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I.人物篇：

1.

Mr.Wang,ourclassadviser,whograduatedfromBeijingNormalUniversity,isoneofthe“TenTopteachersofEnglish”inGuangzhouCity.Alltheseyearshehadalwaysbeenworkingveryhard,sohehasbeenpraisedforhishardwork.Besideshavingavarietyofhobbies,heissoknowledgeableandgoodatteachingthatallofusenjoyhislessons,whicharelivelyandinteresting.Althoughheisverystrictwithus,hegetsonverywellwithus.Inaword,Mr.Wangisnotonlyourgoodteacherbutalsoourgoodfriend,soweallloveandrespecthimsincerely.

2.

ProfessorRogerD.Kornberg,a59-year-oldAmerican,wasthewinneroftheNobelPrizeforChemistryin2006.Hiscontributionisofgreathelpinresearchaimedatcuringcancersandheartdiseases.SinceoveracenturyagowhentheNobelPrizewasfirstawarded,hehasbeenthesixthscientistwhosefatheralsoeverwontheNobelPrize.ProfessorKornbergstudiedchemistryinHarvard,andthenreceivedhisdoctor’sdegreeinStanford.Since2003,hehasbeenworkinginStanfordUniversitySchoolofMedicine.

3.（AGoverness）

WangXiaoling,agirlof25,hasworkedasanEnglishteacherinamiddleschoolforthreeyearssinceshegraduatedfromShanghaiforeignLanguageInstitute.NotonlycanshespeakEnglishandChineseveryfluently,butsheworksveryhard.What’smore,sheisveryactiveandopen-minded,andcanoftenmakeherclassinteresting.Becauseshehassuchexperienceandloveschildrenverymuch,MrSmithhasemployedhertoteachAlice,his8-year-olddaughter,Chinese.Shenowworksthreetimesaweek,twohoursforeachtime,andispaidat50yuananhour.

4.（LuoXuejuan---OurPride）

BorninZhejiangprovince,LuoXuejuanisa23-year-oldChina’sfemaleOlympicswimmingchampion.Shewentinforswimmingatanearlyageandwithhergreatestefforts,shebegantoshowhergreattalentin2000.Threeyearslater,shereceivedwidepublicattentionbygettingthreegoldmedalsattheBarcelonaWorldChampionships.TousChinesepride,atAthens2004Olympics,shebroketheworldrecordandbecamewomen’s100mswimmingchampionship.Duetohealthproblems,LuoXuejuanhasannouncedretirementandshewillstudyinBeijingUniversity.

5．

Maryisaverysmartgirlwithgoodmanners,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothersandthereforegetsalongverywellwithherclassmatesandteachers.HavingaspecialinterestinChinese,shehasaverygoodcommandoforalChinese.Maryisalsogoodatmathsanddoesalotofexerciseseveryday.Shealsoenjoysdoingexperimentsinthechemistrylabs,butsometimessheneedstobemorecareful.Inshort,Maryisreallyaverywell-roundedstudentwhoisamongthetopstudentsinourclass.

6.LookingforaPenfriend

MynameisLiQiong,a20-year-oldChinesesinglegirlfrom40DongfengRoad,Guangzhou,China.ThoughworkingasanurseinTongjiHospitalofGuangzhou,Ipreferplayingtennisandcomputergamesaswellaslisteningtomusic.Iliveinawell-educatedfamilywhosemotherisapainter,fatheradoctorandelderbrotherateacher.I’dliketomakepenpalsfromtheUSorUKorotherEnglish-speakingcountries.Ifyouareinterested,dodropmealineatlq2266@.

7.EarnestHemingway

EarnestHemingway（1899-1961）receivedtheNobelPrizeforLiteraturein1954,forhisnovelTheOldManandtheSea.Borninacountrydoctor’sfamily,hewasoneofthe20thcentury’smostimportantAmericannovelists.HeonceworkedasaRedCrossambulancedriverduringtheWorldWarI.However,sufferedfrommanydiseases,hecommittedsuicidewithhisguninhislaterlife.HissimplestyleofwritinghasaneffectonmanyEuropeanandAmericanwriters.

8．YaoMing

YaoMing,whois2.26metrestall,wasbornonSeptember12th,1980inShanghai,China.YaoMingisthesonoftwogreatbasketballplayersandlearnthowtoplayoneoftheworld’smostpopulargameswhenhewasyoung.Heishard-working,loving,creativeandheisateamplayer.AsoneofthestarsintheNBA,YaoMingisnowhelpingtheHoustonRockets.HeisworkinghardtolivehisdreamandshowtheworldthatChinesebasketballplayerslovethisgametoo!

9.EnglishTeacher

DearMary,

ThankyoufortellingmeaboutyourChineseteacher.Ithinkhehasagoodsenseofhumour.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishteacher,MissLi.

MissLiistwenty-eightyearsoldnow,tall,slimandsmart.Sheoftenwearsblueclothesasblueisherfavouritecolour.Shelikesreadingandsheoftentravelswhensheisfree.Asateacher,sheiskind,helpfulandpatient,soallofuslikeher.Sheteachessowellthatshewonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitionlastyear.

Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

10.LiuXiang

LiuXiang,aShanghainative,wasbornonJuly13,1983.Withtheheightof188cmandaweightof74kg,helikessingingandplayingcomputergames.InMarch,1999,heenteredtheShanghaitrackandfieldteamandoneyearlater,hewasadmittedtotheNationalYouthTeam.AttheAthensOlympicsonAugust27,2004,hewonthemen’s110mhurdlesfinalsin12.91seconds,breakingtheOlympicrecord.What’smore,hisnextgoalistoachievethe2008BeijingOlympicchampionundertheinstructionsofhiscoachSunHaiping.

II.地点篇：

1．ZhuHai

Zhuhai,lyinginthesouthwestofthePearlRiverDelta,isabeautifulandmodernseasidecity.Itcoversatotalareaof7,640squarekilometreswithapopulationofabout1.25million.Zhuhaihasasubtropicalclimatewithsunshineandrainfallalltheyearround,andtemperaturerangesfrom10℃inwinterto35℃insummer.Economically,itisoneofthefastestgrowingcitiesinChinaduetoitsSpecialEconomicZonestatus,superblocationandclosenesstoHongKongandMacau.BeingoneofChina’scleanestandprettiestcities,itisnowonderthatZhuhaihasthereputationofagardencityandamodelcityduetoitsattractiveenvironmentandnaturallandscapes.

2.Australia

Locatedinthesmallestcontinent---Oceania,Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.Itcoversatotalareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million.Itisamainlydrycountrywithonlyafewcoastalareasthathaveadequaterainfall.Itismadeupof6states,inwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities.Becauseitisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife,touristsformallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.

3.Canada

DearZhangHua,

ThecityIamstayinginisToronto,Ontario,Canada.ItliesonthenorthshoreofLakeOntario.BecauseitisoneofCanada’ssouthernmostcities,ithasamoderateclimateandwinterlastsaboutfivemonthshere.Torontoisoneofthemostmulticulturalcitiesintheworldwithapopulationof4.5million,includingabout350,000ChineseCanadians.

Torontoishometotheworld’stallestbuilding,CNTower,intheheartofDowntownToronto,whichis553.33metershighandhasbecomethelandmarkofTorontosinceitwasbuiltin1976.Besides,Torontohasearneditreputationasaclean,peacefulcityintheworld.

4．London

London,thecapitalandlargestcityoftheUnitedKingdom,isthemodernnationalpolitical,culturalandeducationalcentre.Itsmanyhistoricallandmarks,includingtheTowerofLondonandBuckinghamPalace,arevisitedbymillionsoftourists.Inthemeanwhile,Londonisanexcitingmoderncityandagreatentertainmentcenter.Lotsofmusicals,plays,concertsandoperasarecreatedandperformedinthetheatresofthewestpart.What’smore,theclimateinLondonvariedinallseasonwithwarmwinterandcoolsummer.

III.日记篇（描述事件）：

1．

March15th,Monday

ThiseveningIhadagreattimeatmyfriend’sbirthdaypartywherewesanganddancedtogetherhappily.UnluckilynosoonerhadIleftmyfriends’homethanitbegantorainheavily,soIhadtowaitdownstairsuntiltherainstopped.WhileIwaswaiting,amotorbikeranbymeveryfastandhitaboyatthecrossing.Icouldhardlybelievethatthemotorbikeranawaywithoutstopping.SoangrydidIfeelthatItelephonedthepoliceatoncebecauseIhadwrittendownitsnumber:

GH-2375,afterwhichIsenttheboytothehospital.

2．

December26,SundayFine

ThisafternoonLiMingwenttothepark,wherehesawseveralboysskatingonthefrozenpond.Suddenlyheheardaboycryingforhelp,whohadfallenintothewater.LiMingjumpedintotheicywaterimmediatelyandmanagedtopulltheboytosafety.Thentheboywasgivenfirstaidandsooncametohimself.Theboy’sparents,whohadcomeafteraphonecall,werenowverythankfultoLiMing,whowastremblingwithcold.

3.

LastSaturday,August26ItookpartinaspeechcontestatGuangzhouChildren’sPalace,whosethemewas“ProtectOurEarth”.AfterIlookedforinformationinthelibraryandonthenetmanytimes,Ipreparedadraftforthespeech.Butwhenmyturncame,Ifeltextremelynervous.Itriedtocalmmyselfdown,andtomyjoy,Igotthethirdplaceatlast.Byparticipatinginthiscontest,Icametotheunderstandingthatself-confidencecanencourageustodoeverythingwellandthatonlybyusingthelanguageconstantlycanweimproveourEnglish.

4.ReportonaFire

AbigfirebrokeoutinamiddleschoolofourcityonSeptember11th,2006.Morethan2000studentsandteacherswerehavingameetinginahallwhenthefirehappened,whichwasstartedbyashortcircuitintheceilingofthehall.Itwasdifficulttocontrolthefirebecausethereweresomanypeopleinit.Thefirelastedforabouttwohoursbeforeitwasbroughtundercontrolandthewholehallwasdestroyed.Over20peoplelosttheirlivesandmorethan100peoplegotburnt.

5.

DearSirandMadam,

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