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英语六级作文
大学英语六级考试优秀范文及写作指导
关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文
InternetSurfing-因特网冲浪
Nowadays,thereisagrowingpopularityofInternetsurfingoncollegecampus.Anincreasingnumberofstudents,majoringeitherinscienceorengineeringorinliberalarts,spendmanyhourssurfingtheInternetwithkeeninteresteveryday.
InternetsurfinghasattractedcollegestudentslikemagnetsbecauseitistheworldofInternetandtheworldofglobalization.First,withtheglobalcoverageofInternet,wecanreachoutandtouchanyoneatanyplaceoftheworld.ViaInternet,wecansendandreceiveE-mailsatanytimemuchfaster,cheaperandmoreeffectivethanconventionalmeanssuchastelephone,telexandfax.Next,viaaccesstothehomepagesoflibraries,universities,journalsandnewsagencies,andresearchorganizations,wecaneasilyacquireallkindsofinformation,toknowwhatisgoingonallovertheworld.Finally,byclickingthemouse,wearecapableofdoingsuchimportantthingsasshopping,findingjobs,makingfriends,down-loadingfilesandprograms,doingbusiness,publishingpapersandfreelyairingouropinionsonallsortsofinterestingissues.Whatismore,Internetoffhrsmanyopportunities.Forexample,wecanwork,educateourselvesandcommunicatewithothersathomeviaInternet.
IntheInformationAge,itisdifficuhtoimaginemodernlifewithoutInternet.WiththerapiddevelopmentofInformationTechnologyindustry,successfuldot-comcompaniesmushroomedeverywhere.Internetisrevolutionizingoureconomy,oursocietyandourlife.
关于大学生压力的英语作文
Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicHowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?
Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力
2)大学生缓解压力的方式有…
3)你一般都是如何排解压力的?
HowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?
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关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第1点指出一个问题,提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题,提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力;列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。
关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文
HowShouldCollegeStudentsRelievePressure?
Today’scollegestudentsfacemanypressures,mainlyfromparents’expectation,study,economy,employmentandallkindsofcompetition.[1]Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.Pressurecandestroyastudent’sconfidence.[2]Moreseriously,itmightmakesomestudentslosecontroloftheiremotionsandbehaviors.
[3]Consideringthegreatdamageofoverduepressure,collegestudentsshouldlearntohowtorelievepressure.[2]First,weshouldhavearightevaluationofourselves[4]soasto[5]makeuseofadvantagesandavoiddisadvantages.[2]Second,weshould[6]setaclearaimofastruggle.Theaimcangiveusmotivation,andmakeusbecomeactive.[2]Third,[7]attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelievepressure.[2]Finally,ifyoufindpressureisnearly[8]beyondyourcontrol,you’dbetterturntoprofessionalpsychologicalguidance.
[2]Astome,mypressureismainlyfromfutureemployment.[4]Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages,andproduceamorepracticaljobobjection.[2]Somyemploymentpressurewasrelievedgreatly.NowIbecomeconfidentinmyfuture,andI[9]dobelieveIcangetanidealjobaftermygraduation.
【亮点点评】
[1]although引导让步状语从句。
[2]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[3]“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。
[4]表示目的。
[5]“扬长避短”。
[6]“设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。
[7]动名词短语作主语,用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。
[8]“超出…范围或能力”。
[9]强调动词believe。
佳句临摹
1.佳句:
Althoughpressuretosomeextentcanprovidemotivation,overduepressurehasaseriousnegativeeffect.
临摹:
尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处,但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。
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2.佳句:
Attendingcollectiveactivitiesisaneffectivewaytorelieve
临摹:
学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。
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3.佳句:
Inordertoreduceit,Iaskedmyparentshelpmeanalysemyadvantagesanddisadvantages
临摹:
为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势,大学生们必须全面发展自己的能力。
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【KEY】
1.Althoughapart-timejobdoesmuchgoodtous,weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeonit.
2.Learninghowtodealwithpeopleisthefirstandthemostimportantsteptoenterintothesociety.
