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短文改错15分

陕西06-13年短文改错汇编

06年

DearAnish,

  HerearetheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.Itisabout200milesfarawayfromLondon,andit hasaverybigschoolyard.Youcanliveintheschoolorneartheschool.Theyhaveallsortsofcourse. I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit.Iknowyou areparticularinterestedinHumanRights.SoIwill seethatthereisanythingontheirwebsite（网址）. I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairportwhenyouarrived.Youmethimafewyearsago,buthe haschangedalotsincethen.BothyourauntorIlook forwardtoseeingyouagain.

Seeyousoon.

Pat          

07年

    Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyourlife?

 Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.Wehadto sitatourdesksinsilenceandpaidattentiontowhattheteachers weresaying.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandask usdifficultquestions.Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomework,andhanditontime.Wehadtowearschooluniformsandobeylotsof rules.IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.Ireadbooksatthepubliclibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.NowIreallyenjoystudybecauseI’mgrowingoldandknowwhatI Wantit.WhenIwasatschool.Iwasjustthewrongage!

08年

    JohnBrownisLondontaxidriverwholovegoingtothe Theater.Lastweekhismothergavehimtwoticketsforaplay. TheticketswereonSundayevening.ThenJohnreadsome reviewsoftheplay,whichallsaiditwasaterriblyone!

He wouldn’tgotoseeaplaythatnooneliked it,Sotwohours  beforetheplaystarted,helefttheticketonthebackseatof histaxi,perhapssomeonewhowantedseetheplaywouldtake,however,whileJohnwentbackhome,theticketswere stillthere.In thefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.Someonehasplacedanotherpairofticketsontopofthem!

09年

Myclassmate,Joseph,isatpresentinhospitalwithabreakingleg.Hewaswalkingtoschooltheotherdaywhenheletabicycleranrightintohim.Heneverwatches whereheisgoing,soheoftengetsintothetrouble. Butheishavinganicetimethere.Hehasacomfortableroom,patientlynurses,andagreatdealoftimetoread. Somefriendsofhisgotoseehimeveryday,theytake himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit.Heisnotlosinganytimefromschoolbecauseheisbusystudywhathehas missedinclass.Thedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthan expectedandwillbeoutofhospitalafewweeks.                     

10年

Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday.Shelikeditatonce.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!

Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!

Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshopasfastasshecouldwhenashopassistantcameovertous.Itwasturnedouttobeherowncupthatshe’dleftontheshelfbymistake.Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,forIjustthoughtitwasfunny!

11年

LastSundaymorning，whenlwashavingawalkintheparknearmyhome，Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilmwithoneofmyfavoriteactor．Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime，butIrushedbackhometoget．Unfortunately，bythetimeIgotback，theyhavefinishedthesceneandtheactorcouldn’tbeseeneverywhere．Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleavewhenhewalkedoutabuilding．Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme!

Icouldn’tbelievemyluck--notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim，buthesignedhisnameonmyshirt!

12年

MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.

13年

MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleand   fishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.

 改错题考点：

1添加

1．Aretheyearsyouspentatschoolbestyearsofyourlife?

 2．JohnBrownisLondontaxidriver

3．Thedoctorsayshewillbeoutofhospitalafewweeks.                     

4．Somefriendsofhisgotoseehimeveryday,theytake himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit.

5．Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit.

6．Mysisterwantedgetoutoftheshop

7．Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime，butIrushedbackhometoget

8．hewalkedoutabuilding

9．Itissuchgreathotel

10． fishwascaught

2删除

1．Itisabout200milesfarawayfromLondon

2．I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit

3．Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandask usdifficultquestions.

4．I’mgrowingoldandknowwhatI Wantit.

5．He wouldn’tgotoseeaplaythatnooneliked it

6．In thefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.

7．heoftengetsintothetrouble.

8．Itwasturnedouttobeherowncup

9．Hewasrightthereinthefrontofme!

10．Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater

3动词时态

1．I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairportwhenyouarrived.

2．Wehadto sitatourdesksinsilenceandpaidattentiontowhattheteachers weresaying.

3．IleftschoolassoonasIcanandstartedwork.

4．therewerefourticketsontheseat.Someonehasplacedanotherpairofticketsontopofthem!

