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写作素材新高考概要写作高级词汇的运用考试拿分就靠它
新高考概要写作“高级词汇”的运用——考试拿分就靠它
高级词汇的运用应遵循以下几条原则:
原则一:
"弃旧取新"原则
阅卷老师偏爱"学得晚"的单词,因为使用学得比较晚的单词,可以体现学生"学以致用"的意识。
例如,表示"美丽的"形容词,同学们首先想到的是初中词汇beautiful,用高中词汇appealing,attractive,charming和fascinating等来替换beautiful,可以为书面表达提分不少。
原则二:
"短语优先"原则
高考书面表达中,多使用词组和习语来代替一些单词可以起到增加文采的作用。
例如,first可用tobegin/startwith替换;besides可以用inaddition和whatismore替换;consider可以用takesth.intoconsideration/account替换;remember可以用keepinmind替换。
原则三:
"避免重复"原则
同学们要想写出一篇好的书面表达,就要尽量避免重复多次使用同一个简单的单词。
例如,反复使用should,这时考生应该充分发散思维,灵活地运用短语besupposedto和hadbetter等进行替换。
第1组:
代替important的高级词汇
〔简单〕Educationisveryimportant.
〔高级〕Educationis ofmuch/vital/greatimportance.
〔简单〕Theworkhedoesisveryimportant.
〔高级〕Theworkhedoesis absolutelyvital.
〔简单〕Abalanceddietisveryimportantforus.
〔高级〕Abalanceddietis absolutelyessential foreveryone.
〔简单〕Moneyistheonlythingthat’simportanttohim.
〔高级〕Moneyistheonlythingthat matterstohim.
〔简单〕Firstimpressionsareveryimportant.
〔高级〕Firstimpressionsreallydo count.
〔简单〕Parentsareimportantinchildren’slearning.
〔高级〕Parents playanimportantrole/partin children’slearning.
〔简单〕Children’seducationisveryimportantforChineseparents.
〔高级〕Chineseparents attachmuchimportanceto children’seducation.
〔简单〕It’sveryimportantforparentstobehonestwiththeirchildren.
〔高级〕It’s veryvital/essential forparentstobehonestwiththeirchildren.
第2组:
代替good的高级词汇
〔简单〕Heisagoodfootballplayer.
〔高级〕Heisan amazing footballplayer.
〔简单〕Thisisaverygoodplace.
〔高级〕Thisisa fantastic place,reallybeautiful.
〔简单〕Theviewfrommybedroomwindowwasverygood.
〔高级〕Theviewfrommybedroomwindowwas absolutelybreathtaking.
〔简单〕ThisisaverygoodopportunitytolearnaboutAmericanculture.
〔高级〕Thisisa unique opportunitytolearnaboutAmericanculture.
〔简单〕Theschool'sexaminationresultswereverygood.
〔高级〕Theschool'sexaminationresultswerevery impressive.
〔简单〕Thefoodwasverygoodandwehadawonderfulnight.
〔高级〕Thefoodwas superb andwehadawonderfulnight.(superb:
杰出的,极好的)
〔简单〕Thestaffaredoingagoodjob.
〔高级〕Thestaffaredoinga splendid job.(splendid:
辉煌的,灿烂的,极好的)
〔简单〕Ican'tstandhim,butmywifethinkshe’sverygood.
〔高级〕Ican'tstandhim,butmywifethinkshe’s marvelous.(marvelous:
非凡的,不可思议的)
〔简单〕Youlookverygoodinthatdress.
〔高级〕Youlook absolutelygorgeous inthatdress!
第3组:
代替cause/make的高级词汇
〔简单〕Hisactionscouldmakehimlosehisjob.
〔高级〕Hisactionscould leadto himlosinghisjob.(leadtosbdoingsth:
导致某人做某事)
〔简单〕Theaccidentcausedtwopassengerstodie.
〔高级〕Theaccident resultedin thedeathoftwopassengers.
〔简单〕Thereareseveralreasonsforthestrangephenomenon.
〔高级〕Severalreasonsmay accountfor thestrangephenomenon.(accountfor:
对……做出解释)
〔简单〕Thefloodscausedthedeathsofoverahundredpeople.
