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新托福预测写作Task2高分范文：

movetoanewcity

　　09.10.31NA

　　Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Itisoftennotagoodideatomovetoanewcityoranewcountrybecauseyouwillloseoldfriends.

　　Sampleanswer （5paragraphs,363words）

　　Withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnologies,theprocessofglobalizationisprogressingquickly.Peoplehavebecomemorelikelytomovetoanothercityorcountryinpursuitoftheirgoals.Somepeoplecontendthatitisabadideatomovetoanewplacebecausethosewhorelocatelosetheircurrentfriends.Istronglydisagreewiththisstatementforseveralreasons.

　　Peoplewhomovetonewlocationsdonotneedtolosetheirfriends,astheycantakeadvantageoftechnologiesinmostcountriestokeepintouch.Peoplecanusenumerousmeansofmakingcontact,includingtelephone,e-mail,andonlinechatsoftware.Thesetechnologieseasilyallowonetomaintainrelationships.Forexample,myfamilymovedfromHengyangtoChangshaseveralyearsagoduetomyparents’workassignment.Sinceourmove,IhavepreservedmyrelationshipswithmyoldfriendsinHengyangbychattingonline;weevenseeeachotheroftenthroughvideoconferencing.Inaddition,asthetransportationsystemhasexpandedquickly,itisveryconvenientformetotaketripstovisitmyoldfriendsnowandthen.

　　Furthermore,movingtonewplacesbroadenspeople’shorizons,supportingtheirpersonaldevelopment.Bytravelinginternationally,onecangainabetterunderstandingofvariouscustoms,histories,religions,andcultures.Withabroadview,peoplebecomemoreoptimisticandactive.Myuncle,forexample,usedtobeveryshyandunsureofhispurposewhenhewasyoung;hebecamemuchmoreconfidentandpositiveafterhefinishedhisundergraduateprogramabroad.Hehasalwayssaidthathisfouryearsofcampuslifeabroadchangedhiswayoflookingatlife.

　　Thoughtechnologiesallowpeopletoconnectwitholdfriendsatadistance,theydohavesomedisadvantages.Forinstance,whenfriendswholiveindifferentcitiescannotcommunicatefacetoface,theymayhaveunnecessarymisunderstandingsanddisagreements.Despitethesechallenges,Iinsistthatitisnotbadtomovetootherplaces,giventheenormousbenefitsthatrelocatingcanbring.

　　Inconclusion,peoplewhomovetonewcitiesandcountriesshouldnotworryaboutlosingtheirfriends,as technologicaladvancementscansecuretheirrelationshipsandmovingcanofferthemgreatbenefits.

　　（Thisessayisaneditedversionofasamplewritingpostedonaforum）

新托福预测100213NA写作【版本1】范文：

critisimandsuccess

　　100213NA：

Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Inateam,thosewhodonotacceptothers’criticismcannotsucceed.

　　　　Sampleanswer

　　Thereisnowayonecanavoidcriticismfromotherpeople.Criticismisverynaturalasmostpeoplecanseetheworldonlyfromtheirpointofview.Hencetheyareunabletoseetheholisticpictureoftheworldandtheneedfordiversity.Ifapersondoesnotknowhowtohandlecriticismfromothermembersofateam,he/shemaytendtoreactnegativelytowardsthem,andhis/herworkperformanceisnotlikelytobesuccessful.

　　Whileworkinginateam,youcannotbesurethatyouropinions,decisionsorapproachesarealwayscorrect,andinmanycasesyouwillneedtoacceptcriticismfromothermemberswhowillpointoutyourmistakesanddirectyoutowardstherightcourseofaction.Insports,forexample,especiallyinteamsportssuchasfootballorbasketball,anyoneplayer,nomatterhowskillfulorexperiencedthisplayeris,willmakemistakesduringagame,sometimeseven“deadlyones”.Andwhencriticismspourinafterthegame,fromteammembers,thecoach,orteamfans,thebeststrategyisnottorunawayorfindexcusestoavoidthesecriticisms,buttolistentoandaccepttheircriticisms,taketheiradvice,andtryhardtoimprovethenexttime.

　　Othertimes,youmayoccasionallybemisinterpreted,misjudged,andthereforeunfairlycriticized,butinafriendlyworkenvironment,thesecriticismsareoftenmadeoutofgoodwill.Sointhesecasesitmaybehelpfulthatyoulistencarefullytowhatotherssayandtrytounderstandtheirpointsofview,insteadofreactingaggressivelytowardsthem,whichmayharmteamrelationshipinthelongrun.Ithinkweallhaveseen,inreallifeoronaTVprogram,asituationwheretwopeoplestartedyellingateachotheronlybecauseonethinkstheotherisintentionallyfindingfault.Butoftenthisisduetoasimplemisunderstandingormiscommunication.Asuccessfulteamplayerwouldfirstofallstaycalm,summarizetheotherperson’sperspective,thenfindouttherootofsuchmisunderstanding,andfinallyresolvetheconflict.

　　Criticism,especiallyifitseemsunjustified,canbepainfulandcauseadefensivereaction,butatrulysuccessfulteamplayerwillfacecriticismwithpatienceandprofessionalism,andturnitintoaconstructiveforcetowardsfinalsuccess.

