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高中英语作文建议信
建议信
（1）-----阐释原因；提出建议类
请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。
问题包括：
1.菜价昂贵，菜市单一；2.排队时间长，浪费午休时间；3.味道不佳，浪费现象严重。
注意：
1.词数不少于120；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
食堂canteen
DearPrincipal,
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
Yours,
LiHua
作文范文：
DearPrincipal,
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.
Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.
Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
需注意的词汇、表达：
deliciouswaitingtaste（n.味道）tasty（adj.可口的）cook（n.厨师）cooker（n.炊具）
price价格
lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格
atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格
varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品
Foronething,…….Foranother,……
makesb（not）dosth
wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime
Thekindsoffoodarefew.
表达食堂出现的问题：
Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofuscan’taffordthem.
Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,whichisfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfyourneeds.
Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.
Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./nice.
Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.
Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthatalotoffoodisleftandwasted
It’sawasteoftimetostandinlineforalongtime.
Thefoodinthecanteentastessobad,whichleadstoaseverephenomenonofwastingfood.
Inthelongrun,it’sbadforourhealthandstudy.
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatitwillinfluenceoursleepintheafternoon.
表达提出的建议：
Improvingthetasteofthefoodisalsoagoodsolutiontotheproblems.
Ithinkit’snecessarytoprovidemorekindsoffood.
It’shightimethatwetookmeasurestosolvetheproblems.
Soit’shightimeforustotakemeasures
Tosolvetheproblems,Ithinkthecanteenshouldsetupanewfigure（形象）andimprovethepresentconditiontosatisfythestudents’needs.
Wehopethecanteencanprovideuswithdishesofahighqualityatareasonableprice.
Thecanteenshouldopenmorewindowssothatweneedn’twaitsolong.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,thecanteenshouldattachimportancetothequality.What’smore,differentkindsoffoodshouldbeprovided.
Measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.
建议模板：
Dear….,
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto…….（引出话题）.Hereareafewsuggestions.Firstofall,itisimportanttodosth.Then,italsohelpstodosth.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatodosth.
建议句型积累：
Manywayscancontributetosolvingtheproblem,butIthinkthefollowingmaybethemosteffectiveones.
I’dliketomakesomesuggestionson…….
It’sofgreatimportanceforsbtodosth.
It’snecessaryforsbtodosth
Itwouldbeagoodideaforsbtodosth./Itwouldbeabetterideaif…….
Itcontributes/helpsalotif………
Isuggestthat…../Mysuggestionisthat…
You’dbetterdosth./We’dbetterdosth
It’sbettertodosth
Measuresaresupposedtobetakentodosth
Wearesupposedtotakeeffectivemeasurestodosth
It’shightimethatsbdidsth./It’shightimeforsbtodosth
建议信
（2）-----阐释原因；提出建议类
假定你是中学生李华。
在一位名叫SadMother的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。
请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，用英语给这位家长回复。
I’mthemotherofafourteen-year-old.RecentlyIhavefoundthatmydaughtertoldliestome.Theotherdayshetoldmethatshedidwellinthefinalexam.HoweverIfoundoutshefailedinmathandEnglish.WhatshouldIdo?
写作要点：
1.表明了解她的问题；2.帮她分析孩子撒谎的原因；
3.提出至少两条建议
要求：
1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
4.书写需清晰、工整。
Hi，SadMother，
Ihavelearnedthat_____________________________________________
作文范文：
Hi,SadMother,
Ihavelearnedthatyourdaughtertoldliestoyou.Asapeerofyourdaughter,Ithinkthereasonsareasfollows.
Tobeginwith,maybethereasonwhyyourdaughtertoldalieisthatyouaretoostrictwithherandsheisafraidyouwillpunishherifshetellsyouthetruth.Besides,nowadays,parentsputtoomuchpressureontheirkids.Inordernottoletyoudown,shehasnochoicebuttolie.
Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.Firstofall,you’dbetterhaveaheart-to–hearttalkwithher,makingherknowbeinghonestismoreimportantthanscores.Inaddition,don’tbetoostrict.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldallowhertomakesomeminor（微小的）mistakes.
Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.
需要注意积累的词汇、短语、和句子：
daughter女儿expectation期望beworried/concernedabout担心
calmdown冷静下来ataloss迷惑不解keepintouchwith保持联系
bestrictwithsbinsth在某方面对某人要求严格heart-to-heart推心置腹的
idea注意想法test测试text文本cheat欺骗wantsbtodosth想让某人做某事
1.Itwasbecauseshedidn’twanttoletyoudownthatshepretendedtoachievehighscores.