〔高级〕Thefloods wereresponsiblefor thedeathsofoverahundredpeople.
〔简单〕Dailyshavingcancauseanumberofskinproblems.
〔高级〕Dailyshavingcan giveriseto anumberofskinproblems.(giveriseto:
引起,导致)
〔简单〕Wearestilldealingwithproblemscausedbyyourmistake.
〔高级〕Wearestilldealingwithproblems resultingfrom yourmistake.
第4组:
代替becauseof的高级词汇
〔简单〕We'vereachedourgoalbecauseofyourgreathelp.
〔高级〕We'vereachedourgoal, thanksto yourgreathelp.
〔简单〕Becausethemoneyisn’tenough,theprojectwillnotcontinuenextyear.
〔高级〕Owingto alackoffunds,theprojectwillnotcontinuenextyear.
〔简单〕Becauseofthepilots'strike,allflightshavehadtobecancelled.
〔高级〕Asaresultof thepilots'strike,allflightshavehadtobecancelled.
〔简单〕Thefishesintheriverhavediedbecauseofwaterpollution.
〔高级〕Thefishesintheriverhavedied asaconsequenceof waterpollution.
〔简单〕Therestaurant'ssuccesswasmainlybecauseofitsnewmanager.
〔高级〕Therestaurant'ssuccesswas duelargelyto itsnewmanager.
第5组:
代替very的高级词汇
〔简单〕Self-confidenceisveryimportanttooursuccess.
〔高级〕Self-confidenceis absolutelyvital tooursuccess.
〔简单〕Earthquakesareverydifficulttopredict.
〔高级〕Earthquakesare extremely difficulttopredict.
〔简单〕Hismotherisaverysuccessfulpolitician.
〔高级〕Hismotherisa highly successfulpolitician.
〔简单〕Hisattitudeisveryimportanttoitssuccess.
〔高级〕Itssuccesswilldepend toalargeextent onhisattitude.(toalargeextent:
在很大程度上)
〔简单〕Shelooksverybeautifultonight.
〔高级〕Shelooks extraordinarily beautifultonight.(extraordinarily:
非常,格外的)
〔简单〕Conditionshaveimprovedalotoverthepastfewyears
〔高级〕Conditionshaveimproved considerably overthepastfewyears.(considerably:
相当,非常)
〔简单〕Raisingmoneyforthehomelesshasbeenverydifficult.
〔高级〕Raisingmoneyforthehomelesshasbeen incredibly difficult.(incredibly:
难以置信地,很)
第6组:
表达“对……有好处”的高级词汇
〔简单〕ThevisittoEuropeanuniversitieswillbegoodforus.
〔高级〕Wewill benefitgreatlyfrom thevisittoEuropeanuniversities.
〔简单〕Weshouldworktogethertohelpthewholecommunity.
〔高级〕Weshouldworkertogetherto benefit thewholecommunity.
〔简单〕Abitmoreexercisewouldbegoodforyou.
〔高级〕Abitmoreexercisewould doyougood.
〔简单〕It'suselesstotellhim---hewon'tlisten.
〔高级〕It'snogood tellinghim---hewon'tlisten.
〔简单〕Thesummercoursecanmakestudents’oralEnglishbecomebetter.
〔高级〕Thesummercoursecan improve students’oralEnglish.
第7组:
表达“对……坏处”的高级词汇
〔简单〕Modernfarmingisverybadforthecountryside.
〔高级〕Modernfarminghave donemuchharmto thecountryside.
〔简单〕Thesechemicalsisverybadfortheenvironment.
〔高级〕Thesechemicalshave causedseriousdamageto theenvironment.
〔简单〕Smokingcanbeverybadforyourhealth.
〔高级〕Smokingcan severelydamage yourhealth.
〔简单〕Thefirewasverybadfortheschool.
〔高级〕Theschool wascompletelydestroyed inthefire.
〔简单〕Alcoholanddrugswereverybadforhiscareer.
〔高级〕Alcoholanddrugsalmost ruined hiscareer.
〔简单〕Iwantyoutohavefun.
