教案34雅思真题与范文解析一.docx

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教案34雅思真题与范文解析一

教案34-雅思真题与范文解析

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第34讲：

雅思真题与范文解析

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一、复习提问

经典句型造句练习

二、新课讲解

一雅思四分作文

流行运动，例如世纪杯等国际运动，在增加国家凝聚力和缓解国际紧张起到很大的作用，你是否同意此种观点？

Idisagree

Nowadays,footballisthemostpopulargameintheworld.Wecanfindtherearemanydifferentteamswhoplaysthisfootball.Therearedividinginto3division:

divisionone,divisiontwoanddivisionthree.Eachdivisionhavedifferentskills.Theskillsthattheyhavearedependonthemanager.Heistheonewhoteachestheplayerhowtoplay…..

Thereareothersportgamesliketennis.Tennisisalsopopular.Inplayingtennistherearealsohaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Thisgamesshows

forillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture.

TosumupIthinkinternationaltravelingisagoodthingbutpeoplemustrealisethatthereissomethingelsebesidesthem.Theyneedtoknowthatfloraandfaunaneedstobeprotected.Peoplehavetoenjoytheirholidaysbutalsowprotectenvironment.

本篇文章论点表达清楚，词语运用灵活，运用了例如“Secondly”and“Furthermore”等连词，但存在个别拼写错误，例如第二段“seilsmens”及句式简单的不足，几乎都是主谓结构的简单句，例如，Manytouristsarelivinggarbagejustanywhere.Someofthemwan’tanexoticsouvenirsotheypayforillegalthingslikedeadorliveanimalsorsomesculpture.

三雅思7分作文

Tourismisaverybigindustryinthemoderntimeandisgrowingquiterapidly.Thousandsofpeopletraveleverywheretovariousdestinationseveryyear.Argumentshavecomeupregardingthebenefitsandnegativeimpactsoftourisminplacesandonitslocalinhabitantsandenvironment;however,Ibelievetherearemoreadvantagesthandisadvantagesofinternationaltourism.

　　Peopletravelforvariousreasons;wetravelforbusinesspurposes,holidays,visitfriendsandrelativesetc.Travellingismostlyseenasarecreationalactivity.Tourismhasmanyadvantages.Tourismcanplayatremendouspartinacountryseconomy,themoretouristsvisitacountryandspendmoneythere,thebetteritisforthecountry;thatwaymoremoneyiscirculatedwithinthecountryandeventhestabilityoftheircurrencysrateofexchangepersistsifnotimprove.Vendorsandshopsgettosellmoregoodsandmakeanincome.Tourismalsohasitsnon-monetaryadvantages;itbringsculturesandpeoplecloser.Peoplefromallaroundtheworldgettosharetheirculturewitheachotherandevenlearnmore.Thisisagoodopportunityineducation.

　　Tourismseemstohavesomedisadvantagestoo;However,Ibelievetheproblemscausedbytourismarenotsomethingthatcannotbesolvedorprevented.Alotofpeoplebelievethattourismcandestroyordeviatecultureandcausesquiteanimpactonvisitedlocations,suchaspollutionandlittering.Peoplecanadheretotheirownbeliefsandwayoflifeiftheywantto;noonecanreallyforcefullyinfluencesomeonetochangefromtheirmoralsandethics.Pollutioncanbeavoidedbyincreasingusageofenvironmentalfriendlyvehiclesusedfortoursandrents,warningsandvisualeducationonlitteringandsmoking,specifictimescanbeallocatedfortourstocertainareas,suchaspeaktimeswherelocalinhabitantsfeeluncomfortableduetotoomanyforeigners.

　　Wherethereareproblemstherecanalwaysbesolutions.Tourismbringsgreatamountofadvantagesforanyplaceinmanywaysandisa“win-win”exchangeprocess.Theveryfewproblemscausedcanalwaysbeavoidedortakencareof.Ibelievetourismshouldbehighlypromoted,speciallyintraditionalandpoorcountrieswithnaturalbeautysuchasThailand.

本篇作文论点清晰明了，句式运用灵活，单词拼写或是语法都没有出现大的纰漏，所以得到雅思作文考试的较高分数，7分。

四雅思6分作文

贫穷国家在健康，教育和贸易的发展是非常关键的，而且富裕的国家应该担任着帮助穷国的责任，你是否同意此观点？

Inbalancingtheworldeconomicgrowth,theunderdevelopmentofthethirdWorldNationshavebeendrawntotheattentionofthedevelopedcountriesoftheWestern.Thusgovernmentalpoliciesandinterferenceintheagriculturalbusinessofthepoorernationsweremadetosecuretheirdominantsourceoftheeconomy.Manydiscussionsamongeconomistsandpoliticiansalsoputtheirfocusontheotheraspects.Thatis,toimprovethehealth,educationandtradeforthedevelopingcountries.Howevertheimprovementscannotbemadebythesecountries,butmoreexternalassistanceandaidsshouldbedone.

Becauseoftheshortageoffoodsupply,thepeopleinpoorernationsareesilypronetodisease,hungeranddeath…….

Iftherichercountriescanbemoreseriousabouttheessentialissuesofhowanationdevelops,andwellconsiderthespecialsituationsandcircumstancethosepoorernationsarefacing,theimprovementswillbemoreefficientlymade……

该篇文章表达了作者自己的观点，但论证不充分。

文章结构清晰，句子形式多样化，但存在语法和连接的不足，例如Manydiscussionsamongeconomistsandpoliticiansalsoputtheirfocusontheotheraspects.Thatis,toimprovethehealth,educationandtradeforthedevelopingcountries.

三、课后作业勤劳的蜜蜂有糖吃

背诵常用句子及造句