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四六级写作作文闪光点
作文欢迎下载是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。
同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文标志
1、是否长短句交叉；
2、是否会使用插入语；
3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；
4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5、句型使用是否准确、地道。
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：
1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I（比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：
Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.
2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。
比如说：
Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…
3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。
（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）比如上面例子applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）
下面举一篇某位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。
这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
ComputerandI
BySimmy
Ineverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.
exceedingly替换very
thrilling替换exciting
sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
google替换search
anarmyof替换alotof
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingnumbersofindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!
Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopular
Coincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…
Advancement替换development
Pourinto（floodinto/swarminto）替换enterinto
Current（currently）替换now
Appealtosb.替换sb.beinterestedinsth.
Growingnumbersofindividuals替换moreandmorepeople
Itisnoexaggerationtosay经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
Forastart,wecan,freely,searchdesiredinformationatanymoment.Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.Additionally,wecangethugerecreationsonlinebychatting,playinggames,ordeliveringemail.
Forastart替换Tobeginwith
Wecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法
ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally替换Inaddition/Besides Deliver替换send
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,obscene,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.
Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmto
Emerging替换appearing（fading替换disappearing）
Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词
Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.
Nogardenhasnoweeds替换Everycoinhastwosides
Computersdoplay，do强调
Positive替换important/good等
Asliceof替换apartof
Unfavorable替换bad
Impacts替换effects/influences
Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageof…使用插入语
Fruits（而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues）替换advantage（defects替换disadvantage）
Facet替换aspect
各位同学，上面的作文里有这么多精彩的闪光点，作文怎么会不得高分呢！
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下。
1.individuals,characters,folks替换（people,persons）
2:
positive,favorable,rosy（美好的），promising（有希望的），perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good
3:
dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill（有害的）替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有belessimpressive替换
eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.
4.（anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,ahostof,many。
。
。
ifnotmost）替换many.
注：
用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,替换most.
5:
asliceof,quietafew,several替换some
6:
harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat）替think
（因为是书面语，所以要加that）
7，affair,business,matter替换thing
8:
shared代common
9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits
10formypart,frommyownperspective替换inmyopinion
11:
Increasing（ly）,growing替换moreandmore（注意没有growingly这种形式。
所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.
Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.
12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly
13..beneficial,rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very
16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable
17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin
18.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear
21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause.
22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换..reasonsforsth
23.desire替换want.
24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto
25.bearinmindthat替换remember
26.enjoy,possess替换have（注意process是过程的意思）
27.interaction替换communication
28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth
29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance
30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,替换nearly/almostimpossible
希望大家能够在平时的学习中多总结精彩、地道的词汇和句型闪光点！
常用连接词
ToAdd:
and,again,andthen,besides,equallyimportant,finally,further,furthermore,nor,too,next,lastly,what'smore,moreover,inaddition,first（second,etc.）,
ToCompare:
whereas,but,yet,ontheotherhand,however,nevertheless,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,bycomparison,where,comparedto,upagainst,balancedagainst,but,although,
conversely,meanwhile,afterall,incontrast,althoughthismaybetrue
ToProve:
because,for,since,forthesamereason,obviously,evidently,furthermore,moreover,besides,indeed,infact,inaddition,inanycase,thatis
ToShowException:
yet,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,ofcourse,onceinawhile,sometimes
ToShowTime:
immediately,thereafter,soon,afterafewhours,finally,then,later,previously,formerly,first（second,etc.）,next,andthen
ToRepeat inbrief,asIhavesaid,asIhavenoted,ashasbeennoted,
ToEmphasize:
definitely,extremely,obviously,infact,indeed,inanycase,absolutely,positively,naturally,surprisingly,always,forever,perennially,eternally,never,emphatically,unquestionably,withoutadoubt,certainly,undeniably,withoutreservation
ToShowSequence:
first,second,third,andsoforth.A,B,C,andsoforth.next,then,followingthis,atthistime,now,atthispoint,after,afterward,subsequently,finally,consequently,previously,beforethis,simultaneously,concurrently,thus,therefore,hence,next,andthen,soon
ToGiveanExample:
forexample,forinstance,inthiscase,inanothercase,onthisoccasion,inthissituation,takethecaseof,todemonstrate,toillustrate,asanillustration,
ToSummarizeorConclude：
inbrief,onthewhole,summingup,toconclude,inconclusion,asIhaveshown,asIhavesaid,hence,therefore,accordingly,thus,asaresult,consequently,onthewhole
一、常用句型及单词
A.开头
1、Thereisaninterestingandinstructivepicturewhichgoeslikethis:
______________.
2、______________hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoung,andheateddebatesarerightontheirway.
3、Recently,_________hasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthat_________
（e.g.Recently,theproblemofglobalwarminghasbeenbroughttosuchpopularattentionthatgovernmentsatalllevelsplaceitonthetopoftheagenda.）.
4、Oneofourancientphilosopherssaid,______________.Chinesepeoplehavealwaysbeenholdingthisideatobeoneoftheirstandardsofmorality.
5.Noone，regardlessofrace,religionornationality,woulddenythat...或：
Everyonewouldagreethat...
B结尾
1）Onlyinthisway/Onlywhen……/Onlythrough……,will/canwe……或：
Itisonlyif/when……thatwewill……
Itisonlyifallsidesofsocietytaketheirrolesfullythatwewillachievethesocietywewant.
2）Aslongas……wewillbeableto……/theproblemisboundto……
Aslongaswepersistinspreadingscientificknowledgeamongthemasses,allthesuperstitionsareboundtogooutofourlife.
3）Withaconstant/steadyimprovementin……（或Withthegradualworseningof……）sth.will……
Withasteadyimprovementinourlegalsystem,thisproblemwillsurebesolvedearlierorlater.
4）Inawordthereisevery/littlechance/probability/possibilitythat.……intimetocome.A
Inoneword,thereiseverychancethatthisChinesetraditonwillcontinuetoentertainmi
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