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雅思写作国外老师的雅思作文范文赏析
1.题目:
Childrenwhogrowupinfamilieswhichareshortofmoneyarebetterpreparedtodealwiththeproblemsofadultlifethanchildrenwhoarebroughtupbywealthyparents.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
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Somefeelthatthechildrenoflowincomefamiliesarebetterequippedtodealwithdifficultiesposedbythe“realworld”whentheygrowupandtheyalsobelievetheprivilegedchildrenofwealthyfamiliesarelessfittodealwiththesedifficulties.Theimplicationsandveracityofthisargumentseemself-evident,butinfactrequirecloserexamination.
Thepopularwisdomisthatchildrenofpoorerfamilieslearnearlyonthevalueofabuck,andarethusnaturallybettersuitedtostretchingmoneywhentimesgettoughinadulthood.Inversely,thechildrenofwealthyfamilies,thosebornwithasilverspoonintheirmouths,arebelievedtobecompletelyignorantofthetentimeserroneouslyexpectingthesamesituationinadulthood.Theyarebelievedtobepronetooverspendingandfinancialirresponsibility.Thisbelief,thoughlogical,overlooksonekeypointwhichis,ofcourse,education.
Thebasisofthisargumentis,ofcourse,knowingthevalueofmoney,andtheideathatchildrenofthepoorknowthis,andthoseofthewealthydonot.Whothough,isinabetterpositiontoteachtheirchildrenthevalueofmoney,someoneskilledinearningandkeepingit,thewealthyparent,orsomeonewhocannotseemtoacquireit,thepoorparent?
Bothwealthyandpoorchildrenareequallylikelytoacquireaneducationinmoney,whetheritisformal,orintheschoolofhardknocks.Conversely,bothchildrenareaslikelytoignorethiseducation.
Apoorchildmaybelievethatonecangetalong,ifnotaseasily,withoutwealthy.Awealthychildmaybewelltrainedbyaparentsteepedintheknowledgeofmoneymanagement,thekeytodevelopingthisskilliseducation.
2.Everyonecomplainsabouttaxes,yetthinkaboutwhatwouldhappeniftherewerenolongeranincometax.Ina250-wordessay,discussthepositiveeffectsofanincometax,thenegativeeffects,orboth.
Ithurtstolookatapaycheckandseehowmuchofitwastakenoutforincometax.Thatmoneycouldhavepaidsomeimportantbills.Itiseasytodreamofdoingawaywiththeincometaxandkeepingallthatmoneyforourselves.
Iftherewerenoincometax,however,thegovernmentwouldhavealotlesstospend.ThemoneywesendtoWashingtonseemstofallintoablackholeanddisappear.Actually,though,manypeopledependonit.Themoneypaysthesalariesofgovernmentemployees,whoprovideservicesfromdrugcontroltohighwaybuilding.Itsupportsourmilitarydefense.Also,muchofthemoneyisreturnedtopeopleintheform.ofstudentloans,veterans'benefits,andpaymentstofarmers,forexample.Thegovernmenthasbeenworkingtocutitsbudgetlately.Witheverycut,someonecomplainsloudly.
Soiftheincometaxwereeliminated,othertaxeswouldhavetomakeupforit.Payingthoseothertaxeswouldalsohurt.Salestaxesfallmostheavilyonpoorpeople.Taxesonmanufacturersonlyresultinhigherpricestoconsumers.
Incometaxesarenotfuntopay.Butdoingwithoutthemwouldbeworse.Inmyopinion,incometaxesshouldbemadeasfairaspossible.Thenweeachmust"bitethebullet"anddoourshare.
3.NowadaysthereismoreandmoreTVadvertisement,andthereisalotofmisinformationinsomeoftheseadvertisements.Somepeoplethinkthatconsumershavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationandthatgovernmentshouldrestrictthecontentsoftheseadvertisements.Whatisyouropinion?
Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisementsandadvertisingexertsatremendousinfluenceonus.Recently,therearepeoplewhoareoftheopinionthatpublichastherighttoknowthecorrectinformationoftheadvertisementsandgovernmentalsoshouldrestrictthecontentsoftheseadvertisements.PersonallyIagreewiththisopinionforthefollowingreasons.
Inthefirstinstance,consumershavetherighttoknowthecorrectinformationbeforedecidingonwhethertobuythem.Advertisementsarehighlyinformationthathelpspeopletomakechoicebeforetheygotobuywhattheyneed.Iftheadvertisementexaggeratestheproductsitalsowillpersuadepeopleintobuyingthings,whichtheydon’treallywant.
Secondly,anymisleadingadvertisementswillleadtothemarketingtricks,causingchaosinthemarket.Toomanymisleadingadvertisementsarebarriotodistinguishingbetweendecentproductsorproductsofbadquality.Hisbreadintruthismadewithsoyflour,whileheadvertisesitaswhitebread.Thesemisleadinginformationcausesillegalcompetition.
Lastbutnotleast,governmentshouldstipulatelawsinconsumers’interests.Accordingtothelaws,advertisementsmustbetruthful.Iftheadvertisementsmisleadconsumers,governmentcanimposegreatfineonthemtosetalesson.
