16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析.docx
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16年改革后英语专四考试新题型材料作文模拟练习及范文分析
专四新题型写作
自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。
出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。
考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。
值得注意的是,在写作过程中,概述材料和进行评论缺一不可,否则将可能被扣分。
例题1
PARTVIWRITING
ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:
1)Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen
2)Commentonwhetherstudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources
Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.
Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
Dostudentslearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources?
WiththeadventoftheInternetandothertelecommunicationstechnologies,thereisavastlygrowingwealthofresourcesavailablefromanimmenserangeofmediaoutlets.Studentshavetheabilitytoabsorbinformationinaquickerandmoreefficientwaywhenresearchingontheirownthroughreadingpublicationsorbrowsingwebpagesonline.Asaresult,somepeoplearguethatstudentsnowlearnmorefromotherresourcesthanfromclasses.
Conductingresearchwithonlinematerialsisanactiveprocess,whichallowsyoungsterstofocusingreaterdetailratherthanpassivelylisteningtoalectureinalargeclassroom.
TheInternetandTVarealsoeasilyaccessibleplatformsforstudentsintheremoteplaceswhereteachingresourcesarenotasabundantasthoseinmoredevelopedregions.
However,teachershavethecapabilityofexplainingtheknowledgeinadeeperwayandnotonlyprovidetheoreticalexplanationbutalsopracticalexperienceaboutlife.Theyhaveaccumulatedalargebodyofintelligencethatisprofoundlymoreprecisethanothersources.Teachersnotonlyfunctionasinitiatorswhoimpartknowledgebutalsoserveassupervisorsorguardians.Theconventionalroleofinstructors,inthisdayandage,hasevolvedtobecomeevaluatorsandfacilitators,guidingstudentsintheiracademicandpersonalefforts.
范文1
Intheinformationage,thetraditionalstudent-teacherrelationshiphasbeenaffecteddeeplyandpeoplebegintodoubtwhetherstudentscanlearnmorefromclassesthanfromotherresources.(介绍背景)Accordingtotheconventionalview,teachersarestilltheprimarysourcefromwhichstudentsobtainprofessionalknowledge,timelyclassinteraction,andeffectivesupervisionfromteachers.(总结第一种观点)Onthecontrary,nowadays,manypeoplebelievethatstudentscanlearnmorefromotherresourcessuchasInternetandTVsincetheyaremoreaccessibleandengagestudentsmoreactivelyinresearch.(总结第二种观点)
Forme,Iaminfavorofthefirstview.(表明立场)Teachersplayanirreplaceableroleineducation,whetherit’sinthepastoratpresent,sincetheynotonlyimpartknowledge,butalsoeducatepeople.(总论据)Foronething,whatstudentslearnfromtheirclassesismoreprecisethanfromotherresourceswhichprovideanenormousamountofdataneededtobesiftedthroughtodeterminewhichinformationisaccurate.(理由一)Foranother,teachersinschoolputtheshapingofpersonalityinaplaceasimportantastheteachingofknowledge,whichishardforstudentstoobtainfromotherresource.(理由二)
Inconclusion,thedevelopmentofcutting-edgetechnologyexertsabigimpactonmoderneducation.However,itcannevereliminatetheneedforhigh-qualityprofessionalsinclassroom.(重申论点)(213words)
例题2
PARTVIWRITING
ReadcarefullythefollowingexcerptandthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200WORDS,inwhichyoushould:
1)Summarizethemainmessageoftheexcerpt,andthen
2)Commentonwhetherpeopleshouldchoosetobecomeindoorsy
Youcansupportyourselfwithinformationfromtheexcerpt.
Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.
Shouldpeoplechoosetobecomeindoorsyinmodernworld?
InmoderntimeswhenwecanbuyeverythingweneedontheInternet,andcommunicateandevenworkthroughtheInternet,becomingindoorsymenorwomenissimplyachoiceofdifferentlifestyle.Inthepast,ifyouwanttobuysomething,youneedtogooutofyourhouse,gotothestore,andspendanhourortwochoosingtheproductyouwanttobuy.Butnowyoucanjustsitinfrontofacomputerandclickyourmouse,andtheproductcanbedeliveredtoyou.Beingindoorsycansavepeoplealotoftime.
Beingindoorsycanallowpeopletothinkandworkinapeacefulenvironment.Forexample,writerscanbequitecreativewhentheyarealoneathomewithoutbeinginterrupted.
Somesociologistswarnthattheindoorsylifestylewillmakepeoplebecomeself-centeredandnaive.Ifpeoplestayathomeforalongtime,theywillhavelittleinterpersonalcontactwithothers.Theydonotknowhowtohaveface-to-facecommunicationwithothers,andtheymaybecomeshy,uncomfortable,orself-centeredwhentheyareinvolvedinreal-lifecommunication.Thisindoorsylifestylewillhaveabadeffectontheirnormalinterpersonalrelationshipandtheirnormalwork.
Indoorsymenorwomenspendmostoftheirtimesittinginfrontofacomputer,andtheyseldomattendoutdooractivities.Watchingthecomputerscreenforalongtimewilldogreatharmtotheireyes.Also,manyindoorsypeopledonotliketoattendsportsactivities,andinthelongrun,theirhealthwillgetworse.
范文2
审题思路
本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。
在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正方观点:
“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。
然后概述反方观点:
“宅”有种种弊端。
接下来给出自己的观点:
现代科技是把双刃剑,我们要把握好,适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利,但过度依赖则会对身体有害。
最后总结全文,重申观点。
ShouldWeEmbraceIndoorsyLifestyle?
Withtheglobalizationofmoderntechnology,especiallytheworld-wideaccesstoInternetservice,people’slifestylehasbeengreatlyinfluenced.(介绍背景)Someenjoyindoorsylifestyle.Theyholdthatindoorsylifestyleistime-savingandpeaceful.Incontrast,thoseagainsttheideaclaimthatkeepanindoorsylifestylewilldoharmtopeoplebothpsychologicallyandphysically.(总结材料)
AsfarasIamconcerned,moderntechnologyisadouble-edgedsword.(点明观点)Ifweconsideritasausefultooltoimproveourlife,itwillcertainlybringunprecedentedconveniencetous.WiththeassistanceoftheInternet,onecansavehistimethroughworking,shopping,orcommunicatingwithothersathome.(正方理由一)Also,solitudeisn’talwaysequaltoloneliness.Freefromoutsideinterruption,onecanbecreativeandkeephismindsharp.(正方理由二)Ontheotherhand,toomuchrelianceonorindulgenceintheInternetwillcertainlyhaveanimpactonournormallifeandwork.Forinstance,indulginginsocialnetworkonlinemaycorrodepeoples’socialskills.Tobespecific,theymayfeellostwhentalkingwithpeopleface-to-face,whichmayaffecttheirnormalrelationshipwithfamilymembersandfriends.(反方理由一)What’sworse,sittinginfrontofacomputeralldaylongmeanslittleoutdooractivities,whichmaydamageone’shealth.(反方理由二)
Inconclusion,whileenjoyingallthebenefitsthevirtualworldhasbroughttous,indoorsypeopleshouldalsostepoutoftheirhomeandengagethemselvesintherealworld.(总结上一段)(234words)