3.Inordertogettheirpriorityinthefiercecompetition,collegestudentshavetodeveloptheirabilities
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCreditCardsonCampus.Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡
2)分析产生该现象的原因
3)针对大学生使用信用卡提出你的建议
CreditCardsonCampus
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关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因,提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因;针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文
CreditCardsonCampus
Inrecentyears,creditcardshave[1]gainedmorepopularityamongcollegestudents.[2]Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,[3]anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcardandbeguntoconsumebyit.
[4]Thefollowingthreefactorscanaccountforthepopularityofcreditcardsincollege.[5]Firstly,acreditcardprovidesoverdrawingservice,[6]whichis[7]abigattractionforthosestudentswhohavenomuchmoneyfortheirdomination.[5]Secondly,acreditcardcanhelpreleasefinancialburdensonthosepoorstudents,and[8]hencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschoolforlackingmoney.[5]Besides,manybanksmakesomepreferentialpoliciesoncreditcards,likesendingagift,loweringyearcost.[7]Drawnbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.
[5]AsfarasIamconcerned,itisnotabadthingforcollegestudentstoowncreditcards.[5]However,thereismisuseofcreditcardsamongcollegestudents.Manystudentsusecreditcardstobuyluxuriousthingstheydon’tneedreally,andevensomeofthemoweabigcreditcardsdebt.[5]Therefore,schoolsandbankshaveresponsibilitytoletcollegestudentslearnhowtousecreditcardsproperly.[9]Onlyinthiswaycancollegestudentsenjoyreallytheadvantagesofcreditcards.
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】
[1]“越来越流行”。
[2]“随着”,介词。
[3]“越来越多的”。
[4]用于引出原因。
[5]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]which引导非限制性定语从句。
[7]表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式,用词富于变化。
[8]“由此,因此”。
[9]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。
关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹
1.佳句:
Withbanks’morefocusoncollegemarket,anincreasingnumberofcollegestudentshaveappliedforacreditcard.
临摹:
随着市场经济的快速发展,金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。
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2.佳句:
Acreditcardcanhelpthosepoorstudentspaytheirtuitionandfees,andhencereducetheriskoftheirdroppingschool.
临摹:
一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力,并由此来增加就业机会。
3.佳句:
Drawedbythesepolicies,manycollegestudentsapplyforcreditcards.
临摹:
在就业压力的迫使下,一些大学生开始自主创业。
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【KEY】
1.Withtherapiddevelopmentofmarketeconomy,moneyplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleinthesociety.
2.Somestudentshopetoenhancetheirpracticalabilitiesbyattendingsocialpractice,andhenceincreasetheirchancesofemployment.
3.Forcedbyemploymentpressure,somecollegegraduatesbegintosetuptheirownbusinesses.(
关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions:
Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicIsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?
Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:
1)随着人们生活水平的提高,一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了
2)但是很多人反对这种说法
3)你的看法是…,为什么?
IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?
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关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第1点提出一种观点,提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:
提出第1种观点:
节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了,并说明理由;提出第2种观点:
勤俭节约仍然是一种美德,并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法,并说明理由。
关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文
IsThriftStillaGoodVirtue?
Withtheimprovementofthelivingstandards,manypeopleare[1]nolongerinterestedinthesimplelifestyle[2]andsomeofthemevenfeelashamedtobethrifty.Whattheypursueisthelatestfashion.Intheireyes,thriftisalreadyoutofstyle.
[3]However,stillotherpeopleinsistthatthriftisagoodvirtue.Theysaythattheunprecedentedpowerofproductiondoesn’tmeanthatweareentitledtoalifeofextravagance,becauseournaturalresourcesarelimited[2]andsomeofthemevenare[4]onthedecline.[5]Moreover,theyholdthatwastemayleadtodegradationofsocialatmosphereandenvironmentalpollutionaswell.
[6]Astome,Ipreferthelatteropinion.Ibelieve[7]“Wastenot,wantnot.”Thetruthofthissayingis[8]nottogiveupcomfortbuttoenhanceefficiency.[5]Infact,economicgrowthdependsenormouslyonsaving.[5]Besides,therearestillmillionsofChinese[9]livingunderpovertyline.Wecanneveraffordrecklesswaste.[5]Therefore,[10]itisnodoubtthatthriftisstillagoodvirtuethatweshouldnotgiveup.
关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】
[1]“不再”。
[2]表示递进。
[3]引出另外一种观点。