四级 作文归纳及全面解读.docx

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四级作文归纳及全面解读

题型一：

参考范文一：

破题思路：

第一段：

描述漫画内容，引出文章主题：

电脑的使用越来越广泛，使用的时间也越来越长。

第二段：

分析该现象的原因。

第三段：

提出措施解决。

或得出自己的结论。

Thispicturevividlydescribesthatthepersonusesacomputerinthewholedayevenwhenhefallsasleepatnight.Whatthecartoonconveysistheimpactofcomputersonpeople.Newproductsarebeinginventedeveryminuteofeveryday,allofwhichwillholdswayoverpeopleinsomerespects。

However,inallthesetechnologiesandproducts,computershaveexertedthemostimportantinfluenceonpeople.Somepeopleassertthatcomputershavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,whilesomepeoplebelievethatcomputershavemadelifeeasierandmoreconvenient.NowmanyofmyclassmatesliketosurftheInternetintheirfreetime.IthinkInternetcanbringusbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Forexample,ifIhavesometroublestudying，Icansurftheinternettofindmorehelpfulinformation.However,Internetcanmakesomeproblemsatthesametime。

Inaword,inspiteofthefactthecomputerappearstohavemadelifemorecomplexandstressful,Ifeelthattheadvantagesaremoreobvious,whichhavebecomeanintegralpartofeverydaylife。

参考范文二：

Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,modernlifehasbeendominatedbycomputers.Nomattertheyoungmanisintheoffice,athome,andinhissparetime,theonlyfriendhehasisacomputer.Evenwhenhesleeps,whatisinhisdreamisstillthecomputer.Apparently,thecartoonaimstorevealthefactthatthecomputerhasbeguntoplayanegativeroleinthemodernlife。

　　第一段三句话，第一句大体描写，第二句细节描写，第三句话揭示图画目的。

　　Thereasonswhymodernpeoplearetiedupwithcomputersareasfollows.Tobeginwith,theyhavebecomeincreasinglybusierinmakingmoney;therefore,theyneedaquickwaytooutlettheirpressureandexhaustionandcomputeristheiridealcompanion.Moreover,computerscanassistpeopletodealwithcomplicatedworkingstuff,makefriends,andentertainthemselvesbecausetheyhavebecomegrowinglypowerfulandeverythingelseislinkedwiththem.Forinstance,twodecadesago,computerswerefarfrompopularandpeopleusedthemtopracticetypinglettersanddobasicworks.However,withtheInternetbecomingpervasive,computershaveintegratedmusic,films,shopping,andeverythingwelikeintotheirworlds.Now,whenwepowerontheall-mightycomputers,whatwewantisoutthereforus。

　　第二段：

中心句+两原因+一例子，原因句型先果后因和先因后果，思路是攻受各一个。

　　Tosumup,thislifestyleisabsolutelyimperfect.Inordertoleadahealthylife,wearesupposedtodomoreexercisesandexposeourselvestothetangibleworld.Meanwhile,itisabouttimethatwepoweredthecomputeroffandtalkedwithourfriendsandfamilyface-to-face.Onlyinthesewayswillmodernlifebecomemorebeautifulforyouandme。

最后一段总结+两建议+展望未来

题型二：

参考范文一：

Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,ayounggirlistalkingwithhermother.Shesaysironically,“Goodnewsmom!

Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice!

”Then,hermothersmilesandseemscontentwiththisresult.Apparently,thecartoonaimstorevealthefactthatamajorityofmodernparentsplayanincreasinglynegativeroleintheirchildren’sgrowth.

第一段三句话，描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。

Thereareseveralpossiblereasonsaccountableforthisphenomenon（中心句）.Tobeginwith,familyingrowingnumbershasonlyonechild;therefore,parentsoftentimesfocusalltheirattentionsonthatchildandexertmuchpressureonhimorher（原因一）.Moreover,numerousparentsintendtorealizetheirunfulfilleddreamsbylettingtheirchildrenlearnwhattheyfailedtolearnandapplyforthecollegebywhichtheyfailedtobeaccepted,becausetheyhavebecomericherandtheybelievethattheyhavethepowertomakewhattheywantedandwantcometruenow（原因二）.Forinstance,myuncleusedtobeapoormanandhisdreamthatonedayhewouldbecomeaviolinistwasbrokenbecauseoflackofmoney.Buthemadeafortunebysellingcoals,andthenforcedhisson,myyoungerbrothertopracticeplayingviolin.Mybrotherwasahugefanofsports,butnowhehastoplayviolineverydayunwillinglyandofterquarrelswiththeirparents（举例：

原来-然后-结局）.

Tosumup,itisunreasonableforparentstocontroltheirchildren’slife（总结句）.Inordertohelpthemgrowhappilyandhealthily,parentsaresupposedtocommunicatewiththeirkidsaboutwhattheyarereallyinterestedin（建议一，目的句型）.Meanwhile,itisabouttimethatparentslettheirkidsmaketheirownchoices（建议二，“是时候”句型）.Onlyinthesewayswillchildrengrowinapsychologicallyhappyenvironmentandrealizetheirowndreams.

参考范文二：

Parents’roleintheirchildren’sgrowth

Asisprescribedinthepicture,thegirltoldhermother,“Goodnewsmom!

Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice.”Wecaninferthatthemomchoosescollegeforherchild,butshouldtheparentsmakesuchdecisionfortheirchildren?

AsfarasIconcerned,parentscangiveadvicefortheirchildreninsteadofmakingdecisionsforthem.

