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TEM4真题作文部分

（TEM-42001）

PARTVIWRITING

SECTIONACOMPOSITION

Travelhasbecomepartofourlife.Andmoreandmoreofushavecometoknowthesignificanceoftravelthroughourownexperience.

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

TravelBroadenstheMind

Youaretowriteinthreeparts.

Inthefirstpart,statewhatthetopicactuallymeanstoyou.

Inthesecondpart,giveoneortwoexamplestoillustrateyourideas.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:

Yesterdayyoufailedtoturnupfortheappointmentwithyourteacher,ProfessorWang.Writehimanoteofapologyandmakearequestforanothermeeting.Youshouldalsosuggestthetimefortherequestedmeeting.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropiateness.

TravelBroadenstheMind

写作指南

此题是给定明确观点型的题目，一般情况下，考题先提出一个话题，并给定了关于这个话题的一种明确的观点，要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想（论点）进行论证。

历年类似相关的考题：

2003TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

2000TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivities

范文与解析

Sample

（1）Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetotravelduringtheirholidays,sincetravelnotonlybringsleisureandjoybutalsobroadensthemind.

（2）Asforme,notonlycanitbringmemorehistoricalknowledge,butitcanalsoaddtomysocialexperience.

TakemytriptoMountTaiforexample.（3）Asisknowntoall,it’samagnificentmountainfamousforboththebeautifulsceneryandthesplendidculturalheritage.（4）Attheverysightofher,mysoulwasattachedtoher.（5）Irememberedthepoem“WangYue”writtenbyDuFu,IrememberedmanyhistoriceventswhichhappenedonthislandandIalsorecalledtheresponsibilitytoconservethisheritage.AsIclimbedupthemountain,ourguidetoldmemanythingsIhadnevergottoknowbefore,whichofcoursebroadenedmyscopeofknowledge.（6）ItwasalsoonthistripthatImademanynewfriendswithwhomIexchangedmyopinions,andthatIgotacquaintedwithsomeinformationaboutfirstaidandpackagetour.Allthisindeedaddedtomysocialexperience.

（7）Inshort,traveloffersagoodchanceformetoopenmyeyesandenrichmyexperiencewhileIcanenjoymyself.Itbroadensthemindinarelaxingway.

Analysis

（1）开篇点明主题

（2）用Asforme引出自己的观点，明确论点。

（3）（4）以实例对主题进行充分的论证。

对旅游景点的表述，如：

magnificent,splendidculturalheritage,attachto等词，把握准确，表达得当，为本文增色不少。

（5）（6）排比句Irememberd…Iremembered...Ialsorecalled…和强调句Itwasalsoonthistripthat…的使用使行文不显呆板沉闷，值得借鉴。

（7）用Inshort结尾部分概括总结全文，并再次点明主题。

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

范文

April20,2001

DearProfessor,

IfeelterriblysorrythatIfailedtokeepourappointmentyesterday.Mymotherwassuddenlytakenill.

Sincetherewasnobodyathomeexceptme,Ihadtotakehertohospital.IwasinsuchahurrythatIforgottocallyou.I’msorrytohavekeptyouwaiting.MymotherissupposedtobedischargedfromhospitalnextThursday.SomaywemeetnextFriday,15August,at9:

00a.m.?

IpromiseIwon’tbreaktheappointmentagain.

Respectfullyyours,

Liming

（TEM-42002）

PARTVIWRITING

SECTIONACOMPOSITION

Nowadayspeoplearebecomingincreasinglyawareoftheimportanceofhealth.Andtheyhavedifferentwaystostayhealthy.Forexample,someexerciseeveryday;otherstrytokeepabalanceddiet.Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwaytostayhealthy?

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,statewhatyouthinkisthebestway.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithoneortworeasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:

Youhaveheardthatyourfriend,Jack,wishestosellhiswalkman.Writehimanoteexpressingyourinterestinit,askinghimaboutitsconditionandofferingapriceforit.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropiateness.

TheBestWaytoStayHealthy

写作指南

这种考题首先提出问题，然后要求考生提供一个、多个或最好、最有效的解决途径，并加以解释，也称howto结构。

“TheBestWaytoStayHealthy”，要指出你认为最好的保持健康的方式，并用一到两个理由予以支持，也可以转化成“如何保持健康”的问题。

这类命题的段落框架可总体上为下列的结构：

第一段：

论据1+解释/例证

论据2+解释/例证

论据3+解释/例证

第三段：

结论：

重申自己的观点，提出希望和展望未来

历年相关考题：

1998OneWaytoSolvetheProblem

范文与解析

Sample

（1）Nowadays,thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.

（2）Whereveryouareandwhateveryoudo,stayinghealthyisalwaysimportant.（3）Differentpeoplecomeupwithdifferentviews.（4）AsfarasIamconcerned,thebestwaytokeephealthyistodevelopagoodqualityofpsychology.

