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北京一模二模开放作文汇编
2008--2012年北京一模二模开放作文汇编
2012年北京各城区期末试题之开放作文
1.房山(对生活充满积极的心态)
Inthepicture,aboy,withsweatdrippingdownfromhishead,istryingtothrowaballintothebasketballhighabovehim.Fromthewayhesitsinawheelchair,weknowheisdisabledintheleg.However,hisshinningfaceandconfidentsmilemakesmethinkthatheisveryoptimistic.
Whatthepictureconveys,Ithink,isthateverybodyshouldhaveanactiveattitudetowardlife(提出论点).Thoughlifeisfullofchallengesanddifficulties,peoplewithoptimisticattitudecantakesomemeasurestodealwiththemandtheylivehappilyinthesociety(讲大道理论证).Unfortunately,withtheimprovingoflivingstandard,moreandmorepeoplecan’tenduretroublesanddifficultiesintheirlives.Asaresult,anyminorbarriertendstobeafactorthatleadstotheirfinalfailure(联系生活实际论证).Accordingly,itistimethatweplacegreatemphasisonbuildingupouractiveattitudetowardlife.(150)(建议)
2.丰台
Possibleversion:
Inthepicture,Icanseeaboydrawingaclockonthewallwithcare.Thenumber13atthetopoftheclockcatchesmyeye.Whatanunusualidea!
Ifwedivideonedayinto26hours,wemayhavetwomorehoursofsparetimetoenjoy.
Thepictureremindsmeofthosewhouseunusualideastochangeourlife,justlikeEdisonandJobs.Facedwithoureverydaylife,theyalwaysthinkoutoftheboxandhavecreativeideas.Lifecanbeordinary.Butifwehavemoreunusualideas,wewillenrichourlifeandmakeitwithadifferenceliketheboyinthepicture.
3.西城(团结就是力量)
Unitybringsstrength.
Asisdepictedinthepicture,somesmallfish,fleeinginalldirections,arebeingchasedbyalarge,fierceone.Afewminuteslater,however,thetablesareturned.Thesmallfish,alongwithalargenumberoftheirfellows,returnanddrivetheirenemyawaybyformingtheshapeofalargerfish.
Thehiddenmessagehereisobvious,thatis,unitybringsstrength(提出论点).Toasmallfish,lifecanbeverytoughasthreatsfromthelargefisharealwaysthere.Thechanceforitssurvivalisslimwhenitfacesalargefishallbyitself.If,however,allthesmallfishformaunitedteam,theymaybecomestrongenoughtodefeattheenemy(结合图画,讲道理论证).Thesamethingwouldhappeninourlife.Forinstance,wesometimesfacethreatsortroublesthatmaybeunbearable,leavingeachofusinsecureandhelpless.Don’tforget,inthatcase,thatourfriendsandfamilyareasourceofstrength.Iflifeisapondandwearethefishinsideit,weshouldalwaysstayunitedtomeetitschallenges.(联系自身,讲道理论证)
4.海淀(心态:
知足)
theybothseekgreatpleasurebyenjoyingwhatlifepresents,Ifweenjoythethingsinhand,wewillsmilethroughlife
Onepossibleversion:
Asisshowninthepicture,amonkeyispickingandeatingpeacheshappilyonatree,throwingsomehalfeatenonesontotheground.Ahedgehog,atthesametime,iseatingtheleftovershappily.
Frommypointofview,thepictureconveysthatweshouldhaveapositiveattitudetowardslife(提出论点).Thefoodfortheanimalsinthepictureisnotofthesamequality,buttheybothseekgreatpleasurebyenjoyingwhatlifepresents(结合图画,讲道理论证).Itisthisattitudethatweshouldadopt.Ifweenjoythethingsinhand,wewillsmilethroughlife,justlikethemonkeyandhedgehoginthepicture(联系自身,讲道理论证)
5.东城(做事方法)
注:
文中必须指出正确的做法
Apropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal
Onepossibleversion:
Ascanbeseeninthepicture,aboyisholdingapairofhugescissorstocutasmallpieceofpaper,butinvain.
Thepicturetriestotellusthatapropermethodplaysaveryimportantroleinachievingagoal(提出论点).Inourdailylife,weconstantlyneedtocarryoutdifferenttasks,whethertheyaresimpleorcomplicated.Weshouldalwayskeepinmindthatadoptingapropermethodisthemostimportantthing.Ifnot,whatevereffortswemake,we’llaccomplishnothing,(联系自身,讲道理论证)justliketheboyinthepicture,whoisusingawrongwaytocutpaper.Itmaybewiseforhimtochangethescissorsintoasmallpairorjustusehisownfingers.Onlyinthisway,canhetearthepaperintopieces(建议正确的做法).Inmyopinion,choosingasuitablemethodisveryimportantbothinourstudyandinourlife.(升华点题)
6.朝阳(困难与成功)
可能出现的立意:
1.遇到困难时应审时度势,尽可能找到解决办法。
2.要想成功,就不能害怕失败,尝试最重要。
3.不要被表面的困难吓倒,总会有办法。
4.每个人面前都有机会,重要的是能否抓住机会。
5.不同的人看待事物的角度不同(角度1:
悬崖角度2:
梯子)。
6.选用正确的办法是解决问题的关键(走下悬崖,从梯子爬上另一端,而不是跨过沟壑)。
7.……
Ascanbeseeninthepicture,thereisamanhesitatingbeforeagapwhichstopshiswaytothedestination.Thegapisdeepandwide,whichseemshardtocross.However,thereisaladderdowninthegap,whichprovidesaneasyaccesstotheotherside.
