoutunderstandingaword.
4、中文：
我在房间里关了整整一天。
然而竟连一张明信片也没写成！
原文：
Ispentthewholedayinmyroom,
butIdidnotwriteasinglecard!
升级：
Ispentthewholedayinmyroom,withoutwritingasinglecard!
5、中文：
飞机误点了，侦探们在机场等了整整一上午。
他们正期待从南非来的一个装着钻石的贵重包裹。
原文：
Theplanewaslateanddetectiveswerewaitingattheairportallmorning.
TheywereexpectingavaluableparcelofdiamondfromSouthAfrica.
升级：
Theplanebeinglate,detectiveswerewaitingattheairportallmorning,expectingavaluableparcelofdiamondfromSouthAfrica.
03
倒装句
否定：
Little/seldom/not/never/
at no time/ by no means/
Nothing
陈述：
I will never love you.
倒装：
Never will I love you.
陈述：
We can find nothing in the room.
倒装：
Nothing can we find in the room.
Step1:
否定词提到句子前面；
Step2:
助系情提到主语前面；
唯一：
Only in this way....
Only then...
Only when we have mastered English, can we chat with foreigners freely.
We should master English. Only in this way can we chat with foreigners freely.
Only when we all protect the environment, can our country be flooded with harmony and happiness.
修饰：
English is easy.
So easy is English that...
So easy is English that anyone who can speak Chinese have the chance to master English.
It is a fine day today.
So fine is it today that we can't hide our passion to go out and play.
04
强调句
（一）强调谓语动词；
I love you.
I do love you.
让我证明我曾真心爱过你。
Let me prove that I once did love you.
（二）强调其他成分；
It is/was+被强调部分+that/who +句子剩余部分
I read English loudly in the open air every morning.
It is we Chinese young generation who are undertaking the future of our motherland.
05
省略句
并列句中的省略：
and\but\or\as well as \than
I got up early today and （I） had my breakfast on the way.
状语从句中的省略：
"当状语从句主语跟主句相同，且从句中有be动词时，从句的主语和be动词同时省略。
"
When （we are） visiting Xi'an, we enjoyed YRPM.
06
It家族（形式主语 形式宾语）
It is clear +that从句
It is a pity +that从句
It is a painstaking task to do sth.（客观评价句型）
I believe/ regard /insist/ consider it+adj/n/ +that从句（主观评价句型）
It is a painstaking task to prepare for the NMET.
I consider it a painstaking task to prepare for the NMET.
特别注意：
make it “使”句型
良好的环境使我们更加容易集中注意力。
Sth make it+ adj/n + for sb+ to do.
A nice environment makes it easier for us to concentrate on our study.
A nice environment makes it easier that we concentrate on our study.
练练手
安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜。
How can I unwillingly serve the noble, which would make it impossible for me to have a happy smile.
07
尾巴家族
1、原因
because...
for...
considering that...
You, a good boy, are supposed to deeply understand your mom, considering that she gave birth to you, has brought you up and expects your success in the future.
2、结果
so,
as a result,
therefore,
consequently,
accordingly,
3、目的
so that
in order that
so as to do
in order to do
练练手
【练习1】我们必须保护环境，让下一代得以可持续发展。
We have to protect our environment so that the next generation will develop continuously.
【练习2】我们必须保护环境，给下一代留下更多的资源和能源。
We have to protect our environment so as to save resource and energy for our next generation.
4、程度
so...that （通常用倒装结构）
Such...that
in order to do
练练手
【练习】北京夏天真热，我都扛不住了。
It is so hot in Beijing in the summer that I can't bear it.
08
插入
（1）with sth+补语（形容词 介词短语 从句 非谓语动词）
（2）together with + sb +补语（形容词 介词短语 从句 非谓语动词）
As we can see from the picture, a young lady （with a laptop on her ）is surfing the Internet.
（3）,I think,...
（4）,namely,（也就是说）
（5），in fact，
（6）同位语：
A=B
You , a good boy, should understand your mom.
We teenagers...
九、过渡；
十、帽子家族；（黄金圣衣）
升级会员 