2.Sheisn’tawarethatthelieshavehurtbothyouandherself.
3.Beingateenager,sheneedstobeencouraged.Andit’syouwhocandothis.
4.Itisprobablyyourhighexpectationstoherthatmakesherdecidetolie.
5.Youshouldfigureoutthereasonwhysheliedtoyoubeforesolvingtheproblem.
6.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatlyingisbadbehavior.
7.Thereasonwhyshedidn’ttellyouthetruthmaybethatshedidn’twanttoletyoudown.
8.Itissuggestedthatyoushouldhaveaface-to-facetalkwithhersothatshemightopenherhearttoyou.
9.Toavoidthelies,youshouldencourageherratherthanblameherwhenshefailsinexams
10.Thereasonthatleadstotheproblemmaybevarious.
11.Confrontedwith（面对）theseproblems,youshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestohelpyoudaughter.
13.It’ssuggestedthatyoushouldattachmoreimportancetophysicalandmentalhealth.Moreover,it’sbettertoencouragehertodowhatshewants.
改错：
1.Therearesomeadvice.
2.Don’tsad.
3.Youshouldgivehermoreencourage.
4.Shemayafraidthatifshefailsintheexam,youwillpunishher.
5.Ifshehasdifficultyinlearning,youshouldinspiresheandhelpsheout.
6.Shedoesn’twantyouangry.
7.Pleasenottobesoworried.
8.Oneofthereasonisthatsheisn’tdaretotellyouthetruth.
9.Becausesheafraidparents.
10.Soshedon’twanttomentionit.
11.Youshouldapologytoher.
12.You’dbettertoencouragehertobeahonestpeople.
13.You’dbetterbecareaboutherhealthandstudy.
14.I’mveryunderstandyourcondition.
15.Shemaydoesn’twantyoutobeangry.
建议信（3）
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。
假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。
信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：
近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。
请用英文给该同学写一封回信。
内容要点如下：
1．表示理解并给予安慰；
2．提出建议并说明理由。
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：
tempern.脾气，情绪
HiWorried，
I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchahadtimeatthemoment.
Yours,
Jamie
HiWorried,
I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,Iquiteunderstandhowyouarefeelingnowandthereisnoneedtoworryaboutitsomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou’llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.
Firstofall,talktosomeoneyoutrustaboutthetroubleyou’refacedwith,whichisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Lastbutnotleast,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Havingapositiveattitudetowardslifecanbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.
Yours,
Jamie
Highlights:
First,youaresupposedtofigureoutwhatmakesyouupset,andthenkeepawayfromit.
What’smore,youaresupposedtotakeanactivepartinoutdooractivitiestorelax.
Tosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible,youcanopenyourhearttoagoodfriend,talkingaboutyourtrouble.
Carriedbytwo,burdensarelighter.
It’shightimethatyoushouldrelieveyourpressure.
Measuresaresupposedtobetakentocontrolyourtemper.
Thereisnodenyingthateveryonewilllosehistemperwhensomethingunexpectedhappens.
Insteadofbeingangry,whatisimportantforyouistolearntocontrolyourtemperfromnowon.
建议信（4）
高二下期已经过去半学期，高三已经在向同学们招手。
随着学习和心理压力日益加大，一些同学的正常生活受到影响，如睡眠不好，身体也开始亮起了红灯。
请你根据以下要点，给学校的英语刊物写一篇稿子，向同学们提出建议，并简述理由或举例说明:
1、劳逸结合；
2、健康饮食；
3、适当锻炼；
4、保持乐观心态。
注意
1、短文必须包括所列内容
2、词数120左右；
3、文章开头已给出；
4、写成一篇完整的短文，不要逐条列举。
作文范文：
WiththeapproachofSenior3,studentsareunderincreasinglygreatpressure,whichhasaffectedsomestudents’life,preventingthemsleepingwellandcausingproblemswiththeirhealth.Inordertoimprovethecondition,I’dliketooffersomeadvice.
First,Combineworkwithrest.KeepinmindthatallworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.Second,itisimportanttokeepahealthyandbalanceddiet.Stayingawayfromjunkfoodandeatinghealthyfoodlikevegetablesandfishwillbenefityou.Third,gooutdoorsandtakeregularexercise,asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofpressure.Lastbutnotleast,goodhealthmeansbeingbothphysicallyandmentallyhealthy.Keeping
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