（5）Tobeginwith,keepingagoodqualityofpsychologycanreducethepains.（6）Accordingtosomesurveys,nowadays,mostpatientsarenotphysicallysickbutmentallyill.Theburdenontheirshouldersismuchheavierthanothers,sotheycan’tstepoutoftheshadowofdepressionandsadness.Theyneedtoreleasetheirspirittothenature.（7）Besides,ifyouhavedevelopedagoodqualityofpsychology,you’llbecomemoresociableandthusmorewillingtoplayyourpartinthesociety.（8）Enrollingforsomekeep-fitclubsorjoiningsometravelagency,whichbythemselvesarevariousversionsofphysicalexercise,willbenefityoualot.（9）Asapoemsays,youthisnotaperiodoftime;it’sastateofmind.（10）Everybodywantstokeepyoungatheartbecauseyouthisasymbolforendlessenergyandpassionforliving.

（11）Keepingagoodqualityofmindandkeepingasenseofhumorarereallygood.（12）Evenifyouare80,you’llneverbeold.

Analyse

（1）

（2）（3）作文开篇点明主题。

（4）提出自己的观点。

（5）运用Tobeginwith承上启下。

（6）用Accordingtosomesurveys对主题进行论证。

（7）连词Besides使用恰当，使文章的逻辑联系更为清晰，阐述更为充分。

（8）Variousversions使行文更加生动有文采。

（9）引用诗句youthisnotaperiodoftime;it’sastateofmind使文章更具有说服力。

（10）Symbol一词起了画龙点睛效果。

（11）（12）进一步重申自己的观点。

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

范文

April15,2002

DearJack,

Iheardsomeonesaythatyouwantedtosellyourwalkman.Iwanttobuyanewwalkmanbecause,sincemyEnglishlisteningissopoor,Ireallywanttoimproveit.Whatabouttheconditionofyourwalkman?

Canitstillgoforwardandbackward?

Canitrecord?

Doesithavearadio?

Icangiveyou200Yuanifyousellittome.

Howaboutit?

Yours,

Laura

（TEM-42003）

PARTVIWRITING

SECTIONACOMPOSITION

Peopleinmodernsocietyliveunderalotofpressure,fromeducation,career,orfamily.Soitisimportantforthemtokeepagoodmoodunderwhatevercircumstances.

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOacompositionofabout200wordsonthefollowingtopic:

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

Youaretowriteinthreeparts:

Inthefirstpart,statespecificallywhatyourviewis.

Inthesecondpart,supportyourviewwithoneortworeasons.

Inthelastpart,bringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionorasummary.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

WriteonANSWERSHEETTWOanoteofabout50-60wordsbasedonthefollowingsituation:

YourfriendClarehasinvitedyoutoherhouse-warmingpartythisweekend.However,youwillbeawaythen.Writeheranotepolitelydecliningherinvitationandexpressingyourbestwishestoher.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropiateness.

SECTIONACOMPOSITION

TheImportanceofKeepingaGoodMood

写作指南

这是一篇属于给定明确观点型的作文。

一般情况下，考题先提出一个话题，并给定了关于这个话题的一种明确的观点，要求考生以这个给定的观点作为文章的中心思想（论点）进行论证。

做这类题目的关键在于是否能很好地论证这一明确的观点。

历年相关的考题：

2001TravelBroadenstheMind

2000TheImportanceofExtracurricularActivities

根据题目要求，文章结构如下：

第一部分，具体地提出自己的观点，即“保持好心情”的重要性

第二部分，用合适的细节支持自己的观点。

第三部分，就以上观点进行总结。

Sample

（1）Withthedevelopmentofmodernscience,technologyandeconomics,ourlivingstandardhasreachedaneverhigherlevel.Butmoreandmorepeoplearelivingundergreaterpressurethaneverbefore.Asaconsequence,peopleareincreasinglysufferingfromvariousdistortionsbothphysicallyandmentally.Tohelpout,itisimportantthateveryonekeepagoodmoodtoday.

Thereareseveralreasonsformyargument.

（2）First,agoodmoodcancreatehighefficiency.Whenyouworkwithagoodmood,youwillfeelhappyandbewillingtodosomeworkwhichusedtobeboring.（3）Onthecontrary,abadmoodcanmakeyoupassiveanddothingswithreluctance.（4）Second,agoodmoodisbeneficialtoyourhealth.Ifyoufailtokeepagoodmood,youwillbefeelingdepressedandfedup,whichisapttocausesomepsychologicaldiseases.（5）Third,whenyouhaveagoodmood,otherpeoplearoundyouwillbeinfluenced.Thusmoreandmorepeoplewillfeelhappytocommunicatewithyou.

（6）Tosumup,keepingagoodmoodisveryimportantbothforyourseflandforthepeoplearoundyou.Ifyouwanttohaveahappyandsuccessfullife,pleasekeepagoodmoodeveryday.

Analyse

（1）用with表伴随状态引出现代社会的发展，这使得人们承受的压力越来越大，从而提出观点，即保持一个良好的心情很重要。

（2）（4）（5）用First,Second,Third引出支持论点的几个理由。

（3）用Onthecontrary从反面说明好心情的重要性。

（4）isaptto是语言亮点，表示“倾向于…”

（6）keepingagoodmood用动名词短语作主语，简洁明了。

SECTIONBNOTE-WRITING

范文

April18,2003

DearClare,

I’mverysorrytotellyouthatIcan’tattendyourhouse-warmingpartythisweekend.Ihavetobeawaytheninthat