至雅思写作大作文真题解析.docx

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至雅思写作大作文真题解析

2015年10月24日雅思写作〔一〕

题目类别

教育与科技

提问方式

利弊判断

考试题目

Somepeoplesaythatplayingcomputergamesisbadforchildrenineveryaspect.Otherssaythatplayingcomputergamescanhavepositiveeffectsonthewaychildrendevelop.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.

分析：

教育与科技、教育与媒体可谓是雅思考试的热点，而且这些话题跟广阔考生们息息相关。

平时对生活多一些思考，备考期间针对话题词汇和句型多写多练，这些都是理想分数的保障。

文章结构：

4段

首段：

导入话题，表达立场。

主题段1：

玩电脑游戏对孩子的各方面有害。

主题段2：

玩电脑游戏对孩子的成长有利。

结尾段：

总结上文，重申立场。

Inrecentyears,theprevalenceofcomputergameshasexertedasignificanteffectonchildren’slife.Astowhethertheyaffectchildrennegatively,thereisanendlessdebate.

Despitethefactthatplayingcomputergamesisaneffectivewaytorelievepressure,theproblemsassociatedwithstudyandhealthcannotbeneglected.

Clearly,playingcomputergamesisregardedasamainfactorleadingtopooracademicperformance.Withtheentertainingnature,computergameswilleasilydistractchildrenfromtheirstudiouspursuits.Withthepassageoftime,childrenwillprobablyfallbehindtheirpeersinacademicdevelopment.Inaddition,whenchildrenspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames,theyarelesslikelytoparticipateinphysicalactivities,whichisonereasonwhymanychildrensufferfromobesity.Asaresult,theseoverweightchildren’sconfidencemaybeunderminedandtheirhealthmaybenegativelyinfluenceaswell.

Despitethesedisadvantages,theadvantagescanstillnotbeignored.Firstofall,thelatestresearchshowsthatgame-playinghelpschildrentohometheircommunicationandinterpersonalskills.Inmanycases,playersworktogetherinteamstoachievegoals,competingagainstotherplayers.Therefore,theirsocialskillsandteamworkspiritareputtothetest.Also,computergamescanhavepositiveandtherapeuticeffectsonplayers.Gamesprovideanopportunityforchildrentodecompressandtuneoutofstrainsandstressesofeverydaylife.Givingtheirtimetorestiscriticalforemotionalandmentalwell-being.

Inconclusion,itisnotadvisableforchildrentoplaycomputergames,forthereasonsthatitnotonlyhasanegativeimpactontheirstudy,butalsomakesthemloseconfidence,althoughcomputergamesprovideaformofrelaxation.

2015年10月10日雅思写作〔二〕

题目类别

政府

提问方式

A/D

考试题目

Somepeoplethinkgovernmentsshouldfocusonreducingenvironmentalpollutionandhousingproblemstohelppeoplepreventillnessanddisease.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

分析：

题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。

话题类型属于政府投资类。

这道题题干中提出了影响疾病的两个方面：

住房和环境。

这两个方面在正文中都要提到是如何影响人们健康的。

范文主体思路分析：

主体段一：

环境问题和住房条件确实会影响人们健康，需要政府关注和投资

主体段二：

政府充当的只是组织协调者，人们自己也需要对自己的健康负责，养成良好的生活方式。

Thereisnodoubtthatpeople’shealthwillbeinfluenceddirectlyorindirectlybytheenvironmentandhousingcondition.Whethergovernmentsshouldfocusmoreontheenvironmentandestatehastriggeredacontroversy.Ifeelthatindividualsshouldtakemoreresponsibilityfortheirwell-beingotherthangovernments’increasingattention.

Indeed,theenvironmentalproblemsandhousingconditionsaretwomainsourcesforillnessanddiseases.InmanylargecitiesinnorthernChina,hazeweatherhasbecomeadailykiller,especiallycausingrespiratorydiseasesinwinter.Also,populacewilleasilyaccesstovirusesandbacteriaiftheyliveinapoorhousingconditionwithoutanyadvancedsanitation.Therefore,governmentsshouldgivemoreattentionandhigherinvestmentinthesetwoareas.

