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雅思超精华必背小作文

第一篇

modelanswer:

1.Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.

2.In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities（around150grams）,whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed（justover50grams）.

3.However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespectively.Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemoststable.

4.Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperpersonperweek.

5.Overall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.

分析：

第一段：

1Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.

Thegraphillustrateschanges描述变化的常用句式。

intheamountsof在---数量上。

Consumed是过去分词作后置定语，表示“被消费”。

相当于whichwereconsumed的定语从句。

第二段：

1In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.

Byfar是在那时，是常用的时间状语；themostpopular最高级，of后面加“总体”，最高级的整体。

With后面加数字；consumed是过去分词做后置定语，相当于whichwereconsumed。

2Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities（around150grams）,whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed（justover50grams）.

Insimilarquantities是“相似的数量”的意思，括弧里面加入具体的数字，是常用的数据引出方式。

Muchless是“更少”，much修饰比较级less；（justover50grams）同样也是用括号引出数据。

第三段：

1However,duringthis25-yearperiodtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespectively.

However连接前后两个段落，两个数据。

第二段属于静止描述起始点的数值，接下来描述以后的数据变化，就可以用however来连接。

Duringthis25-yearperiod在这25年的阶段里。

Respectively是副词“分别地”的意思，通常用于修饰两个数据，分别是某两个数字。

2Theconsumptionoffishalsodeclined,butmuchlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams

Also---but，描述相同的趋势但不同的变化程度。

Lesssignificantly是与之前的变化相比较得出的结论，前面也是“巨大”，但这个变化速度不如之前“巨大”。

第四段：

1Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.

Ontheotherhand另一方面。

Showanupwardtrend，“展示了一个上升的趋势”，属于固定表达。

Overtaking是doing现在分词作伴随状语的用法，它是定语从句变化而来，相当于whichovertakes，如果动词和关系代词的关系是主动，则把动词改成doing即可。

Thatofbeef的that相当于consumption，因为与前面短语格式一模一样，所以为避免重复，用that代替。

第五段：

1Overall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.

Overall是“总体来说”的意思，通常是小作文的最后总阶段用词。

thegraphshowshow改图展示了如何---，while连接两个趋势。

这个重复描述图形的整体变化趋势的句子是常用的总阶段写法。

第二篇

Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.

   Thechartsbelowshowthelevelsofparticipationineducationandscienceindevelopingandindustrializedcountriesin1980and1990.

   Writeareportauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.

Youshouldwriteatleast150words.

1.Thedatashowsthedifferencesbetweendevelopingandindustrializedcountries’participationineducationandscience.

2.Intermsofthenumberofyearsofschoolingreceived,weseethatthelengthoftimepeoplespendatschoolinindustrializedcountrieswasmuchgreaterat8.5yearsin1980,comparedto2.5yearsindevelopingcountries.Thegapwasincreasedfurtherin1900whenthefiguresroseto10.5yearsand3.5yearsrespectively.

3.Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph,whichshowsthatthenumberofpeopleworkingasscientistsandtechniciansinindustrializedcountriesincreasedfrom55to85per1,000peoplebetween1980and1990,whilethenumberindevelopingcountrieswentfrom12to20.

4.Finally,thefiguresforspendingonresearchanddevelopmentshowthatindustrializedcountriesmorethandoubledtheirspending,from$200bnto$420bn,whiledevelopingcountriesdecreasedtheirs,from$75bndownto$25bn.

5.Overallwecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweenthetwoeconomiesbutthattheregapsarewidening.

分析

第一段：

1Thedatashowsthedifferencesbetweendevelopingandindustrializedcountries’participationineducationandscience.

本句话依旧是对题干进行改写。

Data是“数据”，相当于figure，number，percentage，proportion等。

第二段：

1Intermsofthenumberofyearsofschoolingreceived,weseethatthelengthoftimepeoplespendatschoolinindustrializedcountrieswasmuchgreaterat8.5yearsin1980,comparedto2.5yearsindevelopingcountries.

这一段讨论第一组图，intermsof“在---方面”，引出所要讨论的东西。

Received是过去分词做后置定语，weseethat是常用句式。

Comparedto这里等同于comparedwith，与---比起来，相当于than。

2Thegapwasincreasedfurtherin1900whenthefiguresroseto10.5yearsand3.5yearsrespectively.

本句讨论两个柱状之间的差距。

When引导状语从句，respectively是“分别地”，引出两组数据。

第三段：

1Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph,whichshowsthatthenumberofpeopleworkingasscientistsandtechniciansinindustrializedcountriesincreasedfrom55to85per1,000peoplebetween1980and1990,whilethenumberindevelopingcountrieswentfrom12to20.

Wecanseeasimilarpatterninthesecondgraph是常用句型，which引导定语从句，which代替上文的整个句子或pattern这个名词，working是现在分词做后置定语，相当于whowork。

While连接两个变化趋势相反的句子，作对比。

第五段：

1Overallwecanseethatnotonlyarethereverylargedifferencesbetweenthetwoeconomiesbutthattheregapsarewidening.

