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短文改错高考真题Proofreading50套纯题
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Mydreamschoolstartsat8:
30a.m.andendsat3:
30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn’tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.
Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.
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DearJeremyandAlice,
Althoughwe’vebeendelightingtohaveyouasneighbors,we’rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog-Cleo.
We’vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo’searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe’soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o’clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.
Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.
Sincerely,
JackandRose
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Hello,boysandgirls!
Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don’tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit’safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.
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IwastakingatraintoLondon’sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.
Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn’tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.
Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolive.
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MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.
Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget.Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!
Werantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjured.
ThatdayIdidn’tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!
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ThebookI’mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800’s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelainindustry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.
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MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.
OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater.Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaught.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.
Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.
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Mr.Jonsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.
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DearDiary,
HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?
Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallsleep.
Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,
Rosemary
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MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelpublictransport.
Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroom.Icheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.
ItissuchgreathotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.
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Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkofsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher’soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn’tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunishme?
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Therearemanydifferentsignsinthepublic.Theytellyouwhattodoorwhatnottodoinaplace.Doyouknowwhattheyexactmean?
Forexample,ifyougotoseeafilm,youshouldenterthecinemaattheENTRANCEandleavefortheEXIT.YouwilleitherfindNOSMOKINGsignsinmanycinemas.Ifyouvisitamuseum,don’ttakesomephotosinsidethehalls.Youarenotallowed.YouwillfindNOPHOTOSsignsinmanymuseum.Whenyoudriveacar,don’tparkinastreetwithoutaNOPARKINGsign.Makingsureunderstoodthesignsandyouwon’tgetintoanytrouble.
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LastnightIamgettingreadyforthecomingexaminationwhenthenoisefrommyneighborinterruptedme.Thenoisewentonandon.ItwastooloudthatIcouldhardlypayattentiontomystudyanylonger,butIwenttomyneighbor’shousesandsaytohim.“Excuseme,wouldyoupleaseturndowntheTV?
I’mpreparingfortomorrow’sexamination.”Hearthesewords,hefeltashamedandhisfaceturnedtored.Andhesaid,“OK,Iwill.I’mverysorrytohavemadesomuchnoise.Justnow,thefootballgamewasverywonderfully.Iwastooexcitingtocontrolmyself.Iwon’tdothatagain.Goodluckyinyourcomingexamination.”Afterthat,Iwentonwithhisstudy.
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Myunclewasthebiologyprofessor.WhenIwasyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,whenIsawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myunclealsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentakesmeforawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogsandsnake,andfindfirefliesinthesky.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,thinkaboutmyuncleandherinfluenceonmylife.Ifeelverylucky.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnforhim.Hehelpedmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeatharoundme.
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Timeflies!
ThisisathirdyearthatIhavebeeninthisschool.Inthepasttwoandahalfyears,ourschoolhadorganizedmanyactivities.Whatimpressedmebestwasanactivitycalled“LearningtoFarm”.Inanautumnafternoon,weweresenttoafarmwhichwelearnedtoplanpotatoes.Havingbeeninthecityforsoalongtime,weweresohappytogotothecountryside.Afterdividedintothreegroups,westartedtowork.Somestudentscutpotatoesintopieces;somedugholes,andtheothersputthepiecesofpotatoesintothehole,puttheearthbackandpushedthemdownhard.Wecontinueddoingthatuntilalltheworkwasdone.Althoughwewereexhausted,butwefeltfulfilledonourwaybackhome.
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Dearschoolmates,
Inordertogethighschoolstudentstoattachingimportancetotheenvironmentandimproveoursensetoprotecttheenvironment,andChinaDailyisplanningtoholdaninterestinglyknowledgecontest.AconteststartsonOctober14thandendon31st.Remember,youcantakethecontestinChinaDailynewspaper,thatisverypopularamonghighschoolstudent.TheanswersheetmustcutfromthenewspaperandsenttoChinaDailyafterthedeadline.
Pleasepaymoreattentiontotherelatedinformationofthecontestandtakeanactivepartinthemontime.
Students’Union
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