Thepictureconveysthemessagethatitisimportanttostudythesituationincaseofdifficulty.Theroadisstoppedbythegap.However,withthehelpoftheladder,onecangototheothersideandcontinuehisjourneytothedestination.Thisalsoappliestoourdailylife.Ifwestudywhatliesbeforeuscarefullywhenwemeetdifficulty,wemayfindawayout.Thus,itisnecessarytostudythesituationandfindasolution.
2011年东城一模
Wealwaysneedabalancebetweenspeedandquality.Ourworkhasnovalueatallifweignorethequalityofit.It’sdefinitelyhelpfultokeepinmindthatnomatterhowfastweneedtoachievesomething,qualitymayneverbeignored.
Aswecanseeinthepicture,twomenarecompetingagainsteachotherinbuildingwalls.Onemanhasbuiltupanobviouslyhigherbuttwistedwall,whiletheother’sworkiscompletelyvertical,strongandsolidthoughlower.
Thepictureimpliesaveryimportantruleofdoingthings—wealwaysneedabalancebetweenspeedandquality.Itisn’tdifficulttoseeexamplesofhowoftenhigherspeedissetupasatarget.“Thefaster,thebetter”hasbecomeamottoforusduetothefiercelycompetitiveenvironmentofoursociety.Howeverourworkhasnovalueatallifweignorethequalityofitjustlikethemanbuildingthetwistedwall.
Asstudents,wearerequiredtodothingsathighspeed.It’sdefinitelyhelpfultokeepinmindthatnomatterhowfastweneedtoachievesomething,qualitymayneverbeignored.
东城二模
丰台一模
Whendoingateamwork,peopleoftenmindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwe’lldothingsblindly.Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners.
Inthepicture,Icanseetwomenaretryingtomakeabench.Bothofthemareworkinghard,sweatingalot.Butobviouslytheyarenailingthelegsondifferentsides.
Seeingthepicture,Ican’thelpthinkinghowridiculousitis.Theyworkasateamandbothofthemdomaketheirefforts.Butunfortunatelytheymindtheirownbusinesswithoutcommunicatingwitheachother.Cooperationneedseffectivecommunication,withoutwhichwe’lldothingsblindly.Sobeforetakingactions,planthingscarefullyandcommunicatewellwithyourpartners.Otherwisealltheeffortswillbeinvain,justlikewhatthetwomendointhepicture.
丰台二模
humanbeingsandanimalscanbenefitfromeachotheriftheylivetogetherinperfectharmony
Inthepictures,Icanseeamannailingaboxonatreetomakeanestforbirds.Somebirdsflytoliveinit.Totheman’spleasantsurprise,thebirdseatthepestsandhiscropsgrowbetter.
Thepicturesconveythemessagethathumanbeingsandanimalscanbenefitfromeachotheriftheylivetogetherinperfectharmony(提出论点).Allthecreaturesontheeartharefriendsandwehumanbeingsshouldcareabouttheothers,justlikethemaninthepicture(联系实际,讲道理).Hemakesasafeandcomfortablehomeforbirds,inreturnbirdsprotecthiscropsbyeatingpests(联系图画,讲道理).Sometimesasimpleactofkindnessmaymakeabigdifference.Let’sworktogethertomakeaworldwherehumanbeingsandothercreatureslivetogetherinperfectharmony.
海淀一模
workingaloneorworkingtogetherwithothers。
Therefore,itisessentialforustoworkinaunitedway.United,westand;divided,wefall.
Weshouldbearinmindthatwecannotsurvivealoneandfrequentlyweneedtounitewithotherstoachieveourgoals.
1.立意:
团结
Ascanbeseeninthepicture,somepeoplearestandinghand-in-hand,formingtheshapeofaheart.Theyareallsmilinghappily.
Thispictureconveysthemessagethatsometimesweneedtobeunited.Therearebasicallytwowaystoaccomplishthings:
workingaloneorworkingtogetherwithothers.Wearebornwithallkindsofambitions,toconquertheworld,forexample.Yetveryoftenweareawakenedupbytheplainfactthattherearecertainthingswecannotaccomplishalone.Therefore,itisessentialforustoworkinaunitedway.United,westand;divided,wefall.
Weshouldbearinmindthatwecannotsurvivealoneandfrequentlyweneedtounitewithotherstoachieveourgoals.(124words)
2.立意:
爱心传递
Ascanbeseeninthepicture,manychildrenarestandingmerrilyinacircle,hand-in-hand.Thecircleisheart-shaped.
Thesimplepictureconveysadeepmessagethattheworldwillbefulloflovewheneverybodypassestheirownlovetoothers.Loveisimportantforus.Justasthepictureabove,onlywhenloveisdeliveredfrompersontopersoncanwesenseeachother’strust,concern,warmth,friendship,etc,whicharevitalforeveryone’shappiness.
Inaword,ifeveryoneofuscandevoteabitoflovetoothers,ourliveswillbemorebeautiful.(100words)
海淀二模
Itisimportanttobuildasolidfoundationifwewanttosucceed.Agoodfoundationisthekeytosuccess.
Inthepicture,amanisrowingaboatwithgreatdifficulty.However,thewaterintheriveristooshallowfortheboattomoveon.Obviously,itisdifficulttomovetheboat