商志考研英语写作范文版.docx

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商志考研英语写作范文版

商志考研英语写作范文（2015版）

大作文

第一段

Howenlighteningandcompellingtheabovedrawingis!

Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelpthinking:

_____.（这句自己加完整，从宏观上描述一下图画就可以，笼统的，大体的）______while_______.（这句从微观上具体说明一下图画要描述的矛盾点，必须找到矛盾点，用到while这个单词）Simpleasitlooks,itsintended（或者用implied）meaninggoesfardeeperwhatonearth（究竟）doesthedrawer（作者）reallyaimtoconvey.

第二段

Whattheimageabovevividlymirrors（名词用做动词）goesfarmorethanasimpleimage,instead,itcarries（有）athoughtprovokingsocialphenomenon:

____.（本文的主旨）Thereareupsetting（如文章不是讽刺性的，就把upsetting删除）parallelstodayinourcontemporarycommunity,andanacquaintanceofminemayserveasagoodexample.______.（用一两句话来举例）Anothertellingexampleismyformercolleague,who___.（另外一个例子，如果字数够就不用再举）

第三段：

Muchcanbedone.Tobeginwiththeschoolsandthemassmediashoulddevelopnobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeople,doingtheirutmosttoawakenpeopleofthegrowingthreatofthisworseningsituation.（ofthisworseningsituation自己可以换成主旨的句子，如果不换，这样也可以。

如文章不是讽刺性的，就把worsening删除）Whatismore,theauthorities（当局）shouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwideactionstocurb（如文章不是讽刺性的，就把curb换成promote）suchpractices.Inconclusion,allthesocietyshouldactivelymoresustained（持续）andconcerted（一致）offorts.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,apromisingstarthasbegun,andahappy,healthyandharmonious（和谐）societymaybenotbefarbehind.

注意事项：

1不要写题目

2要看清楚图画是一副还是两副，单数还是复数

3看清楚是卡通还是普通图画

卡通cartoon也可以用以下几个pictureimagedrawingillustration

图画Photo也可以用以下几个pictureimagephotograph

以前学过的,重复下:

 Dearsir\madam,

  ThankyouinadvanceforyourattentiontothisletterandI'mwritingtopresentmycomplaint\inquiry\apologyconcerningsth.that……

  There'sanarrayoffactorscontributingtothis.Foronething,……Foranother,……

ThereareahostofaspectsI'llofferhere……

  I'dbemostgratefulifyoucanreplymeatyourearliestconvenienceandany

favorableconsiderationswillbegreatlyappreciated.

Yourssincerely,LiMing

2009商志作文模板

大作文（单号版）（讽刺类型）

  Whatacompellingandthought-provokingdrawingitis!

Asisvividlypresentedintheinterestingandinstructivecartoonabove,……incontrast,…….Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyattempttoconvey?

  Simpleastheimageis,theimplicationsmirroredareapparentlyfar-reaching.Initially,suchaphenomenonasrevealedinthepicturehasarousedwide-spreadsocialconcern.Nowhereinthehistoryhastheissueof……beentalkedsomuchasinoursocietytoday.Inthesecondplace,thepaintingrevealsanupsettingstoryandsimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinnearlyallaspectsinourlife.Additionally,thepainterintendstoconvinceusthatapackagedealofprogramsshouldbeinitiatedtoreversethegrimsituation---launchinganationwideeducationcampaign,settinguprelevantlawsandregulations,andthelistgoeson.

  Toconclude,itishightimethatmuchimportancewereattachedtosuchcases.Anditisimperativeactionsbetakentocurbsuchpractices.Thereisreasontobelievethataslongasallthesociety,theauthoritiesandthemassmediaandindividualsinvolved,makeconcertedefforttostrivehard,suchupsettingstorieswillultimatelyterminatedoratleastreduced.

 如果是多个漫画，要改成复数。

如果是非讽刺的，第2段里的Additionally,到后面都删除，改成Let'scometoanexample

concerninganacquaintanceofmine,whichserveswellasagoodexampletothepoint……

第3段的curb改为ensure

最后一句suchupsetting……全删除，改为wecanmaintainahappy,healthyandharmonious

societyasweallwish.

漫画作文类

 第一段:

1、How/whatthought-provokingtheabovecartoon/pictureis!

 2、Asisvividlypresentedinthedrawing.。

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Ascanbeseenfromthedrawing，。

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 第二段:

 1、whatisthesymbolicmeaningofthedrawing?

或者whatonearthcanwelearnfromthedrawing?

 2、itisfarbeyondanyreasonableaboutthatwhatthedrawerreallyintendstoconveyisfarreaching/profound.

 3、by depictingthisimage,thedrawerattemptstoexpose/convinceus/advocatethat……

 4、thepicturerevealsaseriousproblemin…（方面）,andmoreandmoresimilareventshappenedandhappeningareheardorreportedinoursocietyaswellaslife.

5、tomakethepointeventclear.let’scometoanexampleconcerning…….

 第三段:

1、judgingfromallevidenceofferedabove,wemaycometotheconclusion/concludethatitishightime+虚拟语气的从句（wetookeffectivemeasuresto……/weenhancedtheawarenessofthepeopletotreadthebetter/muchimportancewereattachedtothiskindofphenomenon）

 2、whatweshoulddonowisto

 3、onlyinthisway,Idobelieve,canwelive-inaharmonioussociety.

 4、as/solongas……

 5、thereiseveryreasontobelievethat…

高联商志10考研作文班笔记

第一种开头：

Whoeverinfrontofthisimage（s）/cartoon/picturewillbegreatlyshocked/striked.Howamusingandinterestingitis!

