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商业信函的格式
EssentialsandFormsofBusinessLetter-writing
Abusinessletteriswrittenforthepurposeofrequestingorconveyinginformation,makingarrangementsforbusinessactivitiesordealingwithmattersconcerningbusinessnegotiations.Whatonewritesshouldbefreefromgrammaticalblemishes,andalsofreefromtheslightestpossibilityofbeingmisunderstood.Clarity,concisenessandcourtesyaretheessentialqualitiesofbusinessletters.Moreover,completecontents,correctinformationandlanguage,concreteideasandconsiderationforthecustomers’needsarealsoimportant.
Althoughalessconventionalandfriendlierstyleispreferrednowadaysinbusinessletterwriting,itisstillbettertofollowasetstandarddeterminedbycustomasthebusinessworldhasbecomeaccustomedtosuchestablishedpractices.
LayoutofaBusinessLetter
Therearetwomaintemplatesforlayout.Theconventionalindentedstyle(SeeExample1)takesinfiveorsixspacesinthefirstlineofeachparagraph,whichmakesthelettereasytoread.Theblockedstyle(SeeExample2)nowappealstomostreadersforallthetypinglinesbeginattheleft-handmargin.Tomakethelettercompactandtidy,thespacesbetweenparagraphsshouldbeincreased.
However,nowthereisathirdtemplateforlayout.Themodifiedblockedstyle(SeeExample3)avoidstheinconvenienceofparagraphindentationsintheindentedformandthelossofclarityoccasionedbytheabsenceofindentationintheblockedstyle.
Whicheverstyleisused,itisagoodplantoadoptoneformoflayoutandtosticktoit.
Example1--IndentedForm
StGangsgatan143Stockholm,10545Sweden
Telex:
53892SHELECSSOurReferenceNo.H/W—T008
Tel:
46-8-738-6000YourReferenceNo.
Fax:
46-8-738-6016
E-mail:
hwlee@
Date:
30thMarch,20--
Messrs.William&Warner
105RollerRoad
Sydney,Australia
Attention:
Mr.Donnason,MarketingDept.
DearSir,
Re:
ShippingAdviceofFreezers
WithreferencetoyourorderNo.F256ofFebruary5for1,000setsofFreezers,we’repleasedtoinformyouthatthegoodshavebeenloadedonboardthes/s“Peace”,whichissailingforyourportonApril1st.
We’vesentatelextotheaboveeffectthismorning.Pleaseinsurethegoodsascontractedandmakepreparationfortakingthedelivery.Wearenowmakingoutthenecessarydocumentsfornegotiation.
Weassureyouthatourgoodswillbefoundsatisfactoryuponarrivalatyourport.Wealsohopethatwecanclosemorebusinesswithyouinthefuture.
Yoursfaithfully,
TheElectroluxCorp.
HorisDeWolley
HorisDeWolley
(Manager)
Example2--BlockedForm
1J&JPlazaNewBrunswick,
NJ089333U.S.A.
Tel:
732-524-0400
Fax:
732-525-0622
E-mail:
carrie@
Date:
22ndJuly,20--
SoftHealthCareProductCorp.
Room2301YiliBLD,
35NanjingRoad,
Shanghai,China
Attention:
Mr.Wang,ImportDept.
DearSir,
Re:
SHAMPOO
We’vereceivedyourletterofJuly10thenquiringaboutourJOHNSON'S®BabyShampooWithNaturalLavender,butunfortunately,thestockofthisproductisrunninglowduetotheheavydemand.Butwewillinformyouassoonasthenewsuppliescomeup.
WesellawidevarietyofBaby’sShampoo.AllofthemaremadeoftheNOMORETEARSformula.Foryourreference,weencloseanillustratedcatalogueofourshampoosandwehopeyouwillfinditinteresting.
Wehopethatwecanclosebusinesstoourmutualadvantageinthefuture.
Yoursfaithfully,
Johnson&Johnson
DorisFergoson
DorisFergoson
(Manager)
Example3--ModifiedBlockedForm
SAMSUNGELECTRONICS
310Taepyung-ro2-ga,Chung-gu
Seoul,100-102,Korea
Tel:
82-2-3706-1114OurReferenceNo.ODL-11
E-mail:
qsl@YourReferenceNo.
Date:
23rdDecember,20--
ShandongScience&TechnologyCo.Ltd.
21/FBrightPlaza
138JinniRoad,Jinan
Shandong,China
Attention:
Mr.ZhouJun,ImportDept.
DearSir,
Re:
OurOfferforPDATypeIII-H
ThankyouforyourinterestinourlatestPersonalDigitalAssistantTypeIII-H.
Asrequested,weofferyou500setsofPDAatUSD140persetFOBInchonforshipmentinFebruary,20--.WerequirepaymentbyL/C.
Becausethereisanincreasingdemandforthisproduct,ourpriceisnon-negotiable.Welookforwardtoyourreply.
Yourstruly,
SamsungElectronics
LavisKim
LavisKim
(Manager)
PartsofaBusinessLetter
Abusinessletterconsistsofsevenprincipalparts:
1.Theletterhead
2.Thereferenceanddateline
3.Theinsidenameandaddress
4.Thesalutation
5.Thebodyoftheletter
6.Thecomplimentaryclose
7.Thesignature
Somelettersmaycontainmiscellaneousmatters,whichareoptionalpartsasshownbelow:
8.Theattentionline
9.Thesubjectline
10.Thereferencenotation,ortheidentifyinginitials
11.Theenclosure
12.Thecarboncopynotation
13.Thepostscript
Thefollowingsampleletterillustratesthepositionofeachpartmentionedabove.