本句依然是对总体趋势进行总结。

That后面引导宾语从句。

Notonly---butalso不但而且。

但同时作为that的宾语从句，又因为notonly位于句首，而采用的倒装形式。

Notonly部分倒装arethere，butalso部分不倒装。

大作文素材

Competitions

Itisaplainfactthatweareinaworldwherecompetitionisgoingoninallareasandatalllevels.Thisisexciting.Yet,ontheotherhand,competitionbreedsapragmaticattitude.Peoplechoosetolearnthingsthatareuseful,anddothingsthatareprofitable.Today’scollegeeducationisalsoaffectedbythisgeneralsenseofutilitarianism.

Manycollegestudentschoosebusinesslaworcomputerprogrammingastheirmajorsconvincedthattheseprofessionsarewherethebigmoneyis.Itisnotunusualtoseecollegestudentstakingpart-timejobsasawarming-upfortherealbattle.IoftenseemyfriendstakingGREtests,workingonEnglishorcomputercertificatesandtakingthedrivinglessonstogetalicense.Well,Ihavenothingagainstbeingpractical.Asthecompetitioninthejobmarketgetsmoreandmoreintense,studentsdohavereasonstobepractical.However,weshouldneverforgetthatcollegeeducationismuchmorethanskilltraining.

Justimagineifyourutilitarianismprevailsoncampus,livingnospaceforthecultivationofstudents'minds,orthenurturingoftheirsoul.Wewillseeuniversitieschurningoutwell-trainedyetspiritlessworkingmachines.Ifutilitarianismprevailsinsociety,wewillseepeopleboundbymind-forgedmedicalslostinthemoneymakingventures;wewillseehumilitylosingitsgraceanddignity.Andthatwouldbedisastrous.

I'dliketothinkofsocietyasacarriageandpeople’spursuitforprofitorfameasthehorsethatpullsthecarriage.Yetwithoutthedrivertakingdirection,thecarriagewouldgostraightandmayevenendoutinaprecarioussituation.

Acertificatemaygiveyousomeadvantage,butbroadhorizons,positiveattitudesandpersonalintegrities.Theseareassetsyoucannotacquirethroughanyquickfixedway.Intoday'sworld,wherethehighestlevelofcompetitionisnotofskillsorexpertise,butofvisionandstrategy,yourintellectualqualitylargelydetermineshowfaryoucangoinyourcareer. 

第三篇

1.ThechartscomparethesourcesofelectricityinAustraliaandFranceintheyears1980and2000.Betweentheseyears,electricityproductionalmostdoubled,risingfrom100unitsto170inAustralia,andfrom90to180unitsinFrance.

2.In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower（eachproducing20units）andoil（whichproducedonly10units）.By2000,coalhadbecomethefuelformorethan75%ofelectricityproducedandonlyhydrocontinuedtobeanothersignificantsourcesupplyingapproximately20%.

3.Incontrast,Franceusedcoalasasourceforonly25unitsofelectricityin1980,whichwasmatchedbynaturalgas.Theremaining40unitswereproducedlargelyfromoilandnuclearpower,withhydrocontributingonly5units.Butby2000,nuclearpower,whichwasnotusedatallinAustralia,haddevelopedintothemainsource,producingalmost75%ofelectricity,at126units,whilecoalandoiltogetherproducedonly50units.Othersourceswerenolongersignificant.

4.Overall,itisclearthatby2000thesetwocountriesreliedondifferentprincipalfuelsources:

AustraliareliedoncoalandFranceonnuclearpower.

分析：

第一段：

1ThechartscomparethesourcesofelectricityinAustraliaandFranceintheyears1980and2000

Compare是“对比”，因为本文有两个国家四幅图，所以用compare就比较合适。

这一句同样是对题干进行改写，交代一下这是什么图。

2Betweentheseyears,electricityproductionalmostdoubled,risingfrom100unitsto170inAustralia,andfrom90to180unitsinFrance.

Double是动词“翻倍”的意思，这里主要讨论数据的整体变化趋势，rising是rise的现在分词形式，相当于whichrises或whichrose。

第二段：

1In1980Australiausedcoalasthemainelectricitysource（50units）andtheremainderwasproducedfromnaturalgas,hydropower（eachproducing20units）andoil（whichproducedonly10units）.

这个句子主要写澳大利亚1980年的最大能源比例，属于特殊值或特征值。

Andtheremainder是“其余的电”，remainder相当于代词。

这样通过一个句子将其他不重要或不是特征的数值全部说出。

2By2000,coalhadbecomethefuelformorethan75%ofelectricityproducedandonlyhydrocontinuedtobeanothersignificantsourcesupplyingapproximately20%.

By2000，到了200年。

是引出数据对比。

Morethan75%，多于75%。

Andonlyhydro引出另外一个特