Effects of Rural Workers.docx

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EffectsofRuralWorkers

EffectsofRuralWorkers

　　EffectsofRuralWorkers

　　Withtherapiddevelopmentofourcountryinrecentyears,thenumberofruralresidentswhopourintobigcitiestofindjobsisincreasingsoastomeetthegrowingdemandoflaborsincitiesconstruction.Theserural"immigrants"findtheirjobsinvariousfields:

theyworkonconstructionsites,serveinrestaurantsandhairsaloonsdoingthelower-rankingjobs.Theyrendercitiesanewsourceoflaborforceandpouredcitieswithnewvigor.Thisphenomenonhasagreatimpactoncitiesandarousedpublicconcerns.Itseemshardtotellwhetheritisablessingoracurse.

　　Somecitydwellersdon'twelcometheseruralimmigrants.Theylookdownuponthemandalwaysfindfaultwiththem.It'sundeniablethatmanyproblemsemergedwiththeircoming.Wecanalwaysfindruralworkerswhosleeponthepavement,whoaresloppilydressedinpublicplacesandwhodon'tobeytrafficlaws.Someofthemdon'thaveasenseofsocialorderandactthewaytheylike.Thosewhodiscriminateagainstruralworkerscomplainthattheydeterioratetheimageandstatusofbigcities.Somecitizensalsobelievethattheyarethechiefculpritsoftherisingcrimerate.It'sinevitablethatnoteveryruralworkeriscompetitiveenoughforajobandsomemayruntheriskofviolatinglawstogainillegalincomes.

　　However,inmyhumbleopinion,thedemeritsoftheruralinvasioncouldnotwipeoutthemeritsthattheyhavemadegreatcontributionstotheprogressofoursociety.Weshouldnotforgetthearduousworktheytakeontomakeourcitybeautifulandmodern.Weshouldnotforgettheirdevotiontothebasicconstructionofoursociety.Withheartandsoul,theysacrificetheirwholeyouthwithoutanycomplaints.Thus,theycannotmerelybeevaluatedbythedemeritstheybrought.Withouttheseindustriousworkers,skyscraperscouldnothavebeenerected;roadscouldnothavebeenpaved;bridgescouldnothavebeenbuilt.Therefore,Iwanttoremindthosewhodiscriminateagainstruralworkers,theprosperityofthecitiesowesalottothemtheconstructorsofourbeautifulcityandthebuildersofourprosperouslife.Itisgratitudeandrespectweneedtoshowtheseheroes,notdisdain.

　　Chinahasalargepopulationof1.3billion,ofwhich900millionliveinruralareas.Mostoftheruralresidentsarestillstrugglingunderthepovertyline.Theimmigrantshaveheavyburdenstosupporttheirpoorfamilies.Workingincitiesisagoodopportunitybutalsoagreatchallengeforthesenewcomers.Thechallengenotonlyliesinsurvivalbutalsointherelationshipwithlocalresidents.Somecityhabitantsdisdainruralworkers,whiletheruralworkersalsohaveadeepprejudiceagainstus.Bothsidesneedbetterunderstandingandmorecommunication.Iftherewerenoprejudice,therewouldbemoreunderstandingandrespectandtherewouldbenoconflicts.

　　简评

　　城市的繁华聚焦了人们的目光，但这背后挥不去的是农民工带来的困扰。

他们筑造了城市灿烂的今天，但却成了不被理解的"另类人群"，他们需要社会的理解，更渴望一份对他们的尊重。

　　"民工"是一个有争议的群体，如果直接阐明作者的立场，会显得不太具有说服力。

但崔翱翔同学以一个场面描写，自然的引发讨论，不直陈自己立场，却能抓住读者的注意力，进而诱导读者去思考。

第二段展示了一幅熟悉的民工场面，"Wecartalwaysfindruralworkerswhosleepbythestreet，whoaresloppilydressedlnpublicplacesandwhodon~tobeytrafficlaws."使人自然联想到那些对他们的责难。

但第三段笔锋一转，亮出自己的观点：

"WithouttheseindustrualworkersskyscraperscOuldnothavebeenerected;roadscOuldnOthavebeenbuilt."并进步指出，"theyaretheexploitofOurbeautifulcityandthebuilderofourprosperouslife."在这两种相反的态度之间，我们需要反省，需要了解他们的处境和心理，这样才能真正地相互理解，达成更有效的沟通。

　　文章谋篇布局自然确，结论有的放矢。

语言表达丰富、准确，立论观点明确，结论有的放矢.

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