《肖克作文模版》.docx
《《肖克作文模版》.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《《肖克作文模版》.docx（51页珍藏版）》请在冰豆网上搜索。
《肖克作文模版》
2011年考研英语冲刺阶段
一．冲刺作文部分
1．历年考试主要涉及一些generaltopics,如爱心（2001）、成长（2003）、代沟（1992）、友谊（1994）、家庭（2005）、承诺（1998）、崇拜（2006）、健康（1996）、资源利用（2000）、文化交流（2002）等话题。
考生要以小见大，从图片细节中提炼升华出大型宏观主题加以议论，分析原因、利弊并得出建议。
命题中的图片和图表往往是单个或局部情况，但只追逐个别现象，分析就没有了深度，往往要追溯到总体情况。
即使2006年考题图画中有英国球星Beckham的发型，也要升华到对普遍的偶像崇拜（idolworship）现象的评价，而非仅仅针对Beckham个人。
命题从来不在个别事件、具体环节或细枝末节上做文章，决不会细到介绍北京经济适用房建设情况或点评《满城尽带黄金价》。
2． 命题中的“和谐社会”倾向：
在以上分析的基础上，我们重新审视历年考题的命题，发现以中老年教授组成的命题团队普遍趋向常规主流观点。
那么考题围绕着时代背景和主流思想，已经逐渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路。
只不过总体以和谐作为公式的话题可以分成和谐的三个不同层次：
个体和谐发展：
自信的重要性、节俭与浪费、如何看待成功、梦想与现实、抄袭（plagiarism）与诚信、高分低能现象、职业选择和规划、
个人、他人与社会的和谐共处：
个性与团队合作、如何看待竞争、网络的利弊、伪劣商品问题（fakecommodities-商家为牟利而危害社会）、乱收费问题、如何看待中国传统节日和洋节
人类与自然环境的和谐：
私家车的利弊（噪音空气污染、交通阻塞）、环境污染话题（空气、水、噪音、土壤、人类食品）、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹的破坏及保护
另外，不论何种命题，都要从简洁的图画中寻找线索并推理解决。
针对很少练习图画作文构思的考生，建议近期可上网查寻一下中国新闻漫画网，寻找一些幽默讽刺图画，练习快速推理，查找问题所在，同时进行相关词联想，熟能生巧。
稍加练习，便会发现一些惯性推理技巧，考试时就会大大减轻紧张感，从容不迫地进行构思和创作。
评分标准：
本题以总体评分法，通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：
20一17分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求：
清楚表达其内涵，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。
文章长度符合要求。
16—13分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求；比较清楚地表达其内涵，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词错误较少。
文章长度符合要求。
12—9分内容切题，基本包括题中所列的各项要求；基本清楚地表达其内涵：
句子结构和用词有一些错误。
文章长度符合要求。
8—5分内容基本切题，基本包含题中所列的各项要求，语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。
文章长度基本符合要求。
4—1分基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。
0分文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。
经典图画作文句子
一.说明现象
1．Recentlythephenomenonof……….hasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegivenenoughconsideration.
2．Recentlytheproblemofhasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention.
3．Avirtualepidemicofthe….isnowunderinthesociety
4．…….isanotherofthenewandbittertruthswehavetofacenow.
5．Manisnowfacingwithabigproblem….,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.
6．Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblemof
7．Inthepastfewyears,atendof…..hasbeenbecomingmoreandmoreclear.
二.发表现点与看法
1. Ifullyagreewiththestatementthat………Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows.
2. Althoughmanypeoplebelievethat……Idoubtwhethertheargumentbearsmuchanalysis.
3. Althoughthepopularbeliefis…….astudyindicates……..
4. somepeoplesuggest……Butwhatthesepeoplefailtounderstandis……..
5. fromapersonalperspective,Ipreferto
6. Itistruethat…………………..butapointisbeingleftoutofourconsideration.
7. Inordertoanswerthequestionof……………apersonmustweightwosides.
三..对立观点
1.Differentpeoplehave（hold）differentviews（opinions/pointsofview）onthisissue（problem/matter/question）
2.Somebelieve...Othersthink,Stillothersclaim（assume,have,hold,claim,believe,maintain,takeastandon）
3.Theyarequitedifferentfromeachotherininterpretingtheissue.
4.AsfarasIamconcerned（AsfarasIknow）
5.IhavetotakeotherfactorsintoconsiderationifIamconfrontedwithsuchadifficultchoice.
四.主题句常用句型
1.Itisimportant（necessary,urgent,difficult,easy,convenient,comfortable,expensive,desirable,advisable）forsb.todosth.（that）
Eg.
Itisinevitablethatthenaturalresourcesthroughouttheworldarediminishingasthedemandforthemisontheincrease
Itisobviousthatthestrengthofacountry'seconomyisdirectlyboundupwiththeefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.
Itisurgentforthegovernmenttotakemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateinourcountry.
Itisdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreationcenters,cinemas,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeettheincreasingneedsofthepeople.
2．Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas………..
3．Intheageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysasignificantrole.
4．Nothingismoreimportantthan…..
5．onecannotemphasizetheimportanceof…….somuch
6..Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...
Itgoeswithoutsayingthatexercisesareagoodwaytokeephealthy.
五.原因解释
1.Itmaybeattributedtothefollowingthreepoints.