Example4--PartsofaBusinessLetter
1.ChinaNationalCereals,OilsandFoodstuffsImp&ExpCorp.
8JianguomenNeiDajie
Beijing10005,China
Telephone:
86-10-6526-8888
Fax:
86-10-6527-6028
E-mail:
carl@
2.OurRef.
YourRef.
Date:
15thNovember,20--
3.MessrsH.Ronald&Co.
556Eastcheap
London,E.C.3,England
8.Attention:
ImportDept.
4.DearSirs,
9.AquaticProducts
5.Wethankyouforyourenquiryof5November.
Incompliancewithyourrequest,wearesendingyouherewithacopyofourillustrated
catalogueandaquotationsheetforyourreference.
Allpricesaresubjecttoourconfirmationforouraquaticproductshavebeensellingwellthisseason.Therefore,wewouldsuggestthatyouadviseusbyafaxincaseofinterest.
Weawaityourearlyfavorablereply.
6.Yourstruly,
ChinaNationalCereals,OilsandFoodstuffsImp&ExpCorp.
7.Sig._______________
(Manager)
10.QS/AN
11.Enclosures
12.ccourShanghaiBranchOffice
13.P.S.WerequirepaymentbyL/CforatotalvaluenotexceedingUSD50,000.
1.TheLetterhead(TheHeading)
Thispart,oftenalreadyinprinting,expressesthepersonalityofacompanythatwritestheletter,andcontainsthenameofthecompany,itsbusinesstypeandaddresses(postaladdress,telephonenumber,faxnumber,telexnumberande-mailaddress).Sometimes,eventhelogo,namesofChiefExecutivesoriconofproductsareprintedintheheading.
ItisimportanttonotethatapostaladdressinEnglishiswrittenfromthespecifictothegeneral:
Example5–AUKaddress
AirEnvironmentalMechanicalEquipmentLimited
2076WestMainStreet
Devon,EX140RA
U.K.
Example6–AUSAaddress
TheBettyMillsCompany
60East3rdAvenue
Ste230
SanMateo,CA94401
USA
Example7–AChineseaddressinEnglish
SinochemJiangsuImportandExportCorporation
JiangsuInternationalBusinessMansion,
50ZhonghuaRoad,Nanjing
210001,P.R.China
Sometimesthetelephonenumber,faxnumberande-mailaddressareputattheleftmarginbelowthepostaladdress.Usuallythereferenceanddateareputinthesamelinesbutattherightmargintobuildaneatappearance(SeeExamples1and3).
Goodqualitystationeryandaneat,well-balancedletterheadwillenhancetheprestigeofthewriter’scompany.
2.TheReferenceandDate
Mostletterheadsprovideforreferencelettersandnumbers.Whenonefirmwritestoanother,eachwillgiveareferencetoavoidconfusion.Referencesarequotedtoindicatewhattheletterrefersto(YourRef.)andthecorrespondencetorefertowhenreplying(OurRef.).
Thedatelineisusuallytypedbetweentheletterheadandtheinsidenameandaddress.InBritishletterstyle,however,itisnormallyputtwoline-spacesbelowtheinsideaddressandabovethesalutation.
Example8–DatelineofAmericanstyle
InterstateProducts,Inc.
511InterstateCourt
Sarasota,FL34240
USA
Date:
April4,20--
ShandongForeignTrade(Holdings)CorporationLimited
51,TAIPINGROAD
QINGDAO,266001
CHINA
Example9–DatelineofBritishstyle
OFFICESYSTEMSPTY.LTD.
124OakStreetTel(61-2)4193209
ChatswoodFax(61-2)4194011
EnglandE-mailinfo@.uk
AqueousTechnologies
291CaxtonStreet
SanteFe
U.S.A
18November,20--
DearSirorMadam,
Thedateshouldbetypedinfull;eitherinBritishstyle-D/M/Y(i.e.theorderofday,month,thenyear)orinAmericanstyle-M/D/Y(i.e.theorderofmonth,day,thenyear).Figureslike11/12/20--mayeasilycauseconfusion.Eithercardinalorordinalnumberscanbeused.AcommamustbeputbeforetheyearwithAmericanstyle.
Example10--Dates
1.2ndMay,20--
2.2May,20--
3.2May20--(Commacanbeomitted)
4.September21st,20--
5.September21,20--
3.TheInsideNameandAddress
Thisisthenameandaddressofthepersontowhomtheletteriswritten.Itisusuallyputattheleft-handmargin,whichhelpstogivetheletteratidyappearance.
CourtesytitlesusedforaddressingcorrespondenceareMr.,Mrs.,MissandMessrs..Messrs,anabbreviationfortheFrenchword“Messieurs”,isusedoccasionallyfortwoormoremen(Messrs.Holmes&O.Hardy)butmorecommonlyformspartofthenameofafirmwithaperson’sname(Messrs.Laurel&Co.).
Liketheaddressintheletterhead,aninsidenameandaddressshouldalsobewrittenfromthespecifictothegeneral
4.TheSalutation
Thesalutationisacomplimentarygreetingwithwhichthewriteropenshisorherletter.Itsparticularformdependsontherelationshipbetweenthewriterandhisorhercorrespondent.Tosomeextent,itsettlestheformofthecomplimentaryclose.Thetwomustalwaysbeinkeeping.
DearSirisusedtoaddressamanandDearMadamtoawoman,whethersingleormarried.DearSirorMadam(DearSir/Madam)canbeusedtoaddressapersonofwhomyouknowneitherthenamenorthesex.
DearSirs,DearSirsorMm