Comparedtoindividuals,governmentshavemorepowertoarrangeawiderangeofsocialresourcestoaddresssevereissues;however,itdoesnotmeanthataddressingthisproblemtotallydependsongovernments.Thestateisanorganizeroracoordinatorinoursocietyinsteadofaresponsibilitytaker.Althoughgovernmentscanclaimpeopletoenhancetheawarenessofenvironmentprotection,makepolicytostrengthentheenvironmentmanagementandinvestestatewheretheyneed,publichealthconditionisstillapersonalproblemtosomedegree.Peoplehavetheobligationtoformandkeepahealthyandpositivelifestyle,ortheywillstillfacethethreatofillnessanddiseaseseventheenvironmentandhousingconditiongettingbetter.

Inconclusion,peoplealsoneedtotakeresponsibilityoftheirwell-beingasgovernmentsonlyholdapositionasorganizerandcoordinator.Themostfeasiblesolutionmaybethatgovernmentsprovideafinesettingononehandandpublicshouldpursueahealthylifestyleforthemselvesontheotherhand.

2015年10月8日雅思写作〔三〕

题目类别

教育类

提问方式

观点类

考试题目

Insomecountries,secondaryschoolsaimtoprovideageneraeducationacrossarangeofsubjects.Inothers,childrenfocusonanarrowrangeofsubjectsrelatedtoaparticularcareer.Whichdoyouthinkisappropriateintoday’sworld?

分析：

这次考试的题目还是老题，在历史上多次出现。

作文的审题也不是很难，非常贴近学生的学习。

文章属于典型的观点类文章，需要考生给出自己的观点，例文中作者同意一个观点，认为中学应该提供更加广泛的学科。

然后从学生的潜力开发和全面发展两个角度进行分析，然后在通过反方段进行补充，最后进行了非常简单的一个总结。

Whatrangeofsubjectsthehighschoolofferscanhaveastarkandprofoundinfluenceonstudents’futuredevelopment.I,tobehonest,holdtheviewthatthegeneraleducationwithawiderangeofsubjectsisbeneficialtostudentsthemselvesinthelongrun.

Ifstudentshaveaccesstomorecourses,theyarelikelytohavemoreopportunitiestochoosethesubjecttheypreferorarebetterat.Inthisway,thestudentscanlearnwithmoreenthusiasmandpassionandwillfeellessboredwiththeirclasses.Withmoremotivationderivedfromtheirinnerhearts,studentscangivefullplaytotheirpotentialsandachievebetteracademicperformance.

Besides,themorediversesubjectsystemcanalsocultivatemorewell-roundedstudents.Theknowledgebaseofdifferentsubjectsisdistinctfromeachother,whichcanhelptofosterthestudentsincertainperspective.Mathematicsandphysicsarehelpfultostudents’logicandabstractthinking;somehumanitysubjectssuchasliteratureandaestheticscanenhancestudents’capabilitiesofappreciationandjudgment.Thereisnodoubtthatstudentswillbecomemoreversatileiftheyhavegraspedknowledgeofdifferentsubjects.

Itisalsotruethatfocusingonthenarrowerrangeofsubjectscanbringsomebenefittosomeextent.Studentscanconcentratemoreonlimitedsubjectsandaremorelikelytobecomespecialistsincertainfields.YouyouTu,theNobelPrizewinnerinmedicine,receivesspecializededucationinTCMandchemistryanddevotesallherlifetotheresearchoftheanti-malariamedicines,makingherbecomeaworld-renownedscientist.

Tosumup,ageneraleducationwithwiderrangeofsubjectsshouldbeaccessibletostudentsbecauseofitsbenefittoasounderdevelopmentofstudents.