2.Thedeteriorationofecologicalsystemmaybeattributedtothefollowingleadingfactors.Firstofall,...
Secondly,......Lastbutnotleast...
3.Acarefulanalysisofthechartsabovemayexplainwhythenumberofspeciesofwildlifeisonthedeclineandtherateofwildlifeextinctionisaccelerating.
4.Itisnoeasyjobtofindthereasonforthistendencywhichinvolvesseveralcomplicatedfactors.
5.Therearemanyreasonsresponsibleforthisinstance,andthefollowingarethetypicalones.Foronething,………Inaddition,…….Themainreasonisthat……
6.Oneofthereasonsthatisgivenfor…..isthat……
7.AfurtherreasonwhyIadvocateanattitudeof…..isthat….
8．.Anincreaseindemandcauses（resultsin/leadsto/produces）higherprices,whichaggravatespeople'sfinancialburden.
六.列举、举例表达方式
1.Forexample,womenareholdinghigherpositionsinpoliticalandeconomicpower.
2.Forinstance,theeconomicstatusofthepeoplehasbeengreatlyimproved.
3.Take...forexample,...
4.Acaseinpointis....
5.Thefollowingexamplemaywellillustratethepoint.（show,demonstrate）
6....isagoodcaseinpoint.
7.Thischartshows（diagram,table,graph,form,picture,cartoon,bars）
七.结论性
1. Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveattheconclusion………..
2. Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat
3. Tosumuptheaboveargument,Ithinkaproperattitudetowards………isthat…………
4. AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillchooseto…………becausethechoicefitsmypersonalityandmylife-longbelief.
5. judgingfromalltheevidenceavailable,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat…….
6. Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthenegativeones.
Therefore,Iwouldlike………….
八.后果性
1．Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethat……………willbeputindanger.
2．wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationof……..,ifallowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto…………..
3．Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddois…………
4．Inordertocrackthenuts,youneedconfidence,perseveranceandalsocourage.Whatismoreimportant,carefulconsiderationshouldbegivenbeforeyoucarryoutmeasures.
九.建议性
1. Itishightimethat………Herearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately.
2. Althoughitisaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcanmakethesituationbetter.Themostimportantis……………Anotherwayis……………stillanotherwayis………….
3. Noeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemof………Butthecommonrecognitionoftheimportanceof………..mightbethefirststepontherightway.
4. Manysolutionsareofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnonisadequateenough.Theproblemsshouldbestudiedindepth.
5. However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater.
6. Butthisproblemisverycomplicated.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononlyonewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.
最新研发的超级模板
（一）消极问题的批判
第一段
（1）Whatsetsmeponderingexceedinglyinthefirstpictureisthat,whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutilluminatingonsecondthoughts.
（2）Franklyspeaking,themostunforgettableimagearisinginmyeyesinthesecondpictureisthat.
（3）Apparently,thissillybutthought-provokingpicturemirrorsaphenomenonthatnothingismoredestructivetooursocialharmonyanddevelopmentthanA
第二段
（1）Asfortheissueof（A）,itssituationhasbeenbecomingincreasinglyunsatisfactoryinspiteofthefactthatmostpeoplearestillignorantoftheproblemsitbringsabout.
（2）ItisnodifficultjobtocomeupwithsomepossibleharmfuleffectsresultingfromtheexistenceofA.
（3）Tobeginwith,withitsseeminglydestructivepower,Acannotonlyhamperindividuals’development,butalsoserveasanevilinstrumenttohurtsb’sphysicalandmentalhealth.
（5）ThoseequippedwithAarealwayslookeddownuponbyothers,becauseAmayendowthemwithmoreselfishnessandhypocrisy.
（6）Inaddition,Ainourlifeshouldberegardedassocialmalignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithoureffortstobuildupaharmonioussociety..
（7）Andmostoften,thepeoplewhoarefrequentlymistreatedwith
Awilldevelopdeephatredforoursocietybecauseithinderstheprogressofoursocietyandinterruptsourpersonallife.
（8）AccidentsofvariouskindsresultingfromAhappenmorefrequentlythaneverbefore.
（9）BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomakeusgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.
第三段
（1）Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,whatreallyaccountsisnotthedangerofA,buthowwecanpreventitfromgettingworse.
（2）Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcementoflawsandregulationstoeliminateA.
（3）Ontheotherhand,apublicizingeducationalcampaignshouldbecarriedouttoenhancepeople’sawarenessabouttheharmfulnessofA.
（4）However,itiseasiersaidthandone.
（5）Inoneword,theAmustberemovedbecauseithinderstheprogressofoursociety.
一．公德的问题,比如说脏话,乱扔垃圾,乱脱鞋问题
第一段
（1）Whatsetsmeponderingexceedinglyinthefirstpictureisthat,whichseemstobehumorousandridiculousbutilluminatingonsecondthoughts.
（2）Franklyspeaking,themostunforgettableimagearisinginmyeyesinthesecondpictureisthat.
（3）Apparently,thissillybutthought-provokingpicturemirrorsaphenomenonthatnothingismoredestructivetooursocialharmonyanddevelopmentthanbadmanners
第二段
（1）Asfortheissueof（badmanners）,itssituationhasbeenbecomingincreasinglyunsatisfactoryinspiteofthefactthatmostpeoplearestillignor
升级会员 