Ingeneral,theroleofadvertisementsisinevitableandundeniable.Agoodadvertisementcanbeabridgebetweenbusinessandconsumersandhelpskeepbusinessmoving.Soweneedcorrectinformationandgovernmentalsoneedstorestrictthecontentsofadvertisements.Letmisinformationofadvertisementsbefarawayfromus.
4. Mostpeoplehavedreamsofonedaybecomingrich.Butdoestheaveragepersonhavetheabilitytomakealotofmoney?
Thinkaboutthisquestion.Thenwriteabout250wordsdescribingyourthoughts.
Whenlackofmoneypreventsusfromhavingsomethingwewantverymuch,itistemptingtodreamofbeingrich.ItishardtokeepinmindthatAmericansarealreadywealthycomparedwithpeopleinmanyotherpartsoftheworld.Ourmodernconvenienceswouldhavebeentheenvyofkingsintimespast.Justthesame,mostpeoplewouldlikealarger.Whethermostpeoplearecapableofmakingalotofmoneyisanotherquestion.
Peopleinaveragecircumstancescanoftengetaheadthrougheducation,hardwork,andcarefulmoneymanagement.Butgettingaheadisnotthesameasactuallybecomingrich.
OnlyasmallpercentageofAmericanscouldbecalledtrulywealthy.Somepeoplejoinedthisgroupfromordinarybeginnings.Usuallytheyhavedoneitbycarefullyridingsomemajordevelopmentintheeconomyonitswayup.Inthepast,greatfortuneshavebeenmadeinoil,steel,andrailroads.Recently,somepeoplehavemademillionsincomputersandrealestate.
Usually,though,ittakesmoneytomakemoney.Biginvestorsoftenstartrichandthengetricher.Mostofuscannotstrikeoilorstartthenextnewtechnicalbreakthrough.Mostpeoplearenotbornintowealthyfamilies,either.InAmericaitcertainlyispossibletobecomemoreprosperous.Butunlesssomeonewinsthelottery,realwealthisnotverylikelytocomealong.
5.Surveysshowthatmorepeoplegetthenewsbywatchingtelevisionthanbyreadingthenewspaper.ThinkaboutwhetherTVnewsshowsareadequateasaperson'sonlysourceofnews.Writeanessayofabout250wordsthatdetailsyourthoughts.
Televisionnewsshowsaredramaticandinteresting.Watchingthemispleasantanddoesnotrequiretheeffortofreading.Iftelevisiondidnotcoverthenews,somepeoplewouldknownothingaboutwhatisgoingonintheworld.
However,televisionnewscasterscoveronlytheeventsthattheyhavetimefor,andtheypreferstoriesthatincludesomedramaticpictures.Viewersarequicklyboredwithreporterswhositandtalkintothecamera.Asaresult,acomplicatedstoryisoftencutshort.
Newspapersandmagazinesdoabetterjobofexplainingcomplexevents.Theycanincludedetails,andapersonwithaspecialinterestcantakethetimetoreadthem.Otherscansticktotheheadlines.
Readingallowsmorefreedomofchoicethantelevision.TheTVaudiencecannotdecidewhichstoriestowatch.Inbroadcasting,"onesizefitsall".However,apersonwhoreadsnewspapersandmagazinescanchoosetospendtimeonbusiness,sports,health,ortheschoolboardelection,dependingonspecialinterests.
Televisionprovidesausefulglanceatwhat'shappening.However,apersonwhohasindividualinterestsandwhowantsthewholestoryneedsnewspapersandmagazinesaswell.
6.Formanyyearsthenuclearfamily,consistingoffather,mother,andchildren,wasconsideredtobethenormalfamilypatterninChina'ssociety.Yetinmanyotherculturesandinourowninthepast,threegenerations--grandparents,parents,andchildren--oftenhavelivedtogether.Whataretheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofthreegenerationslivingtogether?
Givespecificexamplesina250-wordessay.
Threegenerationslivingtogethercanhavebothfinancialandpersonaladvantages.Ontheotherhand,itcanalsohavepersonaldisadvantages.
Inyearspastandtoday,threegenerationshaveprobablylivedtogethermostlyoutofeconomicnecessityoradvantage.Sometimesayoungfamilymovesinwiththeoldergenerationbecausethehusbandandwifecan'taffordaplaceoftheirown.Sometimesgrandparentsmoveinbecausetheyaren'twellenoughorcan'taffordtolivealoneanymore.Occasionally,grandparentscometotakecareofthechildrensobothparentscanwork.Intimespast,andsometimestoday,threegenerationshavelivedtogetherbecausetheyalldependedonthesamefarmorbusiness.
Usuallythesearrangementsdohelpsolvefinancialandpracticalproblems.Everyonehasaroofoverhisorherhead.Childrenandoldpeopleinneedofcarearelikelytogetit.Oftenafamilycangetaheadfinanciallybysharingtheworkandthebills.Inaddition,astrongsenseoffamilyandofbelongingcandevelopineveryone.
Whatmaybehardertoworkoutarequestionsofwho'sincharge.Ifgrandparentsdon'tletgoofsomeauthority,themiddlegenerationislikelytoresentit.Ontheotherhand,aili