新托福预测100213NA写作【版本2】范文：

teamsuccess

　　100213NA：

Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Peopleholdingdifferentviewscannotachievesuccessasateam..

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由于机经回忆中出现两种版本的写作，目前暂无法确定哪个版本正确，所以请大家也要看下100213NA独立写作的另一个版本，请点此查看。

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　　Sampleanswer

　　Teamworkhasbecomeanimportantpartoftheworkingculture.Mostcompaniesnowrealizetheimportanceofteamworkbecauseinourmodernworldmanytasksarebecomingincreasinglycomplexthattheyrequireateamwithmultipleskillstocomplete.Butisittruethateverymemberintheteamshouldhavethesameopinioninordertoachievesuccess?

Frommypointofview,mostofthetime,ateamconsistingofdivergentopinionsaremorelikelytosucceed.

　　Asweallknow,itisnotpracticaltoexpecteveryoneinateamtohavethesamepointofview,becauseeveryoneisadifferentindividualwhohashisorherownpersonalityandideasduetodifferentbackgrounds.However,oftensuchdifferencesinopinionscanberesolvedaftersufficientdiscussionandespeciallyaftercoordinationbyateamleader.Ioncejoinedafootballteambackinhighschool.Everytimebeforeafootballmatch,teammemberswouldsittogetheranddiscussstrategiesinordertodefeatouropponentinthenextgame.Ofteninsuchdiscussionmanydifferentvoicescanbeheard:

Somemembersadvocateoffensebutothersemphasizedefense.Theteamleader,thecaptainofourteam,whoisaveryexperiencedfootballplayer,oftenplayedaveryimportantrole.Hewouldmakethefinaldecisiononteamdeployment,andhisstrategyalwaysbalancedoffensewithdefense.Underhisleadership,ourteamhadwonfourchampionshipsintheschoolfootballleague.

　　Furthermore,evenifdifferentopinionscannotberesolved,itdoesnotmeanateamwillfail,becausesometimesdifferenceinopinionswillleadtosomebrightthoughtsandcreativeideas.Inacompany,forexample,themajorityofteammembers,becauseofcompanytraditionorroutine,areoftenconfinedtoastereotypedviewandtheywouldtendtoagreewitheachotherpassively.Butthebestideasoftencomeafterheateddiscussionamongteammembers,whoholddifferentorevenconflictingviews.Sotheyneedsomeonedifferent,someonewhocansaynototheoldpractice,togenerateinnovativeideasandachieveimportantbreakthroughs.

　　Inaword,havingthesameopinionorattitudetotheissueisnotaguaranteeofsuccessfulteamwork.Indeed,wecanlearnalotfromthedifferentviews,aslongastheteamhasadefiniteaimandisledbyanexperiencedteamleader.

新托福预测100130NA写作范文：

scientificresearch

　　100130NA：

Doyouagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Thegovernmentshouldsupportscientificresearchevenifthere’snopracticaluse.

　　Sampleanswer

　　Itisgenerallybelievedthatscientificresearchshouldenhanceouroverallqualityoflife.Meanwhile,thereisalmostuniversalagreementthatthegovernmentshouldprovidefinancialandpoliticalsupporttoanyresearchthatislikelytoresultinimmediateandsignificantbenefitsforthemajorityofpeople.However,whenitcomestowhetherthegovernmentshouldsupportscientificresearchwithnopracticaluse,people’snotionsvary.Iagreewiththestatementthatthegovernmentshouldallocateadequatefundstoanyscientificresearchthataimstoimprovethewellbeingofpeople,evenifitisofnopracticaluseintheshortrun.

　　Scientificresearchwhosesocietalbenefitsareimmediate,predictable,andprofoundshouldcontinuetobeahighpriority.Forexample,biotechnologyresearchhasbeenproventohelpcureandpreventdiseases;advancesinmedicaltechnologymakeitpossibletooffersafer,lessinvasivediagnosesandtreatments;advancesingeneticshelppreventbirthdefects;advancesinengineeringandchemistryimprovethestructuralintegrityoffacilitiessuchasbuildings,roads,bridges,andvehicles;informationtechnologyenableseducationtobemoreaccessible;andcommunicationtechnologyfacilitatesglobalpeaceandparticipationinthedemocraticprocess.Todemoteanyoftheseresearchareastoalowerprioritywouldbepatentlyfoolhardy,giventheirdemonstrablebenefitsformanypeople.

　　However,thisisnottosaythatresearchwhosebenefitsarelessimmediateorclearshouldbegivenlowerpriority.Itisdifficulttopredictwhichresearchwillultimatelyleadtothegreatestcontributionstosociety.Researchwhosebenefitsarecertainoftenbreakslittlenewground,whileso-called“cutting-edge”researchwhosepotentialbenefitsareunknownmayprovemostusefultosociety.Onecompellingexampleinvolvescontroversialspaceresearch.Thisresearchareadoesnotimmediatelyaddresssociety’spressingsocialproblems.Yetinthelongerterm,itmightbenecessarytocolonizeotherplanetsinordertoensurethesurvivalofthehumanr