5．Mysistersawalovelycupwhenweareshoppingtheotherday

6．bythetimeIgotback，theyhavefinishedthescene

7．notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim

8．whenwevisitBeijinglastmonth

9．OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake

4非谓语动词

1．I’llsendmyfriendCharliemeetyouattheairport.

2．NowIreallyenjoystudy

3．Myclassmate,Joseph,isatpresentinhospitalwithabreakingleg.

4．heletabicycleranrightintohim

5．heisbusystudywhathehas missedinclass.

6．heassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,

7．Icameacrossacrewmakeanewfilm

8．Iwasreallydisappointingandabouttoleave

9．manyphotostakinginBeijing

10．Felthungry,webuiltafire

5名词单复数

1．Theyhaveallsortsofcourse

2．Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.

3.。

Lastweekhismothergavehimtwoticketsforaplay.Twohours beforetheplaystarted,helefttheticketonthebackseatof histaxi,

4．Theytake himlotsofgoodbookandfreshfruit

5．withoneofmyfavouriteactor

6．Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.

7．Withinthenextfewminute,

6主谓一致-动词单复数

1．HerearetheinformationaboutManchesterUniversity.

2．JohnBrownisaLondontaxidriverwholovegoingtothe Theatre.

3．WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnection

4．therewereasuddenpullatthepole

7形容词副词

1．Iknowyou areparticularinterestedinHumanRights

2．Ireadbooksatthepubliclibrary,andlateIdecidedtoattendcollege.

3．itwasaterriblyone!

4．Hehasacomfortableroom,patientlynurses,

5．hedoctorsaysheisrecoveringfastthan expected

6．Ihadtotryhardlynottolaughathershockedface!

7．theactorcouldn’tbeseeneverywhere

8．Welivedinacomfortablydouble-room

9．Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently

8代词指代

1．Asshedidthis,lotsofteasplashedonhisT-shirt!

-2。

notonlydidIhadmyphototakenwithhim

3．IwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.

4．Wetookoursfishingpoles

9并列连词

1．BothyourauntorIlook forwardtoseeingyouagain.

2．Theassistantwasclearlyasembarrassingasmysister,forIjustthoughtitwasfunny!

3．Ididn’thavemycamerawithmeatthattime，butIrushedbackhometoget

4．Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotel

5．Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger

10从属连词

1．SoIwill seethatthereisanythingontheirwebsite（网址）

2．whileJohnwentbackhome

3．Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatient

11介词

1．Wealsohadtodoplentyofhomeworkandhanditontime.

2．Ialsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotos

12冠词

1.Thenshebentdownandpickeduptolookatapriceonit

陕西06-13年短文改错汇编答案

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76.is 主谓一致 therebe句型主语在后面information为不可数名词 谓语用单数

0677.去far 副词多余 far 修饰形容词或副词 意思是 太…. 这里表示 有…..远

78. √ 

79.courses 名词单复数 allsortsof…. 各种各样的 修饰可数名词复数

80. 去it   代词多余  定语从句中指代重复原句省略了连接代词that作like的宾语

81.particularly 形容词使用错误 副词修饰形容词interested

82.that改if/whether 行文逻辑错误whether/if 引导动词see后的宾语从句 表是否….

83.meet前加to  添加不定式符号to    sendsb.todosth.派某人去做某事….

84.arrive 动词时态错误 when引导时间状语从句 主句将来时，从句用一般现在时

85.or-and 行文逻辑错误 both…and… 两者都…

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76．添加the 添加定冠词    the+形容词最高级… 表示 最….. 

77．lessons  名词单复数   lesson为可数名词 前有most修饰应用复数形式

78．pay   动词时态错误  and连接sit 和pay  havetodo。

。

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不得不。

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79．were去掉  be动词多余 usedtodosth. 过去常常做某事  

80．√ 

81．in     介词使用错误  intime 及时   ontime按时

82．could  动词时态      and连接并列成分 都是过去式

83．later   形容词使用错误 late是 迟 或者晚的意思  later是随后 后来的意思

84．studying 分词使用 动名词作宾语enjoydoing 喜欢做什么事…

85．It 代词多余 名词性从句中指代重复 what是连接代词 就代替了it

08

1.loves 主谓一致 定语从句中的主谓一致 谓语单复数有先行词决定 

2. √     

3.for   介词使用错误  

4.t