1021 writing 公益活动作文 养老院.docx

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1021writing公益活动作文养老院

丰台2010一模

第一节 情景作文（20分）

假如你是红星中学高三一班的学生。

3月5日是学雷锋日，你班组织了一次帮扶活动。

请根据下面四幅图所提供的活动内容和过程写一篇英文短文，为你校校刊英语专栏投稿。

短文词数不少于60。

提示词：

nursinghome养老院

AdayinmemoryofLeiFeng

Adaytocommemorate/rememberLeiFeng

LeiFengDay

MemorialdayforLeiFeng

LearningfromLeiFengDay

Timeline:

Feelingline:

Pic1:

OnMarch4th/Thedaybefore,

Keypoints:

discussed（vt.）whatweshoulddo/wehadalively（heated/detailed）discussionabout…

putforward/cameupwithalotofgreatideas（suggestions）;wehitontheideaof../that…

Ithitmethat…/Itstruckmethat…/Athoughtcrossedmymindthat…

Wouldn’tthatbegreatifwe...?

Weallagreedwiththat./Wereachedanagreement（consensus）on…/that…

Ispentseveralnightslyinginbed,thinkingaboutwhattosay.Manythingscrossedmymind,butnoneoftheminvolvedallmyclassmates.Thenonenight,ithitme.ErwinHighSchoolhasthehighestdropoutrateofanyhighschoolinourcounty.Whatbettergoalcouldwehavethanforeverysingleoneofustograduate?

WhatifIcouldgetmyclasstobecomethefirstclassinthehistoryofourpublicschoolsystemtoenterhighschoolasfreshmenandallgraduate?

Wouldn’tthatbeawesome?

Thedaybefore,wespentseveralhourssittingatthedesks,thinkingaboutwhattodo.Manythingscrossedourminds,butnoneoftheminvolvedallmyclassmates.Thenithitmethattheelderlypeopleinthenursinghomearelonelyandneedcare.Wouldn’tthatbeawesomeifwecoulddosomethingforthem?

Muchtomyhappiness,weallthoughtitagreatidea.

OnMarch5th,

Pic2:

Keypoints:

somesweptandmoppedthefloor,somecleanedthewindows,

Details:

Themoment/instant/minutewegotthere,westartedtheworkimmediately.

流汗：

Wesweatedalot/sweatedbuckets/sweatpouredoffourforeheads,butwewereinhighspirits,enjoyingthetimeworkingfortheelderly.

Everyoneworkedveryharduntilthefloorandthewindowsshone/theroomtookonanewlook.Sweatdrippingdownourfaces,everybodyworearadiantsmile.

Pic3:

Afterthat;Afterashortbreak/rest;Afewminuteslater/（Shortly）afterwards,

Keypoints:

Wesplitinto2groups./Weweredividedintotwogroups./Wewereseparatedinto…

Onegroupputon/gave/stagedaperformance;performedsinginganddancing

TheothergrouptaughttheelderlyeverydayEnglish（expressions）

Details:

Theywereattractedtoourperformance./Ourperformanceappealedtothem./Theywerecompletelyimmersedinthehappyandlight-heartedatmospherewecreated,bustingintolaughterandapplaudingwarmlyfromtimetotime.

Whenlearninganewexpression,theireyesshonewithexcitement/theirfacesshonewithdelight.

表扬

givesb.plentyofpraiseandencouragement

getthepraiseitdeserved得到应得的赞扬

befullofpraiseforsb./sb’swork

Jack’steacherwasfullofpraiseforhiswork.

receivedhighpraise

ThespeechIgaveongraduationdaywasonly12minuteslong,butwhatitstartedisunbelievable.WhenIissuedthechallengetomyclassmatestobecomethefirstclassinhistorytoenterhighschoolasfreshmenandallgraduate,theentireaudience,includingtheparents,grandparentsandteachers,eruptedinapplause.AsIshowedthepersonalizedcertificatesandsignseachstudentwouldget,Icouldtelltheywerereallyenthused.Attheendofmyspeechthewholeaudiencejumpedtoitsfeetwithastandingovation.ItwasallIcoulddotokeepmycomposureandnotbreakdownandcry.I’dhadnoideamychallengewouldbringthiskindofresponse.

Whenourperformancestarted,theelderlyeruptedinapplause.Wesanganddancedwithenthusiasmonthestage,andtheywerecompletelyimmersedinthehappyandlight-heartedatmosphere.Attheendoftheperformance,theyevenjumpedtotheirfeetwithastandingovation.

Pic4:

Beforelunch（time）;Soon（Beforeweknewit）itwastimetosaygoodbye.

Timeflieswhenyouarehavingfun.

Wehadalovelyvisit,butallgoodthingsmustcometoanend.

Keypoints:

theysawusoffatthegateandwewavedthemgoodbye（wewavedgoodbyetothem）webidfarewelltoeachother.

Details:

Seeingthebrightsmilesontheirfaces,asurgeofhappinessfloodedoverme.

升华：

Reflectingonthiswonderfulvolunteer（ing）activity,I…

Thismeaningfulactivitytaughtmeagreat/valuablelesson:

…

Afterthisactivity,itdawnedonmethat…

●Neverunderestimatethedifferenceyoucanmakeinthelivesofothers.Stepforward,reachoutandhelp.

●Remember,ifyoueverneedahelpinghand,youwillfindoneattheendofeachofyourarms;youwilldiscoveryouhavetwohands,oneforhelpingyourselfandtheotherforhelpingothers.

●Helpingapersonwillnotnecessarilychangetheworld,butitwillchangetheworldforthatperson.