2015年9月26日雅思写作〔四〕

题目类别

环保类

提问方式

报告

考试题目

Insomecountries,secondaryschoolsaimtoprovideageneraeducationacrossarangeofsubjects.Inothers,childrenfocusonanarrowrangeofsubjectsrelatedtoaparticularcareer.Whichdoyouthinkisappropriateintoday’sworld?

分析：

该题属于环保题型。

虽然近年来环保已经不再是雅思写作考试话题的热点，但是在今年的1月29日，3月12日，5月9日和8月1日的雅思考试中均出现了环境相关的题目，所以还是希望广阔考生对雅思写作的十个话题逐一准备，才能在考场上做到万无一失。

文章结构：

5段

首段：

导入话题，简述主体

主体段1:

缺少回收意识是没有走狗的回收利用愿意之一。

主体段2:

没有足够的回收利用这个问题的措施。

主体段3:

总结上文。

Thelastyearshaswitnessedtheincreaseintheawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.However,therearestillalotofwastematerialsthathavenotbeenrecycled.Thisessaywillmainlyanalysethereasonsofthisproblemandsuggestsomesolutions.

Onemainreasonofthisproblemmaybethatthepublichaven'trealizedtheimportanceofrecyclingwastes.Aseconomydevelops,peoplehavehighincomesandcanaffordalargenumberofitems.Atthesametime,theydon'tknowhowtodealwithwhattheyhaveusedandhaven'trealizedthattheirbuyinghabitswillcausetheconsumptionofenergy,creasewasteandincreasepollution.

Thisproblemcanalsobeattributedtothelackofrecyclingsitesinthepublicplaces.Insomecountries,thegovernmentisnotbeabletopurchaseenoughrecyclingsitesduetopoorfinancialconditions.Asaresult,peoplearelikelytofinditdifficulttoplacetheirrubbishintothedustbins.

Inordertoaddressthisproblem,thegovernmentandcitizensshouldmakejointefforts.Firstofall,thegovernmentoughttoprovidefreeeducationofrecyclinglecturesforthepublic.Thisisbecausemanycitizenshaven'treceiveddecenteducationandarenotwellinformedofhowtorecycleandreusewasteitems.What'smore,therecyclingindustryneedstobefinanciallysupported.Ifthegovernmentdoesnotpayattentiontotheestablishmentanddevelopmentofthisindustry,theproblemwillcontinuetoexistinoursociety.

Asmentionedabove,theneglectofrecyclingandtheshortageofrecyclingsitesarethemainfactorsleadingtotheincreaseofwastematerials.Tosolvethisproblem,boththegovernmentandthepublicshouldcollaborate.

2015年9月19日雅思写作〔五〕

题目类别

生活方式，饮食

提问方式

A/D

考试题目

Somepeoplethinkeveryoneshouldbeavegetarian,becausewedonotneedtoeatmeattohaveahealthydiet.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

分析：

题目的类型属于单一观点的讨论。

话题类型属于生活方式与健康。

这道题虽然是一个观点，但是包含了两方面：

1、人人应该成为素食主义者2、我们不需要吃肉去保持健康。

根据雅思论文相对化vs绝对化的选择，这道题在论述上选择不同意会更容易一些。

范文主体思路分析：

主体部分反驳理由一：

并不是每个人都要成为素食者，有些特殊人群必定不能只吃素食，比方生长发育期的孩子，对蔬菜过敏的人以及孕妇

主体部分反驳理由二：

肉类中的营养不是蔬菜能够代替的，平衡膳食最重要。

Peoplehavedifferentviewsaboutwhetherbeingvegetariansorvegansismorebeneficialforhumanbeings.Somepeoplebelievethatbeingavegetarianisbettersincemeatishelplessforpeopletostayhealthy.Idoubtthisstatementaspeoplehaverighttochoosewhethertobeavegetarianornotandmeatisaregularpartofourdiet.

Althoughleadingalowcarbonlifeandbeingavegetarianisquitepopularinoursociety,itdoesnotmeaneveryoneshouldonlyeatvegetablesintheirdailydiet.Actually,tosomegroupsofpeople,asingledietarystructurewil