Firstly,parentsalwayswanttogivetheirchildrenthebest,however,theycannotcompletelyunderstandtheirchildren’sinterestandcan’tsurewhatthemostsuitableistotheirchildren.Theyjustgivetheirchildrenwhattheyconsiderthebest,regardlessofwhattheirchildrenwantandwhattheylike.Sothebestwaytoshowyourloveistorespectchildren’schoice.Secondly,thechildrenshouldresponsiblefortheirownlife.Parentscancompanytheirchildrendecadesofyears,buttheycannotcompanytheirchildren’swholelife.Parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,butteachtheirchildrentobeindependentismoreimportantintheirgrowth.

Tosumup,parentscangivetheirchildrenadvice,buttheyshouldrespecttheirchildren’schoice.Afterall,childrenwillgrowuponeday,andtheymustlearnhowtoliveindependentandberesponsiblefortheirownlife.

参考范文三：

Asisclearlydepictedintheabovepicture,adaughtertellshismotherapieceofgoodnewsthatshehasbeenadmittedtoauniversityashermotherdesires.Thereisnodenialinsayingthatthecartoonleavesussuchadeepimpressionthatwecannothelpthinkingoveraquestion:

Whatroleshouldparentsplayintheirchildren’sgrowth?

Frommypointofview,duringtheprocessofachild’sgrowth,theroleofparentsismainlylistedasthefollowingtwoaspects.Ononehand,thereisnodoubtthatparentsareliabletotakegoodcareoftheirchildren.Ontheotherhand,inchildren’spersonalgrowth,parentsoughttoplayaroleasapersonwhohelpschildrendevelopself-dependence,whichcarriesmoresignificanttochildren’sfuturelife.Inotherwords,parentsshouldencouragetheirsonsordaughterstobeindependentratherthanreliantonothers.

Toconclude,inchildren’spersonalgrowth,parentsareresponsibletocarefortheirchildren.However,consideringthattheywillgrowupandlivetheirownlifeinsomeday,parentsshouldenabletheirchildrentoacquiretheabilitytobeself-independent.

译文：

如上所示，一个女儿告诉她妈妈有一个好消息：

她已经考上妈妈为她选择的大学了。

不可否认的是，这幅画给我们留下了非常深刻的印象，因此我们禁不住要思考这样一个问题，那就是，父母在子女成长过程中应该扮演什么角色呢？

个人认为，父母在子女成长过程中所扮演的角色主要有以下两方面。

一方面，毫无疑问，父母有责任照顾好自己子女。

另一方面，在子女的成长过程中，父母应扮演帮助子女养成自立的角色，因为自立对子女的未来成长是至关重要的。

换句话说，父母应该鼓励自己的孩子自力更生而不是依赖他人。

总之，在子女的个人成长过程中，父母有责任照顾好子女。

然而，考虑到总有一天子女会长大成人，自己生活，因此父母应该让子女养成自立更胜的能力。

参考范文四：

破题思路：

第一段：

漫画描述，重点是母女之间的对话内容，从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性，家长[微博]干涉孩子过多。

第二段：

可以分析此现象产生的原因

第三段：

采取措施解决此现象。

Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingthemostwidespreadsocialphenomenonconcerningtheindependenceofthechildren.Let’stakeacloserlookatthedrawing,thegirltoldhermothershewasacceptedbytheuniversityofhermother’schoicewithpride.Theauthor’srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustosecurewhathidesbehindthepicture。

Whatarethereasonsforit?

Inthefollowingsentences,I’llventuretoexplorethereasons.Tostartwith,theonly-onechildpolicyinChinahasmademoreandmoreparentspaymuchattentiontotheirchildrenthattheywouldliketoreplacetheirchildrentodoeverything.Inaddition,parentsdon’tbelievethattheirchildrenhaveenoughabilitytodealwiththeirpersonalmattersandmakeanydecisions.Therearesomesuggestionsgiventoourparents。

Foronething,itisquiteimportantforourparentstorealizethattheirchildrenwillgrowupandhavetheirownideasastimegoesby.Foranother,childrenshouldbeencouragedtomakesomedecisionsalonesothattheyareabletopursuewhattheyreallywant.Icontendthatourparentsshouldgivetheirchildrenafreehandinsomematterstohelpthemtobeindependent。

题型三：

WhyamIgoingtoschoolifmyphonealreadyknowseverything?

参考范文一：

Asisillustratedinthepicture,apupilisaskinghisfatherwhyheisgoingtoschoolifhisphonealreadyknowseverything.Itcanbeknownthatthepupillacksathoroughunderstandingofgoingtoschool.

Comparedwiththephone,therearecertainthingsthatcanbeonlyachievedbygoingtoschool.Inthefirstplace,goingtoschoolendowsuswiththeexperiencesofgettingalongwithothers.Onlybycontactingpeoplecanourinterpersonalskillsbedeveloped.Thephoneonlyprovidesinformationinanenvironmentwherethereisjustthephoneandyou.Secondly,youcanconsultyourteacherfacetofaceaboutanydetailofyourquestion,whichcannotbedoneonyourphone.Lastbutnotleast,schoolisaplacewhereyoucanlearntobeindependent.Ifyoustaywithyourparentsallthetime,youwillnevertrulygrowup.

Toconclude,it’sanecessityforkidstogotoschool.Itisatruthwhichshouldbewellacknowledgedthatschoolcanneverbereplacedbythephone.

参考范文二：

Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,thereisaboyplayingaphonehappilyathome,notwantingtogotoschool,withhisfatherbegginghimtogiveupplayinggamesandgotoschoolw