●Neverhesitatetohelpothersintheirtimeofneed.Youneverknowwhenyoumayneedthatshouldertoleanon.

●Life'sfinesthouriswhenwedogoodthingstonamelesspeoplewithoutexpectingtorememberouractsofkindness.

●Thequalityofyourlifewillbedeterminedbythequalityofyourcontribution.Whenyouworktoimprovethelifeofothers,yourlifeimprovesautomatically.

●Wemakealivingbywhatweget,butwemakealifebywhatwegive.

●Whenyouvolunteer,youarenotpaidinmoneyorrecognition.Youarepaidinlove.Peoplemayforgetwhatyousaid,andpeoplemayforgetwhatyoudid,buttheywillneverforgethowitmadethemfeel.

●Volunteerarenotpaid—notbecausetheyareworthless,butbecausetheyarepriceless.

●Whatwehavedoneforourselvesdieswithus;whatwehavedoneforothersandtheworldremainsandisimmortal.

●Giveyourhandstoserveandyourhearttolove.

●Nomatterhowbigorhowsmall,anactofkindnessshowsthatsomeonecares.Andtheresultscanbeeverlasting.

●Volunteeringgivesyouanopportunitytochangepeople’slives,includingyourown.Helpingothersinneedissuchanimportantpartoflife.

●Volunteeringhelpspeoplefeeltheymakeadifference—thattheydohavethepowertochangethingsforthebetter.

●Ifinditinterestingthatonepersoncanmakesucha（n）33tosomanypeople’slivesbydoingonesimplethinglikewavingandsmilingwarmly.

容易出错部分

Madeadiscussion×

Madeaperformance×

Performsongsanddances√

Memorizeleifeng×

Memorizenumber,address,names,details,words,lines用心去记下来√

Commemorate/honour/celebrate/marktheanniversaryofLeifeng’sdeath√

Waved/said/kissedgoodbyetosb.√

Wavedsb.goodbye√

Farewell

Bidfarewellto…

Apossibleversion:

OurclassplannedtoorganizeanactivityonMarch5th,thedayinmemoryofLeiFeng.Thedaybefore,wehadaclassmeetingtodiscusswhatwewoulddo.Afteraheateddiscussion,wedecidedtogotoaseniorcitizenshometodosomethingfortheelderly.

OnMarch5th,wesetoutearlyinthemorning.Assoonaswegottotheseniorcitizenshome,wefirstdidathoroughcleaning.Somesweptandmoppedthefloor.Somecleanedthewindowsandtheothersdidsomewashing.Anhourlater,theroomsintheseniorcitizenshomelookedcleanandtidy.Andthenweweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupgavewonderfulperformancesthattheelderlyenjoyedalot,theothergrouptaughtthosewhowereinterestedinEnglishsomedailyEnglishexpressions.Alltheelderlyhadagoodtimewithus.Whenlunchtimecamewehadtosaygood-byetothem.

We’vereallylearnedalotfromwhatwedid.Wealsorealizethatwecanmakeourselvesusefultothosewhoneedhelpandcare.

好句子：

ThedaywhichcommemoratesLeiFengwascomingandorclassplannedtoorganizeanactivitytohelpothers.

都乐平

Idobelievethatthegreatesthappinesscomesfromhelpingothers.

梁鹤

Werealizedthatthehappinessofhelpingothersisaroundus.Wejustneedtofindit.

马慧博

Itislovebetweenpeoplethatmakestimeandlivesglow.

葛琪

好作品：

谢楚楠

December5thisNationalVolunteerDay,asforChinesewehaveMarch5thasavolunteerdaytocommemorateourimmortalheroLeiFeng.Tostudyfromhisspirit,weplannedanaidactivityataseniorcitizenshome,whichhadbeencarefullyarrangedbyeachofusonMarch5th.

Finallythebigdaycame.Wesetoutearlywiththesunshininginthesky,windslippingbyourside,andeverythingseemedsonice.Uponarrival,wegreetedtheelderlyandstartedourcleaningwork.Someofussweptandmoppedthefloor,whileotherscleanedwindowsandtidiedtherooms.Beingwell-organizedandearnest,wesoongoteverythingdone.

Afterthat,wetaughtsomeofthoseaffableelderlypeoplebasicEnglishwordsandseveralsimplesentences.ThegrannyItaughtwasreallyaquicklearner,andapparently,wehadagreattimetogether.Also,weputonperformances,andthankedtotheeffortofeverybody,warmapplausewasgivenandweallfeltsatisfied.

Timeflew.Soonitwasthetimetowavegoodbye.Weallhadlotsoffunandwegainedalotfromwhatwedid.Loveandcarearealwaysthebestgifttootherpeople.Anditisnothowitcomes,butwhatitcontainsthatbuildsuptherelationshipbetweentwomen,nomatterifyouhaveevermet.It’sthedeductionspirtandhumanitythatbreakthebarrierofage,genderorterritory.

韩嘉艺

March5thwasthedayinmemoryofLeiFengandweheldthisactivitytorememberhim.Afteralivelydiscussion,wedecidedtogototheseniorcitizenshomewherewecouldhelptheelderly.

Onarrivingthere,werushedin.Wejustcouldn’twaittodosomethingfortheelderly.Wehelpedthemdosomehousework.Wesweptthefloorandcleanedthewindows.Withourworkfinished,theroomlookedtidyanddelightful.

Afterashortbreak,weperformedfortheelderly.Itmadethemlaughagainandagain–maybebecauseofourpoorperformingskills.Afterall,i