Whatisvividlyillustratedinthepaintingaboveisthat_____对漫画笼统地描述___。

______从微观上再描述一下_____Oddandfunnyasitlooks.Suchhappeningsarefarfrombeingrareandwecannotaffordtoignorethem.

Oddandfunnyasitseemstobe,suchstories（story）/event/happening/case/phenomenon/practicearesopervasivethatwecannotaffordtoignorethem.

第二种开头：

Whataninterestinganenlighteningpaintingitis!

Itisindicativeofaseriousyetcommonsocialphenomenon:

_____对漫画笼统地描述___。

______从微观上再描述一下_____.Howeverridiculousandfarfetcheditlooks（seemstobe）;thedrawerintendsfardeepermeaningsthanwhatisshownsuperficially.

第三种开头：

Howamusingandenlighteningtheaboveillustrationis!

Itissofunnythatwhoeverseesitcannothelplaughing:

_____对漫画笼统地描述___。

______从微观上再描述一下_____.Simpleasitlooks,itsintended（implied）meaninggoesmuchdeeper.Whatonearthdoesthedrawerreallyaimtoconvey?

__________._____________while（完全相反时用incontrary）______________。

（描述两个方面）

第二段：

Obviouslywecaneasilydefinewhatthepaintersubtlyintendstoreflect（communicate）tous.Thestrongandclearmessagesuggestedisthat____主旨________。

AccordingtorecentsurveyconductedbyCCTV（ChineseAcademyofsocialSciences/XinhuaNews/ChinaDaily/People’sDaily/FudanUniversity/PekingUniversity/TsinghuaUniversity）28.6%（自己随便写）people______主旨__________（或用一种笼统地切题方法如arefollowingthistide）Itisalarmingthatagrowingnumberofsimilareventsareoccurring.

Nowhereinhistoryhastheissueof______主旨_____beenconcertedsomuchasinoursocietytoday（史上任何时候都比不上今天我们的时代这样更加关切这样的事情，此句由历年真题阅读部分改变而来）

“______见下面的例句________”直接引语__职务____，SaysDr.SunDong,

职务有：

（用副职免得阅卷老师认识）

Vice-presentofXiamenUniversity

Vice-directoroftheSociologicalResearchCenterattachedtoChineseAcademyofsocialSciences

Vice-deanofSociologyDepartofFudanUniversity

例句：

NowheresaysDr.SunDong,__职务_,“Itisalarmingsuchstories/upsetting/parallelsareavailableinnearlyallwalksoflifeinourcontemporarycommunity.”Failuretorealizetheseverityofthegrimsituationmanysignificantlydecreaseourchancesofsuccess.

Itishardtoimaginewhatoursocietywouldbelikeyearslaterprovidedsuchpracticesgounchallenged.Indeed,thewholesocietyshouldbemadeawarethatanypromptactionsofgreatbenefittoall

第二段备用：

Whatthedrawingconspicuouslymirrors/illustratesgoesfarbeyond/morethanasimpledrawing,instead,itcarriesthought-provoking/important/strikingimplications.

举例子：

Thecartoonremindsmeofafewinterestingstories.Acaseinpointisanacquaintanceofminewho_______________.Anothertellingexampleisoneofmyformercolleagues,who__________________.Anacquaintanceofminemaywellserveasagoodexample_____________________.

表原因：

Whatbringabout/accountforthisstrangephenomenon?

Iamstronglyconvincedthatthisispartlybecause___________________,andthisispartlybecause___________________.

What____上句话_______？

Somemanyclaimthatthisphenomenonresultsfrom_________________,whileIamstronglyconvincedthattheprimaryreasongoesmuchdeeper:

_________________________.

第三段：

Muchcanbedone.Whattopstheagenda,Ideem,istohelp/encouragepeopletodeveloppositiveandwholesomeoutlookonlifeaswellastheword.Besides/what’smore,nobleandworthyvaluesandqualitiessuchascourage,honesty,diligenceandperseveranceshouldbeencouraged/fosteredandcherished.

Additionally,weshouldappealtothegovernmenttomakesustainedandconcertedeffortstoreverse/curb/promotetheworseningtrend.Onlyinthesewayscanwemaintainahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietyasweallwish.

Althoughitiseasiersaidthandone,therearegodreasonstoexpectthatsuchaphenomenoncanbeterminallyendedoratleastreduced.

第三段备用1：

Tosolvetheproblem,Iamstronglyconvincedthatallofusshouldmakesustainedandconcertefforts.Foronething,schoolandthemassmediashouldserveasacounterbalancetothisgrimtrend,doingtheirutmosttodevelopnobleworthyvaluesandqualitiesamongpeopleandawakeningpeopletothegrowingthreatoftheworseningsituation.Foranother,theadministrationshouldplayadominantroleintakingnationwidepromptactions.

Fortunately,duetoattentionhasbeenpaidandeffectivemeasureshavebeentaken.Althoughwestillhavealongwaytogo,this,Ibelieve,isapromisingstart.Acampaignto_____主旨切题_______hasbegun,ahappy,healthyandharmonioussocietymaynotbefarbehind.（历年真题阅读句子改写）

第三段备用2：

Toparaphrase18th-centurystatesman_____,“Allthatisneededfortheprevalenceofamisdeedisthatgoodpeopledonothing.”

或：

JustasanancientChinesephilosophicalbookconcludes,“Allthatisneededfortheprevalenceofamisdeedisthatgoodpeopledonothing.”

Theauthorities,schoolsandmassmediashouldforcefullyandactivelycommunicatetheirinstructiveandpositivemessagetothepublic,lestsimilarmisdeedsgounch