〔高级〕Idon'twantto spoil yourfun.(spoil:
溺爱,毁掉)
第8组:
表示“大小多少”的高级词汇
〔简单〕Mynewjobwillbeabigchallenge.
〔高级〕Mynewjobwillbea tremendous challenge.(巨大的)
〔简单〕MoreandmoreAmericansarecuriousaboutChineseculture.
〔高级〕Anincreasingnumberof AmericansarecuriousaboutChineseculture.
〔简单〕Theshortageofteachersisabigproblem.
〔高级〕Theshortageofteachers posesamajorproblem.(posesamajorproblem:
构成重大问题)
〔简单〕Wehavemadesomesmallchangestotheprogram.
〔高级〕Wehavemadesome minor changestotheprogram.(minor:
较小的)
〔简单〕Mostofthestudentsareshort-sighted.
〔高级〕Themajorityof thestudentsareshort-sighted.
〔简单〕Thepolicybenefitsonlyasmallgroupofpeopleinthecountry.
〔高级〕Thepolicybenefitsonly asmallminorityof thecountry'spopulation.
第9组:
devote替换spend
Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→
Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.
第10组:
average替换ordinary
I’manaverage(ordinary)student.
第11组:
but替换very
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasveryinteresting.→
Thefilmwesawlastnightwasnothingbutinteresting.
第12组:
seat替换sit
Onhiswaytoschool,hefoundanoldladyseated(sitting)bytheroad,lookingworried.
第13组:
suppose替换should
Heissupposedto(should)havedrivenmoreslowly.
第14组:
appreciate替换thank
Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp.→
Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch.
第15组:
thecase替换true
Idon’tthinkitisthecase(true).
第16组:
on替换assoonas
Assoonashearrived,hebeganhisresearch.→
Onhisarrival,hebeganhisresearch.
第17组:
dueto替换becauseof
Hearrivedlatedueto(becauseof)thestorm.
第18组:
cover替换walk/read
Aftercovering(walking)10miles,weallfelttired.
第19组:
contributeto 替换behelpful/useful
PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→
PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.
第20组:
roundthecorner替换comingsoon/nearby
①Thesummervacationisroundthecorner(comingsoon).Doyouhaveanyplans?
②LiMingstudiesinaschoolroundthecorner(nearby).
第21组:
cometolight替换discover
Thefamilyweresopleasedwhentheydiscoveredthelostjewels.→
Thefamilyweresopleasedwhenthelostjewelscametolight.
第22组:
haveaball替换haveagoodtime/enjoyoneself
Aftervisitingtheworkshop,wewentbacktoschool.Everyoneofushadaball(hadagoodtime).
第23组:
comeupwith替换thinkof
Jackisveryclever.Heoftencomesupwith(thinksof)newideas.
第24组:
setaside替换save
Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.
第25组:
beof+n.替换adj.
Theproductsareofhighquality(verygood)andaresoldeverywhereinChina.
第26组:
referto替换talkabout/of,mention
Theprofessoryoureferredto(talkedabout)isveryfamous.
第27组:
lest替换sothat/inorderthat
IwrotedownhistelephonenumbersothatIwouldnotforgetit.→
IwrotedownhistelephonenumberlestIforgetit.
第28组:
becaughtupin...
becrazyabout...
beabsorbedin...
beaddictedto...
替换beinterestedin
Heiscaughtupin(interestedin)collectingstamps.
第29组:
morethan替换very
I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→
I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.
第30组:
perfect(ly)替换good/verywell
Hespeaksperfect(good)English./HespeaksEnglishperfectly(verywell).
第31组:
dosb.afavor替换help
Wouldyoupleasedomeafavor(helpme)toturndowntheradio?
第32组:
inthecourseof替换during
Inthecourseof(During)themountain-climbing,pleasehelpeachotherandpayspecialattentiontoyoursafety.
第33组:
themajorityof替换most
Themajorityof(Mostof)theintervieweespreferwatchingTVathometogoingtothecinema.
第34组:
consistof替换bemadeupof
Ourclassconsistsof(ismadeupof)50students.
第35组:
bewornout替换betired/broken
①Afterfivehours’non-stopwork,wewereallwornout(tired).
②Myshoesarewornout(broken).Pleasebuymea